Good Witch Gone Bad

The Shadowlands Duet #1

by Addy O'Brien

Raven: For as long as I can remember, witches have been enslaved under human command. We are the Daughters of Nyx, a righteous coven with the sole purpose of serving humankind. Life in The Midlands has never been great, don't get me wrong, but it's been tolerable, until now. I'm done taming down my thirst for revenge and will see those who wrong me burn.

Silas: Being a prisoner inside my own prison was never part of the plan when the Gods appointed me as the ruler of The Shadowlands, but centuries of damnation can quite literally drive you insane. The solution? I need a distraction, so when a clueless witch summons me to help her on a quest for vengeance, I leave it all behind under the promise of some fun, blissfully unaware of what I'm about to get myself into.

Raven is a seemingly virtuous witch whose journey spirals into a realm of forbidden power when Silas comes barging into her life. As her heart battles the shadows within, a sinister grin unveils the depths of her transformation, setting the stage for an unbreakable spell of suspense, secrets, and a destiny entwined with light and malevolence.

Good Witch Gone Bad is book 1 of The Shadowlands Duet series with adult themes in it. For a full list of CW check the Author's note.

Genres: Fantasy, Paranormal, Ebooks, Dark Romance, Romance, Dark, Novella

158 pages, Kindle Edition

First published January 1, 2023

About the author

In the hushed corners of forgotten libraries and the dim glow of candlelit rooms, Addy O’Brien discovered fantastical worlds that would inspire “Good Witch Gone Bad.” Part alchemist, part modern-day sorceress, Addy has a knack for turning words into spells and sentences into enchantments. The first tome of The Shadowlands Duet isn’t just a story—it’s a whispered incantation, a mischievous wink from the other side. When not conjuring tales of the arcane, she can be found brewing potions (some call it “tea”), consulting with a sarcastic crystal ball, and reminding everyone that black cats are, in fact, good luck. Dive into the pages, if you dare, but remember: everyone has a story.

Reviews

[Tay_is_reading_again · Rating 4 out of 5]

This would’ve been the perfect Halloween read with its witchy, gothic atmosphere. It is a dark Romantasy involving a witch, Raven (can there be a better name for a witch?!? I think not!), and Silas, the ruler of the shadowlands. Raven turns her back on her witch beliefs to fight injustice.

Tropes:
-instant attraction
-soul mates
-touch her and ☠️

Trigger Warning:
-rape
-gory death

Some things I wasn’t crazy about
-A few times I found myself going back and re-reading, thinking I missed a paragraph, to find I didn’t;
-there were a few typos but that comes with self publishing;
-the use of the term “mating” just gives me the ick 🤢; and there was some modern day language used that just didn’t fit.

Some things I really liked
-Raven is a badass “Queen” who comes into her own. The journey to get there is so fun;
-there is a LOT of great info on less than 200 pages; and
-the spicy scenes are detailed, well written, and perfectly placed throughout the book.

Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ rounded up

Thank you to Addy for the ARC!

Overall, I really enjoyed the premise of the book. I think Addy O’Brien will go on to publish some fantastic books in the future if this is her debut novel!

[D.L. Howe · Rating 4 out of 5]

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💫
🔥🔥🔥

This story is pretty freaking epic!

From revenge to witches, angels and gods, this is everything that I love rolled into a dark package.

As a young, naive girl, Raven was so excited to join the coven formed by the goddess, Nyx. Years later she realizes how much she’d been played as a servant to humans. That they could treat her as badly as they wanted with no repercussions. Then while two men try to r@pe her she snaps, inadvertently summoning a demon in the process. And that, my friends is how a good witch goes bad.

I love my FMC’s strong and Raven is a badass. I love a morally gray MMC, and the demon, Silas, fits the bill to a T.

There’s gory violence as Silas nudges Raven to seek her revenge not just from the two men mentioned prior but every human who harmed her.

This short book is fast paced with just enough spice to feed my smutty heart. Not to mention all the intrigue about the past and future.

I can’t wait to get my hands on the second book!

[littlesmuttyone · Rating 5 out of 5]

I loved everything in this book especially having witches .her true power she never knew how strong she truly be

[Teela (bookdragontee) · Rating 4 out of 5]

I am tired of fighting off the voice of reason inside my head; that voice that only gets louder with every abuse of power I have suffered at the hands of those who I have sworn to serve and protect. How can I turn a blind eye to the obvious truth staring at me right in the face? They don't care; to them, we are the means to an end. Monsters that have been tamed to obey their every command, never retaliating. Never making them pay the price for their horrid actions.

But I've been taught the ways of Nyx, our Goddess of the Night. Our Mother. Breaking through the chains that tie me to a righteous path seems like an impossible feat, no matter the soul-crushing events that have taken place in my life.

Giving up, I pray. I reach out out her, wondering how she can allow this. The path of light is nowhere near in sight, and the more I try to stay focused, the more I lose myself along the way. Have I not proven my loyalty enough? How much more do I have to endure before I snap?

Your prayers aren't getting you anywhere, stop being so pathetic.

And just like any other time I've begged for a sign of a higher power, I am only met with silence, the heavy reality of my loneliness weighing on my heart...

A good witch? That's all I have ever been allowed to be. Good at taking orders. good at accepting the truths the Coven imposed on all its disciples. Good at keeping my mouth shut. Good at never retaliating against the most heinous of crimes. Good at this, good at that. And for what?

My patience is running low, to the point where all I can see are flames...

Can evil serve a purpose? Can the path of darkness be the other side of a coin I never knew existed? Perhaps it's time to tip the balance and use my powers for something that actually matters.

Addy O'Brien's debut novel - Good Witch Gone Bad - is the first entry in her Shadowlands duet, and while imperfect, it remains a very solid first book. This fast-paced tale follows the unravelling of a young witch named Raven, who has been pushed to her very limit. And with that unravelling comes a rebirth and unleashing of her terrifying potential. It is as empowering as it is both terrifying and thought-provoking.

I should immediately point out that Good Witch Gone Bad is incredibly ambitious - in general, but especially for a first novel. Addy O'Brien's study of the shades of morality accompanies a fated mates/star-crossed lovers plot, rife with multiple conflicts (some inner, some coming from outside forces), an identity mystery, lost memories, power plays of Gods, and the classic and always timely exploration of the rampant hypocrisy we often see from the self-identifying "good" that use their power to oppress and abuse others.

It's an extremely hefty order, and for a debut, O'Brien does a pretty damn good job tackling a lot of that. From a technical standpoint, I will say that this could use some further edits and sharpening up, but the core of the story is solid. The innate chemistry and inexplicable pull between Silas and Raven is where the bulk of the enjoyment comes from for me. I wish we had had more time to explore that. Their banter, Silas' borderline giddiness when it comes to Raven's bourgeoning darkness, the way they constantly struggle to outwit one another when they were really on the same team this entire time...

Good Witch... covers so much ground in so few pages - it was over far too soon!

And while I adore books that tackle deep philosophical queries regarding morality and what it means to be human, etc., there were definitely moments where O'Brien knocked it out of the park and others that felt too rushed for my tastes (which is fine - it's a purely subjective thing). I'm hoping she'll give us a further dive into all of that in the second part of this duet. There's so much promise and potential here, and so many good, absolutely solid foundational pieces that she's laid. I can't wait to see where we go from here! Those last chapters in particular were giving me all of the "villain origin story" vibes - because aren't villains the heroes in their own stories? It's all a matter of perspective, and I really like the potential I'm seeing with Raven's overall journey here.

I will admit that this book felt a tad rushed (again - it's a personal taste. I've always historically struggled with novellas and shorter books for this very reason. Maybe I'm just greedy, lol!😂), but I'm fully invested in where Addy plans to take us from here. The next book can't come soon enough!

TL;DR - If you're in the market for a quick read that is bloody in its vengeance, spicy where it counts, and all kinds of morally gray, you should consider giving Good Witch Gone Bad a go. 💜

I am no longer the woman who once found solace in these small rituals; the woman who made the best out of her circumstances; perhaps it was all influenced by the spell that shaped my personality growing up, but placing the blame on something other than myself doesn't soothe my frustration.

I have to be reborn through fire and blood, transformed into a being of vengeance and wrath without mortal nuisances holding me back.

Gazing into the depths of the water, I tap into everything I learned as Selene, then proceed to whisper an enchantment, a vow to the moon and to myself. "From the ashes of my old skin, I rise; a terror in the night to those who know no fear. I'll be the injustice they crave, a cruel blade cutting through their existence until the earth forgets they were ever there. I'll remain a constant barrier of protection to those in need, for as long as the moon shines upon these lands. Unchanging. Unbreakable."

[Lia ☾ · Rating 4 out of 5]

A dark novella about taking back your power where magic, mythology, and love meet in a quick-paced story 🖤

"How many more need to suffer the same fate for you to realise this is not okay? How many more of us need to perish at the hands of humans for you to wake up to the sad reality that you're no more than a slave? How many times do you need to be stripped of your right to decide over your own body to put an end to your misery? Do something, Raven."

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Story rating: 4.0 ⭐️
Romance rating: 3.5 ⭐️
Spice level: 2.5 🌶️ 
Smut frequency: 2.0 ⏳

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Tropes:
🖤 witch x demon
🤝 reluctant allies to lovers
💫 fated
💎 "mine"
😏 she calls the shot

⚠️ TW: Depiction of violence, SA, blood, consumption of blood and explicit scenes.

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~ STORY 📝 ~

So much happens in this book! A lot to reflect on, a lot of actions, and a lot of discoveries.

Raven is the kind of FMC I like to read about: strong, resilient, and kind. Doesn't mean violence is not something she's capable of and willing to use. She's taking back her life and getting retribution for each crime committed against her and her kind. 🔥

Silas is a dobberman. Still a cute puppy but by no means a harmless one. He came to her expecting to escape the boredom of his life and found way more than he could've imagined. And I think it's safe to say he's not bored anymore! 😂

Globally, I loved this book. I loved its characters and their stories. It's definitely something I would recommend. Since it's so short, I don't want to spoil anything more but trust that this is a story worth your while. 🫶🏽

But it's also my only remark: it's too short 😂.

I would've loved for each situation to have more time; to have a beginning, a middle, and an end. I would have loved to see more world-building. I would have loved to feel more angst when enemies appeared. More tension is building between our 2 MCs. GWGB is a novella that should have been a full-length book (in my opinion)... 🥹


For the spice, it's mainly a strong pull between the two, an undeniable attraction that makes it impossible for them to resist their urges. It's mainly about our witch taking back control over her body by being dominant and Silas is just too happy to oblige his "master" 😉.

So it's hot and somewhat kinky but explicit scenes are few, and like the rest of the book, quick-paced.👐

[Tara · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was such a great read! It was so well written.. so descriptive and detailed. Absolutely loved it and can not wait for book 2!!

[Sunny · Rating 3 out of 5]

This book had so much potential... The beginning was chaotic, hard to follow. At the end, it was starting to get interesting, but it had not been worked through enough.

Also.... a tail??? They did what with a tail???

[𐙚 moon · Rating 4 out of 5]

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Okay..i'm a bit late for this review. And i may have not much to say because it's been a while since i've read this one. But the feelings's still here.

So, i loved it. Not at 100% but i still loved it.

The witch x demon trope is so great and i love it in this book.

This book is a quick read and it was cool, and I would have even liked it to be longer, more detailed.

Raven is a witch dedicated to her duty: helping humans. however, the latter abuse her. And one day, it's too much.

As she is about to be raped, Silas, the ruler of the Shadowlands, hears the curse that Raven wants to place on these humans.
He then leaves to meet her, promising to accede to her invocation. He even claims to be her servant.

There it all begins.

And it was just great to see Raven succumb to her part of darkness, to her thoughts which lead her to deny this oath she had taken obliging her to help humans. The whole thing also happens because Silas perverted her.

He perverted her in the sense that he pushed her to listen to his demons, her desires for revenge and murder. I really liked this liberation and revenge aspect.

Their relationship is unique. Add to that the fated mates trope and it's just perfect.

The fightings scenes could have been so much better if they had been more detailed. It was violent, but in the heat of the moment, it's just incredible. So I was a little disappointed that these weren't developed more. Same for the end when Raven meets the gods.

It would have been so much more interesting to discover more about this separate world, about these gods and company. so I hope we learn more later!

Anyway, I enjoyed reading this.

[Abigail baker]

I received this book as an ARC in exchange for an honest review. I DNF’d this book at 50% unfortunately I found it a struggle to connect with the characters and the lack of world building for me. However this book could very well be great for someone else.

[Bria Boyd · Rating 5 out of 5]

I NEED MORE 🫠🙌 I love when she gets her revenge AND HE HELPS HER GET IT 😈🔪

[Wishy Reads · Rating 4 out of 5]

Title: Good Witch Gone Bad
Author: Addy O’Brien
Genre: Paranormal
Spice: 🥵 yes
Series: The Shadowlands Duet, part 1

Thoughts - she’s short and sweet, or possibly not as this beauty has you questioning what our expectations of good and evil are. I loved the depictions of the Skylands and the Shadowlands, as well over the underlying want the two mains have for each other. An amazing debut!

Plot - Witches are there to serve humans right? Just take whatever they force upon you… right? Even if everything within you says it’s wrong. Questioning everything she’s ever been taught, Raven MFC curses the situation she finds herself in and sets in motion a fate she never knew she was destined for.

* Action and adventure
* Soulmates/prophecy
* World building
* Good/bad
* ⚠️ trigger warnings

“Open up that pretty mouth for me, love,”

[amour.edition]

I received this book as an ARC for an honest review.

Unfortunately I had to DNF this book at 50%. While I realize this is the authors debut book I still need to be honest. This is also my own opinion so feel free to read for yourself as you may find it different to how I read it. For me I couldn't connect with the characters at all or visualize the setting. Being a short novel of 157 pages I found it rushed in places with not much detail up til the part I had read.

Again this is just my opinion, authors work hard with their books and sometimes a book isn't for you. I feel that this just wasn't for me. I wish Addy the best for this release as she is such a lovely person

[lyssidoll · Rating 4 out of 5]

Righteous vengeance with a strong female lead. I teetered between 3-4⭐️ and ultimately went with 4 because I enjoyed the storyline so much, my only drawback being it was so short and would have worked better as a full fledged 400 page novel. I love angels, demons, fate, witches, all of it. This novella was filled with female rage and, ultimately, a quite beautiful love story. Would definitely recommend.

[Ashley · Rating 3 out of 5]

the dialogue was so corny and cliched i wanted to cry 😭

[Leah · Rating 3 out of 5]

Easy and short read. Great if you’re a fan of dark romantasy.

[Dunbar Ria · Rating 5 out of 5]

Title: Good Witch gone Bad
Author: Addy O'Brien
Genre: Paranormal
Series: The Shadowlands Duet
Spicy: 🥵
My Star rating : ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Trigger warning ⚠️ - Check before reading

- Taboo Spicy
- Witch X Demon
- Morally Grey MSC
- Revenge ARC
- Fated Mates
- Tail Play
- Trigger Warning Happy

Good Witch Gone Bad is Author Addy O'Brien Debut Novel of The Shadowlands Duet series. 🖤


Thank you Addy I absolutely love your book.

It was a masterpiece

Raven and Daddy Silas 🔥

It's was way too short I wanted more .. 😅 I can't wait for the next one .

This story was brilliant. Raven had overcome so much. That promise she made to herself and the end ... I cried 😭

To think she already lived this life as Selene .. the injustice that it was taken from her and all the others thing that was done to her .

Daddy Silas

The memories that was taken. The flashback it was so emotional. To think you already lived in those moments and you can remember them . My heart 💔 .


Thank you 🫶🏻

[Maddy ✨ · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5/5⭐️

Good Witch Gone Bad follows the story of Raven, a young witch, sworn to use her power to help humanity. Questioning the rules placed upon her and her kind she very quickly turns down a path of grey and revenge.
Her companion in this journey of revenge is none other than the leader of the Shadowlands, Silas. Who not only encourages Raven in her journey of vengeance but takes pleasure in her newfound cruelty.

This debut story has so much potential, however wish there had been more world-building and character development to start. It kind of dropped us in and went full steam ahead with non-stop action.
If the GWGB story was slowed down and was built on more, would have made a great novel or even duology.

[Gemma Keenan · Rating 5 out of 5]

Did I love it? yes
Do I wish it wasn’t a novella? Also yes!

This book is such a tease for what could have been an amazing novel I was screaming for more back story and more world building! BUT it massively stands its ground as a delicious little novella of fated mates badass FMC and in a strange little twist women’s rights

Raven a witch is a reincarnation of the first witch and she was bound to forget and be submissive to humans, little does she know the day she screams out for revenge her lost mate comes to her call and together they will burn the world
This book has spicy moments and they are feral but who doesn’t love that? Also some tail play! Can’t wait to see where that goes in book two

This is a first from addy and I can not wait to sink my teeth into anything else she writes!

[Ruthie · Rating 2 out of 5]

This was a DNF for me at 75%. I just could not connect with the characters, the pacing was off and the spice was just not there… started well but just dropped off unfortunately!

[Elicia Meairs · Rating 5 out of 5]

Good Witch Gone Bad by Addy O'Brien is a captivating and spellbinding journey into a world where magic, revenge, and forbidden power collide in thrilling ways. This darkly enchanting tale introduces readers to a compelling blend of fantasy, intrigue, and complex characters that keep you glued to the pages from start to finish.

The story follows Raven, a witch bound by the oppressive constraints of her role within the Daughters of Nyx, a coven dedicated to serving humankind under duress. For Raven, life in The Midlands has been far from ideal, but it has been bearable—until now. Her simmering anger and thirst for revenge are about to ignite a firestorm as she embarks on a quest for vengeance that will test the very boundaries of her power and morality.

Enter Silas, the ruler of The Shadowlands, who has been condemned to a millennia of imprisonment. When a witch—unbeknownst to the depth of the turmoil she is about to unleash—summons him for aid, Silas seizes the opportunity to escape his stifling existence. What begins as a distraction soon evolves into something far more perilous and intriguing.

O'Brien's writing excels in creating a richly immersive world where every detail adds to the atmosphere of dark magic and suspense. Raven’s transformation from a seemingly righteous witch to one whose heart battles with shadows and forbidden power is portrayed with striking depth and nuance. The internal and external conflicts she faces are both gripping and emotionally charged, showcasing O'Brien’s skill in character development.

Silas is an enigmatic and complex character whose centuries of damnation and subsequent interactions with Raven bring a unique dynamic to the story. His presence provides both tension and an alluring edge to the narrative, creating a powerful contrast to Raven’s journey of vengeance and self-discovery.

The chemistry between Raven and Silas is electric and fraught with tension, driving the narrative forward with a palpable sense of danger and forbidden allure. Their interactions are layered with suspense, secrets, and a darkly seductive undertone that keeps readers enthralled.

Good Witch Gone Bad excels in blending elements of dark fantasy with an intense, character-driven plot. The stakes are high, and the twists and turns keep the reader guessing until the very end. The exploration of themes such as power, vengeance, and transformation is handled with finesse, making this novel a standout in the genre.

Addy O'Brien has crafted a mesmerizing tale that is as enchanting as it is darkly thrilling. Good Witch Gone Bad is a must-read for fans of fantasy who enjoy their stories laced with magic, suspense, and intricate character dynamics. It’s a journey into a world where light and darkness entwine in a spellbinding dance, leaving readers eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

[Ivett · Rating 3 out of 5]

I don't know what to say. This story is not bad, but not epic either. For me it's just...okay.



It felt that the intro story is too long, for such a short novel. I understand that we need to know what is happening and why, but...for this amount of informations we would need more page, especially
because the storyline was closed too soon.

Perfect for Halloween/romance line. I'm not too sure, I would say darkromance, definiately dark if we see what happened at the end.
I liked Silas, his character was good, but I just couldn't think anyone else than:

BUT, this is just mine own wierdness, nothing to do with the story.

[Catharina Simpson · Rating 4 out of 5]

"Oh, my, Little witch," - "Going somewhere?"

I absolutely fell in love with the Main characters and their story and how they try to get revenge on this path that tells them they need to be a certain way but they end up breaking the rules and doing what they think is best.

We follow Raven and she is a witch where she is trying to live among humans that are cruel and have no remorse for what they are doing. She tries to do the better thing but enough is enough and she makes a decision for the better and her journey against the odds start and she summons Silas.

Silas is the ruler of the shadowlands and he is very bored with is life because everything is the same. Then he gets summoned by Raven and the adventure starts where they need to make choices that may be the beter for the witch kind and for their futures.

I absolutely loved the love story and how Raven and Silas was reunited and how their love wil always prevail no matter what happens. I did love how she tries to be strong on her own and how he lets het but also how he keeps her safe when she is weak. It was a great story that i fell in love with.

[Alba Medhurst · Rating 5 out of 5]

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

OMG, 'Good Witch Gone Bad' by Addy O'Brien is everything! 😍 I got an ARC even though I'm not big on socials after connecting on TikTok (shoutout to Addy for that 🥹)... and now I'm totally obsessed with Raven. she's such a badass, and her story's like watching an epic movie. Every scene is so fast-paced there isn't a dull moment in the book.

The romance? Didn't see those smut scenes coming but, wow, they had me all hot and bothered. Seriously, where can I get a Silas of my own? But also, I'm super curious about Silas's backstory. He's got some serious layers, and I'm here for it. Flashback Silas and present Silas feel like two totally different vibes, and I NEED to know why.

Honestly, this book's a solid 5 stars from me. It's got all the good stuff I love mixed together – drama, romance, the tropes. Such a great find for a debut novel.

I would have personally liked it to be longer, but knowing her, THIS HAS TO MEAN SOMETHING.

Big thanks to Addy O'Brien for the ARC! Can't wait for the next part in the duet– I need answers!!!!!

[Aline · Rating 5 out of 5]

For many decades the witches and daughters of Nyx were oppressed by humankind. Their only purpose to serve them in submission. Until one day a young witches lust for revenge takes over and darkness rises from the Shadowlands.

OMG! I was so excited when I first saw a teaser and I instantly knew that I have to read this book!
I mean… magic, witches, demons? Count me in!
Raven ist such a strong woman. And by strong I mean absolutely fierce, powerful and passionate!
At first we find her in a situation where she is suppressed and humiliated.
But as the story unfolds, so does Raven and her will, her power and her desire. It was amazing to see her strength, willpower and magic growing.
And I freakin loved it, that she was so bossy around Silas! I mean… this hot ruler of the Shadowlands could do anything with me, I would be totally obedient in his presence.
But not Raven, she is the embodiment of seduction and Silas is willingly submissive around her.
Aside from the spicy moments, a lovestory and epic fight scenes between celestial beeings, we experience a story about growth and breaking the chains of oppression.
This book is my new favorite spooky season read! I loved the gothic witchy vibes, the darkness, the tension and the fated mates trope!
This book is empowering and absolutely incredible!

Addy, I need more! More of Silas, more of Raven and more books from you!

[Alena Walker · Rating 4 out of 5]

Worth the Read but needs an edit for grammar.

So Good Witch Gone Bad by Addy O’Brien is a hard one for me. I give it 4 stars for sure because the story is interesting. I love witches, the addition of angels, demons, gods, and fallen angels is pleasant. The actual plot is interesting because who doesn’t love some revenge! The book is a quick read that doesn’t move to fast or to slow. My only issue (and why I couldn’t do 5 stars) is spelling issues, missing words, and one certain scene that didn’t make sense. The spelling issues could be easily overlooked, we’re all human, it’s not a big deal. But the one scene has me confused because they fell, he caught her with his wings as they fell, but she was standing, but she was on her knees, but he could still reach her tat-tas for a suck, but then told her to get on her knees. Im a visual reader. I read and make a movie in my head so this had me stuck lol. Other than that, I enjoyed the book, I would recommend to others who like dark, twisted, fantasy romance and would read the next book!

[CelticBooktokGirl · Rating 5 out of 5]

Good Witch Gone Bad is a brilliantly constructed fantasy novel with a fast-paced plot that absolutely demands your full attention.

You follow Raven, a young witch, as she unravels the mystery surrounding her existence, including the reason the Gods condemned witches to live purely as playthings and servants in the constant service of humans.

Then she meets Silas, leader of the Shadowlands, suddenly has to cope being chased and dominated by a devastatingly handsome underworld being (with horns and a decidedly useful tail 🤭) who wants to claim her as his own. Not an easy task when you’re just coming to terms with being the most powerful witch to have existed in eons.

Is there sexy smut? Why, yes there is.
Will it unlock some kinks you didn’t know you had? Well, probably, yes!
But will you finish it and head right on over to Amazon for the following book to read? Abso-bloody-lutely!

Enjoy! 💋

[julia · Rating 3 out of 5]

i didn’t like the previous chapter’s/pov’s end repeated in the beginning of the next. was missing commas here and there, some random errors that didn’t bother me too much (ie. ”my” when it should’ve been ”by” in ch 18). otherwise it was an okay little story to read. enjoyed it more before the flashback, mostly because the introduction of that relationship made no sense to me

without having read the possible sequel, i’d say it could’ve been one book — this was too short. this could’ve easily been a great 600ish-word book with thoroughly written out characters, good slow burn romance and ridiculously good plot, but now it’s just an okay little story. i’ll be back if the author ever decides to rewrite this story into an actual novel

also ngl i forgot all about the unknown pov in the beginning until ch 18. from that point on the book kinda lost me? the bond made little sense and i was as confused as raven about who she was now

[Kaela Robin · Rating 4 out of 5]

I want to start off by saying the ONLY thing stopping this from being five stars is the typos. There were so many that it actually began to take me out of the story because I had to stop and re read with the correct words 🥲

Aside from that, I loved this story- so much. It gave me a mix of Fourth Wing and Gothikana- which was fantastic because those are my two favorite books I’ve read all 2024

I thought the plot line was fantastic, the story was only 158 pages so you weren’t getting dragged through a bunch of sidelines you were able to get directly to the punches and it was refreshing to read a book in such a pace!

I am actually itching to continue on in this series. I believe it’s a duet, but if there’s more I can’t say I’d be disappointed. I LOVED this book.

Also.. Silas? RAVEN?! The bi panic I had was insane and I live for it.

[Blackclaws · Rating 4 out of 5]

I love when a book surprises me, either by the unexpected plot, or anything I didn’t expect from it. And this book is the perfect example of that.

I picked it up because I thought this would be a quick spicy demon/witch read, but it was so much more. This book was full of magic and mayhem, fantastic plot and world building, with morally gray MCs, and the perfect balance between plot and spice.

I loved the revenge arc, and seeing our FMC destroying the world that wronged her all her life. Her character development was excellent, the deconstruction of what she has been conditioned to be her entire life, seeing her take her power back, and annihilate every being that did her wrong. It was satisfying.

[RuWithTheBooks · Rating 3 out of 5]

I picked this up (for free) during stuff your kindle day. I was expecting a dark story with dual POVs in which the main character ends up continuously raising the stakes performing more and more acts of evil to punish those that wronged her but what we get is a somewhat mid powercreep smut book. The MC unlocks her latent abilities of some fate type bs. I feel kinda lied to based on the blurb about what I was expecting vs what I got. The prose is nothing special, the plot isn't that great, though I can't say I saw the climax coming lol.

If you wanna read some p0rn it's decent but it def takes interracial to the next level. Take the author's CWs to mind, and expect some weird blood stuff.

3/5