note | rating: 2.5 stars
after reading the first book (… which i wasn’t that impressed with), this one seems quite similar and a little repetitive. for example the fact that grady is also involved in a crash, which also makes his car burst into flames just like cristian in “off track”. i mean, couldn’t the author had thought of something different? also ben’s reacting is similar, but it’s him panicking and saying running of to the track to see if grady is okay. i mean it just doesn’t work a second time and it also felt like it came out of nowhere, since there’s only 15 pages left of the book. couldn’t they have used that time for something else? because just like with the first book, 200 pages is not a lot to develop a story within. it also aeems like the crash was included just for the dramatic effect, or for the sake of just having it there, to have that situation or event that would make ben and grady announce their relationship to the world, not caring about potentially putting themselves, because in that moment all they care about it making sure the other one is safe and okay; and wanting to say “i love you” to each other. yeah, it’s just quite predictable
aome books manage to tell a whole story in 200 pages, a story that leave you satisfied and where you’re left with a feeling that you got all or most of your questions answered. but this one is not one of them. 200 pages is just too short to tell a love story between two characters who’be never met before, and it just wasn’t believable i guess. i didn’t feel the connection or the love between them, it went too fast and i can’t really explain why they even liked each others what made them fall for each other because they never really said so. just like the first one, it seems like they were sexually attracted to each other, then they because friends with benefits and suddenly they were in love with each other, after we’ve only read about them having sex and not much else.
i’m tired of reading mm romance that’s seriously lacking substance, depth and actual plot. mostly it’s just two male characters who’s horny for each other and doesn’t se to do much else that fuck and not talk about their feelings because they all have daddy issue and learned that “real” men doesn’t do feelings, so why even try to change that. until someone comes into their life and change it overnight, which only leaves the reader confused as to why… i know romance books are sometimes a bit over the top and in a lot of ways are structured the same ways as rom-com movies, but i’m just tired of those books… i miss the mm romance books with more depth, with more plot and characters development (and characters descriptions), where the story actually feels rounded and thought through, where we actually get to know the characters separately and together, where it doesn’t feel rushed or anything. but maybe i’m asking too much… who knows