I was excited to receive an eARC of The Branded after seeing it was said by Juliet Marillier to be “An outstanding fantasy debut”.
I finished this one quickly and believe it to be a compelling first book in a fantasy duology with dystopian undertones. It has an intriguing plot, empowered FML, captivating prose, steady pacing, immersive world-building, and relevant themes such as, racism, identity, sexism, classism, etc. And while the story’s concept isn’t entirely fresh, it was still a great example of genres blending well together. In fact, I am still thinking about the story in terms of direction as it ended on an abrupt cliffhanger.
But I did have two major gripes with it. One, I wish we’d gotten dual perspectives to add dimension to the plot and fully flesh out the characters. I didn’t dislike our FML’s perspective, but it did limit my experience of the world and the relationships between side characters. Because Nara is initially cagey and mistrusting of others, we only ever see through her harsh lens how the world is and should be. And this sways the reader’s opinions on many things, such as what is true and fair, who is most deserving of justice/compassion, and whether someone is truly good or bad, or simply human. In fact, despite the story wanting to convince the reader that being biased and jumping to conclusions is wrong and dangerous, I found Nara to be constantly in error here.
Two, I felt her relationship with the Wrangler would have made a better impression if it had developed as a true slow burn rather than happening suddenly (the two were constantly at odds until they weren’t). Enemies-to-lovers is a classic trope, but it needed to be handled with more care. I really wanted to see Nara lowering her guard to let someone in, not engaging in physical relations just to purge her lust when it suited her. It made the romance feel a bit cheap and insincere. And I felt bad for the Wrangler, even though he too was flawed. In fact, both characters seemed to use each other and expressed their love on a need bases. So was it really love they shared? I don’t know.
Otherwise, all the story elements worked well to tell a cohesive and engaging tale about two sisters who would do anything for each other, to survive in a world set against them, that perceives women as commodities and people as expendable. I will definitely be reading book two. In fact, I’m annoyed it’s not being published till 2025 (Pretty please send me an eARC Angry Robot, I need to know what’s going to happen!). And whatever Jo Riccioni writes next, I’ll be sure to read. I believe she will only grow as a writer and look forward to witnessing it.
Final resting: ⭐️⭐️⭐️💫 3.5/5 (Rounded up to a 4-star as I cannot give half-stars).