The prologue seemed badly written with ambiguous dialogue and some strange phrasing but I persisted and I'm glad I did. In the latest version there are still lots of spelling and grammatical errors and some odd phrasing throughout the book. Virtual timelines, real timelines, alternative universes, poetry etc. is all a bit wooly, OTT and gets tedious at times - I said 'what a load off b****cks' to myself on more than one occasion. All that said I enjoyed the story and would read a sequel if one were to materialise.