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Kalothia has grown up in the shadows of her kingdom, hidden away in the forested East after her parents were outed as enemies of the king. Raised in a woodland idyll by a few kindly adult caretakers, Kalothia can hunt and fish and fend for herself but knows little of the outside world. When assassins attack her home on her sixteenth birthday, she must flee to the king's court in the West--a beautiful but lethal nest of poison, plots, and danger, overseen by an entrenched patriarchy.
304 pages, Paperback
Published February 1, 2024
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Shade Lapite
2 books34 followersShade Lapite is British-Nigerian and has drawn on her heritage to create the world of her debut novel. She spent a significant slice of her childhood nestled in the library, inhaling books by Diana Wynne Jones, Tamora Pierce, Lois Duncan, and Mildred D. Taylor. Her love for the arts led her to a degree in media arts at Royal Holloway, University of London. She now lives in Toronto and juggles writing with her career in digital marketing. Her blog, Coffee Bookshelves, celebrates writing and promotes titles by authors of color. You can find her fangirling over Korean dramas on Twitter @TheShadyFiles or sharing her favorite books on Instagram @shadelapite.
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January 19, 2024
You know a book is good when you have to keep pausing while you’re reading to audibly say “This book is so good”
I knew going into this that Goddess Crown was going to be fantastic but I was actually pleasantly surprised how fantastic it truly was.
The world-building was beautiful and so immersive. I really found myself getting so lost in the writing that I would read four chapters without even realising it. I can’t stress enough how great this was.
I loved that it also touched on the challenges that women face in male-dominated spaces and how often, they need to work ten times harder to be respected or seen as even close to equals.
The romance subplot also took me by surprise but I loved it so much.
I can’t wait to see what this author does next.
I knew going into this that Goddess Crown was going to be fantastic but I was actually pleasantly surprised how fantastic it truly was.
The world-building was beautiful and so immersive. I really found myself getting so lost in the writing that I would read four chapters without even realising it. I can’t stress enough how great this was.
I loved that it also touched on the challenges that women face in male-dominated spaces and how often, they need to work ten times harder to be respected or seen as even close to equals.
The romance subplot also took me by surprise but I loved it so much.
I can’t wait to see what this author does next.
February 11, 2024
Unfortunately I didn’t enjoy this despite being initially very excited. It began at a very slow pace and then hurtled at break-neck speed at the end. There was minimal world building beyond letting us know that they worship a Goddess and yet function as a patriarchal society. Kalothia, the main character, rarely has anything to say/is left speechless when she encounters sexist/misogynistic behaviour and comments. In fairness, as a coddled 16yr old that maybe isn’t surprising. Overall this felt very disappointing and not as exciting and engaging as I would have liked. The fantasy and romance aspects were lacking and not as well developed as they could have been, and the plot was predictable.
February 16, 2024
This fits The Diverse Baseline February Prompt A: A book by a Black author.
3.5 stars rounded up.
This started out really strong with the FMC escaping an assassination. That scene really gripped me and was definitely 5 stars.
But after that, it was typical royal court politics. If you're into that, then this might be your thing. But I was mostly bored tbh and was hoping for more action.
Kalothia is a great FMC though. Very resilient and highly adaptable to new situations. She's one of those young characters who are old souls.
Anyway, despite feeling meh about this book, I'd still love to read more from this author.
3.5 stars rounded up.
This started out really strong with the FMC escaping an assassination. That scene really gripped me and was definitely 5 stars.
But after that, it was typical royal court politics. If you're into that, then this might be your thing. But I was mostly bored tbh and was hoping for more action.
Kalothia is a great FMC though. Very resilient and highly adaptable to new situations. She's one of those young characters who are old souls.
Anyway, despite feeling meh about this book, I'd still love to read more from this author.
January 3, 2025
Outstanding read,really discriptive and intense with the action and emotions. a fantastic African story set in a fictional African world
February 10, 2025
It was fine but ultimately forgettable.
July 10, 2025
“I’m yours.”
September 9, 2023
Wow. Such a beautiful face paced read with some black girl magic action thrown in story. In Goddess Crown we are introduced to Kalothia she’s 16 & we go on this journey with her. She’s brought up by guardians in a rural area basically living away from her birth parents who are King & Queen to keep her out of harms way. Kalothia is kind & smart from the very beginning. But we also get to see her use other skills & strengths when she has to prove herself in front of the Kings Court.
I follow the author on social media & she explained how the setting is Africa-inspired. And I love that ! Well done.
Thank you so much Hear Our Voices for my ARC. #GoddessCrown #HearOurVoices #HOV
I follow the author on social media & she explained how the setting is Africa-inspired. And I love that ! Well done.
Thank you so much Hear Our Voices for my ARC. #GoddessCrown #HearOurVoices #HOV
September 6, 2023
Goddess Crown is the kind of story that grabs your attention and won't let it go until you reach that final page. There is so much action that your riveted to see what happens next, so your flipping pages and waiting on pins and needles to see how Kalothia can escape capture and even navigate her way through the palace to avoid danger. Such a wonderful escapism read, and I was certainly in the mood for the palace intrigue. At 288 pages, Lapite really pacts in the action, and even leaves some room for a little romance, yep looking at you Nahir. Overall, I quite enjoyed the world building of the story, but I kept wanting to know more about this fantasy inspired country. Also wanting to know more about Padma, Galla's enemies whose territory borders them, and more about King Osura. There are also quite a few lords and occasionally I had difficulty keeping them straight. Going in I was expecting something along the lines of Children of Blood and Bone, part fantasy and mythology. And this isn't quite that, although there is a Goddess who comes to help Kalothia from time to time. But oh, how I did love Kalothia. Her determination, strength, willingness to break through any barrier placed in front of her. Also, her desire to help her country to begin to recognize women for their potential and all the skills that they bring. To finally allow them to have a voice. Such a wonderful story that has me eagerly awaiting a sequel. ** A huge thank you to Walker Books US for the paperback ARC in exchange for an honest review.**
September 10, 2023
This book was a breath of fresh air. This book will literally keep you on your toes because there is always something happening from either a huge reveal to finding out the someone is trying to wipe out your entire family which also includes you. In this book we introduced to Zalothia who is under the care of Teacher and Aunty. As she is being cared for in the forrest and is protected by Clarit and Nahor it is Zalothia's 16th birthday and her life immediately begins to change. Everything that she was told was a complete lie. Literally as she was being raised in a forrest in the Kingdom of Galla she was told that her parents had to go into hiding from the king because their lives were in danger, but the truth was that the king that was supposedly trying to kill her parents was actually her father and he had executed her mother based on rumors of infidelity. Honestly I highly recommend this book because as the story progresses it keeps getting better and better.
September 4, 2023
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When I tell you to have a novel in your fingers that allows you to see a female character that looks like you and uplifts herself through her power, strength, courage, and tenaciousness even though a patriarchal society driven by oppression of women tried to stand in her way, it’s phenomenal!!
These characters stories spoke to me with each turn of the page, and discovering how many of the characters were falsely accused because they were woman struck emotional cords that made me want to go into battle to fight for Justice in this Kingdom!!
I absolutely love an Afro fantasy and spending time in the opulent kingdom of Galla, I feel I too grew to be the Goddess Crown!!
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When I tell you to have a novel in your fingers that allows you to see a female character that looks like you and uplifts herself through her power, strength, courage, and tenaciousness even though a patriarchal society driven by oppression of women tried to stand in her way, it’s phenomenal!!
These characters stories spoke to me with each turn of the page, and discovering how many of the characters were falsely accused because they were woman struck emotional cords that made me want to go into battle to fight for Justice in this Kingdom!!
I absolutely love an Afro fantasy and spending time in the opulent kingdom of Galla, I feel I too grew to be the Goddess Crown!!
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December 11, 2025
Started and finished date – 06.12.25 to 10.12.25.
My rating – Three and Half Stars.
This book was enjoyable and then was parts of book at I really liked but I didn't love it, and I think it could have be better if it was flash out a bit more. I think people who like the queen's assassin by Melissa de la Cruz or ash princess by Laura Sebastian may like is book. The cover of book was simple, but stunning and I think the colour palette at was used on the cover of book was pretty good. The writing was fine, and the writing was easy to follow also the ending of book was okay, but it could be better.
I think both the setting of the book and the atmosphere was great. The world building was pretty good, but I want more and I really enjoyed the court politics but like with the world building I want more. I think the author did a good at describing the different culture in the book and the twists in the book was okay but way too predictable. I think both the friendships and relationships between all of the characters was okay also the romances was fine but it could be better. I found the paced in the book was well structured and steady paced. The characters were okay, but they needed to be flash out bit more.
My rating – Three and Half Stars.
This book was enjoyable and then was parts of book at I really liked but I didn't love it, and I think it could have be better if it was flash out a bit more. I think people who like the queen's assassin by Melissa de la Cruz or ash princess by Laura Sebastian may like is book. The cover of book was simple, but stunning and I think the colour palette at was used on the cover of book was pretty good. The writing was fine, and the writing was easy to follow also the ending of book was okay, but it could be better.
I think both the setting of the book and the atmosphere was great. The world building was pretty good, but I want more and I really enjoyed the court politics but like with the world building I want more. I think the author did a good at describing the different culture in the book and the twists in the book was okay but way too predictable. I think both the friendships and relationships between all of the characters was okay also the romances was fine but it could be better. I found the paced in the book was well structured and steady paced. The characters were okay, but they needed to be flash out bit more.
September 9, 2023
I voluntarily read and reviewed an advance copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
This story follows Kalothia. On her 16th birthday her home is attacked. She loses Aunty and Teacher in the aftermath and flees with Nahir just to lose him too. She deals with the fact that the place where she flees doesn’t accept her for who she really is and the position that she will hold. I love that Kalothia is the one to shut down the old ways of forced marriage to have a man in charge. Some of my favorite quotes from the book come from the discussions between Nahir and Kalothia as they explore new feelings.
“Your skin makes me think of midnight. Dark and clear and serene.” He chuckled. “Which is funny because you are the furthest point from serene.”
“Your hair is exactly like your personality. Curls, twists, strong, unpredictable, beautiful . . .”
Thank you Walker Books, and Edelweiss for the opportunity to read this ebook in exchange for an honest review. Overall 3.5/5 stars
This story follows Kalothia. On her 16th birthday her home is attacked. She loses Aunty and Teacher in the aftermath and flees with Nahir just to lose him too. She deals with the fact that the place where she flees doesn’t accept her for who she really is and the position that she will hold. I love that Kalothia is the one to shut down the old ways of forced marriage to have a man in charge. Some of my favorite quotes from the book come from the discussions between Nahir and Kalothia as they explore new feelings.
“Your skin makes me think of midnight. Dark and clear and serene.” He chuckled. “Which is funny because you are the furthest point from serene.”
“Your hair is exactly like your personality. Curls, twists, strong, unpredictable, beautiful . . .”
Thank you Walker Books, and Edelweiss for the opportunity to read this ebook in exchange for an honest review. Overall 3.5/5 stars
December 31, 2024
Thank you to Pan MacMillan South Africa for providing me with a free copy in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own.
Goddess Crown by Shade Lapite is a dazzling blend of romance and fantasy that will sweep you off into a world of gods, magic, and intrigue. While the book started off a bit slow for me, I soon found myself enamoured with the story and its rich world-building.
Kalothia has grown up hidden in the forested East after her parents were outed as enemies of the king. Raised in a woodland idyll, she can hunt, fish, and fend for herself but knows little of the outside world. On her sixteenth birthday, assassins attack her home, forcing her to flee to the king's court in the West – a beautiful but lethal nest of poison, plots, and danger, overseen by an entrenched patriarchy.
Kalothia is no damsel in distress. She’s fierce, determined, and has a sharp wit that had me chuckling more than once. Watching her navigate the treacherous court politics while uncovering her own hidden powers is exhilarating. Lapite’s world-building is so vivid you’ll feel like you’re right there alongside Kalothia, battling mythical beasts and dodging deadly plots.
Enter Nahir, the brooding warrior who becomes Kalothia’s reluctant ally. Their chemistry is off the charts. The banter, the tension, the slow-burn romance – it’s all there. But beware – Nahir might have secrets that could lead him to do something unforgivable, adding a layer of tension that will keep you guessing.
However, about two-thirds of the way in, the story lost some momentum for me. The pacing slowed, and the plot twists that initially kept me on the edge of my seat started to feel less engaging. It was a bit of a struggle to maintain my interest through to the end.
Goddess Crown by Shade Lapite is a dazzling blend of romance and fantasy that will sweep you off into a world of gods, magic, and intrigue. While the book started off a bit slow for me, I soon found myself enamoured with the story and its rich world-building.
Kalothia has grown up hidden in the forested East after her parents were outed as enemies of the king. Raised in a woodland idyll, she can hunt, fish, and fend for herself but knows little of the outside world. On her sixteenth birthday, assassins attack her home, forcing her to flee to the king's court in the West – a beautiful but lethal nest of poison, plots, and danger, overseen by an entrenched patriarchy.
Kalothia is no damsel in distress. She’s fierce, determined, and has a sharp wit that had me chuckling more than once. Watching her navigate the treacherous court politics while uncovering her own hidden powers is exhilarating. Lapite’s world-building is so vivid you’ll feel like you’re right there alongside Kalothia, battling mythical beasts and dodging deadly plots.
Enter Nahir, the brooding warrior who becomes Kalothia’s reluctant ally. Their chemistry is off the charts. The banter, the tension, the slow-burn romance – it’s all there. But beware – Nahir might have secrets that could lead him to do something unforgivable, adding a layer of tension that will keep you guessing.
However, about two-thirds of the way in, the story lost some momentum for me. The pacing slowed, and the plot twists that initially kept me on the edge of my seat started to feel less engaging. It was a bit of a struggle to maintain my interest through to the end.
December 3, 2023
3.5⭐️
Thank you to Walker books for the arc!
This was a fun read! The main character, Kalothia, was fierce and strong despite the heartache she has endured. I loved the setting of the book and of the different cultures described. A feminist fantasy book that was well written, with lots of action as Kalothia tries to navigate her new life and the enemies that come with it. Full of twists and turns that I didn’t see coming.
However, I did want a little more interaction with our love interest. I didn’t feel as connected to their friendship and feelings because it felt like not much happened between them. It would be nice if he was more involved but again, I can understand why he wasn’t as I was getting the “women don’t always need men” vibe.
I did enjoy the ending and felt like it fit really well with the feminist narrative— Kalothia doesn’t need a man to rule well. It was refreshing to read!
Thank you to Walker books for the arc!
This was a fun read! The main character, Kalothia, was fierce and strong despite the heartache she has endured. I loved the setting of the book and of the different cultures described. A feminist fantasy book that was well written, with lots of action as Kalothia tries to navigate her new life and the enemies that come with it. Full of twists and turns that I didn’t see coming.
However, I did want a little more interaction with our love interest. I didn’t feel as connected to their friendship and feelings because it felt like not much happened between them. It would be nice if he was more involved but again, I can understand why he wasn’t as I was getting the “women don’t always need men” vibe.
I did enjoy the ending and felt like it fit really well with the feminist narrative— Kalothia doesn’t need a man to rule well. It was refreshing to read!
July 18, 2023
4.4 🌟 I LOVED THIS SO MUCH!!! I can’t even express how much this book has me filled with emotion. I can’t even speak. I adore the MC, she’s excellent. I loved the world building, Ye-Ye is a cherub, I loved all the side characters. I can’t wait for more with the romance, such a good build up. I usually don’t care about court intrigue but this story had me flicking the pages for more!! I just adored everything about this book. Such an amazing story and one of the best YA debut’s I’ve read in a very long time!!
June 29, 2024
When the action in this book started at page 25 I knew I was in for a ride! Yes I figured out who the perpetrator was early on but still enjoyed how it played out. The massage of this book was clear strong black women and I ate up!
June 24, 2023
enjoyed this a lot. Great MC with lots of burdens and challenges.
September 27, 2023
Now we all know that this is not the genre I normally read, so my knowledge of YA Afro Fantasy is limited… but all hail Shade Lapite because this was absolutely incredible.
This one was fast-paced while still maintaining amazing and understandable world building. I was never once confused about who was who, where they were, and what was going on. It is also sooo beautifully written, it’s hard not to get lost in the rhythm on the pages.
The setting (Galla) gave me all the amazing pre-technology-but-not-medieval vibes I could dream of.
This book really illustrates a time of women living in a strictly male-run world: where tradition & faith run deep and are never questioned. I love that the book has a main themed of women trying to break free of their given “norms” and show their true powers to become equals. The FMC, Kalothia, is such a shining star of a heroine. I love her character!
Goddess Crown is also action pact and I was zooming through the pages, wondering how the FMC was going to get out of all the situations that feel upon her!
This story sprinkled in a bit of romance and I’m all here for it! It was done wonderfully and wasn’t at all overpowering the true tale being told!
The ending of the book wrapped up so quickly (almost too quickly 😢) that I’m HOPING there is a sequel because I need to further get lost in the Gallan world. My deep need to know about Kalothia’s next adventures & how she handles the weight of the world her shoulders, is taking over!
Thank you so much @penguinrandomhouseca for the Review copy, I highly recommend!
This one was fast-paced while still maintaining amazing and understandable world building. I was never once confused about who was who, where they were, and what was going on. It is also sooo beautifully written, it’s hard not to get lost in the rhythm on the pages.
The setting (Galla) gave me all the amazing pre-technology-but-not-medieval vibes I could dream of.
This book really illustrates a time of women living in a strictly male-run world: where tradition & faith run deep and are never questioned. I love that the book has a main themed of women trying to break free of their given “norms” and show their true powers to become equals. The FMC, Kalothia, is such a shining star of a heroine. I love her character!
Goddess Crown is also action pact and I was zooming through the pages, wondering how the FMC was going to get out of all the situations that feel upon her!
This story sprinkled in a bit of romance and I’m all here for it! It was done wonderfully and wasn’t at all overpowering the true tale being told!
The ending of the book wrapped up so quickly (almost too quickly 😢) that I’m HOPING there is a sequel because I need to further get lost in the Gallan world. My deep need to know about Kalothia’s next adventures & how she handles the weight of the world her shoulders, is taking over!
Thank you so much @penguinrandomhouseca for the Review copy, I highly recommend!
December 1, 2023
I wish I had a book like this growing up. I would’ve eaten it up.
September 16, 2023
This book was okay. There wasn’t enough world building and this novel is pretty forgettable.
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October 5, 2023The cover of this book is absolutely stunning! It made it an easy decision to want to read this book, but the content is equally good! The female MC Kalothia is headstrong, courageous, and an easy character to love. However, the side characters are just as enthralling. I loved that there were some twists along the way, and how Kalothia continues to push forward even in the face of adversity; especially when dealing with a patriarchal society. Even as a teen, she’s a force to be reckoned with!
This Afro-fantasy is definitely worth the read! I devoured it in a couple of hours. I loved reading about a character I could see myself in.
I’m excited to see what is next from this author! Be sure to add this one to your TBR! 📚
This Afro-fantasy is definitely worth the read! I devoured it in a couple of hours. I loved reading about a character I could see myself in.
I’m excited to see what is next from this author! Be sure to add this one to your TBR! 📚
May 3, 2024
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Filled with lush imagery and gorgeous prose, Goddess Crown is a fast-paced Afro-fantasy that follows Kalothia who grew up believing that her parents were on the run from the King which meant that she had to be hidden in the forest with caretakers all her life. It’s not until her 16th birthday that she finds herself having to flee her home and ends up at the royal court where she learns that contrary to her beliefs, she is actually the King’s daughter and now that he’s dead, she must ascend the throne. But, of course, this is not an easy task because this strictly patriarchal society is against women leading, plus there are snakes abound in the court. So, what can Kalothia do in this situation?
Why, she goes with the flow! She goes with the flow despite her many reservations and feelings of indignation. She goes with the flow even when she can take matters into her own hands and stop things because why put her smarts and training into more practice when she can have others solving things for her? Why be the main, active protagonist of her life when so many others are willing to guide her, placing her here and there so it suits them and sometimes, indirectly suits her as well?
As you can probably tell by now, Kalothia has lesser spine than desired. She’s not the charismatic rebel I’d imagined her to be, which is really disappointing because she has so much potential. Although naive and sheltered, she’s educated, can fight and has a lot of room for growth. Moreover, she’s chosen by the Goddess herself to challenge and change the system! So, why is she in the backseat for most of the story? Why isn’t she the driver, the leader — the one who makes her own choices and tries hard to fight against the flow??
This inaction of hers takes away the tension and excitement of the story, making the action-packed moments forgettable. Everything is conveniently solved and more often than not, what should be life-or-death trials feel no more grave than a little stumble on flat ground. Also, what happened to the court politics and intrigue? I had expected something more complicated and with more gravity than everything that was presented here. Instead, it was all child’s play.
Furthermore, there’s no character growth and though I enjoyed the characters, they’re all archetypal. Other aspects that are also lacking are the worldbuilding which contrasts poorly with the lush imagery, and the romance which feels too rushed by the final quarter of the book.
Overall, Goddess Crown has so much promise but ultimately, it didn’t deliver. Many aspects lack depth and layers, leaving us with this surface-level story when it could’ve been a wholly gorgeous and complex tale.
Filled with lush imagery and gorgeous prose, Goddess Crown is a fast-paced Afro-fantasy that follows Kalothia who grew up believing that her parents were on the run from the King which meant that she had to be hidden in the forest with caretakers all her life. It’s not until her 16th birthday that she finds herself having to flee her home and ends up at the royal court where she learns that contrary to her beliefs, she is actually the King’s daughter and now that he’s dead, she must ascend the throne. But, of course, this is not an easy task because this strictly patriarchal society is against women leading, plus there are snakes abound in the court. So, what can Kalothia do in this situation?
Why, she goes with the flow! She goes with the flow despite her many reservations and feelings of indignation. She goes with the flow even when she can take matters into her own hands and stop things because why put her smarts and training into more practice when she can have others solving things for her? Why be the main, active protagonist of her life when so many others are willing to guide her, placing her here and there so it suits them and sometimes, indirectly suits her as well?
As you can probably tell by now, Kalothia has lesser spine than desired. She’s not the charismatic rebel I’d imagined her to be, which is really disappointing because she has so much potential. Although naive and sheltered, she’s educated, can fight and has a lot of room for growth. Moreover, she’s chosen by the Goddess herself to challenge and change the system! So, why is she in the backseat for most of the story? Why isn’t she the driver, the leader — the one who makes her own choices and tries hard to fight against the flow??
This inaction of hers takes away the tension and excitement of the story, making the action-packed moments forgettable. Everything is conveniently solved and more often than not, what should be life-or-death trials feel no more grave than a little stumble on flat ground. Also, what happened to the court politics and intrigue? I had expected something more complicated and with more gravity than everything that was presented here. Instead, it was all child’s play.
Furthermore, there’s no character growth and though I enjoyed the characters, they’re all archetypal. Other aspects that are also lacking are the worldbuilding which contrasts poorly with the lush imagery, and the romance which feels too rushed by the final quarter of the book.
Overall, Goddess Crown has so much promise but ultimately, it didn’t deliver. Many aspects lack depth and layers, leaving us with this surface-level story when it could’ve been a wholly gorgeous and complex tale.
Thank you so much Pansing for sending me a copy of this in exchange for an honest review! Goddess Crown by Shade Lapite is available at all good bookstores.
April 4, 2024
i was promised court politics and intrigue, not a monologuing villain and a resolution where everything conveniently & quickly works out for her, and that even though nobody's respected her or listened to her thus far, suddenly her decisions are taken seriously and followed, even though one of the biggest decisions she makes is a blatantly terrible one if you stop to think about it for more than a few seconds.
perhaps the key issue here is that the story is significantly more simplistic than other ya fantasy court politics books i've read and enjoyed before.
there are other things about this book that didn't work for me, some being preference-based (and thus haven't negatively affected my rating) and some being this-is-an-actual-issue-based (and thus, have) but i don't actually enjoy being negative all that much, so i'm gonna tap out here! but, all this being said, i wouldn't necessarily rule out reading more books from lapite and/or more books set in the world of galla. despite my frustration with the court politics aspect of this court politics book, there's still a lot of potential here, and a lot of strengths, so i do genuinely look forward to seeing what lapite does going forwards
perhaps the key issue here is that the story is significantly more simplistic than other ya fantasy court politics books i've read and enjoyed before.
there are other things about this book that didn't work for me, some being preference-based (and thus haven't negatively affected my rating) and some being this-is-an-actual-issue-based (and thus, have) but i don't actually enjoy being negative all that much, so i'm gonna tap out here! but, all this being said, i wouldn't necessarily rule out reading more books from lapite and/or more books set in the world of galla. despite my frustration with the court politics aspect of this court politics book, there's still a lot of potential here, and a lot of strengths, so i do genuinely look forward to seeing what lapite does going forwards
June 15, 2024
Not great, not bad. This is a YA fantasy debut novel. The plot and idea for this book was good, but the writing felt slightly immature. Looking forward to this author growing and her writing improving to support her plot ideas
July 10, 2023
"What did you come here to say?" "That I'm yours."
This book was a wild ride. We start with a girl named Kalothia who lives in the forest with her two caretakers, Aunty and Teacher as well as a guard to keep her safe. She's spent her whole life in the forest, unable to go into the cities because the King would kill her. Her life turns upside down when her home is attacked, and everyone shes ever known and loved is killed. She flees her home, desperate to find safety.
This book is just wow. When I started reading I could not put it down. This world is so easy to get lost in! I adored everything about this book, how fast paced it was and all the different kinds of trouble our heroine got into. When the Goddess appeared to help guide Kalothia, I was shocked. I loved the whole reasoning behind the goddess showing up and what she wanted Kaolthia's help with, I to would be mad if men took what I said and twisted my words so horribly to make sure they would forever be in power.
Overall this was an incredible read, I absolutely adored all the characters (espeically Nahir) and I fell head over heels in love with the plot. I am clawing for another book I NEED a second book set in this world (even though this one hasn't come out yet crying) please please please read it!!
Thank you so much to penguin random house for giving me an ARC in exchange for an honest review :)
This book was a wild ride. We start with a girl named Kalothia who lives in the forest with her two caretakers, Aunty and Teacher as well as a guard to keep her safe. She's spent her whole life in the forest, unable to go into the cities because the King would kill her. Her life turns upside down when her home is attacked, and everyone shes ever known and loved is killed. She flees her home, desperate to find safety.
This book is just wow. When I started reading I could not put it down. This world is so easy to get lost in! I adored everything about this book, how fast paced it was and all the different kinds of trouble our heroine got into. When the Goddess appeared to help guide Kalothia, I was shocked. I loved the whole reasoning behind the goddess showing up and what she wanted Kaolthia's help with, I to would be mad if men took what I said and twisted my words so horribly to make sure they would forever be in power.
Overall this was an incredible read, I absolutely adored all the characters (espeically Nahir) and I fell head over heels in love with the plot. I am clawing for another book I NEED a second book set in this world (even though this one hasn't come out yet crying) please please please read it!!
Thank you so much to penguin random house for giving me an ARC in exchange for an honest review :)
February 3, 2024
"The Goddess Crown" by Shade Lapite takes readers on an incredible journey filled with intrigue, mystery, and the challenges of ruling a kingdom. The narrative is fast-paced and riveting, making it a compelling read from start to finish.
The story unfolds as Kalothia is thrust into immense responsibility after the king's death. The division of power that was once shielded from her now rests in her hands, and she must navigate the complexities of running a country while unravelling the mystery of the king's killer.
Lapite skillfully weaves a tale of political intrigue and personal growth, drawing readers into a world where every decision holds weight. Kalothia's journey is both relatable and inspiring as she grapples with the challenges of leadership, making "The Goddess Crown" a fantasy tale and a compelling exploration of character development.
The anticipation for the second book is palpable as Lapite leaves readers eager to uncover the following chapters in Kalothia's story. The book's accessibility makes it an excellent choice for new fantasy readers and a younger audience, offering an engaging introduction to the genre.
In conclusion, "The Goddess Crown" is a standout work in fantasy, offering a rich and immersive experience for readers of all ages. Shade Lapite's storytelling prowess shines through, creating a world that captivates and leaves a lasting impression.
The story unfolds as Kalothia is thrust into immense responsibility after the king's death. The division of power that was once shielded from her now rests in her hands, and she must navigate the complexities of running a country while unravelling the mystery of the king's killer.
Lapite skillfully weaves a tale of political intrigue and personal growth, drawing readers into a world where every decision holds weight. Kalothia's journey is both relatable and inspiring as she grapples with the challenges of leadership, making "The Goddess Crown" a fantasy tale and a compelling exploration of character development.
The anticipation for the second book is palpable as Lapite leaves readers eager to uncover the following chapters in Kalothia's story. The book's accessibility makes it an excellent choice for new fantasy readers and a younger audience, offering an engaging introduction to the genre.
In conclusion, "The Goddess Crown" is a standout work in fantasy, offering a rich and immersive experience for readers of all ages. Shade Lapite's storytelling prowess shines through, creating a world that captivates and leaves a lasting impression.
September 10, 2023
Kalothia has been raised and heavily protected, in secret, after the death of her parents. No one has disclosed the actual story, so on her 16th birthday, she is determined to find out for herself. Along the way, she is met by extreme opposition. Again…she didn't know why.
Once she gets to her destination, an encounter encourages her to pursue the truth, and change several lives forever.
I went into this book, not knowing what to expect, and I was pleasantly surprised. I loved the underlying theme of Women's Empowerment. My favorite character was Nahir, because he stood by Kalothia's side through it all. My least favorite character was Hadley. You'll have to read the book in order to find out why. I highly recommend this book for all coming of age young women and their village.
I would to thank @hearourvoicestours and @shadelapite, for allowing me to be a tour host for this book.
Pre-order your copy today.
Once she gets to her destination, an encounter encourages her to pursue the truth, and change several lives forever.
I went into this book, not knowing what to expect, and I was pleasantly surprised. I loved the underlying theme of Women's Empowerment. My favorite character was Nahir, because he stood by Kalothia's side through it all. My least favorite character was Hadley. You'll have to read the book in order to find out why. I highly recommend this book for all coming of age young women and their village.
I would to thank @hearourvoicestours and @shadelapite, for allowing me to be a tour host for this book.
Pre-order your copy today.
March 21, 2024
This felt like a rough draft.
June 8, 2025
First, it’s very obvious that this a debut novel. I knew that before I looked it up to confirm. The writing style, word choice, sentence structure and just general plot all declare this a debut.
Lapite’s writing style is not bad. Yes, I could tell that she is a newer author, but the way she writes isn’t bad. It could definitely use improvement, but it could’ve been worse.
Sometimes sentences structured strangely, and I caught quite a few incorrect punctuation, hanging sentences, hanging participles, etc. which sort of bothered me.
The plot pacing was interesting. It felt quite wishy-washy. Let me explain: one minute, nothing would be happening, and the next something crazy would be going on. That might not sound all that bad, but it was done in a weird way. The pacing was inconsistent and felt like there were long periods of nothing but conversations (that weren’t that important) or other boring things happening, and then there would be a bunch of action and thing happening packed into a couple chapters.
The plot itself…I have lots of thoughts.
1. It was boring. Even though technically a lot was happening, it was not exciting. I was bored.
2. The “plot twists” were way too predictable. The three main ones I had figured out pages, even chapters beforehand. The were unexciting, predictable and just generally disengaging.
3. The romance was also boring. The fact that we didn’t see any of their development with each other, only saw them fighting and then getting together at what felt like a random way, plus the way that Kalothia didn’t know she had feelings and was being incredibly dumb over everything? It just compiled up into a boring and very not enjoyable romance. The only romantic part that was enjoyable was the dancing scene, which was actually cute. But overall, I do not care for them as a couple at all.
4. The drive of the plot being Kalothia’s desire for justice/revenge was honestly also boring. Revenge is usually an incredible plot driver, but Kalothia wasn’t driven enough for it to be interesting. Instead of a grief and rage driven desire to destroy everyone responsible for her loved ones’ deaths, Kalothia was mildly interested in figuring out who was behind it, simply so that her loved ones would rest in peace, it wasn’t even a revenge issue. It was boring. It also didn’t even feel like the main plot drive, even though it was? It wasn’t emphasised enough to be significant.
Characters…again, lots of thoughts.
1. Character development: there was none. No one got any development. The only thing close to development was Kalothia’s decision at the end to take the throne, and her temporary confidence when confronting the lords. Even then, it was clear that her determination was already in her and she just decided to use it then, she didn’t find it or gain it along the way.
2. Kalothia was extremely annoying. She either acted stupid, didn’t know what was going on when it was blatantly obvious, acted like a petulant child or was dumb to Nahir. I can’t stand her to be perfectly honest. She has very little personality at all.
3. Nahir was such a bland character. We didn’t get to know him very well, he wasn’t consistent, and even his feelings for Kalothia felt forced, unrealistic and fake.
4. The other supporting characters were also bland. There wasn’t enough time in such a short book for any of them to have development or any other significant impact on the story.
Overall, I did not like this book. There were a few parts that were a little fun to read, but really, it wasn’t a great book. I understand that it is a debut, which is why I’m giving some grace with my rating. 3 stars.
Lapite’s writing style is not bad. Yes, I could tell that she is a newer author, but the way she writes isn’t bad. It could definitely use improvement, but it could’ve been worse.
Sometimes sentences structured strangely, and I caught quite a few incorrect punctuation, hanging sentences, hanging participles, etc. which sort of bothered me.
The plot pacing was interesting. It felt quite wishy-washy. Let me explain: one minute, nothing would be happening, and the next something crazy would be going on. That might not sound all that bad, but it was done in a weird way. The pacing was inconsistent and felt like there were long periods of nothing but conversations (that weren’t that important) or other boring things happening, and then there would be a bunch of action and thing happening packed into a couple chapters.
The plot itself…I have lots of thoughts.
1. It was boring. Even though technically a lot was happening, it was not exciting. I was bored.
2. The “plot twists” were way too predictable. The three main ones I had figured out pages, even chapters beforehand. The were unexciting, predictable and just generally disengaging.
3. The romance was also boring. The fact that we didn’t see any of their development with each other, only saw them fighting and then getting together at what felt like a random way, plus the way that Kalothia didn’t know she had feelings and was being incredibly dumb over everything? It just compiled up into a boring and very not enjoyable romance. The only romantic part that was enjoyable was the dancing scene, which was actually cute. But overall, I do not care for them as a couple at all.
4. The drive of the plot being Kalothia’s desire for justice/revenge was honestly also boring. Revenge is usually an incredible plot driver, but Kalothia wasn’t driven enough for it to be interesting. Instead of a grief and rage driven desire to destroy everyone responsible for her loved ones’ deaths, Kalothia was mildly interested in figuring out who was behind it, simply so that her loved ones would rest in peace, it wasn’t even a revenge issue. It was boring. It also didn’t even feel like the main plot drive, even though it was? It wasn’t emphasised enough to be significant.
Characters…again, lots of thoughts.
1. Character development: there was none. No one got any development. The only thing close to development was Kalothia’s decision at the end to take the throne, and her temporary confidence when confronting the lords. Even then, it was clear that her determination was already in her and she just decided to use it then, she didn’t find it or gain it along the way.
2. Kalothia was extremely annoying. She either acted stupid, didn’t know what was going on when it was blatantly obvious, acted like a petulant child or was dumb to Nahir. I can’t stand her to be perfectly honest. She has very little personality at all.
3. Nahir was such a bland character. We didn’t get to know him very well, he wasn’t consistent, and even his feelings for Kalothia felt forced, unrealistic and fake.
4. The other supporting characters were also bland. There wasn’t enough time in such a short book for any of them to have development or any other significant impact on the story.
Overall, I did not like this book. There were a few parts that were a little fun to read, but really, it wasn’t a great book. I understand that it is a debut, which is why I’m giving some grace with my rating. 3 stars.
July 18, 2024
Do you ever go into a book with a ton of expectations and the book somehow manages to exceed them all? This was one of those books for me!
We follow Kalothia, a royal who has been in hiding in the forest after the Queen was murdered by the King and her parents, as supporters of the Queen, went into exile. She has no clue who or where her parents are and is living a peaceful life in the forest until a bunch of assassins from the neighbouring country attack and kill everyone close to her heart. What follows is a fast-paced fantasy brimming with action, immersive world-building, gasp-worthy plot twists, court politics and drama, and so much more! And yes, a smidge of romance that is bound to make you feel all warm and cozy!
Fantasy has always been one of my go-to genres and this one inspired by West Africa with stellar world-building definitely takes the cake! The author manages to build the world with just the right amount of political intrigue without making it info-dumpy and you can’t help but wish to visit Galla too! I would have loved to see a map in the book and I would be super glad to see one in the sequel.
If you are worried about the book being dreary and taking time to set the stage, fret not! The plot is so fast-paced you won’t realise time fly as you fly through the pages! With just the right amount of anticipation to keep you hooked, and some well-placed plot twists to make your jaw drop, this book is bound to become a favourite! And shoutout to Ye-Ye too!
As someone who greatly values women friendships in life, the blossoming of friendship between Kalothia and Bukki had me smiling from ear to ear. We all need that one cheerleader of a friend who stands by us through thick and thin and Bukki is the poster girl for a perfect friend and companion! I can’t wait to see more of her in the upcoming books!
If you are someone who loves their fantasy with a hint of romance, you’re in the right place! The romance between Kalothia and Nahir was warm and comforting and felt like an oasis in a desert full of scorpions and didn’t feel forced one bit! It was the perfect respite in the vulture-infested court!
Who doesn’t love a book that screams SMASH THE PATRIARCHY??? Galla is a deeply patriarchal and misogynistic society, much like our own, where women are perceived to be the weaker sex. Kalothia plans to uproot the system and usher in a new era where women are treated as equals. This book sets the perfect stage for this subplot and I can’t wait to see it explored in the future books!
I mean, who doesn’t love some drama? This book is replete with courtroom drama and palace politics and if you happen to enjoy those, you’re in for a ride!
We need more books like these full of characters of color written by authors of color! Not only does this book draw inspiration from African culture and mythology, it also shows how rich and beautiful it is! I can’t wait to read more books by Shade Lapite!
We follow Kalothia, a royal who has been in hiding in the forest after the Queen was murdered by the King and her parents, as supporters of the Queen, went into exile. She has no clue who or where her parents are and is living a peaceful life in the forest until a bunch of assassins from the neighbouring country attack and kill everyone close to her heart. What follows is a fast-paced fantasy brimming with action, immersive world-building, gasp-worthy plot twists, court politics and drama, and so much more! And yes, a smidge of romance that is bound to make you feel all warm and cozy!
Fantasy has always been one of my go-to genres and this one inspired by West Africa with stellar world-building definitely takes the cake! The author manages to build the world with just the right amount of political intrigue without making it info-dumpy and you can’t help but wish to visit Galla too! I would have loved to see a map in the book and I would be super glad to see one in the sequel.
If you are worried about the book being dreary and taking time to set the stage, fret not! The plot is so fast-paced you won’t realise time fly as you fly through the pages! With just the right amount of anticipation to keep you hooked, and some well-placed plot twists to make your jaw drop, this book is bound to become a favourite! And shoutout to Ye-Ye too!
As someone who greatly values women friendships in life, the blossoming of friendship between Kalothia and Bukki had me smiling from ear to ear. We all need that one cheerleader of a friend who stands by us through thick and thin and Bukki is the poster girl for a perfect friend and companion! I can’t wait to see more of her in the upcoming books!
If you are someone who loves their fantasy with a hint of romance, you’re in the right place! The romance between Kalothia and Nahir was warm and comforting and felt like an oasis in a desert full of scorpions and didn’t feel forced one bit! It was the perfect respite in the vulture-infested court!
Who doesn’t love a book that screams SMASH THE PATRIARCHY??? Galla is a deeply patriarchal and misogynistic society, much like our own, where women are perceived to be the weaker sex. Kalothia plans to uproot the system and usher in a new era where women are treated as equals. This book sets the perfect stage for this subplot and I can’t wait to see it explored in the future books!
I mean, who doesn’t love some drama? This book is replete with courtroom drama and palace politics and if you happen to enjoy those, you’re in for a ride!
We need more books like these full of characters of color written by authors of color! Not only does this book draw inspiration from African culture and mythology, it also shows how rich and beautiful it is! I can’t wait to read more books by Shade Lapite!
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