A decent bully read with some twists and turns
Tropes
✅️ High school bully
✅️ College setting
✅️ Roommates
✅️ Asian FMC rep
✅️ Mild grovel
✅️ Possessive
✅️ Secrets
Storyline – ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
The story follows the FMC whose original college roommate plans fall through. By chance, she meets someone at a café looking for a roommate, only to discover she'll be sharing a space with him and his friend—who just so happens to be her high school bully.
The plot explores how both the FMC and MMC confront their shared past and the emotional baggage tied to their families. As they navigate their new living situation, old wounds resurface, and the past comes back in unexpected ways.
Writing – ⭐️⭐️.5
The writing has potential, but it's weighed down by frequent grammar and spelling issues (e.g., "drug" instead of "drag"). That said, if you can look past these errors, the core story is still compelling. It’s clear this started as a Wattpad project, and while it could use a solid edit, the foundation is strong.
Characters – ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
The characters truly shine. The chemistry between the FMC and MMC is believable and engaging. The MMC acknowledges his past mistakes and takes real steps to change and treat her with the respect she deserves. Their growth felt genuine and satisfying.
Overall – ⭐️⭐️⭐️.75
Despite the flaws in writing, the engaging storyline and lovable characters more than make up for it. Plus, the twist near the end completely caught me off guard—in the best way.