"HELLO HAMMERSMITH!"

by Tim O'Shaughnessy

Gerry and Bernie Stanford are preparing for a 2003 reunion concert at the Carling Apollo in Hammersmith. The synth-pop band that bears their name and was ‘big in the 80s’ is about to release a new hits collection after years in the wilderness following their enforced retirement from the music business.As their story moves backwards towards their glory days, their son Jack’s story moves forwards. With a new identity after a traumatic childhood, he finds himself drawn to follow in his parents’ footsteps through the murky morass of today’s music business. Characters that either helped or hindered his parents in their career make their presence felt on his journey. Can Jack achieve the goal that eluded his parents, or will the shadowy figures that still seem hell-bent on revenge get the satisfaction they crave?

420 pages, Hardcover

Published December 8, 2023

Reviews

[Mark Ashby · Rating 5 out of 5]

A very enjoyable book about aspiring young musicians desiring to be heard, navigating an industry which could break them as easily as make them. Will history repeat itself?

The main protagonist, and the band's keyboard player, Jackson, has a back story reaching back into music's past as it moved from classic guitar rock into the age of synthesizers.

This is skillfully woven in, bit by bit, gradually answering questions about why events are unfolding as they are, but leaving you hanging on some points, which makes you wonder where the story might be going in the future.

For those of us of a certain age who remember the the music of the 80's as it was happening at the time, it's also a great romp through the memory banks because those real musical events you remember are blended into the storytelling too.

Uniquely, you are also offered a multimedia experience: not only are the 'band' songs and lyrics discussed in the book, there are links to their 'website' on the internet, so that you can listen to the songs created in the book. Do they match the songs you imagined hearing in your head?

You really have to admire the imagination of the author and the breadth of the world he's trying to create.

[H.D. Logic · Rating 4 out of 5]

My adult son is on the autism spectrum. He has profound intellectual disability, says about thirty words, needs full assistance with toileting, regularly attacks his caregivers, and lives in an institution. Also "on the autistic spectrum with Asperger's syndrome" is this novel’s protagonist, Jack, a socially awkward, natural-born but mostly self-taught musical prodigy with a flair for globally conscious pop hooks. The (Colour) Spectrum is wide indeed, and so too the spectrum of neurodivergent fiction.

“HELLO HAMMERSMITH!” is the long play soundtrack of Jack and friends’ ascent to the top of the pops intertwined with the reverse dénouement of Jack’s parents’ 80s superhit synth group’s descent from the same summits. In this generational saga of the rise and fall of pop savvy, we are treated to the ins, outs, and others of a make-it-bad, break-it-big, true-to-life, fictional but all-too-sordid cutthroat musical post-industrial complex where only the brilliant and connected or lucky can thrive and your bandmates may be your best enemies.

I recommend this novel for fans of savants overcoming everything through sheer talent and heritage, particularly those harboring their own artistic success fantasies. Come see what life is like on the spectrum.

[Robin Colyer · Rating 5 out of 5]

“Hello Hammersmith” is an amazing book. The plot is a very well-constructed and strong one. It kept me gripped throughout until the ending. The timeline of the story moves backwards and forwards across two decades with the Stanfords’ musical career and then their son and his band entering the world of music. The movement between the decades is a very good feature of this novel.

Tim has exceptional knowledge of music and the music business which really makes the story one that it is very interesting. The music business is a world that I know very little about and this story has opened it up to me. I can’t wait to read more in the sequel.
I have also recently read Richard Coles' first novel and I have to say that "Hello Hammersmith" is certainly as good and for me, the plot is actually a bit stronger.

[Abdul · Rating 5 out of 5]

Hero's journey through the land of rock music


"HELLO HAMMERSMITH!" by Tim O'Shaughnessy is an engaging jump in the music industry, telling a story that spans generations through the Stanford family. The novel's unique structure—interweaving the past and present—creates a rich narrative that captures the essence of an alternative rock journey.

What sets this book apart is its interactive element, allowing readers to immerse themselves in Stanford's musical legacy through actual songs available online.

This mix of storytelling and music shows O'Shaughnessy's creativity and deep understanding of the music world.

It's a well-researched, well-written page-turner that will resonate with fans of music-themed novels like "Utopia Avenue" and "Daisy Jones and the Six," offering insights into the hero's journey through the land of rock music.

[Staci Wilson · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great rockin’ read!

I loved how “Hello, Hammersmith” followed generations of musicians and jumped back and forth in time. It really kept things fresh. Excellent writing is the cherry on top!

[Vanessa Edwards · Rating 3 out of 5]

There is much to like about this novel which follows the careers of two related bands. The skilfully interwoven parallel narratives trace two different periods, a generation apart. Admittedly I didn’t immediately realise that the early timeline went backwards … but once I twigged, I found it very effective. And the hints in that timeline about the band’s downfall hold readers’ interest well, while the suggestions in the recent narrative of sinister goings-on at the band’s recording company similarly work as tantalising reminders. The structure also makes for a fascinating overview of the development of the music industry from vinyl into digital streaming.

The author provides a lot of background information about that industry — including shady dealing and other shenanigans and a colourful depiction of a copyright infringement case. I found and enjoyed shades of Taylor Jenkins Reid’s Daisy Jones & The Six, a novel I love, including invented lyrics which are used cleverly in Hello Hammersmith to reflect plot developments. It’s also a nice touch to have links to recordings of some of the band’s songs that are part of the story! And there are several fun vignettes of the 70s, for example: ‘Rick Wakeman told a similar story, that he was listening to David Bowie playing songs on an old 12-string that would end up on Hunky Dory.’

The downside for this reviewer? I felt that there was superfluous exposition and detail, much of it presented or described ‘omniscient-narrator’ style rather than more directly and vividly from one of the character’s perspectives. Similarly the dialogue seemed at times somewhat stilted and unnatural with not enough to-and-fro flow — it felt more as though the speaker was reading from a script. And the author’s evident aversion to using the word ‘said’ soon began to grate — the frequent use of alternatives such as exhaled, exclaimed, offered, confessed, commented, remarked, interjected etc swiftly palled and became intrusive, but perhaps this is just a personal aversion. In any event, these are all points that could be addressed in a thoughtful edit which would in my view really benefit the narrative.

Overall, two engaging stories set in an immersive, evolving musical world which could be enhanced by tighter writing.

[Julius Codrington · Rating 5 out of 5]

"HELLO HAMMERSMITH!: An Alternative Rock Music Novel" by Tim O'Shaughnessy is a riveting dive into the world of alternative rock, captured through the eyes of its dynamic characters. Set in the vibrant locale of Hammersmith, the novel expertly weaves together the lives, passions, and tribulations of musicians determined to leave their mark on the world. The story evolves with a palpable energy, pulling readers into a whirlwind of concert venues, songwriting sessions, and band dynamics.

The characters are vividly portrayed, each with distinct personalities and backstories that add layers of depth to the narrative. The protagonist's journey is particularly compelling, filled with both triumphs and challenges that resonate with anyone who has ever had a dream. The camaraderie and tensions within the band are depicted with authenticity, making for an engaging read that keeps the reader invested in their fate.

A significant strength of the novel is its atmospheric setting. Hammersmith comes alive as more than just a backdrop; it's a character in its own right, teeming with the pulse of the alternative rock scene. From gritty underground clubs to boisterous gigs, the detailed descriptions immerse readers in the sonic landscape of the era, capturing the essence of what makes this genre and setting so iconic.

The narrative style is both raw and poetic, underscoring the emotional highs and lows experienced by the characters. O'Shaughnessy's writing strikes a balance between lyrical prose and gritty realism, which underscores the authenticity of the rock 'n' roll lifestyle. The pacing is well-crafted, with moments of introspection seamlessly interspersed with action-packed scenes, keeping the story dynamic and engaging.

This book merits a 5 out of 5-star rating because it transcends the typical rock novel by offering not just a glimpse, but a full immersion into the alternative rock culture of Hammersmith. The emotional depth, evocative setting, and compelling character arcs make it a standout read in its genre. Tim O'Shaughnessy's talent for storytelling ensures that "HELLO HAMMERSMITH!" will resonate with readers long after they've turned the last page.

[Zoey Codrington · Rating 5 out of 5]

"HELLO HAMMERSMITH!" by Tim O'Shaughnessy explores into the vibrant world of alternative rock music, capturing the spirit of rebellion, passion, and transformation. The story follows a band’s tumultuous journey through the highs and lows of the music industry, providing a behind-the-scenes look at the life of musicians as they grapple with fame, personal struggles, and the quest for authenticity.

The novel's characters are well-developed, each bringing their unique complexity and depth to the narrative. Their interactions are raw and genuine, reflecting the challenges and triumphs inherent in both personal relationships and professional partnerships in a high-pressure environment. O'Shaughnessy masterfully uses their stories to explore broader themes of loyalty, ambition, and the sacrifices required to pursue one’s dreams.

The setting is vividly described, transporting readers to the gritty underground music scenes of various iconic locales. This atmospheric writing adds a layer of authenticity, making the reader feel as though they are right there with the band, experiencing the pulse of live performances and the intimacy of backroom negotiations. The author's deep knowledge of the music world is evident in the intricate details and cultural references scattered throughout the narrative.

The plot is engaging and fast-paced, making it a compelling page-turner from start to finish. O'Shaughnessy intertwines moments of suspense, humor, and heartfelt connection in a way that keeps readers invested in the band’s journey. The story also addresses relevant social issues, providing a thought-provoking commentary wrapped in an entertaining and accessible package.

"HELLO HAMMERSMITH!" merits a 5 out of 5 star rating for its authentic portrayal of the alternative rock music scene, its multifaceted characters, and its seamless blend of entertainment and substance. Tim O'Shaughnessy has crafted a novel that not only entertains but also resonates on a deeper level, making it a must-read for fans of music and compelling storytelling alike.

[Anita Dow · Rating 5 out of 5]

Cleverly written story gives eye-opening insights into the music industry

This is one of those rare books that I didn't want to come to an end. Tim O'Shaughnessy's transition from the world of finance into novel writing has resulted in this extremely entertaining window into the world of the music industry. The story is told through dual timelines in alternating chapters: firstly, young Jack Michaels and his band complete a music college course and attempt to break into the pop world. The second timeline is told moving back in time, and is the story of his deceased parents' own time in the limelight as a top music band of the 1980s. This device of unfolding the story works really well, especially as Jack only learns of his parents' identity on his 18th birthday – they died when he was five years old.

The author demonstrates a sound knowledge of music composition, which adds authenticity to the song-writing scenes. The use of contemporary music references from the 1980s and '90s adds flavour, and O'Shaughnessy conveys a good understanding of the recording industry. His writing is smooth and accomplished, and made me really invested in the characters. The plot has some neat twists, giving it a 'mystery' feel and it kept me engaged the whole time. Unexpectedly for the subject matter, there is no 'adult' language or swearing and so the book would be suitable for younger teenagers, especially as it also has strong elements of 'coming of age'. It's certainly a cautionary tale for anyone with dreams of getting a music recording contract. I highly recommend “HELLO HAMMERSMITH!” and I will definitely seek out further novels by this author.

[buecherwurm · Rating 5 out of 5]

"Hello HAMMERSMITH!" could be a mesmerizing travel through the complexities of the music industry, wrapped in a piercing account of flexibility and recovery. The author's capacity to create such a compelling storyline, wealthy with enthusiastic profundity and complex characters, is genuinely commendable.

What struck me most approximately this book is its genuineness. In spite of the exciting scenery of the pop world, the characters are portrayed with crude trustworthiness, permitting perusers to associate with their battles and triumphs on a profoundly individual level.

The way the story consistently weaves between past and show is breathtakingly done, including layers of profundity and interest to the story. It's a confirmation to the author's capable narrating and sharp understanding of human nature.

Additionally, the incorporation of joins to melodies from The Colour Spectrum's to begin with EP includes an immersive component to the perusing encounter, bringing the story to life in a one of a kind and captivating way.

By and large, "Hello HAMMERSMITH!" could be a captivating examined that will wait in your contemplations long after you've turned the ultimate page. It's a confirmation to the control of versatility, trust, and the persevering soul of the human soul. 

[Nathan Ellis · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book transported me into a vividly painted world that straddles the electric energy of the 80s and the pulsating rhythm of contemporary music. O'Shaughnessy's narrative is a composition that resonates with the heartbeats of its characters, the Stanford family, and their musical legacy that echoes through the generations.

The novel's setting in the iconic 80s London music scene envelopes the reader in a time capsule of synth-pop euphoria and gritty reality. The juxtaposition of the past and present narratives, with Gerry and Bernie Stanford's rise and fall and their son Jack's quest for musical identity, creates a compelling symphony of stories that are as harmonious as they are contrasting.

The addition of The Colour Spectrum's EP links offers an immersive experience that blurs the line between fiction and reality. Listening to the songs while diving into the characters' lives adds an extra layer of engagement that enriches the reading experience immeasurably.

HELLO HAMMERSMITH! is an odyssey through the highs and lows of musical stardom and a tribute to the timeless influence of the past on the present. Whether you're a die-hard music aficionado or a lover of evocative storytelling, this book is a melody you'll want to play on repeat.

[Sam · Rating 5 out of 5]

What is it about stories set in the music world that makes us lean in as if we might catch an echo of our own longing between the chords. Tim O’Shaughnessy’s novel invites that impulse and then nudges it somewhere more reflective. You step into 1980s London expecting loud nights and louder egos, yet what lingers is something quieter. Who would have thought a tale about a synth pop duo on the brink of a reunion could make you wonder about the things we inherit without ever asking for them.

Following Gerry and Bernie Stanford is like overhearing an old conversation the city itself never finished. Meanwhile their son Jack moves through the present day with a name he did not grow up knowing. Who has not asked whether our beginnings matter as much as we fear. Watching him carve a path with The Colour Spectrum becomes an experiment in whether hope can outplay history.

The embedded music links feel almost like someone tapping your shoulder saying listen to what they meant. The tension between ambition and survival is real without needing theatrics and the generational thread pulls the story tight in unexpected ways. You close the book wondering when a novel about musicians became a story about everyone who has ever stood backstage in their own life waiting to step forward.

[Kitty Turner · Rating 5 out of 5]

In “Hello Hammersmith!”, Tim O'Shaughnessy unveils a mesmerizing narrative that delves into the transcendent power of music, interwoven with the complexities of the human spirit. Through the vibrant tapestry of his storytelling, O'Shaughnessy crafts a poignant tribute to the enduring force that connects us all: music. Beyond the glitz and glamour of the music industry, he unearths the raw realities, offering a compelling glimpse into its shadowed corners.

With a deft hand, O'Shaughnessy brings to life a cast of characters who resonate with authenticity, their journeys echoing universal truths. His prose, both lyrical and grounded, captures the essence of emotion, inviting readers to immerse themselves fully in the heart of the tale. Whether you're drawn to music, coming-of-age narratives, or simply crave a beautifully articulated story that speaks to the soul, “Hello Hammersmith!” promises an unforgettable experience. With the added dimension of real recordings by “The Colour Spectrum” on SoundCloud, it transcends the page, creating a truly immersive journey. This is a book destined to leave an indelible mark, earning it a well-deserved five-star rating.

[François G · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is a touching and bittersweet novel about life, music, and the power of - I would say - reinvention.

Gerry and Bernie Stanford are 80s synth-pop stars who try to rekindle their careers. On the other side, Colin Garrett is a retired musician turned music teacher as he mentors a group of aspiring students. This was for the 3 main characters.

Let's talk about the plot if you're still with me.

The story is like a slalom between the highs and lows of fame and the joy of creating music. But also the challenges of staying true to yourself. I won't reveal what happens between the Stanfords when they are back to the stage and Colin's reflections on his own career because I am not the type of reader who likes to spoil others but I think you got my point here.

The opening is quite tragic and the book is full of relatable characters and witty dialogue. Some of the music details might feel a bit long for casual readers, but fans of band stories or 80s nostalgia will surely enjoy it. I did.

[Gina Mundy · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is an excellent book! This story transports you straight into the 80’s London music scene and even includes a soundtrack of songs you can listen to along the way. The author's vivid writing style and descriptive storytelling keeps you invested from start to finish. The main character's journey is thrilling, intense, and very entertaining. There are unexpected twists in the plot that add a layer of suspense as well. Reading this taught me about the dark realities of the music industry and the challenges that artists commonly face. While most people see fame as luxurious, this story teaches the valuable lesson that it's not as glamorous as people may think. At the same time, the live music scene is exhilarating, and the author captures this perfectly. I would definitely recommend this to any music enthusiast or drama lover. Overall, it is a solid read that fully deserves 5 stars!

[Claire Winston · Rating 5 out of 5]

I loved this book - a really enjoyable and very interesting read. I also loved the two time lines. It centres around a small family in the very large music industry and shines the spotlight on how success and decline in the music world affects people's lives, for the good and the bad. I sped through the book as couldn't wait to discover what was going to happen next as there was always a surprise springing up. Very cleverly written, with little twists of information gathering pace and connecting together throughout the story. I now can't wait for the next book in the trilogy, "WHAT'SUP WEMBLEY?", to be published. So well done to the author, Tim O'Shaughnessy, and I await with excitement the follow-up book.

[Shelley Sutton · Rating 5 out of 5]

Exceptional read! Go out and buy it!
This book is fantastic! I was lucky enough to read a first edition.
The plot of the story is brilliant, telling the story of Jackson from young to old and the parents from today and goes backwards to their past.
It’s based around Kent and London and it tells you about the cut throat industry of the music world.
I won’t give anything away but you must go out and buy a copy as it’s a book that you will find very hard to put down. Huge twists at the end!
Looking forward to parts 2 and 3.
Well done Tim! This book is awesome!!

[Yomi Akinode · Rating 5 out of 5]

Sonal celebration
The music business is fraught with indignity that the youth fail to see from a lack of life experiences. But our protagonist was well placed by genial virtues and couldn’t navigate the treacherous sonal paths—an interesting read.

[Tiki Black · Rating 4 out of 5]

Clever use of time, parallels, music industry knowledge, friendships, to create a novel of creative self-discovery and awakening, intrigue, and more. The language is not unnecessarily complicated and there is a nice level of relatability.