Pretty intense cliffhanger.
Wait...that's how it ends?
So, the world building was cool, plot was super solid, well paced until the ending which was rushed then seemed to end almost mid sentence, like right at the peak of climactic scene when everything was coming together and happening, mid action, then just ... nothing, no more words to read.
The dialog was pretty clunky, particularly in the beginning, made more awkward by the extreme speech tags, referring to characters 'screaming' when a terse or slightly raised voice seemed more likely. Once I started picturing everyone as anime style characters, it made this aspect easier to accept, since anime characters are always exaggerating every tiny emotion.
I felt there was some lacking motivation in the two of them running off together. Like, they went from despising each other to suddenly running together within like, an hour of knowing each other, the wolf girl in particular with basically zero motivation. She had literally nothing to run from, no arranged marriage, nice seeming parents who supported her interests, slated to be next alpha of her pack despite clearly not being particularly dominant in nature. She needed a better reason to leave than a rude girl who's mean to her existing nearby. I'd probably also have had them both run off separately, then encounter each other and have some external threat or obstacle force them to rely on each other's unique skills to overcome it; the vamps warrior skills and the wolf's worldly know-how and charisma, then have them decide traveling together makes sense, and develop their relationship from there. It would have allowed for more character development early on instead of me needing to just force myself to believe these two are falling in love because they're traveling together for no real reason, not because I'm seeing it happen, with understandable how's and why's.
Over all, the positives were world building, interesting plot, well written sex scenes, like, the sex wasn't all that creative, but it was reliably hot and well described, and added to character growth and development. There was also a good strong character arc for the vampire.
What could have been better: motivations for characters actions in the beginning, dialog and dialog descriptions, more of a character arc for the wolf, and an actual ending or at least epilogue, so we're not all left feeling like we do when the batteries on our bedside friend dies at the worst possible moment. There's a way to do cliff hangers where the book still feels complete, but that's not what happened here.
It reads like a decently copy edited second draft with a lot of promise, but basically just lacked some developmental editing.
I still read the whole thing and enjoyed it. I bet this author consistently improves, and I'll probably follow them.