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Maiden of Artemis
Before the men of myth and legend, there was Otrera, first Queen of the Amazons.
It wasn’t until the prince’s blood coated Otrera’s hands that she realized she’d sentenced herself to death. In her darkest hour, Artemis offers her a second chance at life and freedom. But in return the goddess commands unwavering loyalty and sends her on a formidable quest.
Joined by women who swiftly become sisters along the way, Otrera’s journey is tangled by prophecy and unexpected discoveries, and she is faced with a decision that will alter her life forever.
Fleeing from men and monsters alike, Otrera and her companions travel across Ancient Greece in search of what was promised. Each day she learns more about herself and the dangers of her world. Yet the closer she gets to fulfilling her quest, the further Otrera drifts from her pledge to Artemis.
Pursued by a vengeful king and his relentless champion, Otrera discovers how far she’ll go to keep her sisters safe. But nothing, not even a divine weapon, can protect her from the wrath of the gods.
So begins the story of the tribe feared by heroes and kings alike.
This adult historical fantasy series is intended for a mature audience due to trigger warnings for language, violence and death, and sexual situations.
It wasn’t until the prince’s blood coated Otrera’s hands that she realized she’d sentenced herself to death. In her darkest hour, Artemis offers her a second chance at life and freedom. But in return the goddess commands unwavering loyalty and sends her on a formidable quest.
Joined by women who swiftly become sisters along the way, Otrera’s journey is tangled by prophecy and unexpected discoveries, and she is faced with a decision that will alter her life forever.
Fleeing from men and monsters alike, Otrera and her companions travel across Ancient Greece in search of what was promised. Each day she learns more about herself and the dangers of her world. Yet the closer she gets to fulfilling her quest, the further Otrera drifts from her pledge to Artemis.
Pursued by a vengeful king and his relentless champion, Otrera discovers how far she’ll go to keep her sisters safe. But nothing, not even a divine weapon, can protect her from the wrath of the gods.
So begins the story of the tribe feared by heroes and kings alike.
This adult historical fantasy series is intended for a mature audience due to trigger warnings for language, violence and death, and sexual situations.
305 pages, Kindle Edition
Published February 6, 2024
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Eloise Bahr first discovered the magic of storytelling in sixth grade. Around the same time she learned about Greek Mythology and has been obsessed since. Some might say it’s her Roman Empire.
Maiden of Artemis is Eloise's debut novel and she's thrilled to introduce and immerse you in her historical fantasy series. Her novels always offer an alternative look at myths and history, along with plenty of adventure and healthy romance. While the first book in Legend of the Amazons is lower on the spice scale, it must be known she takes her slow-burn romantic subplots seriously.
While her life has pulled her from one place to another, she’s settled in the Pacific Northwest with her husband, son, and two dogs. When she isn’t working on her latest novel, going on walks with her son, selling her husband on her latest DIY project, or working as an accountant, Eloise enjoys digging in her garden while listening to a good book.
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Eloise Bahr first discovered the magic of storytelling in sixth grade. Around the same time she learned about Greek Mythology and has been obsessed since. Some might say it’s her Roman Empire.
Maiden of Artemis is Eloise's debut novel and she's thrilled to introduce and immerse you in her historical fantasy series. Her novels always offer an alternative look at myths and history, along with plenty of adventure and healthy romance. While the first book in Legend of the Amazons is lower on the spice scale, it must be known she takes her slow-burn romantic subplots seriously.
While her life has pulled her from one place to another, she’s settled in the Pacific Northwest with her husband, son, and two dogs. When she isn’t working on her latest novel, going on walks with her son, selling her husband on her latest DIY project, or working as an accountant, Eloise enjoys digging in her garden while listening to a good book.
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February 11, 2024
"Maiden of Artemis" by Eloise Bahr introduces Otrera as a protagonist worth following, and I found myself content to accompany her on her journey. However, the true gems of the story lie in the captivating side characters who, in my opinion, outshine the main protagonist. Each character is well-crafted and intriguing, with Lysandra's interpretation leaving a lasting impression. I found myself yearning for more from her perspective.
The themes of feminism, found family, and women supporting each other resonated well within the narrative. It was refreshing to see these elements woven into the storyline, adding depth and meaning to the overall experience.
One notable drawback for me was the pacing. The story started off slow, and there were instances where it felt rushed. This inconsistency affected the overall flow, making it a bit challenging to fully immerse myself in the plot. Finding the right balance between pacing is crucial, and unfortunately, this aspect detracted from my overall enjoyment of the book.
Despite the pacing issues, the character development was the standout feature of "Maiden of Artemis." Witnessing the growth and evolution of the characters was a rewarding experience, adding substance to the narrative.
In conclusion, Eloise Bahr's "Maiden of Artemis" offers a mix of an engaging protagonist, captivating side characters, and meaningful themes. While pacing hiccups may disrupt the flow, the strong character development remains the highlight of this tale.
The themes of feminism, found family, and women supporting each other resonated well within the narrative. It was refreshing to see these elements woven into the storyline, adding depth and meaning to the overall experience.
One notable drawback for me was the pacing. The story started off slow, and there were instances where it felt rushed. This inconsistency affected the overall flow, making it a bit challenging to fully immerse myself in the plot. Finding the right balance between pacing is crucial, and unfortunately, this aspect detracted from my overall enjoyment of the book.
Despite the pacing issues, the character development was the standout feature of "Maiden of Artemis." Witnessing the growth and evolution of the characters was a rewarding experience, adding substance to the narrative.
In conclusion, Eloise Bahr's "Maiden of Artemis" offers a mix of an engaging protagonist, captivating side characters, and meaningful themes. While pacing hiccups may disrupt the flow, the strong character development remains the highlight of this tale.
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January 28, 2024DNF @ 30%
I tried, I really tried to read this, but I’m so bored. I don’t care for the story or the characters, the plot is too slow and the writing is confusing.
Thank you NetGalley and Musadora Publishing for the e-arc.
I tried, I really tried to read this, but I’m so bored. I don’t care for the story or the characters, the plot is too slow and the writing is confusing.
Thank you NetGalley and Musadora Publishing for the e-arc.
April 18, 2024
I finally got around to reading Maiden of Artemis! Check out my review video on my BookTube channel that's not spoiler-y!
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May 25, 2025
The book's idea is nice enough to make me request the ARC but after a few chapters I felt I made a mistake. The prologue and epilogue were probably the most exciting parts, while the rest was clunky and a snoozefest. I could not relate to the MC and while such a thing might not affect my enjoyment when the supporting characters are interesting, yet it was not the case with this book. Yet I decided not to give one star because I did not hate it and who knows the sequel might be better (for others, since I don't think I want to continue). Again, nice premise.
February 19, 2024
4.5
Thank you so much to Musadora Publishing for providing me with an e-arc of this book!
Maiden of Artemis tells the story of Ortrera, the first Amazonian Queen. We follow her, as she is on the run from Nisos because she has killed his son and swore an oath to Artemis. She gathers a group of women she would do anything for. But as she goes on her quest to find a safe sancturary for her chosen sisters and herself, everyone seems to throw a stone into their way.
So first of all: Wow. This was a really nice debut in my opinion. The writing style was good, the world building was nice and it felt like the author knew what she was talking about. I especially loved all the different mentions of greek myths and everything was so nice to see, at least to me. I also felt like this is the first time I read a good feminist retelling. Don't get me wrong. I've read others and they were good but this is exactly what I wanted from them. Talking about women from that time and how they lived in the a non-priveleged part of society. Not only that but I also loved the sex positivity in this book.
Also, why is Ares kind of hot in this book? I always hated him but in this book kind of not??? Help??
One thing I didn't feel though, is the connection between Pamphilos and Otrera. I get that they are childhood friends but somehow I never felt that. The fact that he kept appearing out of nowhere kind of threw me off as well.
Overall, Maiden of Artemis was a fun book, especially for those seeking greek myth fun. I look forward to the future books in the series and Eloise Bahr's other new books, since this was a strong debut for me.
Thank you so much to Musadora Publishing for providing me with an e-arc of this book!
Maiden of Artemis tells the story of Ortrera, the first Amazonian Queen. We follow her, as she is on the run from Nisos because she has killed his son and swore an oath to Artemis. She gathers a group of women she would do anything for. But as she goes on her quest to find a safe sancturary for her chosen sisters and herself, everyone seems to throw a stone into their way.
So first of all: Wow. This was a really nice debut in my opinion. The writing style was good, the world building was nice and it felt like the author knew what she was talking about. I especially loved all the different mentions of greek myths and everything was so nice to see, at least to me. I also felt like this is the first time I read a good feminist retelling. Don't get me wrong. I've read others and they were good but this is exactly what I wanted from them. Talking about women from that time and how they lived in the a non-priveleged part of society. Not only that but I also loved the sex positivity in this book.
Also, why is Ares kind of hot in this book? I always hated him but in this book kind of not??? Help??
One thing I didn't feel though, is the connection between Pamphilos and Otrera. I get that they are childhood friends but somehow I never felt that. The fact that he kept appearing out of nowhere kind of threw me off as well.
Overall, Maiden of Artemis was a fun book, especially for those seeking greek myth fun. I look forward to the future books in the series and Eloise Bahr's other new books, since this was a strong debut for me.
February 6, 2024
This was an interesting retelling of the founder of the Amazons!
We follow Otera, a slave who becomes blessed by Artemis after defending herself against unwanted advances from a visiting prince and is forced to go on the run. We follow her journey from demure slave to powerful warrior and define what it means to be strong and god-blessed.
This was an enjoyable read once you get to the action around 35% into the book! It was so refreshing to get a story of one of the lesser told myths and focusing on a mortal woman instead of the gods controlling her. As interesting as Otera is, the secondary characters are where this book really shines for me. On her quest for sanctuary, Otera collects a variety of other women seeking refuge and becomes their champion. We love women supporting women!!
However, the pacing felt a little slow at the beginning, and there was a lot of dialogue/description that felt clunky and unnatural and it took me out of the moment while reading. The ending felt a little rushed and inconclusive as well--not in a normal "this is the end of the first book, you have to pick up the second to see what happens" kind of way. More in a "Okay we're done now but I guess there's more okay bye" sort of way.
Overall, this was a fun and enjoyable read and I'm looking forward to the rest of the series! Thank you Netgalley for an advanced copy of this book in exchange for a review.
We follow Otera, a slave who becomes blessed by Artemis after defending herself against unwanted advances from a visiting prince and is forced to go on the run. We follow her journey from demure slave to powerful warrior and define what it means to be strong and god-blessed.
This was an enjoyable read once you get to the action around 35% into the book! It was so refreshing to get a story of one of the lesser told myths and focusing on a mortal woman instead of the gods controlling her. As interesting as Otera is, the secondary characters are where this book really shines for me. On her quest for sanctuary, Otera collects a variety of other women seeking refuge and becomes their champion. We love women supporting women!!
However, the pacing felt a little slow at the beginning, and there was a lot of dialogue/description that felt clunky and unnatural and it took me out of the moment while reading. The ending felt a little rushed and inconclusive as well--not in a normal "this is the end of the first book, you have to pick up the second to see what happens" kind of way. More in a "Okay we're done now but I guess there's more okay bye" sort of way.
Overall, this was a fun and enjoyable read and I'm looking forward to the rest of the series! Thank you Netgalley for an advanced copy of this book in exchange for a review.
February 6, 2024
Maiden of Artemis 🏹 (Book #1 Legend of the Amazons)
By: Eloise Bahr-debut
📕 Format: eBook 305 pgs., published 2/6/24
🙏🏾Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher Musadora for this ARC 💜! I voluntarily give an honest review and all opinions expressed are my own.
Genre: Historical Fantasy, Greek Mythology, Women's Fic
Tropes: feminism, found family, quest/journey w/ companions
⚠️sexual assault attempt, virgin h
🌎Setting: Attica, Greece
Summary: Otrera is a slave who killed a prince and marked herself for death. She goes on the run with Artemis's protection provided she stays pure and loyal. Otrera meets her "sisters," other women who need her strength and shelter. She faces monsters and men that make it difficult to keep her word to Artemis.
🤔 My Thoughts: I am a sucker for mythology and any retellings, Otrera was a warrior and protector within a tribe of women. I loved the female empowerment and banter between the sisters.
⭐Rating: 4/5
By: Eloise Bahr-debut
📕 Format: eBook 305 pgs., published 2/6/24
🙏🏾Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher Musadora for this ARC 💜! I voluntarily give an honest review and all opinions expressed are my own.
Genre: Historical Fantasy, Greek Mythology, Women's Fic
Tropes: feminism, found family, quest/journey w/ companions
⚠️sexual assault attempt, virgin h
🌎Setting: Attica, Greece
Summary: Otrera is a slave who killed a prince and marked herself for death. She goes on the run with Artemis's protection provided she stays pure and loyal. Otrera meets her "sisters," other women who need her strength and shelter. She faces monsters and men that make it difficult to keep her word to Artemis.
🤔 My Thoughts: I am a sucker for mythology and any retellings, Otrera was a warrior and protector within a tribe of women. I loved the female empowerment and banter between the sisters.
⭐Rating: 4/5
January 15, 2024
Final thoughts will be posted later! 🌙
(FINAL REVIEW):
This was a great take/reimagining/retelling on the founder of the Amazons, Ortera! The story provides a great setting for what led her to create this formidable tribe of warrior women. ⚔️
In this story, Otrera is a slave that suddenly finds herself on the run from death. I thought her characterization was well done, showing her desire to be in a world where women weren’t just toys for powerful men to use. The choice to make her a sheltered young woman at first left me scratching my head at wondering how a naive woman would come to be the founder of kickass women, but the ending helped build this vision in my head. 🔥
Her relationship with Artemis is that which I expected of an aloof deity (aka, never answering calls), but I do find myself wishing there were more interactions between the two. Area’s appearance and characterization is also something that nicely surprised me. He’s everything a war god is supposed to be: arrogant, rude, and intimidating. But his softer side with Otrera was really nice to see for a god that most don’t want to be associated with, and it really makes him out to be both a misunderstood god as well as a big softie underneath. 🗡️
The cast of side characters were what really brought this story together for me. The banter, the begrudging love that evolves from time spent together, it all really showed how these women will come to be the matriarchs of the Amazons. 👭
As much as I enjoyed this book, I did find myself feeling like the plot was too fast in some places and in others too long. The beginning and ending scenes with the gods also would’ve been cool to have gotten more of just to understand Artemis’ plan for Otrera instead of guessing with her the goddess’s intentions. 🤷🏻♀️
But in the end, I had a great time with this book and would highly recommend it for those who love Greek mythology, and a retelling based on the Amazons! 🏺
Big thank you goes to BookSirens and to the author, Eloise Bahr, for letting me be a part of the review team! 💜
Publication date: February 6!
Overall: 4.25/5 ⭐️
(FINAL REVIEW):
This was a great take/reimagining/retelling on the founder of the Amazons, Ortera! The story provides a great setting for what led her to create this formidable tribe of warrior women. ⚔️
In this story, Otrera is a slave that suddenly finds herself on the run from death. I thought her characterization was well done, showing her desire to be in a world where women weren’t just toys for powerful men to use. The choice to make her a sheltered young woman at first left me scratching my head at wondering how a naive woman would come to be the founder of kickass women, but the ending helped build this vision in my head. 🔥
Her relationship with Artemis is that which I expected of an aloof deity (aka, never answering calls), but I do find myself wishing there were more interactions between the two. Area’s appearance and characterization is also something that nicely surprised me. He’s everything a war god is supposed to be: arrogant, rude, and intimidating. But his softer side with Otrera was really nice to see for a god that most don’t want to be associated with, and it really makes him out to be both a misunderstood god as well as a big softie underneath. 🗡️
The cast of side characters were what really brought this story together for me. The banter, the begrudging love that evolves from time spent together, it all really showed how these women will come to be the matriarchs of the Amazons. 👭
As much as I enjoyed this book, I did find myself feeling like the plot was too fast in some places and in others too long. The beginning and ending scenes with the gods also would’ve been cool to have gotten more of just to understand Artemis’ plan for Otrera instead of guessing with her the goddess’s intentions. 🤷🏻♀️
But in the end, I had a great time with this book and would highly recommend it for those who love Greek mythology, and a retelling based on the Amazons! 🏺
Big thank you goes to BookSirens and to the author, Eloise Bahr, for letting me be a part of the review team! 💜
Publication date: February 6!
Overall: 4.25/5 ⭐️
January 16, 2024
*I was lucky enough to receive an arc from Netgalley and Victory Editing in exchange for an honest review.*
The Amazons are such a unique and fascinating group of women in Greek mythology. Their stories are so rarely told and even though I thought I knew a lot about their mythology I never never about how they came to be. I loved seeing Otrera's journey transforming from a slave to a warrior.
This was a brilliant adventure story with a great found family trope that I absolutely loved. Each character was so wonderful and unique.
Maiden of Artemis comes out 6th February 2024
The Amazons are such a unique and fascinating group of women in Greek mythology. Their stories are so rarely told and even though I thought I knew a lot about their mythology I never never about how they came to be. I loved seeing Otrera's journey transforming from a slave to a warrior.
This was a brilliant adventure story with a great found family trope that I absolutely loved. Each character was so wonderful and unique.
Maiden of Artemis comes out 6th February 2024
December 9, 2023
I recently read "Maiden of Artemis: Legend of the Amazons, Book 1" by Eloise Bahr and was captivated. This narrative of mythology, adventure, and feminine fortitude captivated me from the first page.
Otrera, the first Queen of the Amazons, is caught in a prince's blood and her life changes. Artemis gives Otrera a chance for atonement in her darkest hour. A thrilling adventure with prophecies, surprising alliances, and self-discovery follows.
Bahr's colourful prose depicts Ancient Greece and Otrera's dangers. The excursion explores Otrera's character as well as the scenery. Her friendship with other Amazonians deepens the plot, turning friends become sisters with a common fate.
As tension rises, Otrera makes realistic and heartbreaking decisions. The author masterfully combines devotion, sacrifice, and heavenly duty. The narrative is full with surprises that keep readers guessing.
Note that this book is not for the fainthearted. Eloise Bahr bravely explores adult issues by include profanity, violence, death, and sexuality trigger warnings. These features add to the world's reality and the characters' struggles.
The story is heightened by the enraged king and his determined champion. Otrera's dedication to her sisters shows the Amazons' great loyalty, and the fight with celestial powers adds intrigue.
In conclusion, "Maiden of Artemis" is a thrilling start to an exciting adult historical fantasy series. Eloise Bahr's novel mixes mythology, history, and fiction to reimagine the Amazons. I'm excited to see where Otrera and her tribe go in this captivating universe in the following volume.
Otrera, the first Queen of the Amazons, is caught in a prince's blood and her life changes. Artemis gives Otrera a chance for atonement in her darkest hour. A thrilling adventure with prophecies, surprising alliances, and self-discovery follows.
Bahr's colourful prose depicts Ancient Greece and Otrera's dangers. The excursion explores Otrera's character as well as the scenery. Her friendship with other Amazonians deepens the plot, turning friends become sisters with a common fate.
As tension rises, Otrera makes realistic and heartbreaking decisions. The author masterfully combines devotion, sacrifice, and heavenly duty. The narrative is full with surprises that keep readers guessing.
Note that this book is not for the fainthearted. Eloise Bahr bravely explores adult issues by include profanity, violence, death, and sexuality trigger warnings. These features add to the world's reality and the characters' struggles.
The story is heightened by the enraged king and his determined champion. Otrera's dedication to her sisters shows the Amazons' great loyalty, and the fight with celestial powers adds intrigue.
In conclusion, "Maiden of Artemis" is a thrilling start to an exciting adult historical fantasy series. Eloise Bahr's novel mixes mythology, history, and fiction to reimagine the Amazons. I'm excited to see where Otrera and her tribe go in this captivating universe in the following volume.
February 29, 2024
The story is a journey of a former slave's fight to find a safe place to live. Along the way, she battles armies and gods alike while forming found family bonds with a growing group.
Eloise wrote the action and emotional moments well. There is an understandable naivete with some of the characters, so we learn more about their world as they did.
There were a few adult moments. Quite a few more were hinted at or cut off before the scenes became too graphic. This may be a bit adult for a young teenager.
My only negatives are that there are some modern sayings which felt out of place in ancient Greece. I rolled my eyes at the "That's what she said" moment.
This is definitely for fans of Percy Jackson who want a more adult story.
Eloise wrote the action and emotional moments well. There is an understandable naivete with some of the characters, so we learn more about their world as they did.
There were a few adult moments. Quite a few more were hinted at or cut off before the scenes became too graphic. This may be a bit adult for a young teenager.
My only negatives are that there are some modern sayings which felt out of place in ancient Greece. I rolled my eyes at the "That's what she said" moment.
This is definitely for fans of Percy Jackson who want a more adult story.
February 6, 2024
*Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the e-ARC in exchange for an honest review*
Maiden of Artemis follows Otrera on her search for sanctuary after pledging herself to the service of the maiden goddess of the hunt who saves her life and gives her the chance of freedom from life as a slave. She gathers a group of sisters on her journey across Ancient Greece, all hoping for a haven removed from the evils men perpetrate. She believes she has found that place in Orthia, but she soon realizes that all was not as it initially seems.
The supporting characters are well developed and maybe even more lovable than Otrera. This was a lovely adventure story with found family that gave you some warm fuzzies. The end of the story with our mortal characters seemed abrupt and rushed, (the loss of one of my favorite characters was hardly addressed, though Otrera would likely disagree with me after almost being choked/suffocated) leaving no option but for there to be a second installment.
The two scenes we get with the gods outside the mortal realm were so interesting. I wish there had been more than just the prologue and epilogue. Though I’m still slightly confused as to why the author left the “demon” nameless in the prologue.
While I’m a sucker for Greek mythology, I know very little of the stories about the Amazons. I’m ready to continue the series to see where we go from here.
Maiden of Artemis follows Otrera on her search for sanctuary after pledging herself to the service of the maiden goddess of the hunt who saves her life and gives her the chance of freedom from life as a slave. She gathers a group of sisters on her journey across Ancient Greece, all hoping for a haven removed from the evils men perpetrate. She believes she has found that place in Orthia, but she soon realizes that all was not as it initially seems.
The supporting characters are well developed and maybe even more lovable than Otrera. This was a lovely adventure story with found family that gave you some warm fuzzies. The end of the story with our mortal characters seemed abrupt and rushed, (the loss of one of my favorite characters was hardly addressed, though Otrera would likely disagree with me after almost being choked/suffocated) leaving no option but for there to be a second installment.
The two scenes we get with the gods outside the mortal realm were so interesting. I wish there had been more than just the prologue and epilogue. Though I’m still slightly confused as to why the author left the “demon” nameless in the prologue.
While I’m a sucker for Greek mythology, I know very little of the stories about the Amazons. I’m ready to continue the series to see where we go from here.
January 7, 2024
Thank you Netgalley for an advanced copy of this book
3.5 stars
Maiden of Artemis follows slave Otrera escape her owner after murdering a man with some unsavoury intentions towards her. Having earned the Goddess Artemis' patronage, we follow her journey to find a place of sanctuary away from the fear of retribution, slavery and the whims of men.
Along the way she picks up other women, seeking the same kind of sanctuary, from prostitutes to widows.
The best part of this story was the character development. Not only did we get to see the main character develop into a fierce and loyal protector but each of her companions had strong, well developed characters and it was nice to see the interactions between the different personalities.
I enjoyed the Greek mythology and the characters of the Olympians involved, I'm always a huge fan of anything in this historical vein.
The story was pretty interesting and moved consistently but I did find it a bit boring in some places. My biggest issue with this book as that the ending was so abrupt and inconclusive. It was so obviously written to lead into the next book that it felt very rushed and incomplete, particularly as the last part of the book was starting to ramp up.
3.5 stars
Maiden of Artemis follows slave Otrera escape her owner after murdering a man with some unsavoury intentions towards her. Having earned the Goddess Artemis' patronage, we follow her journey to find a place of sanctuary away from the fear of retribution, slavery and the whims of men.
Along the way she picks up other women, seeking the same kind of sanctuary, from prostitutes to widows.
The best part of this story was the character development. Not only did we get to see the main character develop into a fierce and loyal protector but each of her companions had strong, well developed characters and it was nice to see the interactions between the different personalities.
I enjoyed the Greek mythology and the characters of the Olympians involved, I'm always a huge fan of anything in this historical vein.
The story was pretty interesting and moved consistently but I did find it a bit boring in some places. My biggest issue with this book as that the ending was so abrupt and inconclusive. It was so obviously written to lead into the next book that it felt very rushed and incomplete, particularly as the last part of the book was starting to ramp up.
March 21, 2024
3.5 ⭐
This was an enjoyable, YA feeling book that explored the mortals perspective of greek gods and their blessings being both a curse and a gift.
While the main character, Otrera's story, wasn't the most gripping of journeys the real magic of this book comes with the side characters. If a book has a character called Lysandra? I'm going to read it. When that character is a badass with character growth and a catty attitude? That's a star in itself right there.
The relationships these characters forged and the found family, protective circle they formed around each other was enjoyable to read. Their dependence on Otrera and the way she dealt with that pressure was also an enjoyable character arc to explore, even if it was only touched upon briefly.
As a lover of Greek Mythology, the Greek Gods and Mythology retellings I also enjoyed the portrayal of Apollo, Athena and Artemis in this. I would be interested in exploring more of this writers portrayal of the gods, and especially seeing more of her Ares.
Thankyou to Netgalley, the author and publisher for an e-arc of this novel in exchange for an honest review.
This was an enjoyable, YA feeling book that explored the mortals perspective of greek gods and their blessings being both a curse and a gift.
While the main character, Otrera's story, wasn't the most gripping of journeys the real magic of this book comes with the side characters. If a book has a character called Lysandra? I'm going to read it. When that character is a badass with character growth and a catty attitude? That's a star in itself right there.
The relationships these characters forged and the found family, protective circle they formed around each other was enjoyable to read. Their dependence on Otrera and the way she dealt with that pressure was also an enjoyable character arc to explore, even if it was only touched upon briefly.
As a lover of Greek Mythology, the Greek Gods and Mythology retellings I also enjoyed the portrayal of Apollo, Athena and Artemis in this. I would be interested in exploring more of this writers portrayal of the gods, and especially seeing more of her Ares.
Thankyou to Netgalley, the author and publisher for an e-arc of this novel in exchange for an honest review.
December 2, 2023
NOTE: I read an early copy of this book for free (not arc) and this is my honest review.
Historical fiction isn't my usual genre, but I was intrigued by the summary and have always loved Greek mythology. The story really drew me in, even though it isn't my normal thing, and I wanted to know what happened next. I fell in love with the characters and the plot and couldn't put it down.
I felt that the characters, world, and lore (without sharing spoilers) were very well developed and thought out.
Historical fiction isn't my usual genre, but I was intrigued by the summary and have always loved Greek mythology. The story really drew me in, even though it isn't my normal thing, and I wanted to know what happened next. I fell in love with the characters and the plot and couldn't put it down.
I felt that the characters, world, and lore (without sharing spoilers) were very well developed and thought out.
February 23, 2024
Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for providing me with this E-Arc.
2.5 stars / 5 stars
The book follows the female slave Otrera who escapes her owner after murdering a man since the punishment for the crime would be death. Somehow, she earns Artemis' patronage and starts the quest to find a place of sanctuary where she can live in peace. Along the way, she picks up other women who also seek sanctuary from their lives.
The most interesting parts of the book are certainly the prologue and the epilogue as the gods and goddesses that appear feel more fleshed out than the mortal characters. I found the main character, Otrera, extremely exhausting and her behavioural change from page to page gave me a headache. On average, she's just utterly stupid and reckless as soon as men are involved while urging for caution when she is just with the other women. Her cluelessness behaviour when it comes to sex is baffling because it doesn't really fit into the time; even for someone who was sheltered, she would know something about it. The other characters are very bleak and two-dimensional except for Ares, who is portrayed in a kinder way than he normally is shown. Pamphilos is a prime example of it because I didn't see the point of him as his only character trait is "flee with me".
Overall the story is very flat and dull. Nothing was resolved in terms of the plot and the ending felt unsatisfying because it was sudden and badly rushed, which annoyed me because the rest of the plot is dragged out.
The slow burn is a real slow burn. Like an extreme version of it. There's tension between the characters but well ... aside from one sex dream and a weird version of "touch her and you will die", there's not much. I don't know how many books are supposed to be in the series but if the speed continues, they might get to the romance in book 3 or 4. (And given how involved Ares is with the Amazons, I bet there will be an actual romance at one point.)
Points for actually involving historical people instead of going the 100% fictional/fantasy route that erases all historical characters.
Unfortunately, the book still requires a few rounds of editing because there are plenty of errors. A bunch of grammar errors but also logical ones, e.g. Otrera already knows the name of one character but asks for the character's name on the next page. Also, the marketing/writing style for the book is off. It reads as YA while it gets marketed as adult because of mature themes. While there are a bunch of trigger warnings (e.g., sexual assault, attempted rape, death of children), they weren't too different from what you can read in YA as well. The most adult theme might be the sex jokes.
2.5 stars / 5 stars
The book follows the female slave Otrera who escapes her owner after murdering a man since the punishment for the crime would be death. Somehow, she earns Artemis' patronage and starts the quest to find a place of sanctuary where she can live in peace. Along the way, she picks up other women who also seek sanctuary from their lives.
The most interesting parts of the book are certainly the prologue and the epilogue as the gods and goddesses that appear feel more fleshed out than the mortal characters. I found the main character, Otrera, extremely exhausting and her behavioural change from page to page gave me a headache. On average, she's just utterly stupid and reckless as soon as men are involved while urging for caution when she is just with the other women. Her cluelessness behaviour when it comes to sex is baffling because it doesn't really fit into the time; even for someone who was sheltered, she would know something about it. The other characters are very bleak and two-dimensional except for Ares, who is portrayed in a kinder way than he normally is shown. Pamphilos is a prime example of it because I didn't see the point of him as his only character trait is "flee with me".
Overall the story is very flat and dull. Nothing was resolved in terms of the plot and the ending felt unsatisfying because it was sudden and badly rushed, which annoyed me because the rest of the plot is dragged out.
The slow burn is a real slow burn. Like an extreme version of it. There's tension between the characters but well ... aside from one sex dream and a weird version of "touch her and you will die", there's not much. I don't know how many books are supposed to be in the series but if the speed continues, they might get to the romance in book 3 or 4. (And given how involved Ares is with the Amazons, I bet there will be an actual romance at one point.)
Points for actually involving historical people instead of going the 100% fictional/fantasy route that erases all historical characters.
Unfortunately, the book still requires a few rounds of editing because there are plenty of errors. A bunch of grammar errors but also logical ones, e.g. Otrera already knows the name of one character but asks for the character's name on the next page. Also, the marketing/writing style for the book is off. It reads as YA while it gets marketed as adult because of mature themes. While there are a bunch of trigger warnings (e.g., sexual assault, attempted rape, death of children), they weren't too different from what you can read in YA as well. The most adult theme might be the sex jokes.
August 17, 2024
3,5/3,75⭐️
January 16, 2024
**Thank you Book Sirens. I received an advanced review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.**
I adored this book, Artemis is one of my favorite greek goddesses that I find myself relating to. Finding sanctuary and people to belong to is not just a modern situation but one that transends time.
Otrera gives up the thoughts of having a family when she accepts Artemis's help after murdering her attacker. Along the way she is joined by several women, but other obstacles try to stop her.
I adored this book, Artemis is one of my favorite greek goddesses that I find myself relating to. Finding sanctuary and people to belong to is not just a modern situation but one that transends time.
Otrera gives up the thoughts of having a family when she accepts Artemis's help after murdering her attacker. Along the way she is joined by several women, but other obstacles try to stop her.
January 13, 2024
Solid 4 star book. I was left wanting more. More of Otrera, more of Ares, more of just about every character, except Artemis. Very disappointed with my favorite Olympian goddess, and surprisingly enchanted with the big bad god of war. Can’t wait for the next book in the series.
February 5, 2024
Thank you for the chance to read this ARC NetGalley! A solid 4 star. I really love Greek mythology so this book was a lot of fun for me. I was pleasantly surprised by the FMC. She came across as a strong woman coming into her own but also had her faults. I loved all the female characters and the idea of finding family along the way. Lots of women of different ages and viewpoints. There were definitely a few twists I was not expecting. There are some sensitive subjects and sexual violence but the topics were dealt with well. The book was a little on the slow side for my taste but the characters kept me in it!
December 29, 2023
Excellent, fast-paced story with characters you truly get to know, good plot twists and turns, and well-researched Greek mythology. Those who read Ariadne or Circe will love this book - and it’s setting up for a series, so there’s more to come!
December 20, 2023
Maiden of Artemis by Eloise Bahr is a female centered telling of the first queen of the amazons that kept me captured from page one. The pacing and character work were handled with an expert hand. The sensitive content was well presented and not over done. I loved this and cannot wait for book two. Maiden of Artemis is a great read for those needing to reignite their love of Greek inspired fiction.
August 20, 2024
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Overall Review (spoilers)
I am a lover of Greek Mythology, and have been since I was a kid. When I found this on Netgalley for review, I knew I had to request. Thank you to Eloise and her publishers for accepting the request.
This book is a retelling of the creation of the Amazonian Warriors. It follows the first Amazonian, her trials, her pain, and her rise to glory. This book will follow her from going as a slave to a favored of Artemis, and then losing it all. She travels around Greece, collecting other women who need aide and protection.
I really enjoyed this retelling. It was raw, dealt with female pain without romanticizing it, and didn’t make men inherently the enemy in the process. It also had one of the best descriptions and portrayals of Ares I have ever seen. I also appreciated the different ages represented, Queer rep, genderfluid characters, and just overall the wide range of people. In addition, the main character isn’t an automatic hero, which is rare it today’s female MCs.
Plot Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Spice Rating:
Overall Review (spoilers)
I am a lover of Greek Mythology, and have been since I was a kid. When I found this on Netgalley for review, I knew I had to request. Thank you to Eloise and her publishers for accepting the request.
This book is a retelling of the creation of the Amazonian Warriors. It follows the first Amazonian, her trials, her pain, and her rise to glory. This book will follow her from going as a slave to a favored of Artemis, and then losing it all. She travels around Greece, collecting other women who need aide and protection.
I really enjoyed this retelling. It was raw, dealt with female pain without romanticizing it, and didn’t make men inherently the enemy in the process. It also had one of the best descriptions and portrayals of Ares I have ever seen. I also appreciated the different ages represented, Queer rep, genderfluid characters, and just overall the wide range of people. In addition, the main character isn’t an automatic hero, which is rare it today’s female MCs.
Plot Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Spice Rating:
June 21, 2024
I was drawn to this book initially because of the cover, but once I read the description I was sold. Greek Mythological female focused fantasy? Count me in! I snatched this book up as fast as I could and once I started, I couldn't put it down. This book is an easy read - Bahr paints vivid images without getting overly artsy with the prose. The characters are memorable - albeit some more likable than others - and I'm looking forward to seeing how they grow and their relationships develop throughout the series.
If you're looking for a nonstop action type of book then this one might not be for you. Bahr spreads out the action and tension with moments for the reader to breathe with more character focused chapters than the plot driven portions of the book. Despite this, the twists and turns we go on with the characters left me eager to know what happens next and the way Book 1 ended had me floored. Book 2 can't come soon enough.
If you're looking for a nonstop action type of book then this one might not be for you. Bahr spreads out the action and tension with moments for the reader to breathe with more character focused chapters than the plot driven portions of the book. Despite this, the twists and turns we go on with the characters left me eager to know what happens next and the way Book 1 ended had me floored. Book 2 can't come soon enough.
December 30, 2023
I really wanted to like this story but it just fell flat. Nothing was resolved and if there is a sequel, I don’t think I would care to bother reading it.
I didn’t see the point in Pamphilos and his unrequited love, I didn’t see the point of the “tension” between Otrera and Ares, and she never did make it to the Amazon sanctuary and the whole journey was dragged out . The e book is only 280 pages and yet it took me days to get through it because it was so dull.
I didn’t see the point in Pamphilos and his unrequited love, I didn’t see the point of the “tension” between Otrera and Ares, and she never did make it to the Amazon sanctuary and the whole journey was dragged out . The e book is only 280 pages and yet it took me days to get through it because it was so dull.
January 25, 2024
It’s normal for any woman to look up to someone as her role model, or a hero. But, this doesn't necessarily mean helplessness or weakness on her part. Otrera explicitly explains this to her travel companions. While the Maiden of Artemis tries her best to protect her friends, she worries that she cannot be there for them at all times. Hence, she empowers them. She says that women are strong and are capable of defending themselves amid adversities.
Maiden of Artemis follows the story of Otrera, a slave girl who has been serving a master for 15 years. One day, while serving her master’s guests, something happens that disgusts her. Of course, Otrera could not protest against it; otherwise, she faced punishment from her master. Fortunately, she gets the opportunity to make a stand on the situation that concerns her life. Otrera did what she did and ran away from her master after that eventful night. As she takes her flight into the wilderness, another unexpected event happens. A goddess takes pity on her and helps her move forward.
Realizing that she does not have anything to protect herself from the elements, Otrera returns stealthily to her master’s house to retrieve her little belongings. One of the other female slaves and a male slave in charge of the stables decide to flee with her. Together, they journey into the unknown. Along the way, some women join them with a single purpose - to run for freedom. Throughout their journey, Otrera and her companions encounter many challenges. Threats pursue them wherever they go. Sometimes, they themselves argue with each other when the going gets rough. But, no one decides to split from the group. One of Otrera’s pursuers was a man named Ariston. Although he does not harm her physically, Ariston’s presence is intimidating.
About the Book and the Author
Eloise Bahr’s Maiden of Artemis is full of twists and turns. I like her style of keeping the reader constantly on the edge of their seat. She provides vivid descriptions of each scene, and in effect, she virtually brings the readers right where the action takes place. The major characters are well-established and consistent throughout the story. What I like the most in Maiden of Artemis is the plot. Bahr skillfully maneuvers her story in a way that each turn surprises the reader. The dialogues are carefully crafted.
Moreover, if we look deeper into the story, the author promotes women's empowerment. It is particularly shown when Otrera tells her companions to stand up and defend themselves, saying that she may not always be there for them. This part sends an important message not only to the characters but also to the readers. Otrera shows that every person possesses strength in the face of adversity.
On the technical side, I notice two things that the author might want to consider if she intends to reproduce more copies of Maiden of Artemis. First, there are a few loose ends that are left untied. Second, there are a handful of grammatical errors in the book. For these reasons alone, I withhold one star from my rating. I give Maiden of Artemis a score of 4 out of 5 stars. However, I still highly recommend this book to readers 16 years old and above. I don’t suggest it to younger readers because some parts are not suitable for young minds.
NOTE: The above review is also found in Books for All Seasons.
Maiden of Artemis follows the story of Otrera, a slave girl who has been serving a master for 15 years. One day, while serving her master’s guests, something happens that disgusts her. Of course, Otrera could not protest against it; otherwise, she faced punishment from her master. Fortunately, she gets the opportunity to make a stand on the situation that concerns her life. Otrera did what she did and ran away from her master after that eventful night. As she takes her flight into the wilderness, another unexpected event happens. A goddess takes pity on her and helps her move forward.
Realizing that she does not have anything to protect herself from the elements, Otrera returns stealthily to her master’s house to retrieve her little belongings. One of the other female slaves and a male slave in charge of the stables decide to flee with her. Together, they journey into the unknown. Along the way, some women join them with a single purpose - to run for freedom. Throughout their journey, Otrera and her companions encounter many challenges. Threats pursue them wherever they go. Sometimes, they themselves argue with each other when the going gets rough. But, no one decides to split from the group. One of Otrera’s pursuers was a man named Ariston. Although he does not harm her physically, Ariston’s presence is intimidating.
About the Book and the Author
Eloise Bahr’s Maiden of Artemis is full of twists and turns. I like her style of keeping the reader constantly on the edge of their seat. She provides vivid descriptions of each scene, and in effect, she virtually brings the readers right where the action takes place. The major characters are well-established and consistent throughout the story. What I like the most in Maiden of Artemis is the plot. Bahr skillfully maneuvers her story in a way that each turn surprises the reader. The dialogues are carefully crafted.
Moreover, if we look deeper into the story, the author promotes women's empowerment. It is particularly shown when Otrera tells her companions to stand up and defend themselves, saying that she may not always be there for them. This part sends an important message not only to the characters but also to the readers. Otrera shows that every person possesses strength in the face of adversity.
On the technical side, I notice two things that the author might want to consider if she intends to reproduce more copies of Maiden of Artemis. First, there are a few loose ends that are left untied. Second, there are a handful of grammatical errors in the book. For these reasons alone, I withhold one star from my rating. I give Maiden of Artemis a score of 4 out of 5 stars. However, I still highly recommend this book to readers 16 years old and above. I don’t suggest it to younger readers because some parts are not suitable for young minds.
NOTE: The above review is also found in Books for All Seasons.
February 5, 2024
Thank you NetGalley for the ARC, first and foremost.
I thought this book was in the middle, there were parts that I thought were good and some parts I didn't so much enjoy. I think the book is full of interesting characters from start to finish. For me that really was the highlight and showed how diverse the world really was. I also thought how the gods and nymphs/dryads were described to rather interesting, and cast them in that divine, ethereal world that made them so different from the mortals. Additionally, it was fantastic to read a story about women, women helping women, and dealing with their personal struggles (Chloe wanting a child for example), but still have it placed within its own time period. What I mean is that the author doesn't push a modern feminist narrative in the world of Ancient Greece, but still portrays ideals and desires that we as modern readers can understand. The entire story begins with Otrera's humiliation and not wanting to be violated by a man - this is something that almost all women can understand and relate to.
Now, for the not so great. I did struggle with some of the pacing. At parts, it seemed really slow, others it moved really quickly. And overall, the plot was interesting, but I struggled to remain interested and engaged with the story. Sometimes, the writing felt a bit YA almost and that I was reading something written for a younger audience, then suddenly we would have something that shifted the narrative (a curse word?) to more adult. This was a bit jarring at times. Even with the colorful cast of characters, I sometimes felt like I was again, reading characters for a younger audience (there is no way a female slave could be that naïve about what occurs between men and women in the stables) and that some just felt a little flat. There was an element of telling me, not showing me that left some parts of the story a bit bland.
Overall though, it was a quick read in a genre I really enjoy and it was solid. I also think the research concerning Greek stories, myth, the types of love, that went into this book was well done and incorporated well. It's a good read and overall written well.
I thought this book was in the middle, there were parts that I thought were good and some parts I didn't so much enjoy. I think the book is full of interesting characters from start to finish. For me that really was the highlight and showed how diverse the world really was. I also thought how the gods and nymphs/dryads were described to rather interesting, and cast them in that divine, ethereal world that made them so different from the mortals. Additionally, it was fantastic to read a story about women, women helping women, and dealing with their personal struggles (Chloe wanting a child for example), but still have it placed within its own time period. What I mean is that the author doesn't push a modern feminist narrative in the world of Ancient Greece, but still portrays ideals and desires that we as modern readers can understand. The entire story begins with Otrera's humiliation and not wanting to be violated by a man - this is something that almost all women can understand and relate to.
Now, for the not so great. I did struggle with some of the pacing. At parts, it seemed really slow, others it moved really quickly. And overall, the plot was interesting, but I struggled to remain interested and engaged with the story. Sometimes, the writing felt a bit YA almost and that I was reading something written for a younger audience, then suddenly we would have something that shifted the narrative (a curse word?) to more adult. This was a bit jarring at times. Even with the colorful cast of characters, I sometimes felt like I was again, reading characters for a younger audience (there is no way a female slave could be that naïve about what occurs between men and women in the stables) and that some just felt a little flat. There was an element of telling me, not showing me that left some parts of the story a bit bland.
Overall though, it was a quick read in a genre I really enjoy and it was solid. I also think the research concerning Greek stories, myth, the types of love, that went into this book was well done and incorporated well. It's a good read and overall written well.
January 11, 2024
I saw this cover and knew I couldn't walk away. I'm obsessed with Greek myths, but the legend of the first queen of the Amazons is vaguer to me, and I had to read this version of it.
This story is the tale of a mortal woman caught up in the whims of gods and men as she tries to find a way to survive. It is an adventure, with an ever growing cast of women as Otera tries to figure out her quest in an ancient Greek landscape. Well I would have enjoyed the story significantly more and been better immersed if it was closer to PG-13 than R, I did enjoy the exploration of women's roles in ancient society and Otera seeking a better life for herself and those who joined her journey. I also very much enjoyed the romance, which is slow burn and not resolved by the end of the book, but I am compelled to continue the series to see where that goes. I would recommend not brushing up on the myth until you're halfway through this book like I did so you can have a chance to guess who the love interest for Otera truly is.
Note to more sensitive readers: As mentioned in the blurb, there are several triggering things. There are several instances of strong language scattered throughout. There is violence and death shown on-screen and off, including the death of children.There is a SA attempt and the horror leading to it. There are women of a certain profession who are not shy about pursuing that profession and their relationships with each other graphically as well as explaining things to the heroine who is beginning to regret her vow to Artemis. There is one scene I had to skip completely when the heroine was alone. The ending is also especially emotional and I am still processing it.
I received a copy of this novel from the author via Book Sirens. I was not required to post a positive review and all views and opinions are my own.
If you love Greek myths and legends of old, this book is for you.
This story is the tale of a mortal woman caught up in the whims of gods and men as she tries to find a way to survive. It is an adventure, with an ever growing cast of women as Otera tries to figure out her quest in an ancient Greek landscape. Well I would have enjoyed the story significantly more and been better immersed if it was closer to PG-13 than R, I did enjoy the exploration of women's roles in ancient society and Otera seeking a better life for herself and those who joined her journey. I also very much enjoyed the romance, which is slow burn and not resolved by the end of the book, but I am compelled to continue the series to see where that goes. I would recommend not brushing up on the myth until you're halfway through this book like I did so you can have a chance to guess who the love interest for Otera truly is.
Note to more sensitive readers: As mentioned in the blurb, there are several triggering things. There are several instances of strong language scattered throughout. There is violence and death shown on-screen and off, including the death of children.There is a SA attempt and the horror leading to it. There are women of a certain profession who are not shy about pursuing that profession and their relationships with each other graphically as well as explaining things to the heroine who is beginning to regret her vow to Artemis. There is one scene I had to skip completely when the heroine was alone. The ending is also especially emotional and I am still processing it.
I received a copy of this novel from the author via Book Sirens. I was not required to post a positive review and all views and opinions are my own.
If you love Greek myths and legends of old, this book is for you.
January 27, 2024
Pre-Note: there is an HP reference in the acknowledgements, so I cannot recommend this book. It’s 2024, get rid of them.
I became very excited when I saw this new adult retelling of the establishing of the Amazons. Unfortunately, I went in thinking this would be an established story for book 1 of a series, but that was my mistake, instead, the story very much just encompasses our MC’s Otrera’s escape to freedom, and the journey until she finds an actual location she and her group can be safe. The establishment of the Amazon’s is hinted at, but we do not see it on page - I assume this will be saved for later books.
Otrera is an interesting enough protagonist to follow and I was content to follow her throughout her journey, however, I enjoyed the side characters much more - Lysandra, Theía, Demetria. All were more interesting to me than our MC. I loved the author’s interpretation of Lysandra, I would like a whole book from her perspective instead or a clear romance where she is the love interest.
Additionally, when working with the Goddess Artemis in your story, it becomes very difficult to navigate aphobic (for aros and aces) language and the author did succeed in some areas, but failed and could have handled situations much better. It’s odd because there are some moments, like the final scene before the prologue, that really showcase platonic love that I think aspecs like myself could really enjoy, but on the flip side there is the language about having sex or pressuring others into love and sex that wasn’t challenged that left me uncomfortable. I think this could ALMOST be a book for aspecs, but it’s not and that’s what disappointed me the most.
And finally, and most unfortunately, like I said in my pre-note, there is an HP reference in the acknowledgements that left a sour taste in my mouth. It’s 2024, remove it.
*I received an eARC from Musadora Publishing & NetGalley. All opinions are my own.*
I became very excited when I saw this new adult retelling of the establishing of the Amazons. Unfortunately, I went in thinking this would be an established story for book 1 of a series, but that was my mistake, instead, the story very much just encompasses our MC’s Otrera’s escape to freedom, and the journey until she finds an actual location she and her group can be safe. The establishment of the Amazon’s is hinted at, but we do not see it on page - I assume this will be saved for later books.
Otrera is an interesting enough protagonist to follow and I was content to follow her throughout her journey, however, I enjoyed the side characters much more - Lysandra, Theía, Demetria. All were more interesting to me than our MC. I loved the author’s interpretation of Lysandra, I would like a whole book from her perspective instead or a clear romance where she is the love interest.
Additionally, when working with the Goddess Artemis in your story, it becomes very difficult to navigate aphobic (for aros and aces) language and the author did succeed in some areas, but failed and could have handled situations much better. It’s odd because there are some moments, like the final scene before the prologue, that really showcase platonic love that I think aspecs like myself could really enjoy, but on the flip side there is the language about having sex or pressuring others into love and sex that wasn’t challenged that left me uncomfortable. I think this could ALMOST be a book for aspecs, but it’s not and that’s what disappointed me the most.
And finally, and most unfortunately, like I said in my pre-note, there is an HP reference in the acknowledgements that left a sour taste in my mouth. It’s 2024, remove it.
*I received an eARC from Musadora Publishing & NetGalley. All opinions are my own.*
February 5, 2024
4 stars
I would like to thank NetGalley and Victory Editing NetGalley Co-op for an advanced copy of Maiden of Artemis by Eloise Bahr.
The Amazons in Greek mythology have always captivated me, so getting to read a retelling of their founder, Otrera, was something I was super excited for. Maiden of Artemis is another excellent Greek myth retelling that kept me entertained the entire time with its large cast of characters and fun adventure!
Throughout most of the book, Otrera is on a journey with her friends and found family across Greece. I really liked all the characters in this book, especially Otrera, as they felt like real people who were trying to figure out what they needed to do and where they needed to go. Each of the characters feels different from the other and unique in their own right. I do think several characters were introduced too quickly, so it was a bit harder to keep track of them, but I had figured them all out by the end of the book. Otrera is a great female lead who has to stay strong in the face of pressure. She is always looking out for her new family and when the gods are not helping them out, she takes matters into her own hands.
The world we are in also feels more real to me than other greek retellings often do. The gods are not always going to be helpful so sometimes you have to do things yourself. Other gods show up throughout the book, sometimes to be helpful and sometimes to just cause trouble, which also makes sense to me as they are all powerful. I also liked the interpretations of the gods and goddesses in this book, representing what they were worshipped for and also showing off that they are all powerful and their is reason why mortals feared and loved them. The pacing in this book is also good for the most part, the last 50 pages though felt a bit rushed.
I would like to thank NetGalley and Victory Editing NetGalley Co-op for an advanced copy of Maiden of Artemis by Eloise Bahr.
The Amazons in Greek mythology have always captivated me, so getting to read a retelling of their founder, Otrera, was something I was super excited for. Maiden of Artemis is another excellent Greek myth retelling that kept me entertained the entire time with its large cast of characters and fun adventure!
Throughout most of the book, Otrera is on a journey with her friends and found family across Greece. I really liked all the characters in this book, especially Otrera, as they felt like real people who were trying to figure out what they needed to do and where they needed to go. Each of the characters feels different from the other and unique in their own right. I do think several characters were introduced too quickly, so it was a bit harder to keep track of them, but I had figured them all out by the end of the book. Otrera is a great female lead who has to stay strong in the face of pressure. She is always looking out for her new family and when the gods are not helping them out, she takes matters into her own hands.
The world we are in also feels more real to me than other greek retellings often do. The gods are not always going to be helpful so sometimes you have to do things yourself. Other gods show up throughout the book, sometimes to be helpful and sometimes to just cause trouble, which also makes sense to me as they are all powerful. I also liked the interpretations of the gods and goddesses in this book, representing what they were worshipped for and also showing off that they are all powerful and their is reason why mortals feared and loved them. The pacing in this book is also good for the most part, the last 50 pages though felt a bit rushed.
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