I liked Tim Curran's short stories a lot, and the anthology Alien Horrors was excellent. After I continuously saw his short stories in other collections, I reached out to his independent works, and read this book.
At first, I thought this book was a collection of short stories. It turned out to be a full-length (short) novel, NOT novella.
I was greatly disappointed and gave it a 2 stars. It seems to me that great short-story writers might not be good novel writers.
The story kept dragging and describing the atmosphere to the point of redundancy and repetitiveness. From time to time, the monsters killed people mercilessly and the page was full of gore and organs and all types of adjectives and nouns. And then, the scene continued: people kept searching and then monsters appeared sometimes and people kept dying and gore was described more often.
The real battle lay in the last 20 to 30 (max) pages of this novel of 168 pages. So, if you read it, mentally prepare yourself for where the climax could be.
For the book content itself, there were just many characters and the author forcefully tried to give them a background, like bullies are only "strong" outside but "weak" inside or have a bad childhood, or women suffer in a man-job thing, or true heroes are "strong" inside, etc. All of these descriptions and implications just made the book unnecessarily long and "preachy".
I did not feel the sense of joy in reading it. In fact, i just finished it to see what awaited at the end of the book. It was nothing that I (or you) had not expected: monsters died. End of story. At that time, my confusion (or annoyance) was that I had no idea who the main characters were because in the end, nearly all died (because of the monsters, of course). Then, what was the point of introducing too many of them and then they just... died?
Some details were not convincing to me. For example, the monsters were described at the beginning like purely evil and primeval. Later, one of them communicated in... thoughts? It was a stretch and also illogical because such intelligence would have a more epic agenda. If not, why introducing those things, making the monsters less "animal" and more "human" and weakening the horror build-up? (This is my own taste). In the end, after I finished the book, there was nothing for me to remember or praise as I felt the story was just... it.
To sum up, what type of movie that people like to watch but has no content? Porn. Similarly, what type of book that people may like to read but does not have much content? Horror that focuses on describing organs and blood.
At first I thought of 3 stars. But then, when I reflected on the whole book, 2 stars should be more precise. The writing definitely was not meant for me.