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A Golden Opportunity: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
He would change for the better because it was the honourable thing to do and just perhaps the woman he loved would grow to think better of him.
Fitzwilliam Darcy longs to escape Rosings Park following his failed proposal of marriage to Miss Elizabeth Bennet. Alas it cannot be; both he and Elizabeth having been required to remain for an additional ten days for a private ball in celebration of the birthday of Miss Anne de Bourgh.
As the days progress, Darcy finds himself increasingly alarmed by the strange happenings that he sees, and that Lady Catherine reports, in Kent. His cousin, Miss Anne de Bourgh has thrown off the meekness and ennui of her earlier years. Displaying unprecedented liveliness and rebellion, she has been visiting the master gardener’s cottage, claiming she merely seeks his advice about her herbarium, but both Lady Catherine and Darcy suspect something more scandalous is afoot. To add to this, there seems to be some sort of thievery or vandalism occurring in the house, with precious items being pilfered or damaged. Darcy’s days are further complicated when he realizes that he may have a rival for Elizabeth’s affection, a young gentleman who is the owner of an estate near to Rosings.
There seems to be a potential scandal or heartache everywhere Darcy turns, but somewhere in midst of it all springs some hope. Can he and Elizabeth untangle all their misunderstandings or will some sort of disaster be their unravelling?
A GOLDEN OPPORTUNITY is a novella length variation of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice.
Fitzwilliam Darcy longs to escape Rosings Park following his failed proposal of marriage to Miss Elizabeth Bennet. Alas it cannot be; both he and Elizabeth having been required to remain for an additional ten days for a private ball in celebration of the birthday of Miss Anne de Bourgh.
As the days progress, Darcy finds himself increasingly alarmed by the strange happenings that he sees, and that Lady Catherine reports, in Kent. His cousin, Miss Anne de Bourgh has thrown off the meekness and ennui of her earlier years. Displaying unprecedented liveliness and rebellion, she has been visiting the master gardener’s cottage, claiming she merely seeks his advice about her herbarium, but both Lady Catherine and Darcy suspect something more scandalous is afoot. To add to this, there seems to be some sort of thievery or vandalism occurring in the house, with precious items being pilfered or damaged. Darcy’s days are further complicated when he realizes that he may have a rival for Elizabeth’s affection, a young gentleman who is the owner of an estate near to Rosings.
There seems to be a potential scandal or heartache everywhere Darcy turns, but somewhere in midst of it all springs some hope. Can he and Elizabeth untangle all their misunderstandings or will some sort of disaster be their unravelling?
A GOLDEN OPPORTUNITY is a novella length variation of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice.
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Published February 19, 2024
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J. Marie Croft
15 books37 followersJ. Marie Croft (Joanne) is a life-long resident of Nova Scotia, Canada, but spends a lot of time in Regency England with Jane Austen's beloved characters. She has written a dozen Austenesque stories: three novels, three novellas, and six short stories for anthologies. Joanne shares with her husband a love of their adult twin daughters, a spoiled calico cat, the great outdoors, geocaching, and British crime dramas.
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November 26, 2024
Anne is up to mischief.
4.5* rounded up
Darcy has just been refused by Elizabeth and wants to leave Rosings, as Colonel Fitzwilliam has just done, but Anne’s coming of age ball is about to take place and she and Lady Catherine insist he remain to attend. Elizabeth is scheduled to leave Hunsford two days prior to the ball, but Lady Catherine’s presumptuous actions practically force her to remain and attend also. She receives Lady Catherine’s command as Darcy’s letter is burning a hole in her pocket.
Darcy has written his letter to Elizabeth and, although written in a bitterness of spirit, hopes it will somehow soften her feelings towards him. Taking advantage of the time before the ball is to take place, he decides to woo her properly, and woo her certainly does!
Meanwhile, Anne has decided to take control of her life once she turns one and twenty, and plans to make her desires known during the ball. Meanwhile, things are disappearing at Rosings and thievery is suspected.
Beautifully written, I especially loved Darcy’s second proposal—lovely prose that is very sweet and swoon worthy. I found this to be a very engaging quick read with a touch of mystery surrounding a determined heiress, and a suitor never giving up on winning his only love’s affection.
Recommend
Kisses only.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library.
4.5* rounded up
Darcy has just been refused by Elizabeth and wants to leave Rosings, as Colonel Fitzwilliam has just done, but Anne’s coming of age ball is about to take place and she and Lady Catherine insist he remain to attend. Elizabeth is scheduled to leave Hunsford two days prior to the ball, but Lady Catherine’s presumptuous actions practically force her to remain and attend also. She receives Lady Catherine’s command as Darcy’s letter is burning a hole in her pocket.
Darcy has written his letter to Elizabeth and, although written in a bitterness of spirit, hopes it will somehow soften her feelings towards him. Taking advantage of the time before the ball is to take place, he decides to woo her properly, and woo her certainly does!
Meanwhile, Anne has decided to take control of her life once she turns one and twenty, and plans to make her desires known during the ball. Meanwhile, things are disappearing at Rosings and thievery is suspected.
Beautifully written, I especially loved Darcy’s second proposal—lovely prose that is very sweet and swoon worthy. I found this to be a very engaging quick read with a touch of mystery surrounding a determined heiress, and a suitor never giving up on winning his only love’s affection.
Recommend
Kisses only.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library.
January 22, 2024
“Nobly suffering in silence it will be then…No one else must ever know of my vain attempt. Except her, of course.” (quote from the book)
The first sentence in the book description tells it best…” He would change for the better because it was the honourable thing to do and just perhaps the woman he loved would grow to think better of him.” I do appreciate reading a variation that doesn’t include the scene of the Hunsford proposal. No matter how many times I read it or watch it, I always experience such angst for both Elizabeth and Darcy. Fortunately, this variation starts the day after. Colonel Fitzwilliam has received orders from his commander and must leave Rosings Park. Darcy is left alone to deal with his inner turmoil, his aunt, Lady Catherine, some strange thievery within Rosings and a very lively Anne de Bourgh who is looking forward to her coming out ball, which Darcy must stay to attend.
“For an instant, Elizabeth felt like the most selfish, ungrateful daughter on the face of the earth, but she refused to be sacrificed on the altar of her mother’s ambitions.” (quote from the book)
Elizabeth, in the meantime, has been asked to stay for the ball as well. She declines until Lady Catherine interferes most officiously. She is not pleased as she must now deal with Mr. Darcy. Once she has read ‘the letter’ all manner of feelings assails her. I must say, I thoroughly enjoyed the level of communication that soon arises after this.
“At the heart of the matter, there was a world out there which Anne very much longed to explore and experience.” (quote from the book)
But this story is not just centred on Elizabeth and Darcy. We get to see the development of Anne de Bourgh’s character and what a character she was! Along with Anne, I learned a unique bit of history.
This is a delightful story with a bit of mystery. I did find the pace a bit slow to start, but I enjoyed seeing Mr. Darcy properly woo Miss Elizabeth Bennet.
I recommend this new variation from Ms. Croft. I also think the cover of this is gorgeous!
I received a copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving my review.
January 12, 2024
A delightful story, flavored with wooing and mystery...
Starts a bit slow so it takes time to get into. From the very beginning we become acquainted with Anne's state of mind and of secret intrigues afoot.
We are also made aware of Darcy's failed marriage proposal, just the night before.
The story revolves around Elizabeth staying on for Anne's 21st, coming of age ball (yes, she is a little younger here). Which is perfect, because it gives Darcy time to change Elizabeth's mind about him. It also gives Anne time to lay more details for her secret plot.
I loved the writing and the layers subtly set down, as we slowly get more and more information of the mystery surrounding Anne and Rosins Park.
Throughout it all, Darcy makes a real wooing effort towards Elizabeth and it's Mmmm, adorable!
An enjoyable read (even if I did want to shut Lady C up more than once).
It was nice not knowing where the action was going, as the author cleverly kept us guessing.
Very entertaining!
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Starts a bit slow so it takes time to get into. From the very beginning we become acquainted with Anne's state of mind and of secret intrigues afoot.
We are also made aware of Darcy's failed marriage proposal, just the night before.
The story revolves around Elizabeth staying on for Anne's 21st, coming of age ball (yes, she is a little younger here). Which is perfect, because it gives Darcy time to change Elizabeth's mind about him. It also gives Anne time to lay more details for her secret plot.
I loved the writing and the layers subtly set down, as we slowly get more and more information of the mystery surrounding Anne and Rosins Park.
Throughout it all, Darcy makes a real wooing effort towards Elizabeth and it's Mmmm, adorable!
An enjoyable read (even if I did want to shut Lady C up more than once).
It was nice not knowing where the action was going, as the author cleverly kept us guessing.
Very entertaining!
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
February 19, 2024
“Turn your obstacles into opportunities and your problems into possibilities.” –Roy T. Bennette, The Light in the Heart
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: mature teen: adult themes discussed: references to m/m love
>>Angst Level: slight
>>Source: I received a free copy via Booksprout 1-11-24 and I’m leaving a review of my thoughts and opinions. Prologue + 19 chapters + Epilogue
>>Timeline: post-Disastrous Hunsford Proposal [DHP]. Darcy just wanted to skip out of Kent but circumstances prevented his leaving.
What’s up with Anne? What was she about? Things were happening at Kent and Anne was acting strangely. She was approaching her 21st birthday and Darcy could feel that her celebration ball was going to be full of surprises. Lady Catherine would not be pleased.
“The only time you fail is when you fall down and stay down.” –Stephen Richards, Cosmic Ordering: You can be successful
Elizabeth Bennet wanted to go home. She had received a second proposal in her life that closely mirrored the one from Mr. Collins. Mr. Darcy was a man who confused her from their first encounter. And yet, she found him intriguing. After he handed her his letter, her attitude changed completely. Lady Catherine ensured that Miss Elizabeth would be in Kent for her daughter’s birthday ball. Yes, there would be a lot, a lot of surprises on that auspicious day. However, the story ended abruptly and suddenly we had the epilogue. It did bring the reader up to date on what happened that night.
“It is not time or opportunity that is to determine intimacy; --it is disposition alone. Seven years would be insufficient to make some people acquainted with each other, and seven days are more than enough for others.” –Jane Austen: Sense and Sensibility
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: mature teen: adult themes discussed: references to m/m love
>>Angst Level: slight
>>Source: I received a free copy via Booksprout 1-11-24 and I’m leaving a review of my thoughts and opinions. Prologue + 19 chapters + Epilogue
>>Timeline: post-Disastrous Hunsford Proposal [DHP]. Darcy just wanted to skip out of Kent but circumstances prevented his leaving.
What’s up with Anne? What was she about? Things were happening at Kent and Anne was acting strangely. She was approaching her 21st birthday and Darcy could feel that her celebration ball was going to be full of surprises. Lady Catherine would not be pleased.
“The only time you fail is when you fall down and stay down.” –Stephen Richards, Cosmic Ordering: You can be successful
Elizabeth Bennet wanted to go home. She had received a second proposal in her life that closely mirrored the one from Mr. Collins. Mr. Darcy was a man who confused her from their first encounter. And yet, she found him intriguing. After he handed her his letter, her attitude changed completely. Lady Catherine ensured that Miss Elizabeth would be in Kent for her daughter’s birthday ball. Yes, there would be a lot, a lot of surprises on that auspicious day. However, the story ended abruptly and suddenly we had the epilogue. It did bring the reader up to date on what happened that night.
“It is not time or opportunity that is to determine intimacy; --it is disposition alone. Seven years would be insufficient to make some people acquainted with each other, and seven days are more than enough for others.” –Jane Austen: Sense and Sensibility
February 8, 2024
This entertaining, low-angst Pride and Prejudice variation occurs almost exclusively at Kent, and it's as much about Anne de Bourgh as it is about Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy. The backstory matches canon up to and including the spurned marriage proposal at Hunsford. Chapter One picks things up there, showing Darcy writing his letter, seeking Elizabeth, and delivering it to her.
What follows is decidedly different. Lady Catherine is preparing to host a grand ball to celebrate Anne's coming of age in ten days. Much as Darcy would prefer to lick his emotional wounds elsewhere, his sense of duty to his cousin forces him to remain, even though that means submitting himself to his aunt's increased pressure over marrying Anne. Lady Catherine, insisting that Miss Bennet must attend, writes Mrs. Bennet herself and receives the answer approving Elizabeth's extended stay, making Elizabeth's own desire to leave irrelevant. These circumstances make it impossible for Darcy and Elizabeth to avoid each other.
But there's much more than a ball brewing at Rosings. For one thing, the reader learns from the onset that Anne de Bourgh is not the sickly, weak-willed creature she appears to be. Like Lady Catherine, Anne anticipates her birthday ball with great excitement, but it's obvious that her reasons are completely different. Her phaeton provides her with a bit of freedom, and she may be dallying with the Scottish gardener, Iain Gilchrist. Or maybe she's having a fling with Rosing's disreputable neighbor (by Lady Catherine's standards), Laurence Brinton. Even though the book includes chapters that follow Anne's point of view, they offer only bits and pieces about what she's up to. She befriends Elizabeth, having recognized Darcy's interest in the lady but not knowing more than that.
Another development is that gold and silver articles keep disappearing from Rosings. Darcy interrogates the servants, but no likely suspects emerge. However, despite being unable to track down the thief, Lady Catherine's belief that his engagement to Anne will be announced during the ball, and Anne's odd behavior, Darcy finds his frustrations lessen considerably once he and Elizabeth get past their uneasiness around each other.
The result is a light-hearted romance mixed with mystery. The ballroom scene really amps up the dramatic tension when Elizabeth becomes the center of unwanted attention. Interestingly, although the book proper ends with Darcy and Elizabeth's story nicely resolved, it's not until the Epilogue, set several years later, that the reader gets to understand what Anne truly planned and how successful she was. Some may wish the HEA had extended longer, but I thought it was brilliant!
The writing is engaging and clever. The point of view shifts among Anne, Darcy, and Elizabeth, displaying their distinct personalities and drawing the reader to care about what happens to each of them. Many lovely scenes between Darcy and Elizabeth build their understanding of and attraction to each other. Ms. Croft is a master at infusing humor without cheapening the underlying story, as she proves again here.
Content is very suggestive and contains premarital sex but does not go into descriptive detail.
I received a free copy of this book via BookSprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
What follows is decidedly different. Lady Catherine is preparing to host a grand ball to celebrate Anne's coming of age in ten days. Much as Darcy would prefer to lick his emotional wounds elsewhere, his sense of duty to his cousin forces him to remain, even though that means submitting himself to his aunt's increased pressure over marrying Anne. Lady Catherine, insisting that Miss Bennet must attend, writes Mrs. Bennet herself and receives the answer approving Elizabeth's extended stay, making Elizabeth's own desire to leave irrelevant. These circumstances make it impossible for Darcy and Elizabeth to avoid each other.
But there's much more than a ball brewing at Rosings. For one thing, the reader learns from the onset that Anne de Bourgh is not the sickly, weak-willed creature she appears to be. Like Lady Catherine, Anne anticipates her birthday ball with great excitement, but it's obvious that her reasons are completely different. Her phaeton provides her with a bit of freedom, and she may be dallying with the Scottish gardener, Iain Gilchrist. Or maybe she's having a fling with Rosing's disreputable neighbor (by Lady Catherine's standards), Laurence Brinton. Even though the book includes chapters that follow Anne's point of view, they offer only bits and pieces about what she's up to. She befriends Elizabeth, having recognized Darcy's interest in the lady but not knowing more than that.
Another development is that gold and silver articles keep disappearing from Rosings. Darcy interrogates the servants, but no likely suspects emerge. However, despite being unable to track down the thief, Lady Catherine's belief that his engagement to Anne will be announced during the ball, and Anne's odd behavior, Darcy finds his frustrations lessen considerably once he and Elizabeth get past their uneasiness around each other.
The result is a light-hearted romance mixed with mystery. The ballroom scene really amps up the dramatic tension when Elizabeth becomes the center of unwanted attention. Interestingly, although the book proper ends with Darcy and Elizabeth's story nicely resolved, it's not until the Epilogue, set several years later, that the reader gets to understand what Anne truly planned and how successful she was. Some may wish the HEA had extended longer, but I thought it was brilliant!
The writing is engaging and clever. The point of view shifts among Anne, Darcy, and Elizabeth, displaying their distinct personalities and drawing the reader to care about what happens to each of them. Many lovely scenes between Darcy and Elizabeth build their understanding of and attraction to each other. Ms. Croft is a master at infusing humor without cheapening the underlying story, as she proves again here.
Content is very suggestive and contains premarital sex but does not go into descriptive detail.
I received a free copy of this book via BookSprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
August 17, 2024
Elizabeth and Darcy remain in close proximity after the disastrous proposal. Anne de Bourgh has a feisty side and plays a much bigger role. Colonel Fitzwilliam leaves Darcy to handle it all.
February 25, 2024
Most of this story occurs at Rosings in Kent. Darcy has proposed and been denied.
Both he and Elizabeth have plans to leave. However, Anne is to have a ball celebrating her coming-of-age. Darcy now feels obligated to stay; while Lady Catherine writes to Mrs. Bennet to arrange for Elizabeth to also stay. So it is that Darcy how has time to properly woo Elizabeth. He does give her that letter, which helps to change her attitude towards Darcy.
There is a mystery in this story, having to do with Anne and outings she takes. The blurb hints at a possible attachment with the master gardener, however we also learn that she visits a nearby estate, Rara Avis,where resides a different gentleman. The Anne of this variation has more pluck than the one from canon and surprises us with her devious plans for her own future. We also read of some pilfering going on...another mystery?!
There is an epilogue which has the Darcys with four children and also gives us some answers about Anne's life.
We only hear a few mentions of other people from canon.
Both he and Elizabeth have plans to leave. However, Anne is to have a ball celebrating her coming-of-age. Darcy now feels obligated to stay; while Lady Catherine writes to Mrs. Bennet to arrange for Elizabeth to also stay. So it is that Darcy how has time to properly woo Elizabeth. He does give her that letter, which helps to change her attitude towards Darcy.
There is a mystery in this story, having to do with Anne and outings she takes. The blurb hints at a possible attachment with the master gardener, however we also learn that she visits a nearby estate, Rara Avis,where resides a different gentleman. The Anne of this variation has more pluck than the one from canon and surprises us with her devious plans for her own future. We also read of some pilfering going on...another mystery?!
There is an epilogue which has the Darcys with four children and also gives us some answers about Anne's life.
We only hear a few mentions of other people from canon.
July 30, 2024
Unique as always.
Yes, I loved it. Croft delivers the great writing that makes me anticipate the next story greedily, wanting more more more of her unique plots. Sad, mysterious, humorous, yearningly romantic, twisting, etc.
A birthday ball requires both Elizabeth and Darcy to stay in Kent after the disastrous Hunsford proposal, giving both to see each other and themselves in a different light. It provides a week of opportunity to change the fate that proposal created.
In the meantime all sorts of interesting small and large ‘happenings’ are occurring around Rosings mostly involving Anne de Bourgh. What is she up to? She befriends Elizabeth needing her friendship even more. But she’s involving her in her ultimate plans for which Elizabeth is not sure she wants to be involved, especially since she’s not privy to the whole picture.
The budding relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth is lovely.
The events at the ball were not completely unexpected by the reader because we know more details than Our Dear Couple, the climax is still very satisfying all around.
The epilogue was sweet, and very satisfying as to everyone’s happily ever after. Highly recommended.
Yes, I loved it. Croft delivers the great writing that makes me anticipate the next story greedily, wanting more more more of her unique plots. Sad, mysterious, humorous, yearningly romantic, twisting, etc.
A birthday ball requires both Elizabeth and Darcy to stay in Kent after the disastrous Hunsford proposal, giving both to see each other and themselves in a different light. It provides a week of opportunity to change the fate that proposal created.
In the meantime all sorts of interesting small and large ‘happenings’ are occurring around Rosings mostly involving Anne de Bourgh. What is she up to? She befriends Elizabeth needing her friendship even more. But she’s involving her in her ultimate plans for which Elizabeth is not sure she wants to be involved, especially since she’s not privy to the whole picture.
The budding relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth is lovely.
The events at the ball were not completely unexpected by the reader because we know more details than Our Dear Couple, the climax is still very satisfying all around.
The epilogue was sweet, and very satisfying as to everyone’s happily ever after. Highly recommended.
February 20, 2024
4,5 Rounded up to 5
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A Golden Opportunity is a P&P variation that starts after the Hunsford proposal and in which Elizabeth and Darcy are required to extend their stay in Kent to attend a ball honoring Miss Anne de Bourgh’s birthday. As they are forced to spend more time together, their encounters become less awkward and Elizabeth gets a chance to review her opinion of Darcy. Their relationship evolves into one of companionship and complicity in a book filled with mystery and mischief.
I enjoyed the premise of this book because my favorite deviation point in the story is the Hunsford proposal. I believe that by then Elizabeth had already developed feelings for Darcy, so I enjoyed seeing their interactions in this book, especially when they witness the sunrise together. At that point in the story their complicity and love are evident and I only wish we had more scenes like that in the book.
Although I liked Darcy and Elizabeth’s relationship in this novel, Anne de Bourgh was clearly the highlight of this book for me. I loved her character, her weirdness, her secrets and her relationships with both Darcy and Elizabeth, but especially with the original characters Dubois, Gilchrist and Brinton. I would have loved the book even more if I had felt a true and magical friendship between all these characters, but unfortunately being this a novella length story, and focusing also on Elizabeth and Darcy’s relationship it was not possible to have more development in that quarter. I did however love the ending when everything is explained to the readers and when Anne’s life options are clarified. I love it when characters are truly different and choose to have a life that will bring them happiness instead of a life that society imposes. I am happy this was what Anne choose to herself, and wish more books would develop this idea and transposed it to Elizabeth and Darcy.
A Golden Opportunity is entertaining, lighthearted and has a well-balanced pace, making it perfect for a weekend reading. I recommend this book to readers who enjoy seeing Anne de Bourgh take control of her life while helping Darcy and Elizabeth achieve their HAE.
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A Golden Opportunity is a P&P variation that starts after the Hunsford proposal and in which Elizabeth and Darcy are required to extend their stay in Kent to attend a ball honoring Miss Anne de Bourgh’s birthday. As they are forced to spend more time together, their encounters become less awkward and Elizabeth gets a chance to review her opinion of Darcy. Their relationship evolves into one of companionship and complicity in a book filled with mystery and mischief.
I enjoyed the premise of this book because my favorite deviation point in the story is the Hunsford proposal. I believe that by then Elizabeth had already developed feelings for Darcy, so I enjoyed seeing their interactions in this book, especially when they witness the sunrise together. At that point in the story their complicity and love are evident and I only wish we had more scenes like that in the book.
Although I liked Darcy and Elizabeth’s relationship in this novel, Anne de Bourgh was clearly the highlight of this book for me. I loved her character, her weirdness, her secrets and her relationships with both Darcy and Elizabeth, but especially with the original characters Dubois, Gilchrist and Brinton. I would have loved the book even more if I had felt a true and magical friendship between all these characters, but unfortunately being this a novella length story, and focusing also on Elizabeth and Darcy’s relationship it was not possible to have more development in that quarter. I did however love the ending when everything is explained to the readers and when Anne’s life options are clarified. I love it when characters are truly different and choose to have a life that will bring them happiness instead of a life that society imposes. I am happy this was what Anne choose to herself, and wish more books would develop this idea and transposed it to Elizabeth and Darcy.
A Golden Opportunity is entertaining, lighthearted and has a well-balanced pace, making it perfect for a weekend reading. I recommend this book to readers who enjoy seeing Anne de Bourgh take control of her life while helping Darcy and Elizabeth achieve their HAE.
January 13, 2025
Status: Read January 10-13, 2025 via kindle edition & audible edition of Mr Darcy's Second Chance: A Pride & Prejudice Variation Trilogy
Rating: ⭐⭐ = it was ok
My Library Notes:
A Golden Opportunity: A Pride & Prejudice Variation
by J. Marie Croft
Kindle Edition, 182 pages
Published February 19, 2024 by Quills & Quartos Publishing
(first published January 18, 2024)
ASIN: B0CPDRCWHL
He would change for the better because it was the honourable thing to do and just perhaps the woman he loved would grow to think better of him.
Fitzwilliam Darcy longs to escape Rosings Park following his failed proposal of marriage to Miss Elizabeth Bennet. Alas it cannot be; both he and Elizabeth having been required to remain for an additional ten days for a private ball in celebration of the birthday of Miss Anne de Bourgh.
As the days progress, Darcy finds himself increasingly alarmed by the strange happenings that he sees, and that Lady Catherine reports, in Kent. His cousin, Miss Anne de Bourgh has thrown off the meekness and ennui of her earlier years. Displaying unprecedented liveliness and rebellion, she has been visiting the master gardener’s cottage, claiming she merely seeks his advice about her herbarium, but both Lady Catherine and Darcy suspect something more scandalous is afoot. To add to this, there seems to be some sort of thievery or vandalism occurring in the house, with precious items being pilfered or damaged. Darcy’s days are further complicated when he realizes that he may have a rival for Elizabeth’s affection, a young gentleman who is the owner of an estate near to Rosings.
There seems to be a potential scandal or heartache everywhere Darcy turns, but somewhere in midst of it all springs some hope. Can he and Elizabeth untangle all their misunderstandings or will some sort of disaster be their unravelling?
Rating: ⭐⭐ = it was ok
My Library Notes:
A Golden Opportunity: A Pride & Prejudice Variation
by J. Marie Croft
Kindle Edition, 182 pages
Published February 19, 2024 by Quills & Quartos Publishing
(first published January 18, 2024)
ASIN: B0CPDRCWHL
He would change for the better because it was the honourable thing to do and just perhaps the woman he loved would grow to think better of him.
Fitzwilliam Darcy longs to escape Rosings Park following his failed proposal of marriage to Miss Elizabeth Bennet. Alas it cannot be; both he and Elizabeth having been required to remain for an additional ten days for a private ball in celebration of the birthday of Miss Anne de Bourgh.
As the days progress, Darcy finds himself increasingly alarmed by the strange happenings that he sees, and that Lady Catherine reports, in Kent. His cousin, Miss Anne de Bourgh has thrown off the meekness and ennui of her earlier years. Displaying unprecedented liveliness and rebellion, she has been visiting the master gardener’s cottage, claiming she merely seeks his advice about her herbarium, but both Lady Catherine and Darcy suspect something more scandalous is afoot. To add to this, there seems to be some sort of thievery or vandalism occurring in the house, with precious items being pilfered or damaged. Darcy’s days are further complicated when he realizes that he may have a rival for Elizabeth’s affection, a young gentleman who is the owner of an estate near to Rosings.
There seems to be a potential scandal or heartache everywhere Darcy turns, but somewhere in midst of it all springs some hope. Can he and Elizabeth untangle all their misunderstandings or will some sort of disaster be their unravelling?
February 21, 2024
A light frolic
A little mystery stretches out as we watch Darcy try to change Elizabeth's mind immediately following his horrible Hunsford proposal. Lizzy and Darcy are forced to stay a few extra days at Rosings in order to attend Anne's birthday celebration, while Anne herself is involved in romantic plots with a handsome neighbor, an interesting Master Gardener, and a few other non-canon characters. Low angst, sweet romance, and light reading.
A little mystery stretches out as we watch Darcy try to change Elizabeth's mind immediately following his horrible Hunsford proposal. Lizzy and Darcy are forced to stay a few extra days at Rosings in order to attend Anne's birthday celebration, while Anne herself is involved in romantic plots with a handsome neighbor, an interesting Master Gardener, and a few other non-canon characters. Low angst, sweet romance, and light reading.
March 2, 2024
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After his failed proposal to Elizabeth Bennet, all Fitzwilliam Darcy wants is to put some distance between them.
Unfortunately, they both find themselves obliged to stay in Kent, to attend the birthday ball of Anne de Bourgh.
Further vexation comes from having to deal with a rash of peculiar thefts and vandalism.
And what on earth has got into his quiet, downtrodden, sickly cousin Anne?
Suddenly, she is flitting around the neighborhood in her phaeton, consorting with the head gardener and very possibly a local landowner of dubious reputation.
This is an interesting variation, I couldn't quite see where the background story was heading.
Set immediately after the Hunsford proposal, it starts with angst and distress. However, being forced to spend time together, allows Darcy and Elizabeth to gradually come to understand and appreciate each other.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...
After his failed proposal to Elizabeth Bennet, all Fitzwilliam Darcy wants is to put some distance between them.
Unfortunately, they both find themselves obliged to stay in Kent, to attend the birthday ball of Anne de Bourgh.
Further vexation comes from having to deal with a rash of peculiar thefts and vandalism.
And what on earth has got into his quiet, downtrodden, sickly cousin Anne?
Suddenly, she is flitting around the neighborhood in her phaeton, consorting with the head gardener and very possibly a local landowner of dubious reputation.
This is an interesting variation, I couldn't quite see where the background story was heading.
Set immediately after the Hunsford proposal, it starts with angst and distress. However, being forced to spend time together, allows Darcy and Elizabeth to gradually come to understand and appreciate each other.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
March 2, 2025
What If Anne de Bourgh Had Big Plans for Her 21st Birthday?
Rating: 3.5 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Publisher
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation Novella
THE PREMISE: Anne de Bourgh is celebrating her 21st birthday eleven days after Mr. Darcy’s ill-fated proposal to Elizabeth Bennet. Of course Lady Catherine expects him to attend, and what’s more, she high-handedly arranges it so Elizabeth can extend her stay at Hunsford and be a guest as well. How will these two share such a close proximity after the awkwardness of Elizabeth’s vehement refusal?
MY THOUGHTS: This story has an inventive and diverting premise that centers a lot upon Anne de Bourgh. She has some unique interests, has developed some unorthodox friendships, and has more strength of character than Lady Catherine realizes. And with her big day coming soon, Anne has made some grand and life-changing plans and employs some sneaky schemes to see them through.
I love seeing Anne in the spotlight – especially when we can witness her become something more or find her way out from her mother’s domineering control. This story introduced some new interesting and original characters: Dubois – Anne’s loyal and talented French lady’s maid, Gilchrist, Rosings’ handsome and sometimes insolent Scottish gardener, and Mr. Brinton, the well-traveled owner and passionate artist that lives in the nearby estate – Rara Avis. I enjoyed the new dynamics and relationships these characters brought to this story and the inhabitants of Rosings.
And as for Darcy and Elizabeth, these extra eleven days together gave them a second chance. After reading Mr. Darcy’s letter, Elizabeth began her journey of understanding Mr. Darcy better. And Mr. Darcy made sure not to waste this “golden” opportunity. He bares his soul and hopes to improve Elizabeth’s opinion of him with sincere apologies and frank conversations. I always love seeing Mr. Darcy openly in love – especially in a situation like this when he puts all his cards on the table. It is endearing to see him speak from his heart with unabashed honesty (unlike the Hunsford proposal where he mostly speaks from his head) and I love seeing him continuously express such affection and ardency towards Elizabeth.
With two featured story arcs taking place simultaneously it means there is a lot packed into this novella. And I found myself needing and wanting more time and development. J. Marie Croft created such an interesting group of characters – ones that were unconventional and intriguing. I wish we had more time with them to learn about their history and the formation of their relationships together. And while I love that Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth came to understand each other better, it did feel to be an abrupt change given that they only had a few more private conversations that were often interrupted by Lady Catherine or Anne. In addition, some aspects – especially when the mystery was introduced – started to feel a little disjointed. Overall, I think all these plot ideas are interesting and worthy, but perhaps more time was needed to flesh them out and unite them more. Especially the story’s big conclusion, which was summarized in an epilogue instead of the action taking place on page.
FINAL THOUGHTS:
⚜️ No gilding required – this Anne de Bourgh is spirited, strong-willed, and fascinating.
🏆 Seizing the chance to win Elizabeth’s heart, Mr. Darcy goes for the gold!
🌟 This gorgeous cover definitely deserves a gold star!
Austenesque Reviews
Rating: 3.5 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Publisher
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation Novella
THE PREMISE: Anne de Bourgh is celebrating her 21st birthday eleven days after Mr. Darcy’s ill-fated proposal to Elizabeth Bennet. Of course Lady Catherine expects him to attend, and what’s more, she high-handedly arranges it so Elizabeth can extend her stay at Hunsford and be a guest as well. How will these two share such a close proximity after the awkwardness of Elizabeth’s vehement refusal?
MY THOUGHTS: This story has an inventive and diverting premise that centers a lot upon Anne de Bourgh. She has some unique interests, has developed some unorthodox friendships, and has more strength of character than Lady Catherine realizes. And with her big day coming soon, Anne has made some grand and life-changing plans and employs some sneaky schemes to see them through.
I love seeing Anne in the spotlight – especially when we can witness her become something more or find her way out from her mother’s domineering control. This story introduced some new interesting and original characters: Dubois – Anne’s loyal and talented French lady’s maid, Gilchrist, Rosings’ handsome and sometimes insolent Scottish gardener, and Mr. Brinton, the well-traveled owner and passionate artist that lives in the nearby estate – Rara Avis. I enjoyed the new dynamics and relationships these characters brought to this story and the inhabitants of Rosings.
And as for Darcy and Elizabeth, these extra eleven days together gave them a second chance. After reading Mr. Darcy’s letter, Elizabeth began her journey of understanding Mr. Darcy better. And Mr. Darcy made sure not to waste this “golden” opportunity. He bares his soul and hopes to improve Elizabeth’s opinion of him with sincere apologies and frank conversations. I always love seeing Mr. Darcy openly in love – especially in a situation like this when he puts all his cards on the table. It is endearing to see him speak from his heart with unabashed honesty (unlike the Hunsford proposal where he mostly speaks from his head) and I love seeing him continuously express such affection and ardency towards Elizabeth.
With two featured story arcs taking place simultaneously it means there is a lot packed into this novella. And I found myself needing and wanting more time and development. J. Marie Croft created such an interesting group of characters – ones that were unconventional and intriguing. I wish we had more time with them to learn about their history and the formation of their relationships together. And while I love that Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth came to understand each other better, it did feel to be an abrupt change given that they only had a few more private conversations that were often interrupted by Lady Catherine or Anne. In addition, some aspects – especially when the mystery was introduced – started to feel a little disjointed. Overall, I think all these plot ideas are interesting and worthy, but perhaps more time was needed to flesh them out and unite them more. Especially the story’s big conclusion, which was summarized in an epilogue instead of the action taking place on page.
FINAL THOUGHTS:
⚜️ No gilding required – this Anne de Bourgh is spirited, strong-willed, and fascinating.
🏆 Seizing the chance to win Elizabeth’s heart, Mr. Darcy goes for the gold!
🌟 This gorgeous cover definitely deserves a gold star!
Austenesque Reviews
January 22, 2024
This new Pride and Prejudice novella by J Marie Croft is my first time reading a variation by this author. I really enjoyed this quick, fun and sweet variation on the classic.
In A Golden Opportunity, readers to get a chance to see what could have happened if Darcy and Elizabeth had been forced to remain in each other's company in Kent after Darcy's disastrous proposal. I loved being able to see how much quicker Darcy and Elizabeth could have resolved their misunderstandings and prejudices if they had just had the opportunity to do so. After getting past his initial heartache and hurt at Elizabeth's rejection, it was so endearing to see Darcy decide that he must improve who he is as he puts all he has into wooing Elizabeth properly.
I particularly enjoyed how Croft wove in the parallel story of Anne De Bourgh, who can no longer stand to be under the thumb of her mother and with her 21st birthday imminently approaching, has plans for how she wants to live her life and who she wants to live it with. Anne is a character that we don't get to know much about in Austen's original and I loved how Croft brought her to life. The exchanges between Anne and Darcy are particularly humorous, as the cousins argue like brother and sister.
Croft stayed true to those qualities of Elizabeth and Darcy that we all know and love. Since this was a novella length story, I read this in one afternoon and really appreciated the light hearted take on Darcy and Elizabeth's story without some of the more painful parts of their journey, though of course I will always love Jane's original. I look forward to reading more Austenesque stories from this author.
In A Golden Opportunity, readers to get a chance to see what could have happened if Darcy and Elizabeth had been forced to remain in each other's company in Kent after Darcy's disastrous proposal. I loved being able to see how much quicker Darcy and Elizabeth could have resolved their misunderstandings and prejudices if they had just had the opportunity to do so. After getting past his initial heartache and hurt at Elizabeth's rejection, it was so endearing to see Darcy decide that he must improve who he is as he puts all he has into wooing Elizabeth properly.
I particularly enjoyed how Croft wove in the parallel story of Anne De Bourgh, who can no longer stand to be under the thumb of her mother and with her 21st birthday imminently approaching, has plans for how she wants to live her life and who she wants to live it with. Anne is a character that we don't get to know much about in Austen's original and I loved how Croft brought her to life. The exchanges between Anne and Darcy are particularly humorous, as the cousins argue like brother and sister.
Croft stayed true to those qualities of Elizabeth and Darcy that we all know and love. Since this was a novella length story, I read this in one afternoon and really appreciated the light hearted take on Darcy and Elizabeth's story without some of the more painful parts of their journey, though of course I will always love Jane's original. I look forward to reading more Austenesque stories from this author.
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February 26, 2024DNF. This style of story telling is not for me. Every thought and feeling are explained and analysed by the author or the characters themselves. There’s nothing left for me to imagine.
March 14, 2024
Romantic, but odd
The story begins after the disastrous proposal at Hunsford Parsonage. Darcy gives Elizabeth his letter. She's still angry at him, but realizes that she's made a lot of errors of judgement. Darcy is devastated, but quickly resolves to improve Elizabeth's opinion of him, especially since she'll be staying longer at the Parsonage due to Lady Catherine's machinations. Anne Debourgh's twenty-first birthday is being celebrated with a ball, and Lady Catherine convinces Darcy and Elizabeth to remain long enough to attend.
Darcy becomes a charming ladies man, seemingly overnight, and Elizabeth doesn't stand a chance when faced with such persistent adoration. However, the relationship of ODC takes a back seat to the many intrigues in which Anne Debourgh is involved. Her ladies maid, a gardener, and a neighboring gentleman all are conspiring with Anne so that she can achieve certain goals at her birthday ball. The circumstances surrounding these people are all rather odd, confusing, and unsettling. The plot involving them casts a sort of sinister shade over everything, including the romance of ODC.
The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it if you don't mind a rather strange and convoluted road to HEA for ODC.
The story begins after the disastrous proposal at Hunsford Parsonage. Darcy gives Elizabeth his letter. She's still angry at him, but realizes that she's made a lot of errors of judgement. Darcy is devastated, but quickly resolves to improve Elizabeth's opinion of him, especially since she'll be staying longer at the Parsonage due to Lady Catherine's machinations. Anne Debourgh's twenty-first birthday is being celebrated with a ball, and Lady Catherine convinces Darcy and Elizabeth to remain long enough to attend.
Darcy becomes a charming ladies man, seemingly overnight, and Elizabeth doesn't stand a chance when faced with such persistent adoration. However, the relationship of ODC takes a back seat to the many intrigues in which Anne Debourgh is involved. Her ladies maid, a gardener, and a neighboring gentleman all are conspiring with Anne so that she can achieve certain goals at her birthday ball. The circumstances surrounding these people are all rather odd, confusing, and unsettling. The plot involving them casts a sort of sinister shade over everything, including the romance of ODC.
The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it if you don't mind a rather strange and convoluted road to HEA for ODC.
March 5, 2024
Not bad
I liked the strengthened Anne de Bourgh in this story but there wasn't really a mystery. You pretty much knew what was going on the whole time. The big reveal at the end was actually told as a reflection in the epilogue. I also felt the relationship development was too abrupt for Darcy and Elizabeth. It also didn't seem like see ever forgave him for Jane and Bingkey but maybe I missed that. There weren't really any villains. There were some angst between some characters but no one actively worked against them. It was a decent story but just didn't have a whole lot of interest. Adding some suspense or drama would have really helped.
I liked the strengthened Anne de Bourgh in this story but there wasn't really a mystery. You pretty much knew what was going on the whole time. The big reveal at the end was actually told as a reflection in the epilogue. I also felt the relationship development was too abrupt for Darcy and Elizabeth. It also didn't seem like see ever forgave him for Jane and Bingkey but maybe I missed that. There weren't really any villains. There were some angst between some characters but no one actively worked against them. It was a decent story but just didn't have a whole lot of interest. Adding some suspense or drama would have really helped.
March 7, 2024
Short and mysterious
If this story was a song, I'd say that it was a one with a staccato melody. Containing Ms Croft's usual wordplay, this novella begins after Darcy's Hunsford proposal. Due to Anne de Bourgh's upcoming coming-of-age birthday ball, he is not able to depart per canon. Hints are woven into the story about odd thefts, secret meetings, and secret plans, but the big reveal does not occur until the epilogue. Although Darcy was stuck in the mud for an extended period of time, this is definitely a novel storyline that was fun to read.
If this story was a song, I'd say that it was a one with a staccato melody. Containing Ms Croft's usual wordplay, this novella begins after Darcy's Hunsford proposal. Due to Anne de Bourgh's upcoming coming-of-age birthday ball, he is not able to depart per canon. Hints are woven into the story about odd thefts, secret meetings, and secret plans, but the big reveal does not occur until the epilogue. Although Darcy was stuck in the mud for an extended period of time, this is definitely a novel storyline that was fun to read.
March 31, 2024
A lovely P&P variation.
July 12, 2024
Enchanting Anne
A novel concept, a devious Anne de Bourgh! Also a lovely path for our dear couple, and an intriguing mystery to solve. A fun read!
A novel concept, a devious Anne de Bourgh! Also a lovely path for our dear couple, and an intriguing mystery to solve. A fun read!
February 23, 2024
Humorous in a way.
It takes place after the infamous proposal at H. It is more about Anne dB than EB and FD. But they are present enough and the relationship gradually mends and deepens albeit through introspection.
It takes place after the infamous proposal at H. It is more about Anne dB than EB and FD. But they are present enough and the relationship gradually mends and deepens albeit through introspection.
July 4, 2024
I enjoyed this. Anne has a birthday ball coming up so Elizabeth is made to stay after Darcy's first proposal. Anne is up to something secretive. Towards the end it felt like the narrative skipped over a scene or two I wanted to see. It feels like it's setting up for a grand confrontation and reveal at the ball but oops, never mind, here we are at the epilogue. The writing style is not as compulsively punny as some of the author's other works.
February 5, 2025
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is book three of four of the series called Mr Darcy’s Dilemmas. Each book is a standalone story.
He would change for the better because it was the honourable thing to do and just perhaps the woman he loved would grow to think better of him. Fitzwilliam Darcy longs to escape Rosings Park following his failed proposal of marriage to Miss Elizabeth Bennet. Alas it cannot be; both he and Elizabeth having been required to remain for an additional ten days for a private ball in celebration of the birthday of Miss Anne de Bourgh.
As the days progress, Darcy finds himself increasingly alarmed by the strange happenings that he sees, and that Lady Catherine reports, in Kent. His cousin, Miss Anne de Bourgh has thrown off the meekness and ennui of her earlier years. Displaying unprecedented liveliness and rebellion, she has been visiting the master gardener’s cottage, claiming she merely seeks his advice about her herbarium, but both Lady Catherine and Darcy suspect something more scandalous is afoot. To add to this, there seems to be some sort of thievery or vandalism occurring in the house, with precious items being pilfered or damaged. Darcy’s days are further complicated when he realizes that he may have a rival for Elizabeth’s affection, a young gentleman who is the owner of an estate near to Rosings.
There seems to be a potential scandal or heartache everywhere Darcy turns, but somewhere in midst of it all springs some hope. Can he and Elizabeth untangle all their misunderstandings or will some sort of disaster be their unravelling? So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. My only negative is that the ending was a bit rushed in my opinion. The key events at Anne’s illusive birthday ball were somewhat glossed over and only mentioned in passing afterwards, years later in the storyline. I believe those events should’ve had more to them, hence why I deducted one star. Despite that, it’s still a must read, and I highly recommend to everyone.
He would change for the better because it was the honourable thing to do and just perhaps the woman he loved would grow to think better of him. Fitzwilliam Darcy longs to escape Rosings Park following his failed proposal of marriage to Miss Elizabeth Bennet. Alas it cannot be; both he and Elizabeth having been required to remain for an additional ten days for a private ball in celebration of the birthday of Miss Anne de Bourgh.
As the days progress, Darcy finds himself increasingly alarmed by the strange happenings that he sees, and that Lady Catherine reports, in Kent. His cousin, Miss Anne de Bourgh has thrown off the meekness and ennui of her earlier years. Displaying unprecedented liveliness and rebellion, she has been visiting the master gardener’s cottage, claiming she merely seeks his advice about her herbarium, but both Lady Catherine and Darcy suspect something more scandalous is afoot. To add to this, there seems to be some sort of thievery or vandalism occurring in the house, with precious items being pilfered or damaged. Darcy’s days are further complicated when he realizes that he may have a rival for Elizabeth’s affection, a young gentleman who is the owner of an estate near to Rosings.
There seems to be a potential scandal or heartache everywhere Darcy turns, but somewhere in midst of it all springs some hope. Can he and Elizabeth untangle all their misunderstandings or will some sort of disaster be their unravelling? So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. My only negative is that the ending was a bit rushed in my opinion. The key events at Anne’s illusive birthday ball were somewhat glossed over and only mentioned in passing afterwards, years later in the storyline. I believe those events should’ve had more to them, hence why I deducted one star. Despite that, it’s still a must read, and I highly recommend to everyone.
July 2, 2024
A lovely written variation
The writing is exquisite, and the premise of Darcy having more time to win and woo Elizabeth Bennet at Rosings Park is alluring and original.
However, there seems to be a disconnect as to the progression of affection and love between Darcy and Elizabeth. Naturally, Darcy is already in love. But as to how their exchanges turned into esteem and love seems ambiguous for this reader. It’s like she’s missing something. Maybe the constant contact and spending more time together may have lead to Elizabeth’s change towards Mr. Darcy, not to mention the explanatory letter of Canon and that Darcy rectified his mistake with Bingley and Jane Bennet. Yet, one can’t help but feel something is missing, as if the dots cannot be completely connected.
One can suppose the confusion that Anne de Bourgh and her cohorts wrought may have contributed to the muddle which somewhat takes the focus away from the love affair between Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy.
It’s interesting though how Mr. Darcy’s and thoughts and feelings are mostly put to the fore. It’s endearing how he is determined to win his last love even at the risk of another rejection. A 3 1/2 to 4 stars variation
The writing is exquisite, and the premise of Darcy having more time to win and woo Elizabeth Bennet at Rosings Park is alluring and original.
However, there seems to be a disconnect as to the progression of affection and love between Darcy and Elizabeth. Naturally, Darcy is already in love. But as to how their exchanges turned into esteem and love seems ambiguous for this reader. It’s like she’s missing something. Maybe the constant contact and spending more time together may have lead to Elizabeth’s change towards Mr. Darcy, not to mention the explanatory letter of Canon and that Darcy rectified his mistake with Bingley and Jane Bennet. Yet, one can’t help but feel something is missing, as if the dots cannot be completely connected.
One can suppose the confusion that Anne de Bourgh and her cohorts wrought may have contributed to the muddle which somewhat takes the focus away from the love affair between Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy.
It’s interesting though how Mr. Darcy’s and thoughts and feelings are mostly put to the fore. It’s endearing how he is determined to win his last love even at the risk of another rejection. A 3 1/2 to 4 stars variation
February 22, 2024
This novella starts in Rosings and Hunsford, and the majority of the story is there as well. Elizabeth, Darcy, Anne, and new characters have some interesting conversations. Misleading information is expressed. These lead to misunderstandings. Are they intentional or unintentional? What will happen when Lady Catherine has her say? Can our dear couple find their happily ever after? Will Anne have hers? Why is it called A Golden Opportunity?
I loved this variation because it was so different from canon. The characters of Anne and the new ones were enjoyable. Darcy was romantically swoony.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I loved this variation because it was so different from canon. The characters of Anne and the new ones were enjoyable. Darcy was romantically swoony.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 29, 2024
Charming fan fiction about Jane Austen's most famous novel "Pride and Prejudice". A very quick and easy read. Don't worry - Elizabeth and Darcy still end up together. However, along the way, the author completely changes the character of Darcy's wanna-be fiancee, Anne de Bourgh.. Here she is a feisty and quirky 20 year old who intends to shake up her mother's world when she gains her majority in a few days. Lady Catherine de Bourgh will never be the same.
February 23, 2024
3.5 stars
This low-angst read is cute, and all threads are neatly tied. While Darcy and Elizabeth have a little chemistry, he frequently is overbearing. He didn’t always treat the female characters as rational creatures.
The story’s greatest flaw is the ending, which inexplicably is recounted in the epilogue (10 years later). That twist served no purpose.
This low-angst read is cute, and all threads are neatly tied. While Darcy and Elizabeth have a little chemistry, he frequently is overbearing. He didn’t always treat the female characters as rational creatures.
The story’s greatest flaw is the ending, which inexplicably is recounted in the epilogue (10 years later). That twist served no purpose.
February 24, 2024
Excellent variation
Entertaining read, as always with this author. Darcy trapped at Rosings waiting for his cousin's birthday celebration after Elizabeth rejected him. The additional secondary characters made an interesting story come to life.
Entertaining read, as always with this author. Darcy trapped at Rosings waiting for his cousin's birthday celebration after Elizabeth rejected him. The additional secondary characters made an interesting story come to life.
February 29, 2024
I loved this story. It was fun and a different take on Jane Austen's beloved characters. My favorite was Anne. She felt so human not like a cardboard representation. She was a hoot to read about. I was entertained.
I received a complimentary copy of this story and I freely left this review.
I received a complimentary copy of this story and I freely left this review.
February 29, 2024
A Golden Opportunity indeed
A Golden Opportunity indeed...
Where are all the items going and who is responsible? We have a very healthy Anne, and the same proposal, but a very nice change. Many hea's.
A Golden Opportunity indeed...
Where are all the items going and who is responsible? We have a very healthy Anne, and the same proposal, but a very nice change. Many hea's.
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