Fallin' for A Cold-Blooded Menace

by Jatoria C.

“I want YOU, I want you tied to my bed for three nights to let me do whatever it is I want,” -Chaos
Keira Wright is a survivor. Even with all the odds stacked against her, she has worked hard to become the owner of a lingerie boutique. Unfortunately life has a way of throwing curveballs. Chaos Omar has been an enemy of Keira’s since childhood, and now she has to make a deal with the devil himself to keep ownership of her boutique.
Chaos Omar lives up to his family name. The Omar family controls everything that happens in Roman, New Angelo and the people of the town knew not to get in their way. Suddenly, Chaos into a conflict involving Keira. Chaos decides to use that as an opportunity to get revenge on Keira in a dark and twisted way.
Can these two survive three nights together? After those three nights end, will they both be able to walk away? See what happens in Fallin for a Cold- Blooded Menace.

Genres: Romance

131 pages, Kindle Edition

Published December 10, 2023

Reviews

[Khaliat]

I just hate the book! Everything was just uncomfortable, how are you in love with someone who killed your dad?!!!!! This man is crazy, I mean crazy psychopath, crazy scary, crazy as in need to be in a lunatic asylum crazy! Even his mom sounds crazy! The cousin crazy! The fmc ditzy crazy!

Should have named the book “The CRAZIES”

[wybie lovat · Rating 1 out of 5]

i can’t

this book genuinely shouldn’t have left the drafts. It’s so bad and completely unrealistic because why would you fall in love with the man who killed your dad?? chaos is demented like truly psychotic and not in a way that you would even be able to excuse in a fictional book. He was demented in the way that kind of made you uncomfortable.

[Madison · Rating 2 out of 5]

All I’m saying is Kiera called the friend a ditzy bitch but she the queen of ditzy.

Kiera and chaos deserve to be on fbi most wanted lock them niggas up

[Valorie · Rating 3 out of 5]

It was good until we got to the halfway mark. Then it began to be too rushed.

[Ebony · Rating 3 out of 5]

I enjoyed the book. If you’re looking for unhinged, this is the book for you! Lmao They both was crazy af

3.25⭐️

[Keiaira Oliver · Rating 5 out of 5]

Ratings - 5/5 😊⭐️
I really love and enjoyed reading this book! Truth is a fool 😂😂
Now that damn Chaos was crazy asf 😂😭🤦🏾‍♀️🤦🏾‍♀️

[TheReaderVert · Rating 3 out of 5]

Updated review and rating

Thin Line Between Love and Hate

Book is ridiculous and out there, but I love it. Chaos is a menace, but I liked him and loved his pyscho self. He eally isntouched in the head and loves setting things on fire. And Kiera was just as touched as he was so team made in heaven 😄. This is a fun, quick read. Characters were funny the smex was good and spicy (handcuffs, paddling, & branding, oh my!). This would be an A-1 story if flushed out but the unseriousness just asks you to go with it.

[Elly · Rating 4 out of 5]

4.5 stars

[Kedra Gee · Rating 5 out of 5]

Roller fn coaster!!!!

Unhinged from the beginning to the end. If my mouth didn’t drop open every page, I was squeezing my legs together.

This is a perfect read for in private unless you have a magnificent amount of self control 😮‍💨.

BDSM. Arson. Murder. Enemies to Lovers. ENTIRE FAMILY IS UNHINGED.

[Tisha · Rating 1 out of 5]

⭐️

Ridiculous.

I’m in the minority on this one. But it’s a HECK NO for me. Like seriously?! This was giving Tubi. It was giving too fiction for my taste. All of the characters were one dimensional and ridiculous.

[Whitney · Rating 3 out of 5]

I’m going to give this like a 3.5, it had very little story development and everything felt so rushed. I mean it was all gas no breaks from start to finish. Chaos had the perfect name because that man was chaotic af. He claimed to hate Keira since they were kids but he was doing that weird thing that boys sometimes do when they cannot properly express their feelings. Keira actually hated him real bad until she didn’t and it didn’t take very long for her to stop hating him and be ok with his psychotic ways.

[Selena Nicole · Rating 3 out of 5]

It’s wack-a-doodle time! From beginning to end not one person involved in the story is well in the head. Not Kiera, her friend, Chaos, his cousin or mama!

Reading this had me like “WAIT A MINUTE!!!! 🙃”

There were typos (FMC name went from Kiera to Keira multiple times) and odd expressions but I was entertained.

[tanessia ford · Rating 5 out of 5]

fried

Man these two psychopaths were truly fried. That had me over here hollering! Like bruh I can’t with them. Like cheese done slid completely off the cracker fried.

[Ashanti Burton · Rating 4 out of 5]

Ok so there was a lot of unhinged behavior going on lol. Some parts even had me like wth. Truth was hilarious. Overall I was entertained.

[KayBee's Bookshelf · Rating 4 out of 5]

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The level of toxicity in one man was outstanding. What’s worse is that I agreed with how he resolved issues. Smh I enjoyed the story and would love to get Truth’s story.

[˗ˏˋeliana´ˎ˗ · Rating 2 out of 5]

She’s an okay read I guess, felt super rushed and didn’t really get time to develop. I would have liked for Kiera and Chaos to have more time to build and really get to know each other. Chaos is nothing more than a handsome man, he lacks personality and BOUNDARIES. Kiera needed some loving, like girl don’t settle for just anyone cause they’re attractive OMGGG. Again, she’s a cute read but I can’t lie I was disappointed at the same time.

[Page Passion · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was something! A lot of books are labeled, dark romance, but this was truly dark. Also, crazy and funny in some aspects. We have an unhinged man obsessed with fire and having the heroine. he’s a businessman through nefarious means. These two were enemies since they were kids/teenagers and once they reunited as adults things just get insane. I don’t know how to review this without spoiling anything. All I can say is buckle up for a wild very fast-paced ride.

[Jai · Rating 2 out of 5]

Nope!!!!

FIRST and LAST time reading from this author. The storyline was like a jigsaw puzzle. And actually unbelievable. How do you fall in love with the man who killed your father? Because he stole from him and all of a sudden you’re ok with it? Because the sex was good??? Chaos character was quite disturbing. He was a true psychopath. Then you’re willing to kill your ex best friend because she slept with him? And she didnt know y’all were involved. The ending was rushed . I can go on about this books mishaps. Read at your own risk

[nadyalexandriia · Rating 1 out of 5]

Tired. Uninspired.

These scenes are okay.. while as the whole books is .. horrific & it feels like this book was made by a 9th grade wattpad author who has no clue what she is doing. It feels rushed & like everything that happened was a fantasy of yours from reading too many bdsm books .. stick to what you know maybe .. no shade!

[Mayee · Rating 1 out of 5]

🤦🏾‍♀️

Keira reason for dropping her friend was honestly dumb and sad as hell especially when she turned around and got in a relationship with the same person she was mad about,the same person who killed her daddy the whole book just weird

[Kayla · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.75

This book was pure chaos. Pun intended.

[Sun Flowa · Rating 1 out of 5]

The writingggg 😶

[Readwithchan_ · Rating 3 out of 5]

Ummm 😮‍💨… I don’t even know where to start…

3% in I was texting my friends that I didn’t like the way this book was written (mix between 1st and 3rd) it also felt like the author was telling instead of “showing” what happened… I’m not sure how this made it thru edits (if it even went through edits) but it was all over the place. There was no real timeline. The characters names were getting mixed up. There was just no real editing especially with it switching from first person to third throughout the entire book. Truth was funny and that was about it. Chaos was weird asf and not in a good way like none of this was believable as in yeah this is fiction but it could happen in real life. I’m gonna have to agree with the other 1-3 star reviews I’m not sure where the author was going but this just didn’t do it for me. I only rated a 3 star because truth had me laughing the entire book.

[Nina Ruffin · Rating 5 out of 5]

OMG

First off, 😂😭 listen I cried laughing at Chaos and Truth many times. Their interaction is hilarious. Chaos’s mind is a study in itself and I love it 😍 the storyline sucks you in from the beginning and does NOT release you, until the very last word 🤌🏽 Kiera does not play 😭 and I can happily admit to praying on Zakia’s downfall, ‘wink wink’ 😂 thank you for another great read Jatoria !! I have all of your books and I will be waiting (not so patiently lol) for your next drop 💃🏾 now I’m about to reread this lol, to make sure I didn’t miss any details the first read ☺️💃🏾❣️

[BetweentheCoversLiterary · Rating 3 out of 5]

What the hell!

I’m not sure what the hell I read but this is toxic on so many levels and I can’t even put into words if Chaos even fits into the unhinged category but one thing I must say Chaos was not in his crazy bag by himself he found his plus one in Kiera and I love that for them… But that damn Truth is hilarious and I love him I want his book like yesterday… Amongst the chaos I get the chemistry and love and toxicity between Kiera and Chaos throughout and I’m ready for what’s next

[Crissy · Rating 2 out of 5]

This book was not what I expected but it would be the perfect book for someone looking for a story that's steamy, funny at times and completely ridiculous and unbelievable. I wanted to love this story, but I just couldn't with these characters. Chaos was crazy to the max; Keira was a dumb-dumb, Truth brought the laughs in the story, and I don't even know what to say about Zakia because she was even worser than Keira. This story wasn't the one for me but just because it wasn't the one for me doesn't mean it won't be for others.

[Latoya's Library · Rating 3 out of 5]

Meeting Chaos in real life would prompt an immediate call to the authorities – toxic and erratic behavior isn't something to take lightly. However, within the pages of this novella, I found his character oddly captivating. The story beautifully captures the complex dynamic between two individuals who both despise and cherish each other, creating an intriguing and enjoyable read. Completely unrealistic but a fun and easy read nonetheless.

[Jaleesa · Rating 4 out of 5]

All these people are DERANGED

I was not even supposed to be reading this book but here I am. Chaos is deranged, that is a fact. I feel like I read this book with my mouth dropped open in shock. The story was certainly entertaining, I didn’t expect that from Keira and even though I was appalled I still enjoyed the story. I hope we get Truth/Erykah’s story and maybe an update on these two. This was a WILD RIDE but I certainly enjoyed it.

[She Watkins · Rating 5 out of 5]

I really enjoyed this!!

Chaos is one of a kind 😂😂 imma stick beside him though lol he wasn't a psycho... He was clearly misunderstood lol... I really felt bad for Keira from the beginning.. Was happy to see that she overcame and got a shop! The chemistry between these two was off the charts!! That darn Truth didn't have a lick of sense and kept me cracking up!!! I really really wish I got to read that Island party scene 😂😂 I know it would have been🔥🔥🔥 great read!

[Ko MAC · Rating 5 out of 5]

Chaos was beyond a menace

Chaos is crazy and unhinged. He killed Keira father and confessed it to her. Keira didn’t know her Father killed Chaos’ father either. Zakia was a snake. I didn’t expect Keira to kill her ex bestfriend. After that was like her and Chaos are made for each other. I wanted to hear more about Truth and his babymomma. He was a funny character in the book I just wanted to hear more about how he got his ex back. All and all this was a 5⭐️ read