1.5 stars, rounded to 2. This dystopian, fantasy, why choose adventure/romance started out with a fascinating premise: a missing sister, magical horses, a future earth, and a couple easy-on-the-eyes master riders, each with their own distinct allure. While I loved the description, and a few of the basic elements really resonated, this book just fell short for me personally.
Let’s start with the good: I feel like the characters were each thought out; they had distinct personalities and mannerisms, and I could always tell them apart. The guys didn’t all bleed into one, which is a high compliment for a reverse harem! I also loved the perspective changes; multi-POV was absolutely the right choice for this book! Without a peek behind the curtain for each MC, I would’ve been really lost. It was great to get their motivations directly from the source (their own heads), and it gave a unique look at the Druadan bonds as well, which was cool. I like the idea of the bonds- kind of akin to the bonding that happens in the Avatar movie when the Na’Vi bond to their ikran to ride them, which is a super cool idea. The whole body temperature thing is fascinating, I like the mental speech connection; I like a fantasy animal companion, and these were fun.
Now, here’s what didn’t work for me: the pacing, plot continuity, and character development were hard to follow and inconsistent. Spoilers start below!
The timeline was not super clear, but when I did get glimpses of it, it didn’t track with the characters. Brigid had been there a few days and was already thinking of “giving up” the search for her missing sister - the search that she gave up her career, apartment, friends, and her entire life for. The boys share immense attraction to her and obsession with her in a matter of a week or two- so much so that it prevents them from serving the sex need of their bond (aka Carter turning down sex, uncharacteristically, many times after he meets Brigid). Brigid describes her PR position “no longer being a job, but a passion” just a matter of weeks into this job, after only meeting the horses a handful of times- from zero to 100 in two weeks just doesn’t track. It was too fast of a book pace for some of these decisions to make any logical sense.
Plot continuity was an issue as well. There was a LOT going on in this book/world, arguably too much to follow up on in one book. There were plotlines I just wasn’t given enough info to understand (why does Logan want love? Why isn’t Heath being honest with Jess? Is Sharice evil, or just brainwashed? Did they harness the power of the mystal creatures or was that a coincidence?? Why are there no female druadans or riders??). The plot itself seemed to wax and wane too much- first she wants to run away when she’s injured, then she fights to stay. She can’t get too attached, then she’s the one pursuing and going after Carter in the hot spring, and Heath at the interview and the gala. There’s also several tense issues (present vs past) and dialogue issues (switching up who’s speaking mid-line) that make some parts hard to track with. I’ll also mention here, that I didn’t think the magical bonding ceremony we witness really held up to its gossip; it wasn’t dramatic or beautiful or moving, it just seemed like another training exercise, except this time it was an excuse for everyone to be extra horny?
The characters, though each had unique personalities, didn’t keep continuity throughout. Their development/choices didn’t always make sense. Why would Carter give up sex to not have any with Brigid? He wouldn’t, in my opinion- the insta-lust/love makes him seem wishy washy and unrealistic. Why does Brigid like Logan? He’s nothing but mean to her and she doesn’t say “I like mean”, “I like him despite that”, “I can’t believe I like him even though he’s mean”, nothing. No explanation. One second Brigid is confused that her sister dyed her hair brown, then she references Sharice as brown-haired without batting an eye. In the shower scene with Carter, she “takes off her leggings”, even though 2 pages before she references specifically wearing a dress with little violets on it. In a Carter-POV chapter, there’s a line of dialogue, and then “…Carter says” which is grammatically incorrect for the chapter. Brigid references herself as not looking like her sister- then her sister also has freckles, which before she referenced as a difference between them. It’s hard to keep things straight when they change frequently.
I also am not a fan of insta-love/lust, which this book had in droves. I’m also not a fan of all the sex being just a means to an end- “feed the bond”, sure, but if I’m to believe that these boys care about Brigid, it should be more than that. In addition, these men truly not having a moment that they aren’t hard for her when she’s around is truly so unlikely. ALSO- even if a woman is very beautiful, just her walking around or talking shouldn’t be enough to trigger an immediate, instantaneous, full, painful erection- these are men in their 20s, not puberty hormone filled preteens. I’ll also mention the ending- I’m not a big fan of a cliff hanger, but if it makes sense, I understand using it as a tool. This one felt like writing a book and slicing it at a random place, just because; little to no easy let down, no expectation set for book 2, and no resolution for any of the conflicts in book 1 at all before it just abruptly ends.
Throw in some grammar issues, some recycled lines, and repetitive descriptions, and this story becomes hard enough to follow that it affects the rating.
I imagine this book was used to shake out the cobwebs, and that the subsequent books in the series went through more rigorous review, beta reading, and editing (which definitely would’ve helped with this one). Overall, a fun story and good bones, just not executed to the right extent to make it a top read for me.