"I'll make you a deal. I'll help you, and you give me what I want."
"What do you want?"
"You. Anywhere. Anytime."
Do I make a deal with the devil?
I never meant for it to go this far; I'm the college's straight football star. But I've had a taste of my teammate, and now he's got me caged.
If I needed proof that Malcolm Blackwood hates me, I got it. He teased me, blew my mind, caged me...and then kicked me out of his house. It doesn't matter that I loved it; I'm just confused. It's not supposed to be like this, I'm popular, loved by all. So why doesn't he like me? And why do I even care? I'm freaked and I want out. Now.
But after an academic disaster, I realize I might need his harsh discipline after all. So when he offers me a deal–his training for my body–how can I refuse?
But do I want this devil to save me from myself, or do I just want to slip further under his spell?
'Caged By My Teammate' is the second short in the 'My Dark Jock' series, and ends with a HFN, with an eventual HEA. It features explicit scenes of M/M BDSM between consenting adults, including chastity, impact play, bondage, and questionable BDSM etiquette. For Mature Readers only.
Hi! I'm Arden, a small scruffy person living in the UK. Most days I can be found at my laptop with a mug of hot chocolate (almond milk) and a bag of snacks (savory) writing absolutely filthy M/M smut (just the dirtiest).
I love writing dark and dangerous guys, fun banter, confused himbos, and mindblowingly raunchy kinks.
Better. Better than the 1st in this series. But also, Mal is still a douche with unaligned feelings and actions.
On the one hand, he seems to be obsessed with North and we get an insight into Mal's 'feelings' for North in Mal's POV. But then on the other hand, he acts like he doesn't care. The entire aftercare thing was only done because that's "correctly" done, so transactional. I would have pulled the plug on this dumbassery right then and there, treat D/s relationship like it's a transaction and get real bad karma points, imo.
I guess I'm not seeing how North is still into it. To me, a good Dom shows that he cares, that he will always take care of you. Mal doesn't go about it in the way that appeals to me personally. Maybe I'll read the 3d one at some point.
They should pull all parts together, write in some filler plot in between and re-publish as a full length novel. Would probably make more sense than a bunch of shorts.
”You hide it so well from everyone else. Your friends, the guys on the team. But you can’t hide it from me. I can see how much you need to be dominated. I own you, and I can do whatever I want with you, and you’ll love every fucking second of it because you’re my cum whore. Isn’t that right?” God, the words are falling out of him now like he can’t control them. I nod again, eyes clenched shut.
Ahora North se encuentra que esta a punto de ser expulsado de la Universidad si no mejora sus notas. Pero no logra concentrarse, siempre pensando en Malcom. Así que cuando se encuentra con la propuesta de Malcom de ayudarlo a estudiar para mejorar sus notas a cambio de darle completo control sobre sus orgasmos y sus estudios, lo acepta enseguida, con tal, que puede perder? Así que ahora se encuentra a "merced" de Malcom y todas sus "métodos" de estudio. Pero todo eso funcionará? Será capaz de mejorar sus notas y evitar que lo expulsen?
Por supuesto, nos encontramos ahora con que la relación North - Malcom es mucho mas simbiótica que antes, la dependencia de North del dominio de Malcom es la base de este libro, y su aceptación a ser su sumiso. Por supuesto, vemos mucho mas el punto de vista de North aquí, pero me gustaría también saber que piensa realmente Malcom de su "arreglo". Además, las escenas eróticas son mucho mas hacía el BDSM (incluyendo Primal Play y Teacher-Student Play), y sin embargo, vemos como comienza a verse que la relación puede llegar a ser romántica. Seguiré leyendo para saber como van a terminar, si van a ser pareja o si por alguna razón no terminan juntos.
The first installment was an appetizer, and while the second isn't quite a full entrée, it's a satisfying serving of kink and obsession. I am eager to know what happens next.
These novellas are soooo good!! They don’t read like novellas…they are so much more! I’m so impressed with Arden Long writing. Everyone who loves BDSM and darker stories needs to read these! And the SPICE!! 🌶️🤯🌶️🤯
A perfect Dom/sub duo. This is short but holy Hannah is it sexy! Watching Nolan figure out he is a sub and allowing himself to be cared for by Mal his Dom is so delicious!! I need more!
I don’t get how one can but a plot in these shorts but THERE IS! And it’s clearly there!
This one is basically centered on manipulating but their feelings are clearly stated and beautiful, the chemistry Mal and North have is through the roof and you can’t do anything other than fall in love with them and their dynamic🥵
Basically… North needs help not failing his classes cause not even football and being the star athlete is going to save him if he gets kicked out of college 🤷🏼♀️ and our superhero (maybe villain?😏) Mal clearly can’t let that happen, and finds the perfect way for North to get up to standards😏 It clearly involves a lot of getting naked🥵
“I’ll make you a deal,” I say. “I’ll help you with your grades, I’ll make sure you pass. And you give me what I want.” He eyes me warily. “What do you want?” “You. I want all of you. Anywhere, and anytime I want.”
What you'll get: Grumpy/sunshine Kinks College Football
Ope. Mal messed with North so much that his grades are slipping. He ties North up in private tutoring for awhile to get him back on the up and up. Super short.
Although this second part is somewhat longer than the first (not by much, but it has at least 70 pages, which proportionally makes a difference), I have to say that it didn't convince me as much.
Perhaps it's because it feels like a part of the story that works as a bridge between the beginning and what is to come more than actual development of the story. That is, we see what happens after their first time together and how they establish the dynamics they are going to have and the peculiar relationship they maintain.
It's a way of explaining or contextualizing that North, who is supposedly heterosexual, and Mal, who seems uninterested in emotionally engaging with anyone, especially North, establish a common relationship with their own rules and codes.
The fact that it serves as such a "link" between the beginning and the future has made it seem less intense to me, but of course, it is as steamy as the first one (in fact, there are more hot scenes here), and also hints at things about the characters that none of them wants to express in words, which I hope will play out in the upcoming parts of the series.
He was rough and demanding and— let’s just get this straight right now; I’m not gay, never have been— but I loved every damn second of it. Like, desperate for more, eyes rolling back, ‘fuck me harder daddy’ loved it. So, that’s new.
Me lo paso genial leyendo esto y estoy enganchadisima.
OK. I can do this. Mal says I can do this and I do whatever Mal says, so that means I can.
Encima me dan muchas vibes de The Brat and the Beast, una de mis series favoritas y me hace muy feliz. Todo eso de que Mal cuide de North, aunque finja que no le importa, me FLIPA.
I shouldn’t hope for more from him, but I can’t help it. I want him to care for me in a way he doesn’t care for anyone else. It’s stupid but I want him to like me in a romantic way too.
Y las escenas hot son buenísimas. Me encantan.
To be honest I’d do almost anything if it means he keeps giving me his cock. It’s my drug of choice.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Please note this just my personal opinion, any and all hard work by the author and their team is always appreciated.
Well dayummmm! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 🤯⭐️🤯⭐️🤯⭐️🤯⭐️🤯⭐️🤯⭐️🤯⭐️🤯⭐️🤯
BDSM is not for everyone, and let’s face it, it is not a easy troupe/ genre to write - that is not the case for this series of books…
A series of short books following the same “couple” yeah I said it Mal, COUPLE!
Yes this is hot and steamy and detailed and seductive BUT it is so much more than just that. It’s beautiful, heartfelt, intense and believe it or not …. thoughtful!
I have spent the last 24 hours devouring all 5 books and I cannot wait for the 6th… I want to see the end but I also don’t want the series too end at the same time 😂 Arden Long what have you done!?!?
CW - restraints (incl cock cage, handcuffs, ropes, gags, spreader and chains), breath play, degradation, free use, impact play (paddle, spanking), M/s, humiliation / sadomasochism, semi public play, edging, collar and leash, toys
Tropes - sports, erotica, grumpy x sunshine, obsessed, possessive, jealous
Representation - queer rep
Maybe I do need him to control me, I obviously have no clue how to run my own life.
I think that’s all you need to know about this
Scale: ⭐️ - would've DNF'ed / continued out of spite ⭐️⭐️ - shit, but whatever ⭐️⭐️⭐️ - meh, could've been better ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ - lit 👅 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ - loved it, inject this shit into my veins 🤪
After all the drama and the heavy plot from the previous series I read I needed something quick and easy. And this little ass book was something all right. The first few pages were ok until there was mention of caged dicks. Both this guys were delusional. North was like leave me alone, then he started to fail in class and he couldn’t concentrate on anything because he was horny and the only thing who can take away that was the dude he made leave him alone, so he follows him and demand to be fucked. And Mal was a bitch of a top and the fact that he “punished” North while also making him understand the materials was crazy work.
This was a great follow up to Turned By My Teammate and really builds on the toxic relationship between Mal and North. Mal admits that he didn't provide any aftercare and that he needs to do better, North begins to admit to himself that having Mal in control helps him focus, and they both realise that as fucked up as this thing is between them, they both kind of need each other. I'm really looking forward to part 3 and how their relationship develops further. I'm also looking forward to learning more about Mal and his past as he's so damn mysterious!
I read this series (1-5) a while back but never revived them (stupid me)!!
Normally in not a fan of novella reads, I prefer minimum 150 pages BUT these are all a continuation so it's like one big story split out across a few books so I gave it a go and my GOD am I glad I did.
Book 2 picks up where book 1 left off but sweet Jesus this one is so much hotter!!! The spice in this is fecking phenomenal and if you're looking for some good old BDSM and some hot as sin fucking then for the love of God give this series a read!!
Hands down my favourite of the series so far ❤️🌶️🌶️🌶️
North finds out he's failing and he needs help because he can't focus after Mal and he take a pause. He begs Mal to help and he agrees. Its both rewarding and has punishment as well. I loved every second of this and we get even more play time in this. If looking for toys, spankings and bdsm this is what need. I went looking for something like this and so glad found it. I need more.
-dark mm romance -teammates to lovers -grumpy/sunshine -heavy bdsm/kink -secret toxic relationship
hot damn. this whole series is kinky & intriguing! no slow burn at all BUTTT the tension & getting to any kind of resolution thru this development is soooo hornyyy!! & i am into it!!!
These novellas by Arden Long are addictive! How Long can incorporate character development with all that spice is a talent. You finish each book ready for MORE and further intrigued with Mal and Nolan!
"MALCOLM BLACKWOOD IS MY SECRET. OH, AND I'M WEARING A COCK CAGE RIGHT NOW."