Payback

by Avery Mist

Martin and Anthony work together in business development and are pretty good work friends until Anthony steals Martin's idea.

 

Too bad Anthony can't properly explain the idea without Martin's help.

 

Martin will help Anthony out of the hole he digs for himself, but it'll come at a price, and the only payment Martin will accept is Anthony's body.

 

Payback is a gay erotica short story featuring two men. It is intended for a mature audience.

Genres: Queer, LGBT, Gay

33 pages, Kindle Edition

Published November 2, 2023

Reviews

[Michael Adam Reale · Rating 5 out of 5]

🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Payback — Avery Mist
A blistering, high‑voltage read that delivers exactly what it promises.

Avery Mist leans all the way into tension, chemistry, and unapologetic momentum, and the result is pure ignition. Five flames feels less like a rating and more like a weather advisory.

One of the standout moments for me was the spanking scene — not for shock value, but for how deliberately it was built. The tension, the pacing, and the charged power dynamic made it genuinely, unmistakably hot.

[YonnoMaus]

I won't be rating this because it really isn't my cup of tea thus I'm not the target audience and would have definitely abandoned if it were longer. There were so many issues here with consent and bullying. As advertised, this is an erotica and not a romance, so if you're here for the feels you won't find it. But if you don't mind morally grey MCs, then you might enjoy this.

[sebasstfrancis · Rating 5 out of 5]

I'm such a slut 😩

[Michelle · Rating 1 out of 5]

This was messed up! How could someone so cutthroat be so submissive? And why would someone so quiet be dominant? I don't get it. Not at all.

[R. M · Rating 1 out of 5]

No... I don't know why I finished this. Nothing was really consentual and the characters were shitty. Writing was bad and AI was mentioned as a good thing.