This might be 3.5 stars rounded up. While I like this series by this author, there are some good ones and some not so good ones. I had high hopes for this, bc Alexander promised to be the stereotypical BIG, QUIET, ROUGH, DEEP FEELING MAN. The type that is my very favorite of all types. The heroine Sabella (had to look her up can’t recall like 5 min after I finish reading) I didn’t have any hopes for, had an open mind.
Turns out I like Sabella better than Alexander, and that’s almost UNHEARD OF. I read romance for the MAN, not the woman. The woman has to be likable, not a detractor, not annoying, but the man has to be spectacular.
Well, Sabella was a sweetheart. With apparently the patience of a saint, the innocence of an angel and the fiery wantonness of a succubus (this part was a bit jarring, which I will explain later).
Meanwhile, Alexander is an idiot. As it relates to women and relationships. He’s literally a Neanderthal, maybe a bit worse. His logic is just so faulty, I assume he has some sort of mental disorder (he’s an inventor/ designer of sorts and brilliant in that way). So here’s why I didn’t like him much:
They fall in lust upon first sight of each other. Sabella doesn’t really dwell on it, but she does everything in her power to protect him (in one situation) and make him happy (when she was his maid). But Alexander… does he do the same? Well, yes and no. He decides - based on his own securities - that she was trying to protect her crazy, murderous brother at his expense because he’s not elite class. Then he holds a grudge against her like the pretty cheerleader who’s dating the QB and he’s the bad boy being jealous of it. Except, she’s not actually dating anyone. He just assumes she’s handing out favors Willy nilly.
Which leads to him assuming she’s a harlot. And makes him resent her more. Also gets to a tipping point where they finally get together to get it on and he rams his well-endowed tool into her virgin lady parts and realize oops, she’s in agony, and what does he do?
He keeps going! Thrust thrust thrust… can’t stop himself. His caveman instincts are triggered and he can’t help it. She’s crying at this point, in pain. And he’s ramming on…
Well, that completely lost me there. Then, unbelievably, he brings her to orgasm! It clearly writes that he’s a tight fit even with well lubricated well-used cunts, and at the moment, he was “thicker” than ever before AND she’s tighter than he’s ever had… sooo…. Do the math.
He also did something to purposely make her stay with him, which is an overused plot line so I thought nothing of it.
THEN, once she was had, she became a regular harlot just for him! They go at it 8 times a day! Not an exaggeration! And the sex description is brief, but it gets described a lot. I don’t particularly feel hot reading it. It’s not necessarily romantic or intense or emotional, none of that. Not even passionate, so much as 2 rabbits going at it.
And the climax with an external threat ended with the snap of a finger. If you flipped the page by mistake, you missed it. The ending was rushed.
Well, I guess I need to round this down. Which is a shame.