DNF @page 40. I wanted to stop sooner, but I try to read at least 10% of a book before I ditch it.
I didn't like the writing style. I couldn't connect with any of the characters. And two things revealed in the story early on bothered the *#$@ out of me.
First: the "happy couple" origin story is a major red flag. Archie meets Liza at her own engagement party, and over the next ten days he woos her away from her fiance. Then they go on a two-week vacation together, presumably to bang like bunnies, then they get married. I'm guessing this whirlwind romance is supposed to impress upon me how "passionate" Archie is? But really, stealing someone's betrothed is terrible, and Liza's pretty terrible for going along with it, and I'm thoroughly impressed alright--WITH HOW WRONG THIS IS.
If there were some sort of mitigating circumstances around her original fiance, like he's abusive and she's trapped in that relationship, or it's a sham marriage for money or ANYTHING like that, that would be one thing, but for all we the readers know at that point, he and Liza were perfectly happy together before Archie showed up.
Second: if that near-miss adultery wasn't enough, one of Liza's (much younger but still adult) coworkers is depicted as fawning over her constantly. She acknowledges in POV narrative that he's got a crush on her, and tries to tell herself it's harmless flirting, and she even flirts back--but whatever we're supposed to believe she thinks, the whole scene just screams incipient adultery to me.
ADULTERY IS NOT INHERENTLY INTERESTING. I WILL KEEP SHOUTING THIS IN REVIEWS WHENEVER I SEE IT UNTIL THE WORLD PAYS ATTENTION. I DO NOT WANT TO READ ABOUT IT.
So I'm not.
Maybe I'm wrong and Liza doesn't cheat, but even so, I don't feel like I'm missing out on a good book if I stop now, because I already didn't like it.