I'm on a hunt to find a book to fill a hole in my heart left by His Secret Illuminations and Surrendering to Scylla and this book is trying really hard to fit onto the same shelf. It did an adequate job.
What I liked:
Fiery fmc / shy mmc pairing. Arranged marriage. Fmc is badass draconid and fights well and is never sidelined to uplift the mmc. Mmc is more of a thinking / diplomatic type with some healing magic (an elf).
Casually queer side cast. There are trans characters (called "changers"), gay couples, poly relationships, etc.
Fmc's family is very wholesome and work as an example of a non-toxic family system.
Sex was varied and kinky. Dominant fmc. Use of toys like strap-on, butt plugs, impact play with implements.
The pregnancy trope was handled well.
The worldbuilding was fine. The nations were different enough, and the wider political background left room to expand. There was one side character who was a half-draconid and hinting at another, third fantasy race playing role in this world. I reckon there are multiple fantasy races on this continent, even though this book focuses on elves and draconids.
The romance was insta-lovey but showed great communication and consent.
What I didn't like:
Weak plot tension. Every time the characters get into trouble or a problem is presented, it's solved very fast and without much struggle. "High stake" scenarios are brushed off or even develop off-page. The culmination of the main struggle with the villain is solved in a blink.
The characters have worries and internal dilemmas but these are hard to get invested into when we're seeing everything come so easy for them.
The world is very black and white where the villains are cartoonishly evil and everyone else is super wholesome. This is my constant issue with romantic fantasy. The characters lack nuance, good people are good, evil people are evil, and characters' flaws are the level of "quirks" rather than something impeding them in the plot or making them morally grey.
I feel one of the issues why we get "wholesome quirky side cast" is that authors treat them as a backup box of protagonists for sequels. So of course they all need to be "likeable", otherwise readers would go "I'm not reading a book about that a-hole side character!"
Which also means so many redundant or barely there / given a handful of scenes side characters planted as the seeds for sequels. Did we really need 4 side couples mentioned for potential sequels in an under 300 page book?
The grandma's written out fake Scottish accent. I swear I skimmed all her lines because I couldn't understand anything. It got tedious fast.
Unrelated to the contents of the book, why is the cover so low-rez and blurry? Other books of this author have very clear, readable designs.
Anyway I feel this was a good attempt at a gender role reversal / femdom fantasy romance, and the sub-genre is already slim pickings so I shouldn't demand too much. Mmc had so many similarities to Ophelos (blonde, stuttering) and Lucian (healing magic) - also short, lithe, shy, cinnamon roll, having past trauma affecting self-esteem (abusive father vs bullying vs religious trauma) that I start to wonder if there's a "blueprint" for femdom fantasy that mmc needs to be small, kind and shy. I'd love if one of these books had mmc who was a bit more feisty and bratty and not a doormat whom fmc needs to uplift out of his inferiority complex.
Maybe I just ask too much, and that's the downside of a niche that's so small nobody has it figured out what's obligatory for it to work and what isn't.
Also maybe the fantasy romance (vs romantic fantasy) isn't my thing, because I want either in-relationship tension or external plot tension, and I'm getting neither, and it's not just this book. A lot of others were either shorter and I just sat through weak plots, or they were longer and ended on my dnf pile.
Anyway I wish I could rate this higher because it's so rare to get a full length novel in this niche (a lot of femdom fantasy / monsters / paranormal are novellas), and I wish to support the author because c'mon, how come this has around 20 ratings 5 months after release, that's nearly criminal. I've seen worse books have hundreds if not thousands of ratings. But when I compare the plotting and writing to His Secret Illuminations and Surrendering to Scylla I enjoyed the other 2 more. If it was just a smutty novella, I would have probably rated it 5, but from a full novel... I kinda expected more.
Finally, I'm annoyed the author makes it so hard to find the link to the newsletter subscription, I tend to check goodreads bio / amazon bio / author's twitter and it was in neither of those places (only on instagram). Please don't make it harder for the reader to connect.