WARNING: POSSIBLE SPOILERS AHEAD
I would say that I still rather enjoyed this book overall despite also having many criticisms about it, of things that annoyed and grated me to no end. I found it kept me absorbed and I could simply not put it down, much like with the previous Rosie Goodwin novel I read, The Lost Girl. It was quite an emotional rollercoaster to be honest, and quite eventful too which I quite liked. It is always good seeing a character's journey through their rags to riches story. However, I hate to say that I have more to criticise about this book that I do to praise, and perhaps a 3 star rating may even be considered generous.
Lily was far too much of a Mary Sue, simply being this perfect, one-dimensional saint, having the patience, kindness and generousity of one and always being the Good Samaritan, never even showing real anger or resentment towards those who actually mistreat her-and even sympathises with them, which I found really annoying, and was thus not a very relatable character at all. She always seems to know the right thing to say and do the right thing no matter what, and I just found this ridiculous. I found that she seemed to literally have no real flaws, or at least no significant ones that were addressed, with the odd flaw she did have being played for sympathy and as "not her fault!". She didn't feel like a real character to me, but rather this embodiment of a saint, and the only people who didn't like her were those who were simply jealous of her for being such a saint and so favoured all the time. She even takes in and adopts a random waif near the end of the story, which just came out of nowhere and didn't even add anything to the story or fit in with the rest of the story in any way, having been totally unnecessary and pointless, with the waif, introduced as Merry, serving no purpose other than to follow Lily around and hero-worship her non-stop. It happened so late in the story as well that it was just too late to get to know another character at this stage, with it just having been shoehorned in to show yet again just what a kindly, saintly, Good Samaritan Lily is. This Merry character really annoyed me as well with just how much she hero-worshipped Lily, and this got spelled out to us too much, as if we need it spelled out to us yet again just how much of a kind, virtuous saint Lily is, and just follows her around all the time. It's like she was supposed to take the place of Annie, so Lily could now have another poor abandoned little girl to raise as her own, which just seemed ridiculous. Louis's constant hero-worship of Lily was really annoying too, along with us constantly being told just how beautiful he thinks she is which got really repetitive along with the constant "but we're from different classes, it could never work". The taking in strays storyline just kept getting annoyingly rehashed throughout the book too, as first Lily takes in baby Annie (though to be fair she was forced upon her and it doesn't last at least), then she takes in the kitchen maid Ginny's dog after she's been separated from him, then she lets Ginny come and live with her after she has run away after being bullied by the cook, then she takes in Merry and raises her as her own, then she takes in another dog-it just got really tiresome, like the lack of subtly was ridiculous, I mean how many times do you need to spell out to us what an absolute saint and good Samaritan Lily is?!
I feel as well that the way other girls were compared to her in such a negative light, such as her sister Bridget and Samantha (Louis's betrothed), was just yet another way of holding her in a shining light and just not right pitting other girls against each other like this. Samantha came across as a bit forced to be honest, with her horrible, belligerent, snobby attitude (especially towards Lily) being too forced and spelled out to us to the point she was very one-dimensional. She is of course like this because she is supposed to be a love rival to Lily and be one of the barriers that stands in the way of her and Louis getting together (not that she's an actual threat personally speaking given Louis makes his preference towards Lily very clear!) along with her also being an equal in class to Louis of course. It might have been more interesting had Louis's suitor been nicer and that he was still fond of her but only as a friend, much like with Lily and her own false love interest, Jean-Pierre (or Jean-Paul?) who by the way was another shoehorned character purely meant as another hurdle in the Lily/Louis love story only to then utilise the Pair the Spares trope with him and Arabella! Honestly, it was all so cliched and contrived that I felt like I was watching a cliched romance film. But doing that more complex characterisation with Samantha would have made things a bit more complex too, as it would have created more conflicting feelings for Louis I'm sure, and Lily if the girl had been nice to her, as it was all too obvious that Louis clearly had no interest in Samantha at all and only had eyes for Lily, but it would have been more interesting if his feelings for Lily weren't as obvious throughout the book and it had actually appeared that he might like this Samantha girl. The way it is even explicitly pointed out that Louis thinks Lily is so much nicer when it was already obvious, like it's not something we needed to be spelled out for us-readers can read between the lines you know. Both Lily and Bridget also could have had more potential in regards to being more complex, three-dimensional characterisations, as opposed to the one-dimensional saint and narcissist they were respectively.
It was also just far too far-fetched and it got to the point it was pretty cliched and overly sentimental in parts, especially with the cliched ending. I mean it was always obvious that Lily was going to end up with Louis, but I feel like the ending of them ending up together was a bit too cliched and sugary. It probably wouldn't have been so bad if Louis hadn't have said "I love you-I think I have from the minute I set eyes on you" (whether you believe in Love at First Sight or not this is just too cliched, though that may be more subjective on my part). I'm aware that these are meant to be romance novels but I still find the ending a bit too cliched and sugary for my liking, though that is probably just me and is purely subjective of course. Also, while it is great Lily achieved her dreams of becoming a famous artist and very much went from rags to riches, it was still a bit unrealistic the way it happened, with her just coming across this artist in an art gallery in France who loved all her work. It might have made more sense if she had found connections through networking through Louis, who could have easily had loads of connections.
The scenes with Robbie harassing her got far too repetitive which was annoying, and just didn't add anything, and the part towards the end of him kidnapping her and holding her hostage seemed a bit out of place and also didn't really add anything, especially with it being two years after she left Nuneaton, and just seemed to be added in for the sake of drama. I still think he should have been condemned for his behaviour, as yes while he did clearly need help and a mental asylum was probably what was best for him, what he did to Lily was still absolutely criminal, holding a young woman hostage like that, leaving her to die after having already harassed her multiple times previously, I mean he almost killed her and the trauma it would have left with her! While yes he needed help, that does not mean that he should be excused and even condoned. This was clearly just yet another way of depicting how much of an absolute saint Lily is, insisting he not be charged but rather sectioned, with Louis even saying "other girls would have wanted his blood". Honestly, I was so sick of Louis constantly praising and idolising Lily all the damn time, being along with Merry her biggest admirer, sorry, hero-worshipper. Oh AND she even offers to buy a house for her kidnapper and Bridget? Like are you effin kidding me?! I mean first, we get it already, Lily is an absolute saint and angel, you don't need to spell it out to us a trillion times, and secondly, letting him get away with his criminal behaviour is one thing, but offering to buy a house for him?! Seriously?! Talk about Stockholm Syndrome. Yes most other girls would have wanted his blood, because they are normal, and more relatable and realistic! I still don't think he should have gotten away with it and should have been punished, as I still believe in punishment when someone does something anti-social or criminal irregardless of them "needing help", otherwise all criminals could just use that excuse, as apologism and condoning of such behaviour just really annoys me.
I was pleased to see that Annie did end up staying with her actual mother after all, which was one of the less predictable parts of the story, as you keep thinking she'll end up living with Lily forever but Arabella, her actual mother, does end up actually caring for her in the end with both her and her mother coming to love and care for her. Also Lily's family building an extension onto their cottage to accommodate Ginny's family?! Come on! It would have been one thing if this had been a temporary set-up, but it seemed like it was going to be these two families living together forever, like talk about contrived and over-sentimental. They could have at least just Ginny's family find their own, new home in the end, even if that had been with the help of Lily's family. I mean I know this was just a story, but come on, life does not work like that, and how did they manage to build an extension that easily?! Everything just came together too easily and unrealistically in this particular story, making it seem too far-fetched with not enough struggle.
The rags to riches and interclass romance storyline was a bit too cliched for my liking, especially as Lily doesn't actually undergo or endure any real, significant, particular barriers during this process, or any real suffering, mainly just the complicated situation of her feelings towards Louis. Okay I guess it isn't entirely true that she doesn't suffer at all, as there is the whole thing with Robbie stalking her and then kidnapping and holding her hostage, but even that was only suddenly and briefly shoehorned in like an afterthought towards the end. I mean yes there was the struggle when her dad died and her and her family were left in financial struggle, but even then it only lasts briefly as they are soon saved by Louis, of course, who finds them another cottage. Lily also just keeps getting lucky thanks to the help from Louis (aka her obvious admirer/love interest) and of course coming across the owner of an art gallery who just has to single her out and asks to see her work, which upon seeing he likes so much, ultimately resulting in her becoming rich and famous! Even when she is fired from her job, she manages to get lucky landing herself a job as an artist, soon after which she becomes rich and famous!
Now I don't want to write off this book as a terrible book, as I did still find it kept me intrigued enough to keep on reading, which is why I have been generous in giving it an average 3 stars as opposed to low. It is always interesting following the adventures of people in Victorian times, and wondering what is going to happen, so I will give it that. Contrived is honestly probably the best word I'd use to describe this book. It was definitely one of Rosie Goodwin's weaker novels, but to be honest the only one that I've read so far that I was really annoyed and disappointed in.