A definite improvement on the books that came before, especially the second book. I do feel a pang of pity for Newcomb, a first-time author who never expected to have such fame foisted upon him. The bizarre decision by the publisher to throw his books to the wolves with heavy marketing but little editing makes as little sense today as it did at the time.
In this third outing, we get more action to balance the endless exposition, as well as several more characters and perspectives to follow. But the world is still mostly empty, with no real sense of life to it. The kingdom has been in anarchy since the first book, and that fact is never addressed. It's bizarre to hear Tristan and others talk about saving their nation, when we never get to spend any time there. I couldn't tell you at all how big the population is, or how many towns there are, or what the average person's life is like. We spend all our time with the affluent heroes on their rigid little quest. It's unpleasant and lonely.
Villains are still cookie cutter Skeletors, and there's still an over-reliance on deus ex machina. At least this time Tristan gets to do much more to save the day (more than nothing) and there's some cleverness with preestablished mechanics involving the magic of the world. Newcomb also has some trashy fun with gore, and the more visceral passages are the closest the book comes to being good. I think Newcomb, with practice, would have been more at home writing short, pulpy, action novels as opposed to this weak attempt at traditional high fantasy.
The editing weaknesses are also a little bit better this time, although the word literally gets misused for emphasis constantly. Everyone acts like teenagers even though most of them are in their thirties and some of them are in their three hundreds. Ridiculously, Tristan still has not begun his training even by the end of this book, leaving him with hardly any changes in his skillset or personality from the first tome. That goes for the whole cast, really. I started laughing every time Tristan made a suggestion only to get shot down by the wizards again. The 40,000 page prophecy continues to shackle the heroes while the villains do whatever they please. It's just blah.
Knowing that the storyline remains unfinished even with three additional books, I think I will have to end my reading here. Again, I feel pity for Newcomb, but not enough to justify sitting through 1500 pages to reach an anticlimax. This book ends on a relatively happy note and without an immediate cliffhanger. I will happily imagine that the villains are finally thwarted and the heroes get to have a happy, sappy ending, as was no doubt the plan all along.