An inventive redemption tale narrated by an immortal girl from the future. The high concept premise and flashes of genuine originality are compelling, but momentum sags under long, uninterrupted stretches of narration that read more like summary than scene. I struggled to connect with the cast because the dialogue often floats without action beats or sensory grounding, leaving characters’ emotions and stakes at arm’s length. There’s real ambition here, yet the execution blunts its impact. Tightening the exposition and anchoring conversations in physical behavior and setting would help.