With Christmas on the way, I’m getting ready to revamp the bakery my dad left me but my “family” has plans of their own. My stepmother wants to sell me as well as the house I grew up in. Bruised and broken, I take my chance to escape her but end up getting caught in a snowstorm. Cold and nearly frozen, with no place to hide, I wonder if this is the end for me. That’s when I run into Jacob and his brothers. A dark aura surrounds them, especially around the one who has scars marring his face. I promise them anything as long as they help me get out of town and away from my stepmother. They assume I’m a hooker and I’m willing to play the part as long as they take me far away from the people who’re hellbent on destroying me. I never cared for the protection of a pack but their sinful scents make me forget all my reasons. Can a Christmas miracle save me and my precious bakery or will I end up at the mercy of my conniving stepmother once again? Find out in this heart-throbbing RH omegaverse romance story between a young omega and a pack of older ex-military billionaire alphas! If you like your Christmas romances hot and steamy with a generous dash of sweetness, you’re going to love this one. So, grab a mug of hot chocolate and enjoy this omegaverse romance standalone! A happily-ever-after is guaranteed!
Winter works in a bakery and lives with her stepmother and her stepmother’s boyfriend. Her father passed 8 years ago and Winter tried to be as warm and loving as she could be to her “new family.” Sadly her stepmother and the boyfriend do not feel the same…
On a bitterly cold snowy night Winter gets home early and overheard her stepmother telling her boyfriend how they’re going to force Winter to sigh over her father’s house…but what’s worse, her stepmother plans on SELLING WINTER LIKE CATTLE!! She’s (the stepmother) so pleased with herself as well, saying how much money they’ll get for an untouched omega!
Winter escapes when they find her eavesdropping and her stepmother’s boyfriend roughs her up. She only makes it so far before before she collapses and passes out from the cold. When she thinks she’s going to die, help comes in the way of 4 handsome Alpha saviors: Jacob, Kai, Mercer, and Cole. They take Winter home with them and are immediately smitten by her…even if they do assume she’s a hooker at first. After doing some research they realize quickly how wrong they initially were…she’s not a hooker…she’s just a young beaten up girl running for her life. Soon it becomes clear that Winter is their mate and wild horses couldn’t drag any of them apart.
So about the 2 stars. I really enjoyed the book but for a few things that really I felt didn’t do “it” for me 1. The characters were really good characters but they could’ve been GREAT, but they weren’t because they lacked any real “substance.” It felt like we the reader only got “surface level”…nothing too deep or meaningful. The men were the cliche heroes, handsome, protective, alphas- that are “sensitive” and caring. But with all of this they still came off as rather “superficial.” Winter was the classic Omega in distress…the one who didn’t find a backbone until she met the guys. 2. Her evil stepmother and stepmother’s boyfriend were heinous horrible pieces of trash, planning on SELLING WINTER, but that plot goes…nowhere. Seriously Winter hears them talking, runs, gets saved by the guys, falls in love, gets the guys to help her and they go and tell the stepmother and her boyfriend off…that’s it! No retribution, no jail time…no justice, ugh!!! 3. It was just way too “tidy.” The whole book ran exactly as planned a.k.a. it was completely predictable.
Genre: Adult Omegaverse Spice: 3/5 🌶️ *spice ratings are relative to other books in the same genre
Tropes & themes: MFMM omegaverse - female omega and male alphas, loose Cinderella situation, FMC runs away from her home, forced proximity, surprise heat, heat tending, fast burn, found family
Quick blurb: Winter runs from her home after she discovers a sinister plot to get rid of her, and falls into the arms of three brothers that exist on the periphery of society.
Thoughts: All in all, this was a fun read! There was some awkward writing / dialogue that kept me from rating higher, but I still thought it was cute and I enjoyed the holiday vibes.
Overall, it was a decent enough story. Quick. Cute. Low angst. The biggest problem I had, other than them being brother's, which always makes me a bit skeevy, is the timeline errors. Early on, the stepmother said she had "just turned 18 the lieu m previous year", which would make her 19. But she told the guys she was 20. Then, it was mentioned twice that she had only known the guys about 24 hours. Um, it was night when they picked her up, then it was morning. So maybe 12 hours. Timeline issues are a bit of a pet peeve of mine.
Winter has an awful stepmom who tries to sell Winter's house and her and switches out her suppressants. Winter finds out and flees into the cold and the guys (Cole, Kai and Jacob) find her. They're wealthy and own their own security company and immediately notice she's their mate. They help her through her heat and help her take down her stepmom and stepmom's partner. It's an OK book. Kinda cheesy.
It all felt surface level with the chemistry. It is an OV but it didn't read like one....no nest really...the omega left the nest during heat to go get food? I've never read an OV where one did that...she never seemed out of it from the heat...no mention of knotting really for out innocent she was...I dunno...I just didn't feel it.
You obviously didn’t read very far or attempt to read very far bc the alphas this omega ends up with doesn’t actually think she’s an escort. They make the comments about her house slippers and that she’s super inexperienced for that type of thing. That being said, the plot and story fell short and was a tad over reaching.
I have no idea how this is rated so low. “It was missing depth” has been the biggest complaint but I’ve read longer books with less care put into the characters. For a Christmas Book this was PERFECT.
- An omega who wants a family - Pack of 3 Alpha Brothers - Horrible step mother - Human (Omega) Trafficking - Instalove
I’m really sorry to the writers if it’s actually author written but this feels so AI. The language needs help I liked the story it’s a good read but the editing needs a lot of work
It's a superficial shallow story. Her stepdamily wants to sell her off. She runs off. Gets picked up by 3 brothers. Goes into heat. They help her through it. It just lacked something. It's not a bad read just felt lacking.
So sweet! Jacob, Cole and Kai were in the right place at the right time! They swooped in and rescued Winter. And this pack found their Omega. They are just perfect for each other. And very steamy too!
This was awesome. Winter needed her alphas, and fate knew just when to introduce them!! Absolutely love the dynamic, and it's always the scary ones with the biggest hearts.
I think this book moved way to fast for me to truly enjoy, it was cute and all but it was all so fast paced that I feel like we missed a lot of events.
This is a insta lust, fast burn book with a stupid pretense of an issue that would never fly and "hero's" who are a bunch of aholes taking advantage of a desperate girl. This is NOTHING like The Slovieg Pack series. That is a good series somehow by the same author.