Sigh… I tried so hard to like this book, I really did… but there were just so many things that made me not love it.
I will start by saying I LOVED the last book, I read it in January and it was my first 5 star of the year… which made disliking this book feel even worse.
Not only was I so excited I preordered it, but I moved it up my TBR so I could finish the duology.
That being said, this is my least favorite read of the year… and I feel so bad because I know the author put in tons of work but the plot just feels like it fell apart.
I rated it 2 stars because I can see where she was going, I liked the idea of an inverse story where Red and Neve reflected one another, after all, they are twins.
However, not only was the plot super redundant, but the language and adjectives were so repetitive and the ending(s?) felt as though one was written, only to not be liked, and another one was written on top of it. I feel like it could have ended a total of 3 other times before it did (including the first book because it could have been SO successful as a stand alone.
The first thing that began to frustrate me was the excessive use of unique vocabulary to add to the atmospheric vibes, I suppose? Now, don’t get me wrong, I love learning new words while reading, part of the reason I do read is to expand my vocabulary (I’m a true teacher at heart), but some of the ways the vocabulary was used came off as excessive, sort of like having a dictionary opened and using a word because it sounds cool. At one point, I saw the word “canted” 3 times in all of its different meanings, in two pages. 2 being found on the same page maybe a couple paragraphs in between one another. Not only does looking up a work take you out of the story briefly, the use feels specific, especially since it’s a word I would not typically use in every day conversation. When unique words that are used, they stick out are used more than once and it kind of knocks me out of the story personally because I’m like, “wait, we’ve been here before”. This happened several times while I read.
While we’re on the topic of language, I thought it was so strange and really hard to understand the reasoning behind why it appears in the last book and in some parts of this one, there is a language difference in their world that means that they have unique curses that mimic us using “shit” or “fuck” and that, if introduced, should have remained consistent. But, in this book, traditional curses seemed to take over with the exception of a few instances. It felt strange, and also, it felt like the curses weren’t even really necessary when they were used. It was weird, either have a unique cursing system or don’t, but I think one should be chosen.
In addition to this thought, the over use of adjectives was really disrupting my reading at some points too. Ugh, I feel like I’m being really harsh but it stands out very starkly to me when I come across the same adjectives being used a lot. For example, the author used the word “slashed” for eyebrows on almost every instance I came across a moment where a character’s eyebrows were being described, whether they were furrowing or they were just sitting on their face, it came up a lot, especially when describing Solmir. Also, his blue eyes were described on almost every instance they could be too, I understand the want to describe how the blue stood out against the landscape Neve and Solmir were in, but I understood the power the first or second time even they were described, more just felt like, for me, “yes, he does in fact, have striking blue eyes”- ya know what I mean?
Red also became INSUFFERABLE for me, which sucked because I liked her stubborn, bull-like dedication and her “does her own thing” attitude she had in the last book, I felt like that was super effective for her character, but in this book it just went overboard. Also, any time her perspective was written, it just felt like we were seeing the same things. Frustration, explaining the plot again, KEY… I also hated how she was so willing each time to seemingly forget the love she had for Eammon just for Neve. I’ve never had a twin, so I couldn’t understand, but I have a husband and he’s my rock, I couldn’t imagine doing anything without him, so her constantly willing to make decisions without him or martyr herself felt like something I couldn’t even grasp at, but that is all personal opinion (as all of this is- of course). She was also so hypocritical in the end with being rather unaccepting of Solmir because of his past and how his legends were told. Like, miss ma’am, did you or did you not do the EXACT SAME THING by falling in love with Eammon in the last book and you expected Neve to go along with it, you can’t return the favor? And not wanting Neve to go at the very end felt so controlling. Thank God for Eammon being our constant soft, steady voice of reason because Lord did Red need it in this book.
Speaking of Eammon, I love him, I’m so glad we had his character in this book, he still had all his best qualities.
Speaking of main characters, I actually grew to like Neve a bit more in this book which was refreshing. I also liked Solmir too- I did not, however, enjoy him being either victim energy or martyr energy. But he had a few in betweens where you could just see him as a troubled but mostly good soul and those moments I loved.
Finally, the finale(s?)-
1. The first one could have been the end of book one, it leaves you on a cliff hanger but with a little rewriting, it could have succeeded well as a stand-alone I think.
2. The weird unaliving scene, it felt like the purgatory-ish scene was kind of unnecessary and even though them just dying would have also pissed me off probably, but also, them just deciding to smash their apple souls(??) and Arick warning them about magic being put back into the world was a risk and also not knowing what would happen to him but going along with it felt so strange. Like, you all just spent and sacrificed so much to this point to clean up the mess magic gave, only to risk it all again just to not exist? I get the sentiment of free will and everyone having good that the book reiterated, but it also reiterated Neve and Red constantly at odds with their own decisions and the repercussions it could have on others. It felt like that was an odd choice them as characters would take. I also did not vibe with them not having souls but still being the same when wasn’t the whole point of the Kings that not having souls made them moral-less shells of themselves? Why did that suddenly not apply to Red and Neve when they came back. They could have just stayed dead and it could have ended. Maybe a little less satisfactory, but it would have been an end I could also live with.
3. The way it did end, which didn’t totally upset me, but didn’t totally satisfy me. I was glad Kayu and Raffe took over Valleyda. I was pleased Fife and Lyra got to travel. I was happy Red and Eammon were back. I was really happy when Neve found Solmir. But, after all that had happened that was lacking, it all felt dragged and simultaneously rushed and it was a letdown.
Don’t let this review stop you from reading and even enjoying this book! It was only my opinions (and at times I feel bad for seeming harsh if I did but I was let down and I wanted to share why). I know the author worked hard and I am thankful that the work was put into the world where I could form my own thoughts and opinions. After all, everything is in the eye of the beholder. Thanks for making it this far if you did!