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341 pages, Kindle Edition
First published July 16, 2024
Ryan tried to take mental notes for things he’d need to fix later on himself: the rhythm of the line changes was definitely something he’d have to adjust to, working in the feedback from McCaskill and Aronson another. In the peewee league, the team had him, an assistant coach, and the developmental coach, but Ryan had always been the one calling the shots alone on the bench. It was still, ultimately, his responsibility.Passage after passage like that -- synopses rather than vignettes, if you see what I mean. Maybe the resulting sense of distance accounts for why I didn't particularly like either Ryan or Eric at first. Maybe it, along with the fact that the hostility between them wasn't leavened by any exchange that hinted at a connection, accounts for why I nearly noped out at 30%, which is when Eric rage-kisses Ryan for the first time and things get heated fast.
Still sitting in Eric’s lap, Eric could feel Ryan’s whole body tense ...in which Eric seems to be sitting in the lap of someone named Eric, get past the copyeditor? And the proofreader? (And the author, obviously, but he's supposed to get backstop services from his publisher, and would people please quit it with the "off of" bit?)