Four years ago, Lexie promised old friend David that she would be a surrogate mother and bear a child for him and his infertile wife. Then she found out that the wife was suspected of having killed her first child, and when David refused to believe that the unborn baby was in danger, she fled across the country, leaving behind everything she knew and loved. Now David has finally tracked her down - and he wants his daughter.
I'm not quite sure why I didn't like this book much. I vaguely remember finding it somewhat enjoyable a few years back, but this time around it rubbed me the wrong way, and I don't know why.
For at least half of the book, I didn't like David. He's furious with Lexie for running and depriving him of the first four years with his baby girl, when I feel that he should have been thanking her from the bottom of his heart for keeping his baby safe. In the four years between Lexie's flight and the events of the book, David's wife murdered a SECOND baby (that belonged to her new husband's daughter) and was then herself killed in prison while awaiting trial, so Lexie almost certainly saved the life of Sarah, the baby she carried to term and has raised as her own ever since. While David claims to understand why she ran, he's still livid with her, which seems an odd contradiction to me. I didn't start liking David until at least halfway through the book, probably more like two thirds, when my allegiance suddenly transferred to him due to...
...his overly hostile reception from Sarah. Which is point two of the book that grated on me. Sarah is - oh, I don't want to call her a brat (okay, I DO want to, but that's just my grinchy too-small-hearted side talking), but she's boisterous. And precocious. And opinionated. And stubborn. Which can sometimes - when written right - add up to make a charming, vibrant personality, but in this case just seemed rude and - yes, bratty. Examples, since I'm sure you'll want a few: she kicks and screams when she doesn't want to do what she's told. She cries about seemingly everything. She bites people. Maybe I've just been lucky with the three- and four-year-olds I've known, but I've never had to deal with any kids who are nearly as obnoxious as Sarah. Lexie, despite frequently being referred to as a great mother, writes most of these off as part of the emotional trauma of meeting her father (the father that she was wishing for at the beginning of the book, and promptly decided she hated as soon as he showed up).
The scene with the dog infuriated me too. (David buys Sarah a puppy without clearing it with Lexie. Lexie says they can't have animals (they run, and live at, a B&B) as they're registered as an animal-free accommodation and guests may be allergic. David and Sarah talk her into letting the puppy stay. Sure enough, one guest has a dangerous allergic reaction, and it turns out to be a guest who was doing a review of the B&B for a magazine, who then writes a bad review. Nobody is really apologetic, either to the guest for putting him in danger, or to Lexie for ruining her business.) Even if you don't run a hotel, you just don't buy a pet on a whim without talking it over with the other parent.
There were a few charming scenes, such as the "trunk-or-treat" Halloween party, but overall this book felt sort of cold and depressing to me. Maybe it's partly the setting. I've never liked Montana, aside from one single-author series I read.
So not one I'll be keeping. A shame, since I thought I'd enjoy it. 2 stars.