⭐️ 3 stars
📖 Received as an eARC
“After all, what was a last name when it could be so easily changed?”
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First of all, thank you to the author for the eARC of this book! Overall, I enjoyed reading The Signature Move, and very much liked the concept.
Starting off on a positive note, I liked how the characters were introduced and how each one had a strong sense of identity, in particular the main characters of course. Aesthetics and personality were well established in Averie and Logan’s characters, and I was able to truly get a sense of who they were, feeling like they were real people. I also enjoyed how the author wrote about different events, such as hockey matches and figure skating competitions - often with sports romance books, this is skipped over, which is a shame really as isn’t this one of the biggest parts of the characters identity? In general these events were well written and structured, allowing to be able to picture exactly what’s happening, despite not knowing a thing about hockey. The story and writing was was easy to follow, and I never found myself getting confused or bored. There was always something going on, and was usually well written and engaging. As a figure skater (and FS fan), I really appreciated the thought and effort put into this book and resonated with Averie at times.
However, there were some things in this book that could be improved upon and perhaps elaborated on. I felt like the first 50% of the book was honestly just a bit too long for the sake of it - not much happened other than the introduction of characters and relationships, and most of this half was just things happening over and over again, with Ava and Logan hating each other for the same reasons/events. I would have loved to see more dynamic into their relationship, with moments of them getting along, getting to know each other more and slowly realising that they didn’t actually hate each other. Instead, we just kind of got a bit of a surface level thing, and they suddenly realised their feelings all at once. Additionally, I know that other reviewers disagree with this, however I honestly do agree with Logan’s hatred and don’t think he has a victim complex. He has valid reasoning - Ava took the spotlight off him (whether intentional or not) and sometimes purposefully did things early on in their rivalry just to spite him - like crash his solo interview, knowing that the reporter would be more interested in her champion story, then acted surprised when Logan told her what she did was wrong? That part made me scream in frustration, not at the author, but at Ava. Other than that, I did like Ava’s character, but a lot of times her privilege was just very unchecked. Going back to the romantic confession, I knew that it was coming, but it really surprised when their relationship developed *extremely* quickly. Like, I’m talking about how they were saying they love each other 1 or 2 months after. I usually don’t mind this, however considering they were bitter enemies until very recently, I expected a bit more warming up and getting to know each other as partners. Additionally I’d like to note that I felt the addition of Brian, an abusive ex, to be unnecessary. He only showed up 3 times and didn’t stay for long, which didn’t create an impact and just felt like a plot device to move along Ava and Logan’s relationship. I would have loved to see this time used to portray Ava’s strained relationship with her parents instead, showing a constant struggle, building up to the resolution of the book. One final thing, there were some technical issues with this book. Sometimes, there were problems with continuity - saying one thing but then down the page another thing is said that contradicts the other. And as a figure skater, there were some wrong things said about the sport (such as saying that Ava had a quad flip in the short program - quads are prohibited in the women’s short program), however I was able to overlook these considering that this is a work of fiction, and fictionalised other things as well, such as the name of the US president.
Overall, I do recommend reading The Signature Move! Especially if you are looking for a book similar to Icebreaker, just with less smut. This is an easy and fun read, but has some serious topics, both mentioned in passing and written in detail. I was able to finish the book quickly and in just a few days, despite being rather busy.
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❕TW/CWs to be aware of if you decide to read:
- Violence
- Talk about unhealthy/disordered eating habits
- Domestic violence
- Child neglect
- One smut scene