I'm used to dealing with controlling men and I get paid to enjoy their rough handling. So when Aiden Blackwell buys my time a year in advance, I think I've found the perfect client. But I wasn't expecting his soft touch, or the lengths he would go to keep me....
I wish a super hot billionaire with a big dick would tamper with my birth control to get me pregnant. He’d be delighted to know I’m not on any, making his job much easier.
This book didn't make a damn bit of sense to me. This review will have spoilers because you need them.
Aiden (billionaire) sees Brina (escort) at a bar while she's on a date with another man. He decides that he wants her. He hires someone to figure out who she is and the next week he contacts Emery (Book 1 - C*mslut) to secure Brina as being his submissive for a full year. During their first official meeting, he decides he wants to breed her. They never really do anything Dom/sub except he ties her up and blindfolds her and then gives her a collar. They only meet on the weekends for activities (which we don't hear about), and they have no communication during the week. This goes on for months. Like WTF! Doesn't sound like relationship building to me. At 64%, he drugs her and then removes her IUD because he wants to get her pregnant. At 69% they have sex for the first time. Yes, you read that right. He hasn't even had sex with her!!!!! WTF kind of smut book is this??? Anyway, of course she gets pregnant. At 83% he tells her he loves her.... HOW?! They barely see each other.
The reason he wanted to trap her with a baby is because "his father wasn't a good man". I'm not sure why. The times he discusses his family, it's hinted at that they should instill fear in others. Again, I don't know why. Aiden also has a sister who is SO confusing. At first I thought this was going to be a taboo brother/sister fic, but no - they just have some really weird relationship that you never get an explanation on. The author spends more time talking about the sister, Melody hooking up with Jackson, and Emery than she does building up the coupling of Aiden and Brina.
So she kicks him out for a few weeks, then she gets over being mad and they get together. The end. There's an epilogue but it's stupid.
I know this author has written a lot of great books that I love - but this is not one of them.
This was a great little smutty read . It had a more I interesting story line than I expected. It was actually well developed for such a short read. Good job with few words!
If you want to read about a wealthy man who got obsessed with his girl at first sight, found out everything about her, basically stalked her, and intentionally knocked up her, maybe you should give this novella a try. 😂😂😂
This novella just didn’t sat right with me… i didn’t liked the MMC at all but what made me completely recoil from him was the freaking uid removal…like wtf💀 Idk this and the whole story just really want it for me…the smut was okay but I also have read much better smut from this author.
Aiden is a rich dude who sees Brina and has to have her. Luckily for him, she’s an escort so her time can be bought 😏… but he’s not stopping there.
I’ve read a few novellas by B. Sobjakken now, so I know that this note “Plot: Minimum Porn Maximum” is 100% accurate. Despite this, something about the scant bit of plot always works for me! So unhinged, so entertaining (if the CWs are not a deal breaker), perfect for a quick read.
this was probably the sweetest DomSub dynamic I’ve ever read in a quick read. I honestly loved this one the most out of the set. That said it has a trope I know will not appeal to many, but has its audience.
📖 Becoming His by B. Sobjakken Star Rating: 3/5 ★★★ Spice Rating: 3/5 🌶️🌶️🌶️ Spice Frequency: 2/5 🔥🔥 POV: Dual/1st Couple: Brina x Aiden Available on KU ✅
• dom/sub • exhibitionism • b!rth c0ntr0l t@mpering • br33ding k!nk • pr3gnancy • esc0rt for hire x billionaire • he falls first
Okay I wanted a spicy and short read and yes, this was spicy and short. I liked the spice A LOT. I loved the esc0rt to lover pipeline and I loved Aiden as a dom. Hell, I even liked the b!rth contr0l tampering even though IRL that would’ve been the biggest red flag known to man. But in fiction…that flag is green. The pregnancy part didn’t bother me and I was actually like awe, love this couple. There were lots of things I did enjoy about this. But am I the only one wondering if that safe word was misspelled the whole time? 😅🤣
This rating is strictly based on my personal enjoyment. This kink (forced pregnancy/birth control manipulation) is most likely not for me. I am a fan of a breeding kink, but that is not what this is because it's done without her knowledge. The characters, writing, and smut are still high quality so if that kink is your thing, then I'm sure this will give you the pants feels you're looking for.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
I typically enjoy this author's short, steamy stories and this one is set in the same escort world as a couple others by them that I have enjoyed. This one has similar light-BDSM elements, and also has breeding kink and birth-control tampering which are pluses for me, but there is definitely no development of the emotional connection whatsoever and outside of the steamy bits I was kind of bored and skimmed. I think my mood played a part in this - I have barely read at all in the last few days and was desperate to have a completed book on my list(s) so I chose to do a short like this, and probably did a disservice to it. Not opposed to trying it again later when I am in the mood but with the endless TBR who knows?
Who doesn’t love a quick and spicy story?! This was a palette cleanser before jumping into a 600 page book and it was exactly what I needed to refresh my mind! Less than 100 pages Becoming His was a story of Brina, an escort who is hired by rich, attractive and slightly dominate Aiden.
Their story was fast paced with so much spice thrown in. If you just need a good smut filled book to just read for an hour this is the one! It’s got your breeding Kink which Brookelynne loves to write! It’s also got your insta love, your he falls first, a little BDSM but nothing hard core, and a woman who loves her red heeled shoes. It’s part of a little series but each is a standalone.
4.5⭐️ ♥️Breeding Kink ♥️Escort for Hire ♥️Billionaire ♥️He Falls First ♥️Hurt Pasts
s h e l v e s : alpha cameos instalove obsessed ott paid for (escort) possessive relationship contract rich hero
k i n k s : bdsm breast play breeding (forced breeding) dom/sub dry humping exhibition (dry humping and thigh job in restaurant) just the tip locales (restaurant; just the tip in his office on his desk) no condom praise pussy humping thigh job ups 💦
e n d i n g : HFN w baby on the way
p l o t : Brina is a high end escort. Aiden sees her at a restaurant w a man and is instantly jelly and possessive and makes his assistant find out her identity. He then hires her exclusively. After several hot meet ups he decides he can’t live without her and needs to tie her to him irrevocably. So he puts something in her drink to knock her out and then has her IUD removed and cums in her every time so she can get knocked up and she does. She forgives him and they’re in love and expecting a baby now
h o t c l i p s: I watch her muscles contract, and her juices drip out of her. I want to bury myself in it, force my cock so far into her tight cunt that her wombs opened for me. I hadn’t planned to have kids so soon, but I have an irrational need to plant a piece of myself inside her.
… His hands slide to my ass as he lifts and settles me in his lap. I straddle him further, pressing us closer, and drop my face into his neck as his fingers drift back to their favorite spots between my legs. The familiarity of his scent with the faint twist of oranges relaxes me.
His other hand comes and pulls at the buttons of my blouse. I lean back, shrugging off the shirt and bra for him. He cups my breasts, squeezing affectionately, and tugs a nipple into his mouth.
He sucks my nipple into his mouth harder as he thrusts his bulge against my weeping core.
He sets me back on the desk, unzips his pants, and pulls out his thick cock, stroking it as he stares down at my pussy. “Hold your legs,” he says, and I grab onto my knees as he steps into me further. The heat of his tip sliding across my wet center has me moaning. He presses down my thighs further, thrusting his cock between my folds repeatedly. Every bump of my clit and tease of pressure near my entrance made me writhe under him. “Let me fuck you,” he grunts, guiding his head to my hole, the tip barely pressing in.
“Condom,” I croak as his tip slides in before he pulls it out. The small stretch of him inside me makes it painful to say no, I’m desperate to feel him buried deep.
He growls, sliding his cock up against my core again before returning to press the head inside me and repeating the process again. My pussy clamps when his tip pushes into me a third time, nearly sucking him inside completely. Aiden grunts, pausing before shifting his hand to thumb at my swollen clit.
He rocks slowly, never going in further.
“Imagine how it will feel when you’re full of me,” he whispers, putting more pressure on my bundle of nerves as he speeds up the teasing of his cock.
Aiden pulls out, groaning as he strokes his thick length, and I feel the heat of his cum as it splashes over my pussy. Without hesitation, he scoops up the mess he made and pushes it all into me. My mouth falls open as he does it again, making sure not to miss a drop.
“That’s where my cum belongs. Not inside a thin layer of latex,” he says, leveling me with an annoyed glance.
… Something that will bring me pleasure but make you uncomfortable.”
“What?” I say softly, fear lacing my tone.
His hand tilts my face towards him, and he’s smirking. “Climb onto me, little one. I need to watch you come.”
I straddle his thigh, glancing around as my cheeks flush. I’ve never been one for exhibition, and we’re in the middle of the restaurant, regardless of the secluded booth.
He pushes my dress up, and I’m resting on his pants directly. His finger brushes over my skin, where my hair is growing back.
“Hmm. Such a pretty pussy.”
His hand moves to cup my ass, rocking me forward slightly. I gasp when I feel my wetness leaking onto him.
“Here’s how it’s going to go, Brina. You’re going to come on my leg, and then we’re going to turn your little ass to the side, and I’m going to fuck your thighs.” He pushes me faster, the material of his pants rough as it rubs against my clit.
My face burns hotter, and I glance around again, embarrassment and arousal making my blood run warm.
… He lifts me and turns me so my legs are draped over his lap, my heels resting on the booth’s cushions. Aiden’s hips rise as he unzips his pants, pulling out his thick cock and stroking it.
“Open your legs,” he commands. When I do, he lifts me again. The velvet shaft of his erection is soft against my skin as he settles me over his cock. “Squeeze them shut now.”
His red, swollen tip is visible between my thighs. One of his hands rests on my ass while the other comes up to cup my breasts to anchor me. I grip on his forearm as he thrusts up, his cock sliding easily between my pressed legs.
I bounce, trying to stay upfront and restrain my urge to look around.
His dick is throbbing as he keeps thrusting. His tip disappears between my thighs for a second before emerging up again. I watch it in an odd state of arousal. I’ve experienced nothing like this as he uses my body to get off without actually touching my pussy or ass.
“Spit on it.”
My head snaps up to look at him in shock. His heated eyes watch me back, his cock throbbing as he pauses. “Get it nice and wet for me, baby.”
I tilt my head down, my core clenching as I gather saliva in my mouth and then slowly push it between my lips. It dangles for a second before dropping on his tip, and Aiden grunts.
“More. Rub it in.”
Reaching down, I smear my spit over the exposed part of his cock, and he thrusts up as I do. I lean forward, spitting more, and Aiden picks up his pace. My mouth opens,and that fleeting thought of wanting to taste him returns.
“Fuck,” he hisses as he comes. The heat of his release is almost overwhelming as his cum splashes all over my thighs. He relaxes into his seat, his cock semi-hard, slowly disappearing under my legs.
I blink down at the mess on my lap. His hand squeezes my breast, and I look up at him.
“Gather it up and shove it into your pussy,” he says. Satisfaction evident in his dark eyes and flushed cheeks. I shift my legs up, and Aiden adjusts himself as I scoop up his cum with a shaky hand and push it inside me. His fingers drag along my thighs, and then he’s in my pussy with me.
… I stroke my thick cock, rubbing my head against her pink, glistening folds. She cries out, always my sensitive little brat.
“Give me permission to fuck you bare,” I growl, my thick tip bumping into her clit.
“Relax, baby. You can take it,” I tell her gently, pumping in and out till she’s almost taking my entire cock.
Her cunt clamps down and milks me before I can stop it. I flood her pussy with my release, and I can’t withhold my echoing grunt of pleasure. When I think about how my seed can find its way into her unprotected womb, my cock spurts more, desperate for my cum to bury inside her.
… “God, I want to fuck your ass so bad.”
I whimper. “Please.”
“Not yet. I gotta save all my cum for your pussy.”
His thick cock slides against my wet folds as if in warning of what’s coming. After the first night, Aiden has not wasted an opportunity to fuck me. We always end with him lodged deep inside and stuffing me full of his cum.
His tongue swipes through my pussy, and I moan. His mouth moves to suck on my swollen clit, and my legs tremble. I don’t want to come again; I want him to stretch me full.
Aiden’s laugh fans across my wet folds, the coolness of it making me clench. “I can practically feel your annoyance, little one.”
“Please fuck me. I need it, I need to feel you inside me.” I beg him.
We both moan when he’s flush with my cheeks, his cock throbbing from being buried to the hilt.
… He grunts, his cock swells and the heat of his cum scorches my insides. My favorite thing about fucking a well-endowed man is that you can physically feel each jerk of their cock as they come.
Aiden pulls out, and I shiver, knowing he’s watching my pussy leak his cum. This is another thing I’ve grown to love over the weeks. His fingers drag down my thigh, gathering the mess that had spilled and pushing it back into my sensitive hole.
“Thank you,” I whisper. My cheeks burn with slight embarrassment, but I know Aiden loves it when I appreciate how he saves his cum for my pussy. It’s apparently his thing.
So this was BY FAR my least favorite book in the Hired Series.
It’s been a minute since I’ve read the others but I was so confused about what was happening in the first chapter. Maybe it was connected to the other books because I felt like I was expected to know these people and what was going on with them, but I don’t remember them and had no clue. Either way, the story starts falling into place by the end of the chapter and I do remember the grumpy FMC from book 2. There are a lot of references to book 1 & 2 characters so I’d definitely read them first (and then promptly end there and skip this book😂😉). In case you’re also confused about this being book 3 in a series but it’s not clearly marked….. It is book 3 in the Hired Series: #1: C*mslut #2: Be my Daddy
I didn’t like either MC in the beginning, and since this is mostly smut, not plot, I never end up liking or caring about either one by the end. In fact, I didn’t understand their pseudo-HFN. I think we are to assume that feelings develop off-page when the book fast-forwards a couple months but that makes it completely impossible for us to like them since we don’t experience any of that. Not to mention that the guy does something completely irredeemable early on and never apologizes or cares if she hates him for it. The whole thing is weird. Insta-attraction, insta-lust and immediately after their first 10 minutes together it becomes insta-love….ALL COMPLETELY ON HIS PART, she does not even know him. He hired her and to her, he is just another “john”/ customer. I think he was supposed to be a dom too, but we really never see any of that. If anything the guy is strictly a pleasure dom.
Clearly I wasn’t a fan of this book. I still enjoy this author but this was a HUGE MISS. The more I think about it, the more I hated it. The spice was low and not great at all (they hardly have actual intercourse sex in the book (1-2x) except we assume off-page). He’s obsessed with wanting to breed her just to manipulate her into staying, yet is constantly shoving ☝️🍑…😂😂😂 unrelated but it was funny.
There’s not enough emotion to like either massively flawed character. They both give a little history but in no way did their stories endear us or make us like them at all. I cannot recommend skipping this book enough. But #1 was good, so maybe read that. They go downhill from there.
Ooooh boy this ended up with a darker twist I wasn’t expecting but wheeeeeew Aiden Blackwell was a force to be reckoned with.
I love how all of the authors novellas sort of tie together whether it’s a standalone or part of the Hired series. I was pleasantly surprised to see Sammie again.
Also holy hell I am so curious about what’s going on with Jasmine. I need to know ASAP. She’s up to something shady. I can feel it in my bones.
This read was so much fun I had to do it twice! Even more fun if you've read B. Sobjakken's other titles, but it can be read as a standalone!
Brina is my kind of girl. She's a bit bossy, very independent but with the right guy? Full submission. Well...in her bratty way of submitting.
Aiden...oh Aiden lol. By the end of the story, I could see the similarities he shares with his sister 😅. It was definitely lust and possession at first sight for him. Be real though, who doesn't love a VERY possessive MC?
This one was another little sizzler, the perfect quick read! I have some serious unanswered questions though so it's a good thing I don't plan on leaving the Sobjakken universe any time soon.
I have to mention the dash of realism the author sprinkles into these goodies. Not only does it ground our fantasies a touch but as somebody who has encountered very similar trauma to the FMC, I can tell you, it lives with you for a long time so I love that it's not magically remedied for the sake of an HEA.
comportamiento por ortodoxo pero efectivo en un libro suena entretenido pero en la vida real sería un delito así que estoy feliz de conocer la trama como parte de un libro muy hot.
Yuppp enjoyed this one too! A little BDSM short story about Brian catching the eye of millionaire businessman Aiden who does what needs to be done to make her his..🫠🔥🔥
🌻(Hired) Short Series- Reading Order🌻 🖤 C*mslut - Emery and Tyler 🖤 Becoming His - Brina and Aiden (Sammie's brother from Irredeemable) 🖤 Be my Daddy - Melody and Jackson(J is Tyler's assistant)
I’m gonna give this 3.75⭐️. I really really enjoyed it!! If there’d have been another like 20 pages and the last 1/4 of the story stretched at a little more this would have been a perfect novella!!!
I’m telling you there’s something about this author that I just can’t get enough of!!!