I have never been so disappointed by a book, like ever. Such a wonderful idea - compiling the stories of Aeneas through the perspectives of the different female figures of his life - Lavinia, Dido, and Creusa - in a modern retelling. Unfortunately, Shepperson failed to deliver.
I think the largest issue here is the prose. It's skeletal, lacking any kind of imagination or engaging imagery. Shepperson drags on and on, hurrying forth as if she's writing a wordy summary for perhaps a far better novel. Seriously, I don't think any descriptions lasted longer than, at most, two sentences. Incredibly boring. On a side note, everything is written passively!! For example: "she found herself being pulled around roughly." Is that seriously the most engaging way you could phrase that? Come on! Just say: Someone pulled her roughly. Way faster! Way better! And another, because I'm still angry about this: "But instead, she felt a sack being slipped over her head, pinning her arms to her sides." I'm sorry, but how did an editor leave that?
There's also no emotion, supplemented by forgettable characters and stilted dialogue. I honestly could not care any less about any of the leading characters. When one of the character's best friends dies, it's described in one (very short) paragraph and then brushed over. Huh?? In what world does that make sense? Yeah, Lavinia "felt" sad. Great! Anything else? No? That's all you have to say about that? Awesome!!
While the prose is the most consistent issue, this author also has a fun habit of using anachronistic language and disregarding historical truths. For example: "professional hairdresser" is actually mentioned in this novel. This is supposed to take place BEFORE ROME WAS ESTABLISHED. Thousands of years ago!! There were no professional hairdressers around then, last time I checked. There also were no "full-length mirrors." Also, wouldn't an "outdoor tan" just be a "tan," considering the Latins didn't have tanning beds in like 800 BCE or so? These are small details, sure, but it really takes a reader out of a story! I don't care if it's mythological! The Romans incorporated this into their history, so treat it like it was their history, you know?
Another note while we're on the historical train. I am all for feminist retellings, but I'm gonna be so real. Not every prominent male character has to be terrible and misogynistic. They really don't. Also, Lavinia is a princess right? So are we just gonna pretend like she hasn't been groomed her entire life for marriage? Of course women of this time period did not have nearly as much freedoms as men, and were indeed oppressed, but I'm not entirely sure a PRINCESS would be complaining about a lack of power. She's probably the most empowered of the women in her society, so work with that instead of pulling the shallow unnuanced take that "my life sucks because I have to give birth." That's stupid. She is a powerful woman, so MAKE her powerful. So lame.
Ok. I'm done now. But I'm still angry. This is longest review I've ever posted on Goodreads. If you're reading this, I urge you - don't waste your time on this. It's really not worth the 300 pages of boredom.