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Scoring Devotion
Play so hard you leave a mark…
Zoe Carr is screwed—not literally, she's still a virgin—but the university messed up her residence application and now she's basically homeless. When her brother finds out, his roommates offer her a spot in their house, rent-free, if she's willing to keep the house clean. What turns out to be a hot mess is made sweeter when one of the guys offers to give up his room so she's got her own bedroom.
It's her brother, so easy-peasy, right? Plus, living with a couple of hot, athletic- guys might help break her out of her shell. It's got to be win-win.
All is good until the guys go away for a tournament, and she decides that having the house to herself and doing a little self-care won't do any harm. That is, until her brother's best friend walks in. Turns out a captain can get sent home as punishment.
Now Zoe, nearly naked in the living room with candles burning, might be the hottest thing Ian Harper's ever seen. And his offer to help Zoe with the self-care might be the one thing she can't say no to.
Keeping it from her brother… that's a whole other story.
My Brother's Roommate Series
Book 1 – Scoring DevotionBook 2 – Passing EmotionBook 3 – Offside Passion
Zoe Carr is screwed—not literally, she's still a virgin—but the university messed up her residence application and now she's basically homeless. When her brother finds out, his roommates offer her a spot in their house, rent-free, if she's willing to keep the house clean. What turns out to be a hot mess is made sweeter when one of the guys offers to give up his room so she's got her own bedroom.
It's her brother, so easy-peasy, right? Plus, living with a couple of hot, athletic- guys might help break her out of her shell. It's got to be win-win.
All is good until the guys go away for a tournament, and she decides that having the house to herself and doing a little self-care won't do any harm. That is, until her brother's best friend walks in. Turns out a captain can get sent home as punishment.
Now Zoe, nearly naked in the living room with candles burning, might be the hottest thing Ian Harper's ever seen. And his offer to help Zoe with the self-care might be the one thing she can't say no to.
Keeping it from her brother… that's a whole other story.
My Brother's Roommate Series
Book 1 – Scoring DevotionBook 2 – Passing EmotionBook 3 – Offside Passion
246 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 6, 2023
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Lexy Timms
641 books1,301 followersLexy Timms is a mom, business woman, dreamer and writer. She finally decided to write her first romance novel and Saving Forever is her debut story.
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June 11, 2024
This was free but I deserve compensation.
The writing and content were equally as horrific as each other.
The writing and content were equally as horrific as each other.
December 21, 2023
Couldn't get past the errors
I've read other works by Lexi Times that I greatly enjoyed. This book, however, was filled with careless errors. References to wrong characters, incorrect pronouns, doubled words, and grammatical mistakes. Also, the dialogue wasn't even remotely realistic. While I did finish, I won't be reading the rest of the series.
I've read other works by Lexi Times that I greatly enjoyed. This book, however, was filled with careless errors. References to wrong characters, incorrect pronouns, doubled words, and grammatical mistakes. Also, the dialogue wasn't even remotely realistic. While I did finish, I won't be reading the rest of the series.
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May 20, 2024Literally read this on my phone out of boredom, I cant even rate it 🥴🤣
February 22, 2024
Super cute book! I know it’s part of a series, but I thought it was a standalone within the series, so it was disappointing for it to end the way it did. Other than ending rather abruptly, it was a good short read :)
May 22, 2024
Read bc it was free! 🫠
I had problems with this story. Gonna sum it up bullet point style for cohesive sake.
*so many errors
*could never tell who was talking
*not enough info to help us love our characters 👎🏻
*subplots were seriously lacking.
*no major conflicts. I thought that James as a character was introduced to create conflict. Like maybe he would come on to Zoe and Ian would save her and Jack would tear into James then thank Ian. So then, Ian would be too guilty to pursue Zoe anymore bc he was protective of Zoe NOT his relationship with his best friend.
*Why was Steve introduced??? He should have been fuel to make Ian jealous. But instead was a throw away character.
*dialogue was not developed or realistic.
*The ENDING. or lack of ending???? Who just ends a book in the middle of a conversation. Like the “cliff hanger” was that Ian met Alexis and it’s time for winter break???
*HOW is this a soccer romance when we didn’t even get to see them win the championship and Ian be completely DEVASTATED that he couldn’t celebrate with the one person he really wanted to.
* there should have been a subplot that Zoe thinks Alexis might have a thing for Jack…. That’d be juicy.
This book could be something with the right editor! I wish the best to the author!
I had problems with this story. Gonna sum it up bullet point style for cohesive sake.
*so many errors
*could never tell who was talking
*not enough info to help us love our characters 👎🏻
*subplots were seriously lacking.
*no major conflicts. I thought that James as a character was introduced to create conflict. Like maybe he would come on to Zoe and Ian would save her and Jack would tear into James then thank Ian. So then, Ian would be too guilty to pursue Zoe anymore bc he was protective of Zoe NOT his relationship with his best friend.
*Why was Steve introduced??? He should have been fuel to make Ian jealous. But instead was a throw away character.
*dialogue was not developed or realistic.
*The ENDING. or lack of ending???? Who just ends a book in the middle of a conversation. Like the “cliff hanger” was that Ian met Alexis and it’s time for winter break???
*HOW is this a soccer romance when we didn’t even get to see them win the championship and Ian be completely DEVASTATED that he couldn’t celebrate with the one person he really wanted to.
* there should have been a subplot that Zoe thinks Alexis might have a thing for Jack…. That’d be juicy.
This book could be something with the right editor! I wish the best to the author!
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January 22, 2024
I came across this book and decided to give it a try. The storyline and characters were intriguing and I read it in one sitting. It does end in a cliffhanger so you will need to read the next book to find out what happens next. The secret relationship and what Zoe and Ian are hiding from everyone. They do get to know each other pretty well and have great chemistry together.
December 6, 2023
Real life emotions
This book tackles real life experiences. Bother/sister,teammate/teammate and roommate/ roommate relationships. Plus how a wonderful man/woman relationship can build to true love.
This book tackles real life experiences. Bother/sister,teammate/teammate and roommate/ roommate relationships. Plus how a wonderful man/woman relationship can build to true love.
January 28, 2024
Soso an ok story line but lots of errors from typos to wrong names and ends very abruptly I’m assuming to keep you on your toes for the next book in the series but not sure that it’s worth moving forward with them
December 22, 2023
Good read
Well written and a great cast of characters and story line loved it I can't wait to read more from this author
Well written and a great cast of characters and story line loved it I can't wait to read more from this author
March 9, 2024
Characters were great - they were well rounded, people who you could relate to..... however I was disappointed by the end to find out it was a 3 book plot arc..... Doesn't change the fact that the story was a gem though.
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