Ok, where do I start with the roller-coaster of eye rolls.
Well, let's start with the FMC.. Mayve for the first few chapters she is a introvert, with severe social anxiety and always wears "bland" clothes, she has a birth defect in one eye that leaves her partially blind in it, oh and she faints at the sight of blood (any sight including her period).
Enter Kenzo unhinged, with a blood kink and rude as hell. The first thing he says to her when they meet is "what's wrong with your eyes" because every person with an insecurity wants an arsehole they just met to point it out. (Insert eye roll).
Of course, he becomes obsessed.
Now Mayve wants to apply for a promotion at work (social anxiety be damned and forgotten), but her boss will only give her the roll if she is engaged or married.. WTF (insert eye roll), so of course, the next scene, our little introvert who won't even leave her apartment and only goes into work twice a week but tries to stay invisible, is on a work trip in Vegas... huh.
Oh, and of course, kenzo is there on a job... (insert eye roll)
So, of course, when in Vegas and you need a job promotion that you can only get if you're married.. she's drunk, he isn't. Let's GET MARRIED (insert eye roll).
Now we get down to the insanity (yep) they barely see each other, and she gets the promotion and is little miss social butterfly and her biggest client is a mafia boss (sure). she dresses better and goes to dinners and events and in the office every day (who knew the answer to getting over social anxiety was marrying a psychopath and getting a promotion). She also, would you believe it.. gets over her blood fainting issue as long as she is horny 😒 (insert biggest eye roll). The author never thought maybe he could change... (To think this is a female author)
Next a weird, gross, questionable smut scene in a cemetery (yep because this author always needs one these days) so they are mid getting it on (yes in a graveyard in the middle of the day) he then shots someone, then straight away wraps the gun in a condom and inserts it without consent into her butt.. now I'm Australian, so I don't know a lot about guns, but.... im pretty sure a gun is quite hot as soon as it's discharged???
Oh, and the last titbit.. so out of nowhere at the end, Mayve says she can't have and doesn't ever want children (great love this representation), but... She hasn't produced any eggs.. now hang on 1 second here, so this girl faints at the sight of blood. She struggles with her periods (which would be irregular if any since she has no eggs to ovulate), she is on birth control.... anyone else confused. Why didn't the author just make this a point at the beginning when he asked her about periods.. could have said she can't have and never wants kids, so she got a hysterectomy because of her blood issues.
This author keeps churning out books at the moment that are lacking the better writing she did with the chain hearts duet series. She makes the women ridiculous and always has a stupid smut scene, which would make any sane women run and report him to the cops but they always just get over it and accept his kinks.
I read this because it was the last in a 3 book series about the brothers.. I don't know if I will read anymore of this author as she seems to be just churning them out, which makes them be lacking good substance. Hopefully, she stops thinking about the money grabs and gets back to quality.