I've read almost every Lisa Stone thriller books apart from one of them, so I was eagerly awaiting the release of this book.
I found the story quite interesting, particularly from the get go, but it certainly lost its way and is so far a book that I can say is worth skipping.
My main gripes with this book:
- Parents often making terrible decisions, where you almost shout at Alfie as to why he makes certain decisions, Alfie clearly isn't portrayed to be smart considering there is a failed business to his name & bought the camera in the first place, tried contacting 'Carl' and ended up losing £5000 for it, for which, the real culprits didn't face any consequences for other than to do chores.. which is pretty patehtic.
- There had been quite poor character development, I couldn't tell you a single thing about Emma Arnold, and Carl either outside of looking after his nan. Certainly not to the point of being involved in the last part of the story.
- Realistically, how did a 13 and 15 year old drug their dad and carry him from his bed down stairs and out the house when their dad Alfie was limp, I can tell you for sure, it's impossible to do this quietly to raise suspicion to Jenny who's basically sat in the room next door, especially considering Jenny is the smarter one.
- It's one thing to have Emma held in a room against her will.. which she also forgets about, it's another to go back to the well again drug your dad and hold him captive in the save room, and for what? points? points for what? there's no information on what these points matter to anyone, you don't get anything the points don't mean anything, so why would these four people be involved in this? And on top of that, never get mentioned again.
You don't kidnap your dad for a few days in a chapter and to not have it brought up again.
The ending scenario could've been so much more creative, maybe the the DCs would find Alfie at the house instead to catch the culprits that way instead of basically pretending it didn't happen.
You also finished the book with saying how Emma moved away, no ones heard from Carl, so why have they re united right at the end to stay in this rental room again, how did they know there was a camera? Seems to be a cop out & uncreative ending, which can be said for a lot of the book..
The only reason it's not a one star was because I still enjoyed the beggining and some of the middle of the book, but left with a bitter taste.