Anyone who rates this book more than (an already generous) 1 star should find better authors. Fair enough the protective, WDTTY trope is not exactly filled with well-written stories by best selling authors, but I have read Year 7 English essays that were better written than the atrocity that is this book.
It started well, and, spurred on by the positive and plentiful 4 and 5 star reviews I read on, only to now be filled with such a deep ick that I wish I could remove and bleach my brain until I forget I ever read this book.
I wanted to like Eli and was rooting for him until he sucked that tear off his thumb. The word choice by the author further contributed to the cringe, as she describes the kiss following that moment where he can still taste her tears.
Mia was not much better, spending the book lying to, and shacking up with a guy she met the previous day, despite him displaying several stalker and possessive tendencies. Who goes through a person's entire house, mail and bank account just so you can get to know them? And instead of being horrified by this behaviour, she romanticises and gets turned on by his "love" for her.
In a time where domestic violence and abusive relationships are at an all time high, I fear for anyone who reads this and considers this relationship a healthy one or one to get lost in.
If guys who buy you clothes and admit to owning you when you thank them for it, suck your tears off their fingers, microwaves water to make you a tea and regularly accuses you of lying only to feel so awful about you being hurt by it that they make up for it with sex do it for you, you may well love this book. If not, run for the hills and give this book (and author) a wide berth.
And also, DNF at 55% because I just couldn't anymore, so perhaps the remainder of the book magically transforms into a well-written book with a healthy relationship. If so, disregard this review and go on your merry way. If not, run as far as you can and never look back.