I was excited by this “locked room” concept but I don’t think it was as original as I was hoping for. Several of the plot developments I have seen in similar stories and this made the novel seem a bit tired and repetitive. I also didn’t like the protagonist, Emma, and thought the female characters of Fiona and Penny a bit too similar.
Emma is not supposed to be on this rich, exclusive getaway. However, her boss couldn’t make it (it’s never really explained why which is a bit of a shame, I thought this was an opportunity for a super surprising plot development). Emma knows she is an outsider to her wealthy travel companions, but they don’t seem to notice because they are so self-absorbed. This deception is the basis of the story as it is clear that all the other characters have secrets that they are trying to keep hidden from the public eye. I would have liked the writer to have expanded on the recruitment process to Hotel Horizen, rather than explaining it as based on wealth alone.
The first death of the story takes place with no apparent witnesses. Following this, I felt like certain developments were too convenient: not being able to regain access to the mobile phones stored in the safe; the police cannot get to the island because the sea is too “choppy” (despite the fact that it seems to be blazing sunshine with few storms); there is no apparent motive for the following murders, leaving the remaining characters running around the island like headless chickens. In my opinion, this made the narrative far less exciting because I don’t think there were enough surprises: it was like watching characters being picked off at random.
What I did enjoy was the style of narrative and I found the ending to be unexpected. The story opens with a report from a legal team. This establishes that the following pages are based on Emma’s notebook that she completes whilst the island is falling apart. The closing chapter again returns to the legal team and I liked how everything was summarised. However, the Epilogue was a great surprise and added a bit of excitement to the story – exactly what I was looking for with the rest of the narrative.
Personally, I don’t think there were too many unique elements to the story. I guess this is one of the problems of reading so many novels! I found Emma’s attitude to be a bit irritating, especially when in the midst of a crisis, she appears to be more interested in flirting with one of the travellers and establishing a relationship. Some of the developments felt too far-fetched and convenient to not have the authorities involved, so it is a shame the writer hadn’t created a tale that was more unexpected. Furthermore, the lengthy paragraphs from Emma’s perspective meant the story was quite slow in its development, reducing my interest in the characters.
This is an easy read, not too long and with a predictable outcome: plenty of deaths and no authority involvement. It is one you can imagine casually watching on television. However, whilst there is some entertainment to the story, I was hoping for something that was more thrilling and unexpected.
I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.