Broken Union series 01 Ancient as the Stars by Maya Darjani
adventurous challenging emotional hopeful informative inspiring reflective tense
Medium-paced
Plot or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters are a main focus? Yes
4.25 Stars
A very innovative way of starting a story...that ended up being both complicated and impactful (narratively and character development-wise).
For me, the start of the book was a bit confusing. Now that I'm finished with the book, I've gone back to reread the first two chapters to solidify what happened, to what happend in an overall sense.
Ren is a character that feels like has she a black/stormy cloud hanging over their head, like Pig Pen in the Peanuts cartoon. This cloud represents "bad mojo", which corresponds to all the bad things that could happen to a person, does happen. A life, where there really isn't any joy.
On the other hand, Karenna...she seems to have a touch of grace, where things seem to always work out.
In a narrative sense, this story has some similar ideas to the movie called, Sliding Doors (1998) Romantic/Comedy film, not the romantic/comedy aspect, but the duality of time...and the effects that happen within the narrative effect the two main protagonists.
Once I understood this comp, then the pieces started to fall into place (within my mind) of how the story was going to go. But as all readers know, what you think is going to happen, doesn't always happen THAT way (and that's okay). I was surprised by what the author came up with, and also how powerfully executed it was.
I loved the callbacks to Earth (from our current pop-culture moments both past and present), that were sprinkled through character interactions, and also how the author showed some of them in the chapter titles. Lots of fun, trying to figure out what/where they were from, and how it related to the current chapter and the story I was reading.
There are some great characters within this story, but I don't want to press my hand onto the scale, but allow you (the potential reader) to meet them, and make your own judgements on them and how effective the author was.
I had a LOT of fun reading this story, and spending time in this universe. This does not mean that she didn't put her characters through the "ringer", for she really did. I felt for them (especially one of them), and was rooting for the time that they have their "come uppance".
Now, about the science, and on whether this or that could happen in real life? I believe that the author made it plausible, and it worked for me. It wasn't "hand wavy", but it also wasn't pedantic and overly drawn out. The science seemed to be based in our reality, but at the same time, extracted into a future time...where certain things have happened, and changed what we feel cannot happen, but now (in this reality) does happen.
Lastly, I've been given the ability to read the next book in this universe, "Loyalty to the Max" as an eArc, and I really feel the need to read it immediately after reading this first book (to achieve the best reading experience). Onward!
👉🏻 Content Warnings:
Graphic: Bullying and Misogyny
Moderate: Toxic relationship and Gaslighting
Minor: Death