good but not her best
I was so excited to see a new Regency Carla Kelly book that I bought it immediately. I love her Regency books, particularly the medical ones. However, if you are like me and revel in the details of period warfare and medicine, you may be disappointed. I was.
**Spoiler alert!** **(I’m serious!)**
I liked it at first. The heroine is a vicar’s daughter whose parents spend her dowry on a military commission for her ne’er-do-well younger brother, leaving her with nothing but a future in service. She ends up in Plymouth and helping at Stonehouse Naval Hospital. So far, so good. But then she finds insta-love with a surgeon there whom she knew briefly as a child, lots of not-quite-believable things happen, and then it’s suddenly over. Sadly, she develops a habit of fainting with exhaustion and missing the best historical parts, and the medical parts that I adore in her other books are mostly glossed over.
There’s one brief description of debriding a wound, and another quick description of suturing a ruptured artery, but otherwise it’s all “he lost a hand but it was his non-dominant hand so he was fine” and “he sutured the wound” sort of thing. That, to me, was extremely disappointing as it is not what I have come to expect from a Carla Kelly!
Beyond that, while the heroine was likable, she wasn’t particularly believable as written. We are told over and over that she is shy and retiring, but throughout the book she chats at everyone and makes bold choices. She never needs to “recharge” by herself as a shy person normally would after putting herself out the way she does. Also, the butler at first encourages her, then later does an about-face when she’s discovered and she never thinks twice about it. That was confusing. Several other minor characters are obviously only there to facilitate moving the story ahead. In short, the usual character depth is missing.
Finally, who puts their character in the Battle of Trafalgar only to have them be insensible to most of the action and aftermath?! The Battle of Trafalgar itself receives far too little page time. Much of it is her husband telling her what to expect as they get the orlop ready for the coming carnage. This was fabulous. But then description becomes skeletal, she sleeps through the aftermath, and her time on the Pickle reads more like a book report than part of a book. Again, simply not up to par for a writer as accomplished as this one.
**end spoilers**
The whole second half of the book felt rushed, as if Ms Kelly had a deadline and didn’t have time to do the research or put thought into how she could portray the situations in an interesting way that was believable for her characters. I’ve spent a day stewing on this and I’m still irritated. I’ll read it again in a few weeks and update then if I find I was wrong about the book. I still gave it 4 stars because even a less-great Carla Kelly book is head and shoulders above most of what’s available to read, particularly in the Regency genre. If you haven’t read her books, I would recommend almost any of her other Regency military titles before this one. She is about the only author whose focus is on more average, working people, which to me is like a breath of fresh air. There are only so many dukes and earls I can handle before I need a surgeon or a marine to regound me! So, read Carla Kelly, but maybe not this one if you want her best.