Once upon a time . . . That’s how a good story should begin, or so I’ve been told. Sweet young maidens attending royal balls, falling in love with charming princes, and living happily ever after.
That is not my story. Meet Ella Upton, a spirited young woman who’s simply trying to survive in Arcady, the kingdom of happily never after, where the taxes are high, the laws are harsh, and a girl can end up in the Dismal Dungeons for merely swooning in the presence of royalty.
After her heart was broken at seventeen, Ella’s only goal is to keep herself and her beloved stepmother and stepsisters from losing their comfortable home and being forced to move to a hovel in Misty Bottoms.
Much to her dismay, she gains a suitor in the unlikely Horatio Crushington, a handsome but harsh Commander of the Midtown Garrison. After he saves her from an ogre, Ella learns to see past his stern façade and discovers the lonely, gentle man beneath.
For the first time in years, Ella opens her heart to the possibility of falling in love, but it’s a dangerous attraction. Horatio could threaten the safety of her dearest friend, Malcom Hawkridge, a charming rogue with a penchant for flouting laws and plans to steal a mysterious magic orb at the ball.
Now, all Ella must do is avoid the threats from a jealous witch, a cantankerous wizard and a lascivious prince, help her sisters find wealthy suitors, dance with Horatio without arousing his suspicions, steal the orb for Mal without getting caught. And accomplish all this before the stroke of midnight.
Born Susan Carol Cute in 1952, Susan Coppula obtained a Degree in English with complementary studies in History in the University of Indiana. Since 1986, Susan has published books under three different pseudonyms: Susan Carroll, Susan Coppula, and Serena Richards
Disenchanted is a breezy, romance-oriented retelling of Cinderella, with several twists to the original story. Ella (whose actual name is Prunella!) is strong-minded 24 year old woman with a sarcastic tongue, trying to keep together her destitute household, with two frivolous stepsisters who just want to spend money and enjoy life, and a stepmother that she finds difficult to relate to.
When a royal ball is announced with an alarmingly high ticket price of twenty silver galoons (the king is in need of funds too), Ella has the unpleasant task of trying to convince her delighted stepsisters that there is absolutely no way they can afford to attend. But Ella's sexy best friend, Malcolm Hawkridge, offers to pay their way ... if only Ella will steal a magical treasure for him from the king's treasury, that Mal claims truly belongs to his family. Ella is definitely not interested in running that risk!
Meanwhile, Horatio Crushington, a strong, fierce-looking man and the commander of the local military garrison, has unexpectedly developed an affection for Ella. While she tries not to offend him, she's never really considered him as a potential love interest and doesn't want to encourage him.
Of course, Ella and her sisters are going to be at that royal ball, but the story gets a lot more complicated than you might expect. Not one but two of the royal princes have Ella in their sights, Mal seems to have semi-hidden desires for her, and Horatio shows up at the ball looking unexpectedly handsome.
It's a humorous and light romantic fantasy, but Disenchanted lost me a little when it turned into a love trianglesquare pentagon? Seriously, Ella is tripping over actual and potential love interests here. She is kissed by three of the four at one point or another. But the ultimate resolution of her love life was surprising ... and gratifying, at least to me. I approved of her choice!
Not a lot else is resolved, though, and the story ends on somewhat of a cliffhanger. There are several mysteries and questions that are raised and never answered. A sequel, Charmless, will be published next year to continue the story.
For the right girl looking for lots of romance and some adventure mixed with a lighthearted retelling of Cinderella, this could be a very good read. I'd recommend it to younger readers who are looking for something similar to Ella Enchanted.
I received a free eARC from NetGalley and the publisher in exchange for a review. Thank you!
I usually don't comment on covers, but this generic romance cover, while perfectly adequate for a generic romance line in, say, 1973, couldn't be more wrong for this particular book. I only hope that potential readers will find it, because it was (mostly) such a thoroughly fun romp of a read!
I will get to that mostly, but first, in spite of the cover art that looks like the model was placed on the ugliest sheets ever, this is a sweet romantic fantasy. No bad language, and though there are a few sly references to lusty young gents, nothing beyond PG.
Instead, what we have is a Cinderella (her name is actually Prunella, but everyone calls her Ella) busy grubbing in the chimney, trying to clean it, while her step-sisters are in the parlor entertaining a gentleman caller, when a royal herald comes to the door, complete with trumpet and fancy invitation. When Ella tries to kick him out and takes away his trumpet, I knew I was in for a fun ride, turning the usual Cinderella tropes on their ear.
And I was so right! Ella doesn't want whatever invitation the king has sent because she's sure it's yet a new tax, couched in PR language. The step-sisters turn out to be sweet, if a bit dizzy and romance-crazy, the step-mother is like her daughters, and Ella has been gaining a bit of a rep for an overly tart tongue, of late, as she tries to cope with their diminishing resources and the rising taxes.
Well, the invite does turn out to be to a royal ball to meet handsome Prince Florian . . . but the tickets cost a fortune. Yes, another disguised tax!
And off we go. The story is set in a typical fairy tale setting with largely Anglo names (except for a few aristocrats with post-Norman-Conquest names), referencing fairies, pixies, trolls, and magic. Ella and the cast are fun, she keeps collecting handsome guys, and everywhere she turns there are these tantalizing mysteries: about her parents, the guys, the fairy who is also a pawn-broker, about the princes, and, well, there are a lot of tantalizing threads.
So to the mostly: the story is racing along, they get to the ball, it's exciting and a lot happens and even more mysteries are hinted at, then suddenly Ella's romance is wrapped up! I hope this means that Carroll is going to revisit this setting, if not Ella's story, and carry on.
I have to admit, I love reading retellings of classic fairy tales, especially ones that put a fun twist on the fairy tale. Disenchanted by Susan Carroll is one of the best I've read to date.
Ella is no swooning young miss. She's snarky and unlike her stepsisters, has a head on her shoulders. The upcoming ball is coming up and instead of attending, her devilishly handsome best friend convinces her to join his caper. She agrees and while at the ball, she finds herself being pursued by three sexy suitors. Which one will Ella choose? She must decide quick before the clock strikes midnight.
I loved the character Ella so much! She's funny, beautiful and had me clutching my sides with her one-liners. A must read!
Wonderful twist on Cinderella with fairytale elements.
I thoroughly enjoyed Susan Carroll’s delightful twist on Cinderella that had all the elements of a classical fairytale setting, while allowing for a more modern attitude in our heroine, “Ella.” Much has remained unchanged. Ella’s mother and father have both passed, leaving her in the dubious care of her stepmother, but Carroll creates an interesting shift in that she changes the relationship between Ella and her “steps.” They might be foolhardy and unable to manage the finances, but Ella loves them. There’s no cruelty there. And the relationship between those four is charismatic and strong.
I also found it quite refreshing the way there were multiple options for Ella’s happily ever after. Would it be the charming bard who had captured her heart as a young girl, a good friend, or someone Ella herself would never have suspected? This is a charming read… hard to put down.
Disclaimer: I received a free copy of this book from the author.
I was completely enchanted by this story from the beginning. What a fantastic twist on Cinderella. I didn’t want it too end. I really hope there’s more. So many unanswered questions. I absolutely loved the characters and story building. I love all the fairytale stories but this is by far my favorite spin on Cinderella. I love a sharp tongued female who doesn’t have a filter and Ella does not disappoint. What magical beginning i really can’t wait for what’s next!.
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This book was an incredibly fun read. I adored Ella and her sassiness, and the story was so creative and well-written that I was sucked in from the start. That said, I wish that this had been clearly marked “Book 1” because although there wasn't *technically* cliffhanger, there were a lot of important plot points left wide open and that made the last 15% of the book more frustrating than satisfying. I realized that there wasn't nearly enough time left to tie it all up, and that made the ending – which should have been a feel-good moment - fall flat for me. I was so annoyed by the fact that so many things were left unsettled and there was nothing at all in the book description that warned of that.
The book itself, however was great. This re-telling of Cinderella was completely different than anything I have ever read, and I really enjoyed this fresh and completely different take on a fairy tale that we all know and love. The writing in this book was fabulous: Ella was feisty and so funny, I thought it was great that her step-family were a bit clueless but they weren't evil, and even the 'love triangle' (that got even more complicated than anticipated) was brilliant. I laughed a lot reading this one, and I even got teary-eyed once, which is a tribute to this author's writing talent.
I would love to see where this enthralling story goes, but a long wait for the next book to be published and not knowing if the story will actually be concluded makes me very wary. Or disenchanted, if you will.
I requested and was graciously granted an ARC of this book from NetGalley, and was under no obligation to write this review.
Disenchanted is an enchanting, funny story based on a modern day Cinderella. With laugh out loud moments and a love story. There is plenty of unexpected twists to keep you hooked.
It even has the not so wicked step sisters, who were actually rather nice. A little bit head in the clouds at times but i loved their innocence and their flirtatious ways but I actually loved their characters.
It makes such a change to have the step-sister and Step-Mother actually get on. Although it's clearly Ella who is in charge which was refreshing. She even handles the finances as her step family couldn't be trusted not to spend on elaborate things.
The story starts when the girls are invited to the Princes Ball. However the tickets are soooo expensive there is no way any of them can go. To be honest Ella isn't really interested but her Sisters are furious that Ella says they can't go. Ella sees the ball as another way to rob the town's people of money and not calling it the normal tax to line the Kings pockets.
It's now the journey really begins as we see Ella struggle with unwanted love interests and the grand ball.
Susan takes the typical Cinderella story and creates an enchanting modern day twist on the much loved story. All the characters are well thought out and you can see who each character would represent in the fairy tale story.
My only critiscm is that the ending had been left open. With a tease of a possible second book! Some answers left unanswered. I wanted more, I'm just hoping there will be! Every opportunity for a second book. I for one can't wait!
I received this book from the Publisher in exchange for a honest and fair review via Netgalley.
This book was full of fun twists and turns and adventures. I loved the main characters and had fun following along on their journeys. Ella was a lovable heroin who doesn’t need a man, but finds herself in the midst of more than one suitor. She navigates through this in a hilarious manner. You become torn yourself between the beaus who love her. The typical “wicked” step siblings and step mother are not to be found here. You actually fall in love with this adorable side characters and want the best for them. As Ella tries to help out a friend, she attends a ball and a series of ridiculous events follows. It is quite fun. My only problem is the book doesn’t have more! We get so many questions throughout that set up the next book perfectly, but I want to know them now! I will do my best to patiently await the next book in the series.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
An extremely different type of magical romance in a fairy tale. I must say this author is very very talented. While it is not completely to my taste I must give her credit and say with a few changes this would of been a 5 star read for me. There is nothing wrong with her writing or way of telling a story! She is gifted and it shows, the only down side in this book for me was not enough depth and too many loose ends, making it very frustrating for me. The story is engrossing even with it based on a fairy tale. It has twists and plots that are unexpected and it definitely will be one series I will follow for I want to know what happens to the other characters! I was given this book in return for an honest review. Anna Swedenmom
Thank you to NetGalley and the authors for the ARC of this book.
I normally love twisted fairy tales Unfortunately I did not love this retelling of "Cinderella". Don't think the book wasn't good because it was. The plot of the book was as original as it could be for being a "retelling" and the writing was very good. This book would be a really great beach read but the ending was so awful and it left me with 20 plus questions! In fact the ending was so dissatisfying that it completely ruined the book for me because I couldn't tell if this was the ending of the book or the beginning of a Book #2.
For now, I wouldn't recommend it but maybe if this becomes a series I would be willing to change my mind.
Quoted as a “hilarious retelling of Cinderella,” I will note that even though there are certain details (like a ball and glass slippers), the plot is nothing like Cinderella!
Instead, what if Ella loved her stepmother and stepsisters? What if Ella cleaned because they tried to help but just made the work harder? (If you have kids, you would know.) What if Ella has many men interested in her and you have no idea which one she will choose? What if Ella finds clues to her parents’ past lives that lead to a different and mysterious life? What if there was real danger lurking around every corner? What if the greedy King had not only implemented huge taxes and ridiculous laws but made everyone buy a ticket to the ball, at a price so high it takes a year to earn the amount that one ticket costs? What if Ella had a fair Godfather with an agenda of his own? What if Ella only goes to the ball to help her sisters find good matches so they no longer struggled with money? What if Ella goes to the ball to carry out a dangerous mission?
Well, then you would have an exciting story full of magic, mystery, intrigue, and much laughter! And oh the trouble and intrigue that happens at the ball! You will find yourself on the edge of your seat in suspense and laughing as you finish, not putting the book down.
5 stars and no spice, but a good side of romance with a happy ending. You will not know which man she chooses until the very end of the last chapter!
Note: This is a trilogy, but it does come to a nice conclusion. But there are many loose ends in the storyline, and I can’t wait to read the rest! “Charmless” comes out on 3/12, and “Spellcast” comes out on 5/28. I will definitely post my reviews!.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Prunella Upton just stole my heart & became my all-time favorite Cinderella.
Ella adores but is exasperated by her darling stepmother and stepsisters, whom she's been taking care of since her father died. She's had her heart broken by a silver-tongued harper who promised her romance and then disappeared. Her best friend is the piratical-looking Malcolm Hawkridge, apothecary and rogue, whom she's known since the days of their mischievous, toad-slinging childhood.
Ella most emphatically does NOT want to go to the royal ball, because she recognizes what it is: a cheap attempt by their miserly king to make money off ball tickets. But when Mal asks her to steal back a magical orb that belongs to his family, how can she say no? Even when this requires sneaking past the oh-so-splendidly upright Commander Crushington, who's gone a bit moony over Ella and so is keeping an extra close eye. Between fugitive fairies, transforming witches, and clinging princes sniffing pixie dust, Ella is going to have her hands full pulling off this heist.
I simply adored Ella with her practical mind, sarcastic tongue, and soft heart. And while normally I want to smack a girl who can't decide which boy she likes, I admit I too wavered between Team Hawk and Team Crusher--they're both terribly appealing. Carroll's beautifully developed world made me want to live in Arcady, and her sly jabs at the fairy tale and romance tropes had me grinning with glee. I lost count of how many times one of Ella's wry reflections had me laughing out loud. This book is a gem, I already can't wait to read it again, and I am SO glad there are more books in this series coming soon!
This is a retelling of Cinderella but with a strong feminine character.
Ella loves her stepsisters and stepmothers but they have no financial sense. Every day is a struggle to keep them above water.
When the king announces a ball-with tickets for sale, of course-Ella has to play the bad guy and tell them there is no money. Then their “fairy godfather” shows up with not only tickets but also the clothes and carriage to make it a dream come true.
But, he wants something from Ella-she is tasked with stealing an artifact from the castle. He might even be romantically interested in her. But he’s not the only one. There are more suitors for Ella then she wants. Only one truly captures her heart.
I enjoyed the retelling with new characters and plot. The reason for the four stars is that the book really does not resolve all of the issues brought up. I am not a fan of plots that continue in sequels but I will admit this first one was so strong, I will be reading the next ones to find out what happens.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I express my gratitude to Goodreads, where I obtained my copy through the giveaway.
In the realm of Arcady, where the conventional tales of sweet maidens and charming princes are replaced by harsh laws and high taxes, Ella Upton's story unfolds. Unlike the traditional fairy tales, Ella is a spirited young woman striving to survive in a kingdom labeled "happily never after." With a broken heart from her past, her sole aim is to protect her stepmother and stepsisters from losing their comfortable home in the face of challenging circumstances.
Unexpectedly, she gains the attention of Horatio, a suitor she hadn't anticipated. This rendition of Cinderella stands out as my favorite, offering a unique narrative with captivating twists and turns that set it apart from a mere retelling.
Ms. Carroll's writing style, a slow and enchanting allure from the beginning, kept me engrossed until I found myself flying through to the end. The book proved impossible to set aside.
I fervently hope for a sequel, as there are lingering questions I would love to see answered in this enchanting tale of Ella.
If you like fairytale retellings you will enjoy this book! This is a twist on the tale of Cinderella. The similarities are there but the differences make this book. Ella herself is independent, strong, sad, conflicted and doing everything she can to keep her family in house and feed. She gets little to no help from the step mother and step sisters who care for fripperies and little else. She isn’t quite as naive or put upon as in the original and honestly I love her as a bit of a jaded world weary person. And then there is a ball of course, princes, nobles and an honorable man, then the dishonorable one who convinces her to do something reckless. When the clock strikes midnight what will become of them all? Read on to find out how this fairytale ends with in be hea or something more dire? Wonderful, clever and never what you expect. An absolute delight to read!.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I absolutely loved all of the characters and the backstories they each had. I initially had a hard time getting into the plot, however, because I felt like I was going through very day to day things with Ella. The plot twist in chapter 12 was what kept me there to finish the book. I hope it is the beginning of a larger series with Ella and Horatio as the protagonists because their love story is truly romantic and Horatio is so sweet. It felt like a lot of build up with an abrupt , guess that means i need the next book! Overall the book was written well, with relatable characters, realistic dialogue, and beautiful representations of familial, friendly, and romantic love.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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This is by far my favorite retelling of Cinderella. Although "retelling" may not be quite the right word. This book has so many wonderful twists and turns that I found myself thoroughly enchanted by Ella's story...but it is definitely a tale of its own!
Ms. Carroll's writing style captivated me from the start, reeling me in slowly until I got to the point where I flew through to the end. I could not put it down!
I sincerely hope there is a sequel to this because I have a few questions I'd love to have answered!
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
i loved Ella Upton, the antithesis of Cinderella! Ella, a pragmatic, hard-headed young woman is a Cinderella by choice, striving to keep her family surviving and thriving when they don't understand the word budget, or empty wallet. But Ella is also a loyal person and loyalty can get her into trouble.
To her surprise and mixed feelings, she attracts the attention of the Captain of the Guard. Their attraction plays havoc with Ella's loyalties.
Read Disenchanted, and its sequel, Charmed, and be prepared to be charmed. This is a most unusual Fantasy fairytale that you will remember for a long time.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Overall, I did enjoy this book. However, I've discovered that even in a series, I enjoy each book to "wrap it up" at the end, at least that particular story line. I've become tired of cliff hangers that seem to serve no real purpose than to make me purchase the next book and books that end rather abruptly. So I did really enjoy the re-telling of cinderella, the characters and the story of this book, I probably will not go any further with this series once the next book comes out
I have not finished the book yet but so far I am enjoying it. I enjoy the voice of the author and find the characters engaging. At the beginning I felt the re-telling of Cinderella would be tired or overdone, that does not seem to be the case. I did find some of the language (frap , frapping etc.) hard to overlook and it took me away from being immersed in the story.
This was a fun twist on Cinderella! Adventure, family, love, chaos, magic.. Ella will do anything for her stepmother and stepsisters and her dearest friend but also finds herself in a heap of chaos! Being courted by one of the king's guards just adds to complications and discovering the true identity of one of the princes! This story was enjoyable to read and I'm so looking forward to book 2!
Disenchanted is a fun twist on Cinderella. Take everything you know about Cinderella and forget it because Disenchanted doesn’t follow the fairy tale. What you get, instead, is a totally original story that incorporates parts of the fairy tale into the plot line.
I will admit, I laughed my butt off while reading this book. Ella was pure snark and I loved it. The way she dealt with her sister’s suitors, her step sisters, her stepmother, her next door neighbor, Mal and even Prince Florian had me giggling. Even the situations she found herself in and her reactions to them made me laugh.
But, at the same time, I did feel bad for her. She had her heart-broken at 17 by a traveling bard named Harper. That same week, her father died and then she became the glue that held her family together. She made sure that they went without anything even if it meant sacrificing things that she might have wanted to do or have. Ella also had a great relationship with her stepmother and her two younger stepsisters…even though they drove her nuts.
Her friendship with Mal did kinda confuse me at times. It confused me because at the beginning, they were strictly friends and he was a shady apothecary. But, after the King announces the ball, he suddenly became interested in her in a romantic way? I actually reread the chapters that had him in to make sure I didn’t miss anything and reconfirmed the out of left field romantic angle. Which I didn’t. It didn’t bother me as much as it confused me.
What I did like about Ella’s friendship with Mal was that it was real and it was lasting. Which is why I think both Ella and myself were surprised when Mal asked her to steal the orb the night of the ball. When he told her that she wasn’t going because she couldn’t afford it, he got tickets for her, her stepmother and two step sisters to go. Which kinda forced her into going and doing what he wanted.
I loved the romance between Ella and Horatio. There was no Instalove. Horatio and Ella got to know each other from seeing each other around the village. It was when he asked to come calling on her and continued to go after her even when she was rude, that the romance started. It was sweet to watch it unfold. I felt horrible for him when he admitted to Ella that he overheard her stepsister and stepmother commenting on him being a “foundling”. But, I do think that there is something else about his parentage that he doesn’t know about (read the book!!!)
Prince Charming (aka Prince Florian) in this book was not so charming. Well at least to Ella, he wasn’t. She didn’t like him and the more I read about him, I didn’t like him either. He came off as one of those extremely cocky jock types that think they are God’s gift to women. Plus, there is something off about him. How his brother reacted to him was not normal. And what is going on with the King? I thought it was very weird that he knew Ella’s mother and when he found out that she had her father’s eyes, he got all pissy and walked off.
I also loved the references to the original fairytale. Mal as the fairy godfather, the quip about the field mice hurting their paws if they were to sew a dress, the pumpkin carriages that are hazards and the best thing of all…..Ella refusing to wear the glass shoes because they hurt her feet. Loved it!!
The end of the book was perfect but it left me with more questions than anything. What was up with Ella’s father? Who was S? What about the young king, his wife and newborn son (before the present king took over) who were killed? The baby’s body was never found….so where is he? Why does the King create laws and fines about everything (the fainting one did crack me up, though)? Was he in love with Ella’s mother too? and so much more. Oh so many questions that need to be answered. I do hope that there is a book 2!!
How many stars will I give Disenchanted: 4
Why: This was a very original and imaginative retelling of Cinderella. Normally I don’t like it when fairy tales are retold, something is always left out. Not here. This was a totally engrossing tale with characters that are unbelievably snarky and lovable at the same time. The references to the original fairy tale were woven into the story in such a way that you had to laugh.
Will I reread: Yes
Will I recommend to family and friends: Yes
Age range: Young Teen
Why: Some mild violence. Some kissing. Other than that, a very clean book.
**I chose to leave this review after reading an advance reader copy**
In this retelling of Cinderella, Prunella (“Ella”) Upton is a smart-mouthed seventeen-year-old supporting her loving stepmother and her two kind but rather clueless stepsisters. Though they have little money, Ella takes care of her family as best she can. When the king announces a ball to introduce all the ladies of the land to the charming Prince Florian, Ella is sure that it’s just another of his many disguised taxes, but her stepmother and stepsisters are so intent on attending that Ella does everything in her power to make it possible.
On the fringes of the story, we have Ella’s courtship with Commander Crushington, a mysteriously disappearing ex-lover, and her loveable best friend Mal. There are also mentions of several mysteries throughout.
Alright. So I’m a pretty big fan of retellings. There’s just something about taking a classic story and putting a twist on it. That said, the only reason I even picked up this book was an email from Netgalley suggesting that I might enjoy it based on other recent requests. That in itself was a little weird because this book is so far removed from what I usually request on Netgalley, but nevertheless, I read it.
From the beginning, I was a little confused about where exactly this story is supposed to take place. There are constant mentions of “Midtown,” which leads me to believe that we’re in New York City, but I’m not sure if I’d make that association if I didn’t live a mere 45-minute train ride away. I kept getting thrown off by the setting, which made it really difficult for me to immerse myself in this story.
I really struggled through the first third or so of this book. Like, to the point that I had to bribe myself with other books to make it through. I think a lot of my dislike had to do with the writing style. It’s both weirdly formal and filled with grammatical errors. (This might be corrected in the final copy.) It felt old-fashioned, which fit with the time period, but also not quite right, which was a little off-putting.
Anyway, it got better as I went along and really picked up steam about halfway through. It’s unfortunate that it took that long for me to really get interested, but at least it improved. I ended up really liking most of the characters, but the one that stands out the most for me was Mal. (I always like the friend in these kinds of stories.) Even though this is a retelling and it was obvious that Ella wouldn’t end up with Mal (the blurb claims there is a love triangle, but Ella has no romantic interest in him), I was still rooting for them. What can I say, friends-to-lovers is my favorite trope.
There were certain twists on this retelling that were really interesting, most notably the change in the relationship between Ella and her stepmother and stepsisters. In the classic story of Cinderella, the stepmother and stepsisters are absolutely evil. In this retelling, they all love each other and Ella does her best to care for them after the death of her father. I’m all for positive female relationships and not pitting women against each other unnecessarily, so this was a really cool change.
I don’t want to give away any spoilers in my review, so I guess I’ll just mention that there are a few very interesting plot twists in this book that I really appreciated. Carroll clearly has a great talent for developing a plot, but one almost unforgivable thing that happens in this book is the lack of resolution. There are so many interesting mysteries in this book, and so few of them are actually resolved. I was left with no less than ten burning questions as the book wrapped up. Is there going to be another book, or am I just supposed to wonder about Crushington’s past and Ella’s father and that weird library book forever?
This book has a really high average rating, which means that it’s clearly been enjoyed by a lot of people. I am notoriously picky about continuity and cliffhangers, so it’s possible that I’m being a little too harsh in my criticisms. The book did end up much better than I had expected when I started, but I can’t say that I really loved it.
I enjoyed reading this book. Very much. But I absolutely HATE the cover. It is grossly misleading. So much so that it induced me to create a new bookshelf: Books with criminally bad covers The book is true to its subtitle, though - it is not an average fairy tale (retelling). It starts out quaint and with an almost Disney movie-like quality. There are many story telling elements from classical fairy tales (fairies, trolls, magicians and witches, a devestatingly handsome prince who seeks a bride, shoes made of glass and coaches that look like pumpkins, royal heralds who deliver invitations to everyone - who can pay, cough - for the royal ball) - and then most of them are turned upside down. The prince is vain, the king has a pathological need to amass riches by inventing absurd taxes, the heroine is pretty sarcastic and does not believe in romantic love and the glass shoes . Also, the kingdom of Arcady is not as ... peaceful as it first seems. Unrest is brewing among certain elements of the population. The second book will probably explore this more deeply, and Mel and his globe will very likely be at the center of this. At first I was not sure if Ella would not turn out to be one of those wannebe-cool heroines who only pretend to be worldly-wise and indifferent to princly charms, have NO depth of character and betray their so-called principles when the first opportunity arises by obsessing about pretty clothes, sexy males (and sometimes even chocolate). Whose sarcasm too often crosses the line to mean. And whose judgement is not to be trusted. At all. For example, I first doubted whether I would find her stepsisters as loveable as Ella does. And although they are far from perfect, I was relieved to find out it is totally believable that Elle loves them and wants to take care of them and protect them. (LOVED drunken Amy. So cute.) Fortunately, Ella did not disappoint. She was totally believable and funny and I liked it that she was a little older than the average fantasy heroine. Despite this, she sometimes judges people or situations incorrectly (I loved how she originally was completely oblivious to the fact that Commander Horation Crushington has a crush on her, and then is surprised that no one else is surprised when she tells them), but in general she is a reliable narrator. I also liked that she is aware of her errors in judgement and tries not to make the same mistake twice. She knows she misjudged Harper; since his death she has come to understand her father better, and throughout the book she finally learns that there is a lot more to his background and story than she knows - but now it is too late to make amends and to get to know him better. I also really liked that her feelings for the hero change slowly and in a completely comprehensible way. Needless to say I fully approve of her choice. The only thing I disapprove of is the fact that I have to wait half a year until the follow-up book is published.
*Thank You Random House Publishing Group - Loveswept for the copy via NetGalley.*
"Every young girl should have one night like that, to feel beautiful and admired, her entire future shining before her with so many magic possibilities."
Disenchanted stands to its title, 'Not Your Typical Fairy Tale Romance'. One may think that sounds cliche, I did too, but boy it has lived up to its name.
SPOILER FREE REVIEW
Cinderella as a girl full of mischief and a sharp tongue. Cinderella with three gorgeous men offering their hearts. Cinderella where the prince has younger siblings. Cinderella tasked to steal from the king. Cinderella with a mysterious past. Cinderella with otherworldly creatures discreetly living in their town. And most of all, Cinderella who loves her stepmother and stepsisters and they love her back.
The characters are very much human and not all perfect, not purely evil, not invincible, and others are just trying to become a hero.
"No girl is ever satisfied with her reflection when she regards herself in the mirror, I believe it is failing of our sex that we always search for flaws and are sure to find them because no woman is perfect."
"My friend says that a woman's true power lies not in the perfection of her features, but in her confidence, how much she believes in herself."
"No matter how luxurious, a cage is still a cage."
The context of the book is also very poetic and filled with love. Here's a sample.
"My father was a quiet man, never as demonstrative with his affection as my mother. I tended to think of him as being like the moon, reflecting my mother's light and warmth. When she died, it was as though the moon fell into a state of permanent eclipse, stealing stars from my sky as well."
Once I started reading I could not get enough of it. Mysteries keep unfolding, I question the actions of characters. It may have lots of words but it is to enhance the way we see the world through Ella's eyes. It's well written, planned out. Well it's Susan Carroll of course! You can't expect nothing less.
Once again I'm trying not to beat myself up for not reading this sooner. It has been sitting in my NetGalley approved list for quite some time. Now I'll be waiting for the next book, "Clueless" and the cover looks like a prince.
I’ve read and enjoyed several of Susan Carroll’s books, so I was curious to see what she would do with a retelling of Cinderella. What she has written is a likeable piece of fluff, a fun read if you’re in the mood for something light and a bit silly.
Carroll doesn’t adhere too closely to the Cinderella story. We do have Ella (short for Prunella, of course), a stepmother, and two stepsisters, and they are all invited to a royal ball where a prince will be selecting his bride. But in this story, Ella loves and willingly takes care of her stepfamily and has absolutely no desire to leave them and marry a prince. She only winds up going to the ball at all at the urging of Malcolm, her best friend (who would like to be more). Mal plays the role of the “fairy godfather” who enables the entire family to attend, but that’s because he wants Ella to steal a magical sphere from the king’s treasury. That puts Ella in a difficult position, not just because she doesn’t want to be a thief, but because it puts her in conflict with Commander Crushington, head of the town guard and possessor of a massive crush on Ella. Nevertheless, Ella goes to the ball with the intent to steal the sphere, a mission that proves to be complicated when she draws the attentions of not one, not two, but three pesky princes . . .
There’s no fairy tale ending here. Ella actually has several men who seem interested in her, but she doesn’t wind up with any of them at the end (although there’s definitely a frontrunner). The story isn’t over, though, because not only does Ella not get her happily ever after, there’s still the mystery of why Mal wanted her to steal the sphere in the first place, as well as a few other dangling loose ends. So it seems pretty clear to me that there’s another book about Ella in the offing.
All in all, this is a frothy read, recommended if you are looking for a way to escape reality for a little while.
An eARC of this novel was provided by the publisher through NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
I would like to thank Loveswept and Netgalley for gifting me this ARC in exchange for an honest review.
If you are looking at a different take on the classic fairytale of Cinderella then this is it. It was a pretty easy read that kept you wondering. This book was full of surprises and does end leaving you with unanswered questions. So I hope there is a part two to this to close up the loose ends.
I was left swooning over Commander Crushington so if there is a sequel then I hope she chooses him!! I really liked this characterization of Ella. She is pretty much the back bone of her family and is actually quite close to them. In this interpretation I really liked her step mother and step sisters. There were pretty flighty and immature but likable. Her best friend Mal leaves you wanting to know more about him. He’s very illusive and mysterious and I’m pretty sure Ella isn’t aware of everything he is into.
I would love to see where this story goes since it does end in a cliffhanger. I would love to see what happens to the other characters in this story as well. Do they find romance? Will Ella be caught for stealing from the palace? What is Mal’s story? What are her deceased parents story? So much to cover.