2.5✨ (rounded down to 2 for GR)
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This is a NetGalley arc review – thank you as always to the publisher, author, and NetGalley for these opportunities!
Writing this review breaks my heart, because I went into this with such high hopes. If I could've given this book 5 stars for the premise alone, I would've. It sounds like such a gripping and promising plot, with the Paris, France catacombs playing the eerie backdrop. But after that initial excitement over the plot, once you actually start reading... it fell flat in almost if not every way.
Under the Surface by Diana Urban is a young adult mystery thriller, with some horror elements that come into play further in the story, and a "romance" subplot that is so lackluster I question its inclusion to begin with. A cast of characters is introduced, but two "main" characters emerge from the pack, Ruby and Sean, and those are the two POVs we move back and forth between; with Ruby in danger in the catacombs and Sean on the outside, so it's split perspective.
Sean's POV and the outside world story wasn't engaging at all. It was BORING. I never felt a sense of urgency around any of the outside characters, and to have basically high school seniors running over your investigation, it's not how it works. The idea of Sean doing anything and everything he can to save Ruby is laughable because while he does make some great connections via technology, he's not the one actively investigating or on this mad hunt searching the catacombs for her. And maybe I've been out of high school for too long, but all the teachers were WAY too blasé about everything. Was this just done to make it easier for the HS characters to sneak around and have their own silly plots? Seems kind of obvious.
If you think Ruby's POV trapped in the catacombs with her group would be any better, you'd be wrong. There were 5 people trapped in the catacombs, and if you removed their names from all the lines, I wouldn't be able to pick out who said what, because there was either nothing there, or the most basic and OTT dialogue that felt soooo out of place. Every character was like a cardboard cutout, no personality. I wasn't drawn to anyone, no one got me to like them in any way, and I wasn't invested in their outcomes whatsoever.
This book was also ALL tell and no show. Every emotion or thought the character was feeling was written out exactly as is, "He was scared" "She was happy". It was just like reading a stream of consciousness, without letting the reader pick up on the nuances themselves.
My biggest complaint is having the main plot conflict of the story, being lost in the Paris catacombs, have the same weight of the subplot, the falling out of Ruby and her former best friend. To act as though that stupid, petty, high school conflict over a boy had the same weight as being LOST IN THE PARIS CATACOMBS... it would go from crying about dying in the catacombs to wailing about losing her bff over a boy, and there was NO DIFFERENCE IN EMOTIONAL REACTION BETWEEN THEM. Maybe I have been out of HS for too long, but if we are LOST IN THE PARIS CATACOMBS WITH LITTLE FOOD, WATER, DIRECTION, AND DANGER AFTER ME, the drama from HS would NOT be coming up on my mind as a pertinent topic.
To end this review, while I can't recommend this book (although I'm sure there is an audience out there for it), I don't think Diana Urban is a bad author. I can see sooooo much potential, just based on the awesome plot idea. Just needs some fine tuning to plot pacing and logic, characterizations, and showing, not telling. I wanted to FEEL trapped, FEEL claustrophobic, as these characters traveled underground, but the story just never went there.