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Ard's Oath #2
Noble Bearings
Ard and his anchors are off to the capital, but not without his Congratulations-you’re-a-mage horse. Ard has to figure out what it means to be a noble as he struggles with the politics of the capital, fierce beasts and even fiercer rivals. All the while a goddess slips into his household as the staff and works to watch over him and his mother.
Ard has his work cut out for him, but is the capital ready for him? He’s determined to make a mockery of fashion and see what all he can get away with as a not so subtle ‘screw you’ to the new rules he’s been placed under.
Ard has his work cut out for him, but is the capital ready for him? He’s determined to make a mockery of fashion and see what all he can get away with as a not so subtle ‘screw you’ to the new rules he’s been placed under.
413 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 7, 2023
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Bruce Sentar
57 books798 followersBorn and raised in the agricultural midwest, I moved every year after school even as far as Shanghai before settling down with my wife in Chicago.
I have always enjoyed Wuxia stories and became thrilled when I discovered harem stories spreading to western books. I've written down my day dreams for years as an idle hobby. Inspired by the harem genre I'm finally fleshing them out into full blown novels.
I'm excited to share my stories with you as I turn them into novels and series.
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I have always enjoyed Wuxia stories and became thrilled when I discovered harem stories spreading to western books. I've written down my day dreams for years as an idle hobby. Inspired by the harem genre I'm finally fleshing them out into full blown novels.
I'm excited to share my stories with you as I turn them into novels and series.
Connect with me on Facebook for updates on my latest books.
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December 19, 2023
Very disappointed.
I usually love the books Bruce puts out. I have read basically all of them, and I have to say this was awful. Such a massive let down from the first book.
There was way too much attempt at political intrigue that simple wasn’t intriguing. The entire royal family is either dumber than a box of rocks or so corrupt that it is amazing the kingdom exists.
Also they made this huge to do about him having all this power; except he doesn’t really. Apparently anyone with an “adept” level spell would crush him, despite him having the power to raise mountains because they basically believe more firmly in the shape of their spell?!?
Ard became nothing more than a crappy joke factory in this one. He just kept making glib comments, even at times when even the biggest tool would know to shut up and be serious.
Not going to go into Maribelles character since she is basically just a recycled Obsidian from SSV.
I normally read Bruce’s books in a day when they come out; however, I had to force myself to finish this one. It just wasn’t nearly as interesting as he usually writes.
I usually love the books Bruce puts out. I have read basically all of them, and I have to say this was awful. Such a massive let down from the first book.
There was way too much attempt at political intrigue that simple wasn’t intriguing. The entire royal family is either dumber than a box of rocks or so corrupt that it is amazing the kingdom exists.
Also they made this huge to do about him having all this power; except he doesn’t really. Apparently anyone with an “adept” level spell would crush him, despite him having the power to raise mountains because they basically believe more firmly in the shape of their spell?!?
Ard became nothing more than a crappy joke factory in this one. He just kept making glib comments, even at times when even the biggest tool would know to shut up and be serious.
Not going to go into Maribelles character since she is basically just a recycled Obsidian from SSV.
I normally read Bruce’s books in a day when they come out; however, I had to force myself to finish this one. It just wasn’t nearly as interesting as he usually writes.
January 15, 2025
I borrowed this book thanks to the Kindle Unlimited subscription I share with my girlfriend, and I read it between my phone and tablet using the Kindle app.
This is the second part of the "Ard's Oath" series, and it starts right after the end of book one. I do recommend reading the first book, not only because I loved it, but also because that book introduces the fantasy world, the characters, and their motivations. You will be quite lost if you jump directly to book two.
That said, this one is surprisingly awesome too! I loved every piece of it. Ard's evolution from being a nobody to becoming the four-sphere mage destined to be the most powerful mage ever continues with the help of his new harem of anchors (girls who help him ground the excess magic in a quite peculiar way).
This story focuses on Ard's training to become a mage and the intricate, vast politics of the big city. Everyone wants a piece of Ard, even the princess.
If you like light-hearted fantasy stories, incredibly well-written and plotted, you must read this story. I am continuing right now with book three.
This is the second part of the "Ard's Oath" series, and it starts right after the end of book one. I do recommend reading the first book, not only because I loved it, but also because that book introduces the fantasy world, the characters, and their motivations. You will be quite lost if you jump directly to book two.
That said, this one is surprisingly awesome too! I loved every piece of it. Ard's evolution from being a nobody to becoming the four-sphere mage destined to be the most powerful mage ever continues with the help of his new harem of anchors (girls who help him ground the excess magic in a quite peculiar way).
This story focuses on Ard's training to become a mage and the intricate, vast politics of the big city. Everyone wants a piece of Ard, even the princess.
If you like light-hearted fantasy stories, incredibly well-written and plotted, you must read this story. I am continuing right now with book three.
March 13, 2024
Not quite as good as the first book in the series as the main story arc did not advance much. Several new villians were introduced but nothing really ever got resolved. World building and the magic system continue to be the strength of this series and enough to keep me interested in book 3, whenever that comes out.
December 13, 2023
Boring
This novel doesn't reel the reader in. I didn't find it particularly exciting and it was overly juvenile. Which is disappointing since Sentar has other good works.DNF
This novel doesn't reel the reader in. I didn't find it particularly exciting and it was overly juvenile. Which is disappointing since Sentar has other good works.DNF
May 23, 2024
The worldbuilding in these is really interesting, and the action is generally well-written. But Ard! So annoying! Each book is like, can I finish the good bits before Ard drives me insane?
December 17, 2023
The first book was pretty juvenile and this one leans even more into that. From the Oath's core tenant of "fighting and fucking together", to how many pitchers of water they need while having sex, to his "congratulations-you're-a-mage" horse, to the non-stop pain of the MC's "wit." If there were more beer the whole thing would come across as a bad frat movie.
Even worse, though, this is only book two of the series, the scoreboard is already sitting at 5 or 6 women and the story felt subsumed by relationship drama. Meanwhile, the MC's development is all over the place and most notable for all the wizarding instruction he's NOT receiving.
This is a shame because I like many of the author's other series, but the tone of this one is a miss for me.
Even worse, though, this is only book two of the series, the scoreboard is already sitting at 5 or 6 women and the story felt subsumed by relationship drama. Meanwhile, the MC's development is all over the place and most notable for all the wizarding instruction he's NOT receiving.
This is a shame because I like many of the author's other series, but the tone of this one is a miss for me.
March 29, 2024
Cyam
Great name for a "Congrats your a mage horse." Giggle. I find I am thoroughly enjoying my time with Are, Emlyn, Zuri, and the rest. See you next time.
Great name for a "Congrats your a mage horse." Giggle. I find I am thoroughly enjoying my time with Are, Emlyn, Zuri, and the rest. See you next time.
March 25, 2024
Love the progression
I'm really pleased to see the character make new connections and get more power. I'm also excited to see him reunite with his mom. And you know, it's interesting to see how he reacts to all these plot twists.
I'm really pleased to see the character make new connections and get more power. I'm also excited to see him reunite with his mom. And you know, it's interesting to see how he reacts to all these plot twists.
March 20, 2024
Fun ride and interesting characters
Now that was much better than the last book in this series. I even laughed out loud several times. These characters were fun and funny with such irreverence to authority at times. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Nice job.
Now that was much better than the last book in this series. I even laughed out loud several times. These characters were fun and funny with such irreverence to authority at times. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Nice job.
December 28, 2023
It's unbelievable that this second book can be even worse than the first. This author deserves to be Forever Alone (FA) In Real-Life (IRL). Has no idea of how to treat a lady, much less keep one. An example: This is Art, main character (talking about his life-long-love) (chapter 1) "I realized that I might be at least a little sleep deprived. And that lack of sleep was entirely Emlyn’s fault. The woman f*cked like an animal. And I was starting to consider if life magic in bed should be restricted for my own health and sanity". A geeky 15 year-old mage, that had his heart-broken by Emlyn, by the first chapter of the second book already treats her like if she were an "animal"??? Isn't it supposed to be that way, (Honeymoon) for love-sick teenagers without proper adult-supervision??
There is just no way, that a guy, main character, is making all of his dreams come true (being a mage, being with the girl he loved all of his life) and would be worried about missing some sleep, or would describe the "love of his life" like an "animal"...There is no "blue-blood", etiquette or lineage (Kingly ADN) in the main character...Not only does he lack a proper basic education, he treats his entourage, his "harem" like trash. What could ever be noble about this??? How idiotic does the author need to be, to create contradictions so crass and emotionally retarded as these???
This second book and the series lack maps, lack inside illustrations, lack character summaries, lack world building and descriptions of geopolitical, economic, social, religious, geographical, etc. systems in place in this Fantasy-other-world. This book is as short as the first one, and the magic system is illogical, nonsensical and irrational. It's basically a non-existent excuse for bad porn.
There is just no way, that a guy, main character, is making all of his dreams come true (being a mage, being with the girl he loved all of his life) and would be worried about missing some sleep, or would describe the "love of his life" like an "animal"...There is no "blue-blood", etiquette or lineage (Kingly ADN) in the main character...Not only does he lack a proper basic education, he treats his entourage, his "harem" like trash. What could ever be noble about this??? How idiotic does the author need to be, to create contradictions so crass and emotionally retarded as these???
This second book and the series lack maps, lack inside illustrations, lack character summaries, lack world building and descriptions of geopolitical, economic, social, religious, geographical, etc. systems in place in this Fantasy-other-world. This book is as short as the first one, and the magic system is illogical, nonsensical and irrational. It's basically a non-existent excuse for bad porn.
November 10, 2024
So far of this author's book series, I like this one the best. I also like Dragon's Justice which I started reading before this series. I like this series better, as I have always liked high fantasy. I like how magic works in this world and that there is no free lunch. I am looking forward to the next book in this series but I understand the author has a new baby, and is taking January off.
December 19, 2023
A fun read. The MC is a glib tongued mage thats OP but wading thru a political minefield.
Spoiler Alert…..
As the MC arrives at the capital of Avente, his reputation as a rare 4 aspect mage precedes him. Factions vying to control the country want to make him their minion. Meanwhile, a weakened goddess who is the adversary of his Zenov bloodline decides to personally assist him. Strange bedfellows! She even facilitates the healing of the MC’s broken mom and intercepts the spy that infiltrated his family’s household from Carmilla, the wickedly ambitious princess.
One of the more fun things in this story is the MC’s glib tongue and ability to stir up trouble. Of course this irreverence and his OP magic has him in and out of trouble at every turn. Yet, his empathy, intelligence, loyalty and willingness to learn help him to stumble through the various minefields. This glibness along with the ice cream gag provides comic relief as the characters fight manticores, corrupted, pirates and even more treacherous, take on the politics of the capital. Its a-lot to unpack for a former tavern worker who’s only awakened as a mage two months ago but is now center stage, or more like ground zero.
Behind every successful man, as the saying goes, there is a strong supportive woman. In this case, its his developing harem and harem hopefuls. Plus his mom. The various women in his life are all interesting characters, but a refresher within the story would be appreciated to remind the readers of who everyone is. I think this would make the story more engaging. For example, I found myself struggling to remember how Aurelia, Sienna and Bianca first met the MC. This is increasingly important as more characters get introduced such as, Hecate, Maribelle and Izzy who could all play prominent roles in the future. Of course Emlyn and Zuri are major supporting characters and I look forward to aee how their relationship grows. Since the next book would be a few months in the future we, the readers, can forget their interaction, so a refresher would be helpful.
I enjoyed the unexpected twists and turns in the story such as Maribella’s hidden desires for submissive role-play, while she is obviously warped and an extremely dangerous individual. But she is becoming the MC’s warped tool. Then there is Cyam. What happened to him was unexpected to say the least. We also don’t know what happened to Harry, the MC’s dad. Is he still around trying to escape captivity somewhere or is he pushing up daisies after going through some beasts digestive system?
Finally, the chapter about the soul mage that released the three experimental corrupted was disturbingly interesting. He is obviously coo-coo but I didn’t really get whose side of the war is he on, though it looks like he is a Zenovian. He targeted the fort, but that doesnt mean he’s not targeting his own country for some nefarious plot. Also, who is his OP mentor that he wants to absorb?
From the first book the Vel’shae that the MC met revealed that there are more undercurrents going on beneath the surface. This was not advanced in this book but I remember it as a plot thread prior to the introduction of the goddess.
Looking forward to the next installment in this series.
Spoiler Alert…..
As the MC arrives at the capital of Avente, his reputation as a rare 4 aspect mage precedes him. Factions vying to control the country want to make him their minion. Meanwhile, a weakened goddess who is the adversary of his Zenov bloodline decides to personally assist him. Strange bedfellows! She even facilitates the healing of the MC’s broken mom and intercepts the spy that infiltrated his family’s household from Carmilla, the wickedly ambitious princess.
One of the more fun things in this story is the MC’s glib tongue and ability to stir up trouble. Of course this irreverence and his OP magic has him in and out of trouble at every turn. Yet, his empathy, intelligence, loyalty and willingness to learn help him to stumble through the various minefields. This glibness along with the ice cream gag provides comic relief as the characters fight manticores, corrupted, pirates and even more treacherous, take on the politics of the capital. Its a-lot to unpack for a former tavern worker who’s only awakened as a mage two months ago but is now center stage, or more like ground zero.
Behind every successful man, as the saying goes, there is a strong supportive woman. In this case, its his developing harem and harem hopefuls. Plus his mom. The various women in his life are all interesting characters, but a refresher within the story would be appreciated to remind the readers of who everyone is. I think this would make the story more engaging. For example, I found myself struggling to remember how Aurelia, Sienna and Bianca first met the MC. This is increasingly important as more characters get introduced such as, Hecate, Maribelle and Izzy who could all play prominent roles in the future. Of course Emlyn and Zuri are major supporting characters and I look forward to aee how their relationship grows. Since the next book would be a few months in the future we, the readers, can forget their interaction, so a refresher would be helpful.
I enjoyed the unexpected twists and turns in the story such as Maribella’s hidden desires for submissive role-play, while she is obviously warped and an extremely dangerous individual. But she is becoming the MC’s warped tool. Then there is Cyam. What happened to him was unexpected to say the least. We also don’t know what happened to Harry, the MC’s dad. Is he still around trying to escape captivity somewhere or is he pushing up daisies after going through some beasts digestive system?
Finally, the chapter about the soul mage that released the three experimental corrupted was disturbingly interesting. He is obviously coo-coo but I didn’t really get whose side of the war is he on, though it looks like he is a Zenovian. He targeted the fort, but that doesnt mean he’s not targeting his own country for some nefarious plot. Also, who is his OP mentor that he wants to absorb?
From the first book the Vel’shae that the MC met revealed that there are more undercurrents going on beneath the surface. This was not advanced in this book but I remember it as a plot thread prior to the introduction of the goddess.
Looking forward to the next installment in this series.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 28, 2024
A strong second effort for Mr. Sentar and Ard. As Ard continues to call out the Nobles in his arc and disrupt the powers that be, we are able to see how powerful Ard can be as he involves himself with a Manticore hunt and becomes involved in the power dynamics of the Capital.
We see his relationship continue to evolve with both Emlyn and Zuir, and we are able to finally see his familial relationships. The interactions with his grandfather and mother make for an interesting side story. The involved of Hecate will be interesting to follow. She originally seemed to be more villain in the first book but with her involvement in Ard’s family and assistance with his mother, I haven’t decided how she will impact the story.
The first princess’ introduction adds a new layer of political intrigue for Ard. How will he use the position he is in to both impact the future of Avante and how will he avoid being removed before his magic and power can be fully harnessed.
This book did not grab me quite as hard and fast as the first book but was still a great read. The transition from hard and fast battles and Ard coming into his magic to development of more of the political intrigue component seemed to be a little less exciting. However, I still can not wait for the next installment of Ard’s Oath. How does is mother progress and what role does Hecate play. How does the time in the mountains impact his relationship with Aurelia and Maribelle. What will his relationship with Sienna look like going foreword and will he start on the road to making new 4 sphere mages. Will he develop his magic enough to be able to handle the dual with Zuri’s brothers and house Trevis?
Can not wait!
We see his relationship continue to evolve with both Emlyn and Zuir, and we are able to finally see his familial relationships. The interactions with his grandfather and mother make for an interesting side story. The involved of Hecate will be interesting to follow. She originally seemed to be more villain in the first book but with her involvement in Ard’s family and assistance with his mother, I haven’t decided how she will impact the story.
The first princess’ introduction adds a new layer of political intrigue for Ard. How will he use the position he is in to both impact the future of Avante and how will he avoid being removed before his magic and power can be fully harnessed.
This book did not grab me quite as hard and fast as the first book but was still a great read. The transition from hard and fast battles and Ard coming into his magic to development of more of the political intrigue component seemed to be a little less exciting. However, I still can not wait for the next installment of Ard’s Oath. How does is mother progress and what role does Hecate play. How does the time in the mountains impact his relationship with Aurelia and Maribelle. What will his relationship with Sienna look like going foreword and will he start on the road to making new 4 sphere mages. Will he develop his magic enough to be able to handle the dual with Zuri’s brothers and house Trevis?
Can not wait!
April 24, 2024
Fast Action, Loose Magic
Ard the once-in-a-thousand-years four sphere mage continues his indoctrination into his new role in life. He continues to be a likeable jokester who doesn't take things to seriously, and more importantly remains humble and endearing.
This allows him to expand his social circles an anchors, evolving several relationships on different timeframes.
Of course Emlyn, his childhood love will always be first.
Zuri the strategist is evolving into a good addition to the team. Her half-brothers get manipulated by the princess into interfering, resulting in a challenge accepted for a duel which is put off through the end of the story, in hopes that Ard will gain more power and mastery over his skills before the duel is held.
Ard recovers a godess statue of Hecate, which get him noticed by her, and things evolve with her becoming personally involved and incarnate.
Ard's mother is non-responsive, but through a combination of Ard's magic, and his answered prayers to his new goddes, she recovers remarkably and feels stronger then ever.
Maribelle, one of hte princesses maids assigned to teaching Ard, is turned by his soul-insights allowing him to become her perfect partner.
Sienna the stone-mage and her anchor Selena join up but aren't central characters.
The political side developes but doesn't overwhelm the story of Ard growing his skills and coterie, which is more interesting.
Ard the once-in-a-thousand-years four sphere mage continues his indoctrination into his new role in life. He continues to be a likeable jokester who doesn't take things to seriously, and more importantly remains humble and endearing.
This allows him to expand his social circles an anchors, evolving several relationships on different timeframes.
Of course Emlyn, his childhood love will always be first.
Zuri the strategist is evolving into a good addition to the team. Her half-brothers get manipulated by the princess into interfering, resulting in a challenge accepted for a duel which is put off through the end of the story, in hopes that Ard will gain more power and mastery over his skills before the duel is held.
Ard recovers a godess statue of Hecate, which get him noticed by her, and things evolve with her becoming personally involved and incarnate.
Ard's mother is non-responsive, but through a combination of Ard's magic, and his answered prayers to his new goddes, she recovers remarkably and feels stronger then ever.
Maribelle, one of hte princesses maids assigned to teaching Ard, is turned by his soul-insights allowing him to become her perfect partner.
Sienna the stone-mage and her anchor Selena join up but aren't central characters.
The political side developes but doesn't overwhelm the story of Ard growing his skills and coterie, which is more interesting.
April 26, 2025
Still fun
Book 2 and still a great fun story , getting to see the MC getting better at his magic and getting to know his friends and family and pretty much envisioning his adventure while you read and enjoy the sarcastic jokes and the ways they all like each other and figuring out the new folks walking into his life. I enjoy all the characters so far and the way they've learned to joke and be around each other , the fighting is funny as well he's got powerful but not alot of control and his anchors are always helping him out ,but messing with him with their jokes and they all love it , he gets scare-roused by his new anchor Aurelia cause she's like a red headed manticore and when he's nice to her she gets flustered and acts out with some rage ,but not to him , his enemies . Just see for yourself and enjoy these books , you won't be disappointed. I've and a great time giggling and laughing at the awesome story and seeing the outside perspective of the Goddess that might or might not be hanging about thinking things over , which way she wants to go or not go .... it's pretty interesting and fun as well . Fun read and enjoyable ride, I'm gonna buy book 3 now and continue with the fun , I'll probably reread all the books when I get caught up to the latest one . Come have fun too
Book 2 and still a great fun story , getting to see the MC getting better at his magic and getting to know his friends and family and pretty much envisioning his adventure while you read and enjoy the sarcastic jokes and the ways they all like each other and figuring out the new folks walking into his life. I enjoy all the characters so far and the way they've learned to joke and be around each other , the fighting is funny as well he's got powerful but not alot of control and his anchors are always helping him out ,but messing with him with their jokes and they all love it , he gets scare-roused by his new anchor Aurelia cause she's like a red headed manticore and when he's nice to her she gets flustered and acts out with some rage ,but not to him , his enemies . Just see for yourself and enjoy these books , you won't be disappointed. I've and a great time giggling and laughing at the awesome story and seeing the outside perspective of the Goddess that might or might not be hanging about thinking things over , which way she wants to go or not go .... it's pretty interesting and fun as well . Fun read and enjoyable ride, I'm gonna buy book 3 now and continue with the fun , I'll probably reread all the books when I get caught up to the latest one . Come have fun too
December 27, 2023
I feel I was too lenient with my review of book 1 so I may go back and revise that to a 3, which is what this gets.
The elements are all there, but it's like they were being slapped around by the LHC at CERN. The most positive thing I can say is the snark has been dialed back, but the thing about the horse in particular got old fast. There are a lot of relationship things going on, too many I'd say.
It won't be the first Sentar book with way too big a menage (I'm avoiding the "h" word) but perhaps he should think a bit harder about how many women to throw at an unexceptional personality. The magic potiential is one thing, but that isn't cashing the cheques just yet.
At the end of the day this gets a 3 because it took me two weeks to finish it, not something I do with something that really grabs me. That's barely this side of a DNF, so I'm hoping the next book tightens things up, and grows up a bit.
The elements are all there, but it's like they were being slapped around by the LHC at CERN. The most positive thing I can say is the snark has been dialed back, but the thing about the horse in particular got old fast. There are a lot of relationship things going on, too many I'd say.
It won't be the first Sentar book with way too big a menage (I'm avoiding the "h" word) but perhaps he should think a bit harder about how many women to throw at an unexceptional personality. The magic potiential is one thing, but that isn't cashing the cheques just yet.
At the end of the day this gets a 3 because it took me two weeks to finish it, not something I do with something that really grabs me. That's barely this side of a DNF, so I'm hoping the next book tightens things up, and grows up a bit.
August 16, 2024
So I am new to Bruce Sentar books. From other reviews it seems like this is a bit different from his other series so I am still open to giving his other series a chance.
There is a lot that I enjoy about this book. The female characters, the world building (lite as it is), the magic system. But the MC is so damn annoying that I couldn’t get through the second half of this book.
I was hoping he would get better after book one but no…he still never…stops…joking. And the worse part is the jokes are not intelligent or funny. They are high school, toilet humor.
One of my favorite litrpg series is “He who fights with monsters” and the MC in that series has a mouth as well. But his jokes usually have a point and purpose behind them. He likes to joke around but as things happen to him he learns and knows when to joke and when not to.
I don’t see Ard ever learning that lesson, so I am finished with this series. DNF
There is a lot that I enjoy about this book. The female characters, the world building (lite as it is), the magic system. But the MC is so damn annoying that I couldn’t get through the second half of this book.
I was hoping he would get better after book one but no…he still never…stops…joking. And the worse part is the jokes are not intelligent or funny. They are high school, toilet humor.
One of my favorite litrpg series is “He who fights with monsters” and the MC in that series has a mouth as well. But his jokes usually have a point and purpose behind them. He likes to joke around but as things happen to him he learns and knows when to joke and when not to.
I don’t see Ard ever learning that lesson, so I am finished with this series. DNF
December 11, 2023
Rating: 4.5
For the most part this was a worthy successor to the first book. The only part I had issues with was the villain of the story. Rather than being a villain you love to hate I found it overdone. Their introduction scenes had me more pissed and frustrated in a way that had me not enjoying the book and seriously considering abandoning it. Thankfully future scenes with them managed to avoid that effect. Hopefully it does not return in the next book. I also felt like Ard made very little real progress with his magic, though that is shaping up to be different in the next book.
The rest of the world is starting to be filled in a bit, and we're also getting a few more teasers about Gods/Goddesses/etc that could prove interesting in future. Overall I would recommend this book. Just push past the villain and the rest of the book is very much worth it.
For the most part this was a worthy successor to the first book. The only part I had issues with was the villain of the story. Rather than being a villain you love to hate I found it overdone. Their introduction scenes had me more pissed and frustrated in a way that had me not enjoying the book and seriously considering abandoning it. Thankfully future scenes with them managed to avoid that effect. Hopefully it does not return in the next book. I also felt like Ard made very little real progress with his magic, though that is shaping up to be different in the next book.
The rest of the world is starting to be filled in a bit, and we're also getting a few more teasers about Gods/Goddesses/etc that could prove interesting in future. Overall I would recommend this book. Just push past the villain and the rest of the book is very much worth it.
June 15, 2024
Grinding
Alternate universe, magic, base building, harem adult situations
The woman one the first cover is obviously Emlyn, and the inspiration for this one is Zuri, but Zuri is supposed to be dark skinned and the woman with the painted on leather is far lighter than as described.
A lot of intrigues and challenges for Arden, as his opponents make themselves known. He gets his fourth anchor, but the new one doesn't know all the rules yet, and Aurelia hasn't been clear about her position with Arden, expecting him to be more cognizant. And the new villain is willing to bleed the nation dry to get what she wants. While Arden trains, control of the capital and the mages shifts away from Arden and his allies. Pace slows down a bit at the end when Arden does some radically unexpected magic.
Alternate universe, magic, base building, harem adult situations
The woman one the first cover is obviously Emlyn, and the inspiration for this one is Zuri, but Zuri is supposed to be dark skinned and the woman with the painted on leather is far lighter than as described.
A lot of intrigues and challenges for Arden, as his opponents make themselves known. He gets his fourth anchor, but the new one doesn't know all the rules yet, and Aurelia hasn't been clear about her position with Arden, expecting him to be more cognizant. And the new villain is willing to bleed the nation dry to get what she wants. While Arden trains, control of the capital and the mages shifts away from Arden and his allies. Pace slows down a bit at the end when Arden does some radically unexpected magic.
December 10, 2023
the plot thickens
I loved the additions to the expanding world in this. Goddesses with grudges, soul magic, the first princess being the the embodiment of everything to hate in a person, etc.. mirabel is a fun addition to the harem. The crazy ones are always fun to read. I can sense that Aurelia is likely next up. I’m curious to see how the various goddesses and nations are expanded as other gods were briefly mentioned in the form of “blessings”. Along with Ard apparently being royalty to a nation his home country is at war with. This is shaping up to be an amazing series and am almost annoyed i have to wait
I loved the additions to the expanding world in this. Goddesses with grudges, soul magic, the first princess being the the embodiment of everything to hate in a person, etc.. mirabel is a fun addition to the harem. The crazy ones are always fun to read. I can sense that Aurelia is likely next up. I’m curious to see how the various goddesses and nations are expanded as other gods were briefly mentioned in the form of “blessings”. Along with Ard apparently being royalty to a nation his home country is at war with. This is shaping up to be an amazing series and am almost annoyed i have to wait
December 10, 2023
Perfection of magical tomfoolery
Bruce Sentar does it again. I've read countless books in my time, and though within the past few years, I have only scratched the service of harem novels, I have to say Bruce Sentar's writing is unparalleled. I have at least finished a series from all the big names, and Bruce just takes it to another level with such tasteful imagery, and Noble Bearings is yet another example. Between witty banter and interesting character development, you are sure to be satisfied with the purchase of this book. The only sad part about it is when it ends and you don't get to read more of the story.
Bruce Sentar does it again. I've read countless books in my time, and though within the past few years, I have only scratched the service of harem novels, I have to say Bruce Sentar's writing is unparalleled. I have at least finished a series from all the big names, and Bruce just takes it to another level with such tasteful imagery, and Noble Bearings is yet another example. Between witty banter and interesting character development, you are sure to be satisfied with the purchase of this book. The only sad part about it is when it ends and you don't get to read more of the story.
December 21, 2023
Loved book 1, love the series, loved this book.
There's really not a ton to say I didn't cover in my review of book 1, since this is very, very much a continuation of what came before. Same setting, same characters, same snarky dialogue, same everything more or less, just working our way through the plot and Ard's growth as a mage.
Again, the only reason I can think of not to whole-heartedly recommend this book is that, as I write this, the sequel isn't out yet, and when you reach the end and there's no book 3 to start on you will be - as I was - sad.
Highly recommended if you need some escapism for whatever reason. Chicken soup for the soul.
There's really not a ton to say I didn't cover in my review of book 1, since this is very, very much a continuation of what came before. Same setting, same characters, same snarky dialogue, same everything more or less, just working our way through the plot and Ard's growth as a mage.
Again, the only reason I can think of not to whole-heartedly recommend this book is that, as I write this, the sequel isn't out yet, and when you reach the end and there's no book 3 to start on you will be - as I was - sad.
Highly recommended if you need some escapism for whatever reason. Chicken soup for the soul.
July 29, 2024
The fundamentals of what I enjoy in a fantasy novel are all present in this series and volume 2 has been no exception.
It was a joy to see the MC’s disregard for nobility and societal expectations continued while also allowing him to come into his own and develop more concrete foundations of his own morals and attitudes in the greater world.
I was surprised to enjoy the intimate scenes with the new character from the palace, although I think part of it was the inclusion of a base education around their specific dynamic and the character entering a new space of navigating alternative forms of physical intimacy and relationships.
It was a joy to see the MC’s disregard for nobility and societal expectations continued while also allowing him to come into his own and develop more concrete foundations of his own morals and attitudes in the greater world.
I was surprised to enjoy the intimate scenes with the new character from the palace, although I think part of it was the inclusion of a base education around their specific dynamic and the character entering a new space of navigating alternative forms of physical intimacy and relationships.
December 19, 2023
Great read.
I have read both in this series and have loved both of them. Good charcter build. The main is both convicted in his beliefs but pragmatic enough to know when to bend when he comes up against people who can cause him issues that he cant over come at the moment. I love the woman in his life and how they are all different. Its not the type of book where he has a instant harem and is super op as soon as he comes into his power. Love watching him grow and how he leans on others to keep all that he loves safe.
I have read both in this series and have loved both of them. Good charcter build. The main is both convicted in his beliefs but pragmatic enough to know when to bend when he comes up against people who can cause him issues that he cant over come at the moment. I love the woman in his life and how they are all different. Its not the type of book where he has a instant harem and is super op as soon as he comes into his power. Love watching him grow and how he leans on others to keep all that he loves safe.
February 18, 2024
Teenage boy fantasy with fulfillment
It's pretty well written, the magic system is interesting and the plot good, but there is a very strong thread of teenage boy wish fulfillment, the teenage boy who hasn't yet reached third base in fact.
I've no idea why the male author seems convinced that bigger is better for breasts, most of us grow out of that stage at some point.
But, if you don't mind the slightly misogynistic overtones, which I think are unintended, and the clumsy descriptions of bigger and bigger breasts then it's a fun romp.
It's pretty well written, the magic system is interesting and the plot good, but there is a very strong thread of teenage boy wish fulfillment, the teenage boy who hasn't yet reached third base in fact.
I've no idea why the male author seems convinced that bigger is better for breasts, most of us grow out of that stage at some point.
But, if you don't mind the slightly misogynistic overtones, which I think are unintended, and the clumsy descriptions of bigger and bigger breasts then it's a fun romp.
December 9, 2023
Quickly becoming a favourite
Following on with the original book, book two has just as much witty banter, bad ideas and epic magic as Ard arrives in the capital to meet his long lost family and gets embroiled in politics and power struggles.
What's a mage to do when all he wants to do is woo his anchors and learn to harness his magic?
With plenty of twists, turns, laughs and some tense and interesting moments, it's a series I could happily read again and again!
Following on with the original book, book two has just as much witty banter, bad ideas and epic magic as Ard arrives in the capital to meet his long lost family and gets embroiled in politics and power struggles.
What's a mage to do when all he wants to do is woo his anchors and learn to harness his magic?
With plenty of twists, turns, laughs and some tense and interesting moments, it's a series I could happily read again and again!
December 12, 2023
Now that Ard has left home and moved the capital, he's learning there's a lot more moving parts to the world. We get a few examples of his overwhelming power, but he still hasn't learned to harness it properly. The political machinations are much more severe than what I was expecting, but it will make some interesting stories going forward. Looking to many more adventures with Ard and his anchors.
December 24, 2023
Enjoyable escape
I love this kind of escape not much hack and slash and not much kiss kiss bang the new girl etc, a nice slice of life semi harem good story.
I normally read these after a heavy book in the genre that has no harem no slice of life the unrealistically women or man main protag just going from 0 to 100 can get boring, this feels just organic not contrived or forced, i say enjoy the story and onward to book 3.
I love this kind of escape not much hack and slash and not much kiss kiss bang the new girl etc, a nice slice of life semi harem good story.
I normally read these after a heavy book in the genre that has no harem no slice of life the unrealistically women or man main protag just going from 0 to 100 can get boring, this feels just organic not contrived or forced, i say enjoy the story and onward to book 3.
December 29, 2023
The first book is passable if you skip the graphic scenes. My suspension of disbelief can only take me so far. Fine, we met a two core in the last book that didn't bust his face for the way he talks to people and perhaps some of the senior mages are too excited to correct him, but he should have hit a brick wall. That's unrealistic. Then you expect me to believe a guy who grew up on the fringe of the empire and never knew more than 100 people understand counter espionage? Nope. DNF
January 2, 2024
Good fun need more
Find the second book. Little slow at the beginning and middle but way more fun at the end. Politics is always so drool. I hated That part But necessary. RMC is finally starting to get a handle on some of His powers and exercise them. No big epiphanies in this book I'm a bit surprised that hopefully he gets a handle on them soon as many problems on the horizon. Can't wait for the next book hopefully not long anyways.
Find the second book. Little slow at the beginning and middle but way more fun at the end. Politics is always so drool. I hated That part But necessary. RMC is finally starting to get a handle on some of His powers and exercise them. No big epiphanies in this book I'm a bit surprised that hopefully he gets a handle on them soon as many problems on the horizon. Can't wait for the next book hopefully not long anyways.
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