This had all the ingredients of a fantastically suspenseful little romance. But what it delivered was ... mostly just a lot of fornicating in one form or another.
If you were intrigued by any of the stuff in the synopsis...the heroine's shadowed past, the pole dancing gentleman's club, the fake dating, the MMC's scandal that forced him to find a partner or one would be handpicked by his father...the bad guys who threaten the Beckett family AND Scarlett over and over again.
Forget it. Those are an illusion. A mere backdrop to the hot and heavy dirty talk, innuendo, and lusty promises shared between the FMC and MMC. And the sex. Because there's a boatload of that, too.
As much as I wanted to (and eventually DID) like James and Scarlett together - the first half of this story just sort of ground my gears. Because although James is adamant that he wouldn't ever do something Scarlett didn't want, he DOES put pressure on her, almost from the moment they met, to have sex with him.
He's constantly bringing it up, constantly telling her he wants to have sex with her. Constantly talking about it - even when she tells him no or that it's a hard limit or that she can't.
He's not taking her shutting the conversation down as a final answer because he "knows she wants him too".
And don't get me wrong. Scarlett DOES want the man. So it doesn't feel as icky as other books in this vein have. But sex becomes such a focal point between the two that I struggle to believe James when he talks about how different this woman is from everybody else.
HOW. How is Scarlett different? Except that she didn't hop on his dick the first time he saw her. Instead, she told him she was a virgin and then pranced off. Literally the only thing that drew this man to Scarlett was the fact that she was untouched and that she didn't give it up to him immediately.
And he becomes hyperfixated on this for over half of the story.
Scarlett is a grad student in finance. She's whip-smart. And yet the ONLY thing this book focuses on is her body, her as yet untouched pussy, to be specific.
And I'm sorry - but her being a virgin at 23 is probably the least interesting thing about this woman.
Her mom was murdered by her stepfather - who's apparently a very bad man and from a rival family to James'. Scarlett helped put this man away and now his sons, her one-time step-brothers have a vendetta out against her and she knows if they see her again, they'll kill her.
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How is that not a focal point in this story?!
So not only is this woman INCREDIBLY intelligent, she's also got a VERY harrowing past that gets kept hidden for 80% of the story.
Scarlett's promised tutoring or lessons in finance or something from James, but all she really gets it sex ed. And I wouldn't call what they do together lessons. It's mostly just him fingering her the first 40% of the book before they finally give in and he fucks her.
And yeah, I get it. It's supposed to be a sexy book, blah blah.
But don't pretend to make a woman intelligent and then just objectify her body and put her pussy on a pedestal the whole time. You're not doing feminism any favors by doing that.
Despite all of that, there were some things I did enjoy (even if they all kind of come with caveats of their own):
I DO like that James falls first, and falls hard. I like that he falls for Scarlett before he gets into bed with her too. That his feelings aren't based ENTIRELY on screwing her. Even though I have to wonder if part of that love wasn't based on the idea that that first screw would be mind-blowing.
It's just weird...how these men get about being with a woman who's never slept with anyone else. It's one aspect of the virgin trope that's never sat right with me. Ah well.
I also love that though the cards get stacked against them with the O'Connors causing trouble for the Beckett family and Scarlett's connection to the O'Connors putting her in danger, James and Scarlett don't let the difficulties separate them. They consistently and repeatedly choose one another, regardless of the consequences. If I knew nothing else about this story - the fact that these two people have chosen to love each other through the hard times is enough for me to believe that the relationship, however fast-paced, is real. Nothing beats watching two people choose to stand strong together against outside problems.
I do however wish those problems had been directly resolved by James and Scarlett. James' brother Killian "dealt with" the problem off page and we're only briefly told about it. While I was glad that no harm ever came to Scarlett, it might have been nice to see her directly involved in helping take the bad guys down - closure and justice for her for her mom.
The ending is very sweet, with James taking Scarlett to visit her mother's grave, and having the grave stone redone into something beautiful. That was a sweet moment - and there were many sweet moments, throughout this story - that really made me smile.
Don't let the 3 stars fool you. I don't know that I'd recommend this to anyone, unless they were just looking for a spicy good time. While I enjoyed this for what it was, I feel like the author really just wanted to write smut. That the plot of the story was just an unfortunate requirement to make a book publishable and so only the bare minimum was written to meet that requirement.
And it's such a shame, because the premise had a TON of promise.