I don’t know why I do this to myself, reading Megan Abbott novels. The first one I read was “You Will Know Me,” and it was good enough, in terms of giving me something to read - my favorite of hers so far (although I’ve never read so much about a character’s deformed toe in my entire life). The next one I picked up was “Dare Me,” which was just awful. But I figured that one might have just been a fluke, so I went on to read “Take Me by the Hand,” (interesting in ways but ultimately a bit meh) and then “The Turnout,” which was better except for a poor ending. Then I checked this one out, Megan Abbott’s newest.
Y’all. Never, ever again.
As others have mentioned, the constant repetition was tedious. Especially towards the end of the book, it seems that Abbott indulges her penchant for repeating words simply for the purpose of making the story last longer. Jacy (ugh, that name) uses words and phrases over and over, almost obsessively, and does the same for quotes from stories or conversations that she hears. If these parts had been removed, the book would be a good bit shorter (and perhaps sound a bit less like a YA novel, which, I like a few YA novels, but only when, you know, the book actually IS a YA novel).
As for the actual story, I have issues there as well. Jacy’s entire personality was just.. her being pregnant. That’s it, that’s Jacy. That’s all you need to know. I guess there’s slightly more there, in that she has a good relationship with her mother - or is it not so good? who knows - and she is wildly in love with her husband.. when he isn’t violently assaulting her in bed and being a dick on their honeymoon.
The abuse by Jed, the husband, is never examined in any way. There’s no explanation, no resolution, nothing beyond the one or two stray memories that Jacy shares of those incidents. Similarly, it’s never revealed why Dr. Ash was insane, either. Why the creepy sexist bullshit and the “all women are worthless whores” mentality? Again, who knows.
And, since I’m from northern Michigan.. I don’t know if the author drove through the region for a single day and randomly decided to set her next novel there or what, but she got a lot of things wrong. It’s true that Iron Mountain isn’t a bustling metropolis, but if you are anywhere near that town, you definitely don’t need to make the long, long drive to Marquette for supplies of any kind. Like. Just head to Walmart, boo. Walmart is about all you’d find for shopping in Marquette as well, so idk what “supplies” they’d be hoping to get there really. And flying out of Marquette (the airport there actually isn’t even in Marquette itself, but research is hard I guess) wouldn’t necessarily be what you would do if leaving Iron Mountain, either, depending on where you’re going.
Also, little things were inaccurate, like descriptions of day trips to see sights that are nowhere near Iron Mountain, and would be long, planned out, all day affairs with a ton of driving. Miner’s Castle is not at all close to Iron Mountain, and some of the towns mentioned are definitely not in proximity to Iron Mountain either. I know, I know - Jacy is only “near” Iron Mountain. That doesn’t change anything.
Mountain lions don’t behave the way they are depicted here (CAN they? Sure, I guess. But are they LIKELY to?). I can forgive some artistic license on that front for the sake of a plot, but since this part really didn’t amount to much in the book it just kind of feels like more ignorance and stereotyping about wildlife in the Upper Peninsula. There are so many interesting species roaming those woods; Abbott could have at least picked something more common to the area, like a bear or coyote, to make this threat more believable. I know we’re supposed to connect the mountain lion and its cub to Jacy and her pregnancy somehow, but all references to that were a bit nonsensical and were kind of out of nowhere.
And let’s talk about the main demographic makeup of the region, shall we?
Guess what?
It’s Finnish. So, so many Finns. So many. Sooooo many (now who’s engaging in word repetition? Save me). And there’s even more people with German ancestry, I believe! I’m not saying there aren’t people of Cornish descent there. I’m not saying there’s no one else or that those other groups are invisible. Heck, I’m not even saying that aliens don’t come zooming out of the sky and settle their fancy UFOs to eke out a new community for themselves in between the scraggly pines deep in the Michigan forest. But I AM saying that you can’t throw a pinecone without hitting a Finlander in Iron Mountain/Marquette/Petosky/Munising/wherever Abbott thinks we are from chapter to chapter.
It’s about details. Research. Character development!
But, you know, Jacy is pregnant (in case you missed it) and her father-in-law really likes babies, so from out of the dark Michigan woods a thin plot is born (and kept on life support).
P.S. Cudighi is not pronounced “coo-dee-gee,” it would be more like “could-ih-gey” (ih kinda like if, and gey like key), and no that isn’t perfect but it’s certainly not COODEEGEE. I will not be okay unless I put this out into the universe, so there it is.