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The Path of Ascension #6
The Path of Ascension 6
In search for greater power, Matt, Liz, and Aster embark on their most dangerous adventure yet.
Minkalla, a planet where only those below TIer 15 can enter. A planet where the rules of the realm are changed, where the weaker you are the greater the rewards.
Matt and the team intend to conquer it at Tier 11.
Seven floors, seven rewards of every increasing power, thousands of chances of death not just from the Tier 14 monsters but from all the others entering the planet.
The Empire isn't the only one with a claim on the planet. All eight Great Powers send their people into the planets depths.
Its not just a fight for survival. Its much worse. A fight for power
Don't miss Book 6 of this action-packed fantasy adventure that blends everything you love about LitRPG with Xianxia.About the This is a mix between LitRPG and Xianxia. It's like a car that looks like a LitRPG with dungeons and skills, but the interior and engine are all Xianxia. It features a magic system and progression system that are logically and internally consistent, as well as realistic fight scenes and a rational MC.
Minkalla, a planet where only those below TIer 15 can enter. A planet where the rules of the realm are changed, where the weaker you are the greater the rewards.
Matt and the team intend to conquer it at Tier 11.
Seven floors, seven rewards of every increasing power, thousands of chances of death not just from the Tier 14 monsters but from all the others entering the planet.
The Empire isn't the only one with a claim on the planet. All eight Great Powers send their people into the planets depths.
Its not just a fight for survival. Its much worse. A fight for power
Don't miss Book 6 of this action-packed fantasy adventure that blends everything you love about LitRPG with Xianxia.About the This is a mix between LitRPG and Xianxia. It's like a car that looks like a LitRPG with dungeons and skills, but the interior and engine are all Xianxia. It features a magic system and progression system that are logically and internally consistent, as well as realistic fight scenes and a rational MC.
735 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 10, 2024
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April 11, 2024
A lot of padding.....
I think the series is running out of steam. I didn't enjoy the many different perspectives that the book jumped to or that there seemed quite a lot of padding going on.
I did not get that "keep reading at any cost to find out what happens next" feeling but rather "jump forward without reading every page feeling". No sense of urgency or high drama.
I think the series is running out of steam. I didn't enjoy the many different perspectives that the book jumped to or that there seemed quite a lot of padding going on.
I did not get that "keep reading at any cost to find out what happens next" feeling but rather "jump forward without reading every page feeling". No sense of urgency or high drama.
April 10, 2024
Peak Tier
This is the best arc. No question. I joined Patreon just to finish this arc after it paused on RoyalRoad.
Let me say that again: I PAID A RIDICULOUS AMOUNT OF MONEY TO FIND OUT HOW THIS ARC ENDS.
Totally. Worth it.
The design of Minkalla is inspired. The fact there is *NO* safety net…[chef’s kiss].
Over 1 billion enter; less than half survive. It. Is. A. BLOODBATH.
Honestly, book 7 suffers badly simply because it follows the Minkalla arc.
And here I am reading it for the THIRD time.
This is the best arc. No question. I joined Patreon just to finish this arc after it paused on RoyalRoad.
Let me say that again: I PAID A RIDICULOUS AMOUNT OF MONEY TO FIND OUT HOW THIS ARC ENDS.
Totally. Worth it.
The design of Minkalla is inspired. The fact there is *NO* safety net…[chef’s kiss].
Over 1 billion enter; less than half survive. It. Is. A. BLOODBATH.
Honestly, book 7 suffers badly simply because it follows the Minkalla arc.
And here I am reading it for the THIRD time.
April 12, 2024
Stalling and slow going
Most readers will buy this no matter any review stars, but sadly to tell I found the progression slow and boring, for some reason there was non relevant story sidelines that was boring to read. This book lacks the normal fun and captivating read his other previous books.
I have pre order the next book hoping the drive of the author gets going again....
Most readers will buy this no matter any review stars, but sadly to tell I found the progression slow and boring, for some reason there was non relevant story sidelines that was boring to read. This book lacks the normal fun and captivating read his other previous books.
I have pre order the next book hoping the drive of the author gets going again....
February 4, 2025
Second Re-read
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First part of the Minkala run of our team. third time reading and still awesome so let's go for the next part already.
First Re-read
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Yup, still wonderful and a joy to read on a re-read. This covers the team's run through the first four floors of Minkalla. Okay enough said now onto the book 7, let's go on and keep on reading.
Original Review
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This series continues to hold on to me and continues to be excellent. Perhaps the reason the series is so readable is that it was originally written in weekly chapters, so Chris had to keep them engaging, regardless. Even through book 6, I couldn't stop reading this series, and I don't plan to. This book covered the first half of the journey as our team encountered the oddity that is Minkala, and it was wonderful to read about each floor and the fights. As I've always enjoyed reading, I'm now onto book 7 and will continue to read more.
People who don't read generally ask me my reasons for reading. Simply put, I absolutely love reading, so I have made it my motto to Forever Keep on Reading. I love reading everything except for self-help books, even occasionally. I read almost all the genres but YA, Fantasy, and Biographies are the most read. My favorite series is Harry Potter, but then there are many more books I adore. I have bookcases filled with books that are waiting to be read so I can't stay and spend more time on this review, so remember I loved reading this and love reading more, you should also read what you love and then just Keep on Reading.
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First part of the Minkala run of our team. third time reading and still awesome so let's go for the next part already.
First Re-read
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Yup, still wonderful and a joy to read on a re-read. This covers the team's run through the first four floors of Minkalla. Okay enough said now onto the book 7, let's go on and keep on reading.
Original Review
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This series continues to hold on to me and continues to be excellent. Perhaps the reason the series is so readable is that it was originally written in weekly chapters, so Chris had to keep them engaging, regardless. Even through book 6, I couldn't stop reading this series, and I don't plan to. This book covered the first half of the journey as our team encountered the oddity that is Minkala, and it was wonderful to read about each floor and the fights. As I've always enjoyed reading, I'm now onto book 7 and will continue to read more.
People who don't read generally ask me my reasons for reading. Simply put, I absolutely love reading, so I have made it my motto to Forever Keep on Reading. I love reading everything except for self-help books, even occasionally. I read almost all the genres but YA, Fantasy, and Biographies are the most read. My favorite series is Harry Potter, but then there are many more books I adore. I have bookcases filled with books that are waiting to be read so I can't stay and spend more time on this review, so remember I loved reading this and love reading more, you should also read what you love and then just Keep on Reading.
May 26, 2024
Unpopular opinion: this was a slog and a half. This series started off well enough, but its appeal is fast disappearing. The conference between the group and trainers at the beginning completely turned me off. The inconsequential side characters were utterly pointless, especially the ones who died.
September 4, 2025
Another good installment in the Path of Ascension series (Book 6)! I absolutely love this series, and while this entry starts a bit slower than some of the previous books, it steadily ramps up to the level of excitement and satisfaction I’ve come to expect.
The character dynamics remain a standout—Matt, Liz, and his bond Asher have such great chemistry, and their interactions continue to deepen in meaningful ways. The addition of the Queen was a strong choice too, adding fresh tension and intrigue to the cultivation-world progression and magic system.
I also appreciated the side stories; they fleshed out the world and gave welcome perspectives beyond the main trio. As always, I went with the audiobook, and it did not disappoint—the narration was excellent and really brought the characters to life!
The character dynamics remain a standout—Matt, Liz, and his bond Asher have such great chemistry, and their interactions continue to deepen in meaningful ways. The addition of the Queen was a strong choice too, adding fresh tension and intrigue to the cultivation-world progression and magic system.
I also appreciated the side stories; they fleshed out the world and gave welcome perspectives beyond the main trio. As always, I went with the audiobook, and it did not disappoint—the narration was excellent and really brought the characters to life!
May 30, 2024
Imagine everyone around you gets some kind of superpower, but when it's your turn, you are stuck with something that is deemed detrimental even by the most benevolent AI. Want to know what it feels to bamboozle the heck out of a situation like this? Then step with me on the Path of Ascension!

Well, we can't choose the hand we're given, we simply have to play it to the best of our abilities.
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Read this review on the blog - the layout is better 😃.
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Path of Ascension is all about self-improvement in a distant future of humanity (and other types of beings). The story follows the main character - Matt - as he starts to find ways to turn his seemingly useless talent into something that will, sooner or later, rock the universe and all the great powers. It is an underdog story, where the underdog will inevitably turn into the top dog.
In the typical fashion of LitRPG, this is done with talents, levels (called tiers, in this case) and skills. And it is quite clear that the author has done some mathematics about his skills.
I like Matt - well, liking the MC is always something to be desired when reading a series. But I like him for the fact that he is down to earth, makes reasonable decisions and tries to come on top of a situation that seems utterly depressing at first. And he's far from the only likeable character throughout the story!

My opinion on Matt.
Of course, his bond Aster - an ice fox - and his girlfriend are great characters, too, but even some of the "villains" are actually likeable enough, and have a clear purpose they're following.
Another thing I really like is how breathing, living and fleshed out the world of this story feels like. It's almost like another character, and some chapters allow us to glance behind the curtain and see some of the intrigues played out on the higher levels.

Even the political stuff is intriguing enough!
On the downside are a few chapters that feel downright sluggish. Not everything moves the plot forward, and there is a lot of exposition. If that is not your style, you might want to skip - either the series, or a few pages here and there while reading. I think the pace could be better, but then again, this seems to be a common problem for the genre, and it isn't too bad here, overall.
All in all, one of the better LitRPG series so far, with detailed world building and really great characters. 4 out of 5 Phoenix feathers!
*This review is written for books 1 - 6 of the series*

Well, we can't choose the hand we're given, we simply have to play it to the best of our abilities.
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Read this review on the blog - the layout is better 😃.
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Path of Ascension is all about self-improvement in a distant future of humanity (and other types of beings). The story follows the main character - Matt - as he starts to find ways to turn his seemingly useless talent into something that will, sooner or later, rock the universe and all the great powers. It is an underdog story, where the underdog will inevitably turn into the top dog.
In the typical fashion of LitRPG, this is done with talents, levels (called tiers, in this case) and skills. And it is quite clear that the author has done some mathematics about his skills.
I like Matt - well, liking the MC is always something to be desired when reading a series. But I like him for the fact that he is down to earth, makes reasonable decisions and tries to come on top of a situation that seems utterly depressing at first. And he's far from the only likeable character throughout the story!

My opinion on Matt.
Of course, his bond Aster - an ice fox - and his girlfriend are great characters, too, but even some of the "villains" are actually likeable enough, and have a clear purpose they're following.
Another thing I really like is how breathing, living and fleshed out the world of this story feels like. It's almost like another character, and some chapters allow us to glance behind the curtain and see some of the intrigues played out on the higher levels.

Even the political stuff is intriguing enough!
On the downside are a few chapters that feel downright sluggish. Not everything moves the plot forward, and there is a lot of exposition. If that is not your style, you might want to skip - either the series, or a few pages here and there while reading. I think the pace could be better, but then again, this seems to be a common problem for the genre, and it isn't too bad here, overall.
All in all, one of the better LitRPG series so far, with detailed world building and really great characters. 4 out of 5 Phoenix feathers!
*This review is written for books 1 - 6 of the series*
September 18, 2024
There is no fight minor enough for the author to spend a full chapter describing the... action? I am not ready to spend the rest of my life reading one book per level of the path.
As has been said in other reviews
- this book is a slog with no objective.
- there is not overarching theme other than power
- this is a progression fantasy without the progression
DNF
As has been said in other reviews
- this book is a slog with no objective.
- there is not overarching theme other than power
- this is a progression fantasy without the progression
DNF
December 11, 2025
Dungeon crawler Matt. I love a good world dungeon. This book goes through lvls 1-4. Fun battles.
May 14, 2024
Rating 4.0 stars
A good addition to the series. It was a little long but the worldbuilding was amazing. I can't believe how expansive it is. Not much to say. The group heads to Minkala to fight for every advantage they can get. It is interesting reading about Matt and Liz but there are also other POVs from other fighters in Minkala. The contrast between all the groups is really interesting. Overall, by this point you should know what you are getting from this series.
A good addition to the series. It was a little long but the worldbuilding was amazing. I can't believe how expansive it is. Not much to say. The group heads to Minkala to fight for every advantage they can get. It is interesting reading about Matt and Liz but there are also other POVs from other fighters in Minkala. The contrast between all the groups is really interesting. Overall, by this point you should know what you are getting from this series.
June 30, 2024
Book six
This is another series that I read on Royalroad. I'm much further along in the story but believe in helping authors by giving them reviews when they give me stories.
8/10
This is another series that I read on Royalroad. I'm much further along in the story but believe in helping authors by giving them reviews when they give me stories.
8/10
October 18, 2024
Multiple heroic last stands, an almost beyond epic boss fight, and heavy self sacrifices…it’s good and the last 1/3 is incredible. Minkalla!
August 31, 2024
It is decent.
April 13, 2024
Too much filler
Too many scenes from the viewpoint of random strangers. It didn’t seem to progress the main story at all and by the time the next book comes out no one will remember their names or what happened.
Too many scenes from the viewpoint of random strangers. It didn’t seem to progress the main story at all and by the time the next book comes out no one will remember their names or what happened.
April 15, 2024
Having passed over a couple of years of training, it is time for exploring the special world trope from cultivation series. The first part of it anyway, since the arc is not finished by the end of the volume. It is packed with action mostly against the environment (PvE) which throws all kinds of odd events, stories and fights against those entering it. At the end there are a few hints of what is to come in regards to conflicts with fellow cultivators (PvP). The action, themes, rewards, and character development are for the most part entertaining even if I feel some sections could be shortened a bit.
What I liked less where the chapters with very rapid shifts in point of view between different contestants unrelated to the MCs. It added little what a reader could not already guess although I suppose some of the motivation from non-Empire people at least added a bit of world building. I also feel that the "Self-Identity" layer would not work at all. Talents (and I assume bloodlines) are not switched, and since most people pick skills and items based on those talents, chances are you end up with a completely unworkable build. I pity whomever ends up with Matt's build for example. But since that one was not used in this volume, the author might have found a work around, but I am not seeing how.
All in all, a good addition to the series. Note that while there is no cliff-hanger ending, it is the first part of an arc.
What I liked less where the chapters with very rapid shifts in point of view between different contestants unrelated to the MCs. It added little what a reader could not already guess although I suppose some of the motivation from non-Empire people at least added a bit of world building. I also feel that the "Self-Identity" layer would not work at all. Talents (and I assume bloodlines) are not switched, and since most people pick skills and items based on those talents, chances are you end up with a completely unworkable build. I pity whomever ends up with Matt's build for example. But since that one was not used in this volume, the author might have found a work around, but I am not seeing how.
All in all, a good addition to the series. Note that while there is no cliff-hanger ending, it is the first part of an arc.
September 1, 2026
The other POVs are surprisingly interesting, and the challenges encountered are cool, especially the last one (which is also the longest).
However, the boss battle (the guy on the cover) was WAY too contrived. He shouldn't have been that powerful by a loooong shot, in addition to holding back their own general made no sense. The whole thing felt forced, hard. Star off for that.
However, the boss battle (the guy on the cover) was WAY too contrived. He shouldn't have been that powerful by a loooong shot, in addition to holding back their own general made no sense. The whole thing felt forced, hard. Star off for that.
September 3, 2026
I think books 5-6 are where this series really takes off! I really enjoyed books 1-3…4 was ok but a bit slow, but the competition in book 5 and the PLANET challenge of books 6 and 7 were so engrossing. Love it!
April 22, 2024
This book was majestic and I was erupting for like the first 70%. Then I realized that the plot wouldn’t get finished. THEYRE EDGING ME. at least each section gets properly written at its own pace.
November 28, 2025
Found myself skipping big sections, whole chapters dedicated to character that weren’t mentioned before and most likely won’t be mentioned after… really slows down the tempo. I really liked Queen and would have enjoyed seeing her have more spotlight.
Kinda feels like the series is petering out…
Kinda feels like the series is petering out…
September 29, 2024
Squandered Potential
I like the series and the main characters and I'd recommend this series to anyone, who wants pure main characters delving monsters action. However, this book in particular was probably the final straw for me personally and will likely not continue reading. There could have been so many interesting interactions and fun things in this book with the other delvers going into Minkalla, but instead it's the main characters over prepared once again and just crushing monsters with barely any interaction with other characters. The side stories of other delvers almost feel like a slap in the face like heres these interesting struggles and characters that you'll get 3 paragraphs on and no interaction. Last book it was a foregone conclusion they will win the tournament and then this one they are over prepared also knowing the exact challenges and rewards for most events. There's no intrigue, no interesting side characters or antagonist, and honestly no soul in this book lets just smash monsters for 500 pages. Such a cool setting/world too I'm pretty bummed.
I like the series and the main characters and I'd recommend this series to anyone, who wants pure main characters delving monsters action. However, this book in particular was probably the final straw for me personally and will likely not continue reading. There could have been so many interesting interactions and fun things in this book with the other delvers going into Minkalla, but instead it's the main characters over prepared once again and just crushing monsters with barely any interaction with other characters. The side stories of other delvers almost feel like a slap in the face like heres these interesting struggles and characters that you'll get 3 paragraphs on and no interaction. Last book it was a foregone conclusion they will win the tournament and then this one they are over prepared also knowing the exact challenges and rewards for most events. There's no intrigue, no interesting side characters or antagonist, and honestly no soul in this book lets just smash monsters for 500 pages. Such a cool setting/world too I'm pretty bummed.
May 23, 2024
There's no way to sugarcoat this; that was terrible.
If you want the perfect example of why action doesn't equal progression, then pick this book up. Not a single meaningful step of progression in the larger series was made in this novel. The protagonists arrive at their next challenge, which is essentially an entire dungeon world, and from here, we get an endless series of meaningless adventures.
And no, the word 'meaningless' is not hyperbole.
Each adventure only exists as an obstacle standing in the way of the challengers getting to the next adventure, and bears no more impact on the plot than that. There is no character growth, no meaningful lessons to be learnt, and no meaningful world-building. It's not even about levelling up the characters because the actual objective for the characters here is to complete their challenges without levelling up... which might just be the most counter-productive objective in a progression fantasy series I have ever heard. The literal point of the genre is to level up!
To highlight how pointless this all is, there is a literal challenge in this book where each character must fulfil an objective that is deeply important to them in some way, and then they are forced to forget what they did only to be left with the knowledge that it can be achieved, but no knowledge on how to achieve it. At the very least, that sets you up for redundant writing as you now have to re-achieve something that has already been achieved once. At worst, though, it is a pointless waste of your reader's time, and one of the fundamental rules of writing should be that you should never make your readers feel like they are wasting their time reading your novel.
For our main characters and the series as a whole, this is about 550 pages of meaningless filler content, and for the life of me, I don't understand why that is the case. Our main characters are still in the early stages of their path of ascension. If every novel was super efficient and concentrated only on meaningful story that focused on levelling up the characters' powers, growing the characters as people, exploring their relationships, setting up the overall worldbuilding, and focusing only on progressing through the path of ascension, there would still be easily 10+ novels of material. Add in some enjoyable spots to slow things down, like time spent with Liz's family, or Matt and Liz maybe getting to enjoy their powers by pursuing personal goals and interests outside of the path of ascension, and you could comfortably double that novel count. There just doesn't need to be filler in a story like this.
When the filler first started appearing in this series, I thought that this might become another series like Defiance of the Fall for me; one of my favourite easy-reading series. I hate the filler in that series also, but I can push through it for the simple reason that while it still may be filler, it is never meaningless. There might be a few too many blow-by-blow adventures for my tastes and plot arcs that take forever to go anywhere, but they always deliver something meaningful in progressing the protagonist's journey through the story. Here though, that's not the case.
Early on in this book I was already drafting a review in my head about the alternate POV chapters and how you could probably skip them and lose nothing of interest in this book. That got me thinking about the massive exposition dump before going to the dungeon world, and that could easily be skipped as well for how pointless it was (literally multiple chapters of detailed exposition explaining to the reader the filler content we were about to encounter). Now, finishing the book, I realise that you can actually skip this entire book and not lose anything in the larger story that couldn't be explained away in the following sentence:
"Matt, Liz, Aster and Queen go to a dungeon world where they go through a series of adventures that are designed to challenge them."
That may sound overly reductive, but honestly, is there anything else that is vital to your time spent with these characters than that? I mean there's no extra context that will really matter, no relationships that were built or developed, no special powers that need to be explained... nothing. You can just read that sentence and assume that they are all a bit better off for having gone through the adventures, and you're ready to go on another story without missing anything important. That's never a good sign for your series when you can do that with an entire book.
The only thing that keeps me reading is the only thing that has kept me reading to this point, the characters that were created in the first novel. I like Matt and Liz; I think they have potential, and when they get to realise that potential, this series is awesome. There's only so long I can slog through boring books like this before I give that up, though. Especially when they deliberately slow down those characters' progression so that other characters I have no attachment to (like Queen) can catch up.
Overall, this is a book I would have given 1-star to save for the simple fact that I stuck with it all the way through to the end. Partly, that was because of my interest in the main characters; part of it was because I thought we would at least complete this story arc in this book and wanted to see how it all worked out for them after it wrapped up. Whatever the case, there was just enough there for me to give it the benefit of the doubt and add in one extra star.
If you want the perfect example of why action doesn't equal progression, then pick this book up. Not a single meaningful step of progression in the larger series was made in this novel. The protagonists arrive at their next challenge, which is essentially an entire dungeon world, and from here, we get an endless series of meaningless adventures.
And no, the word 'meaningless' is not hyperbole.
Each adventure only exists as an obstacle standing in the way of the challengers getting to the next adventure, and bears no more impact on the plot than that. There is no character growth, no meaningful lessons to be learnt, and no meaningful world-building. It's not even about levelling up the characters because the actual objective for the characters here is to complete their challenges without levelling up... which might just be the most counter-productive objective in a progression fantasy series I have ever heard. The literal point of the genre is to level up!
To highlight how pointless this all is, there is a literal challenge in this book where each character must fulfil an objective that is deeply important to them in some way, and then they are forced to forget what they did only to be left with the knowledge that it can be achieved, but no knowledge on how to achieve it. At the very least, that sets you up for redundant writing as you now have to re-achieve something that has already been achieved once. At worst, though, it is a pointless waste of your reader's time, and one of the fundamental rules of writing should be that you should never make your readers feel like they are wasting their time reading your novel.
For our main characters and the series as a whole, this is about 550 pages of meaningless filler content, and for the life of me, I don't understand why that is the case. Our main characters are still in the early stages of their path of ascension. If every novel was super efficient and concentrated only on meaningful story that focused on levelling up the characters' powers, growing the characters as people, exploring their relationships, setting up the overall worldbuilding, and focusing only on progressing through the path of ascension, there would still be easily 10+ novels of material. Add in some enjoyable spots to slow things down, like time spent with Liz's family, or Matt and Liz maybe getting to enjoy their powers by pursuing personal goals and interests outside of the path of ascension, and you could comfortably double that novel count. There just doesn't need to be filler in a story like this.
When the filler first started appearing in this series, I thought that this might become another series like Defiance of the Fall for me; one of my favourite easy-reading series. I hate the filler in that series also, but I can push through it for the simple reason that while it still may be filler, it is never meaningless. There might be a few too many blow-by-blow adventures for my tastes and plot arcs that take forever to go anywhere, but they always deliver something meaningful in progressing the protagonist's journey through the story. Here though, that's not the case.
Early on in this book I was already drafting a review in my head about the alternate POV chapters and how you could probably skip them and lose nothing of interest in this book. That got me thinking about the massive exposition dump before going to the dungeon world, and that could easily be skipped as well for how pointless it was (literally multiple chapters of detailed exposition explaining to the reader the filler content we were about to encounter). Now, finishing the book, I realise that you can actually skip this entire book and not lose anything in the larger story that couldn't be explained away in the following sentence:
"Matt, Liz, Aster and Queen go to a dungeon world where they go through a series of adventures that are designed to challenge them."
That may sound overly reductive, but honestly, is there anything else that is vital to your time spent with these characters than that? I mean there's no extra context that will really matter, no relationships that were built or developed, no special powers that need to be explained... nothing. You can just read that sentence and assume that they are all a bit better off for having gone through the adventures, and you're ready to go on another story without missing anything important. That's never a good sign for your series when you can do that with an entire book.
The only thing that keeps me reading is the only thing that has kept me reading to this point, the characters that were created in the first novel. I like Matt and Liz; I think they have potential, and when they get to realise that potential, this series is awesome. There's only so long I can slog through boring books like this before I give that up, though. Especially when they deliberately slow down those characters' progression so that other characters I have no attachment to (like Queen) can catch up.
Overall, this is a book I would have given 1-star to save for the simple fact that I stuck with it all the way through to the end. Partly, that was because of my interest in the main characters; part of it was because I thought we would at least complete this story arc in this book and wanted to see how it all worked out for them after it wrapped up. Whatever the case, there was just enough there for me to give it the benefit of the doubt and add in one extra star.
October 12, 2025
soooooo boring
I’ve absolutely adored this series up until this point. But this book was a slog that I physically could not get interested in. 2 whole books of tier 11 and a bunch of throwaway characters besides the main ones and upgrades that despite being hyped up feel underwhelming. I don’t know why litrpg authors always feel the need to do some kind of event/dungeon crawl when their universe is so open but it felt stifling. Even the challenges were dumb. This honestly felt like someone else wrote it, and not well
I’ve absolutely adored this series up until this point. But this book was a slog that I physically could not get interested in. 2 whole books of tier 11 and a bunch of throwaway characters besides the main ones and upgrades that despite being hyped up feel underwhelming. I don’t know why litrpg authors always feel the need to do some kind of event/dungeon crawl when their universe is so open but it felt stifling. Even the challenges were dumb. This honestly felt like someone else wrote it, and not well
June 18, 2025
So much filler and hard to follow
Just too many characters being added and taking away from the main plot. It just bounced around way too much and made it hard to follow, not to mention that all the extra characters just acted like filler to the main plot and more of a distraction.
Just too many characters being added and taking away from the main plot. It just bounced around way too much and made it hard to follow, not to mention that all the extra characters just acted like filler to the main plot and more of a distraction.
April 14, 2024
Did like
Book 6 was Hard is get in to, for the first 10 chapters. Some were in the middle it looks like pages, or paragraphs are missing.
Book 6 was Hard is get in to, for the first 10 chapters. Some were in the middle it looks like pages, or paragraphs are missing.
April 19, 2024
I enjoyed this one but it's a shame that they didn't get through all of Minkalla in one book. It feels sort of like it ends at the midpoint.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 31, 2024
Matt, Liz, and Aster are moving into their biggest adventure yet. Minkalla is a mysterious place full of legendarily powerful rewards---rewards that get better the lower in Tier you are when completing it. But it also has dangers beyond the monsters and puzzles and traps---all the Great Powers have access to it. And no one over Tier 14 can enter. Alone, with only a new alliance with Queen to help, they begin their most dangerous delve . . .
So this is only the first four floors of Minkalla (which goes seven floors deep), although it does leave off after a fairly massive battle and a good break point. And there's a lot of content!
The initial setup can feel somewhat slow, especially when introducing various characters from other Great Powers who only have a tangential role in the overall narrative, or the overview of all the possible floors and their levels of rewards, but once it gets going on the actual delve, the action rarely stops.
I liked seeing the whole group gel with each other. Suzanne/Queen is a great addition as she adds both another melee blade to their mage-heavy party as well as a different perspective on everything. She's a much more typical Pather who has to juggle resource management with the need to keep delving.
The first four floors do have a good mixture of challenges to keep the story fresh. The action keeps breaking for brief looks at how other people are handling the same thing (including one humorous note near the end that actually explores the hypothetical Minkalla talent brought up early and what would ACTUALLY happen). I won't say there's a lot of character development for the main cast, but they do mature a bit as they're forced to grapple with the risks without their usual safety nets.
Overall if you've been enjoying the series so far, this is a good continuation. I rate this book Highly Recommended.
So this is only the first four floors of Minkalla (which goes seven floors deep), although it does leave off after a fairly massive battle and a good break point. And there's a lot of content!
The initial setup can feel somewhat slow, especially when introducing various characters from other Great Powers who only have a tangential role in the overall narrative, or the overview of all the possible floors and their levels of rewards, but once it gets going on the actual delve, the action rarely stops.
I liked seeing the whole group gel with each other. Suzanne/Queen is a great addition as she adds both another melee blade to their mage-heavy party as well as a different perspective on everything. She's a much more typical Pather who has to juggle resource management with the need to keep delving.
The first four floors do have a good mixture of challenges to keep the story fresh. The action keeps breaking for brief looks at how other people are handling the same thing (including one humorous note near the end that actually explores the hypothetical Minkalla talent brought up early and what would ACTUALLY happen). I won't say there's a lot of character development for the main cast, but they do mature a bit as they're forced to grapple with the risks without their usual safety nets.
Overall if you've been enjoying the series so far, this is a good continuation. I rate this book Highly Recommended.
May 26, 2024
Good but bad
So I have to say there was two major things that were disappointing in this book and one kind of medium thing and one good thing.
So the good thing was the floors and challenges were really interesting but there was a lot less challenges than I expected.
The medium thing was the number of skills everyone is getting Now that we have four protagonists and they're all constantly good skills it's kind of hard to keep track of what's what.
The two bad things are the progression rate and alternate points of view. There's a solid chunk of the book that's random other people's points of view. Sometimes are the same sometimes they're just different people but at no point where they really relevant to the story. While the book wasn't short it also wasn't long enough to justify adding a bunch of short stories. The other thing that really sucks is just the rate of progression.. there's a lot that gets glossed over a lot of rewards a lot of fights and that's fine cuz you want to keep the story moving but I feel like they haven't really gotten as much as this planet is supposed to give them. Like it's supposed to be this place where it's very deadly yes but fantasy can become reality and their perks are just that kind of perks. And you have a whole book not that these come out super rarely but they're also not coming out every other month and we only made it halfway through the objective. Also didn't love how whenever there's a challenge they just kind of say oh wow we were trained for this but the training was all glossed over. Seems a little too plot armory for me.
Wasn't horrible but there was also very little character growth for the main protagonist or his romantic interest though maybe more for her than him.
So I have to say there was two major things that were disappointing in this book and one kind of medium thing and one good thing.
So the good thing was the floors and challenges were really interesting but there was a lot less challenges than I expected.
The medium thing was the number of skills everyone is getting Now that we have four protagonists and they're all constantly good skills it's kind of hard to keep track of what's what.
The two bad things are the progression rate and alternate points of view. There's a solid chunk of the book that's random other people's points of view. Sometimes are the same sometimes they're just different people but at no point where they really relevant to the story. While the book wasn't short it also wasn't long enough to justify adding a bunch of short stories. The other thing that really sucks is just the rate of progression.. there's a lot that gets glossed over a lot of rewards a lot of fights and that's fine cuz you want to keep the story moving but I feel like they haven't really gotten as much as this planet is supposed to give them. Like it's supposed to be this place where it's very deadly yes but fantasy can become reality and their perks are just that kind of perks. And you have a whole book not that these come out super rarely but they're also not coming out every other month and we only made it halfway through the objective. Also didn't love how whenever there's a challenge they just kind of say oh wow we were trained for this but the training was all glossed over. Seems a little too plot armory for me.
Wasn't horrible but there was also very little character growth for the main protagonist or his romantic interest though maybe more for her than him.
April 9, 2025
I have generally enjoyed this series up until now. But this is where is ends for me, unfortunately after 5.5 books. I say 5.5 because I won’t be finishing this one.
The author starts the book with a brand new character who we find out has little to nothing to do with the actual plot of the story.
The author continues to sprinkle random tangents about people that have nothing to do with the plot of the story. It gets to the point where- 1. I can’t remember if I’ve heard about who they are writing about. 2. I don’t care nor am I invested in who they are writing about. 3. It takes you out of the story to the point that I’d rather just set it aside and not read it anymore.
If you want to world build the other world powers, that’s fine, but maybe do it in a way that actually makes them relevant to the stories? I don’t care about these people the main characters don’t know and haven’t met 20 chapters into the book??
The biggest issue by far is the fact that this series is plot driven. The characters are growing through cultivation, but not through personality. Aside from the brief mention of therapy, there has been very little personality change or growth throughout the whole series, meanwhile you have a character who has gone from age 13 to around age 42 and has no personality growth. There is no big lesson for the character to learn. There is no extreme problem to solve. I’m not emotionally stuck on the characters.
This is an action/adventure book. Why are the fight scenes so boring I fall asleep reading them? If your going to write a plot based book and can’t make a fight scene or dungeon crawling interesting, what is the point??
The author starts the book with a brand new character who we find out has little to nothing to do with the actual plot of the story.
The author continues to sprinkle random tangents about people that have nothing to do with the plot of the story. It gets to the point where- 1. I can’t remember if I’ve heard about who they are writing about. 2. I don’t care nor am I invested in who they are writing about. 3. It takes you out of the story to the point that I’d rather just set it aside and not read it anymore.
If you want to world build the other world powers, that’s fine, but maybe do it in a way that actually makes them relevant to the stories? I don’t care about these people the main characters don’t know and haven’t met 20 chapters into the book??
The biggest issue by far is the fact that this series is plot driven. The characters are growing through cultivation, but not through personality. Aside from the brief mention of therapy, there has been very little personality change or growth throughout the whole series, meanwhile you have a character who has gone from age 13 to around age 42 and has no personality growth. There is no big lesson for the character to learn. There is no extreme problem to solve. I’m not emotionally stuck on the characters.
This is an action/adventure book. Why are the fight scenes so boring I fall asleep reading them? If your going to write a plot based book and can’t make a fight scene or dungeon crawling interesting, what is the point??
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March 7, 2025
I really like this overall story, plot, characters, and everything about the world and those inside of it. The main characters are fun, they have great interactions between one another, and are doing that progression thing really well, but only up to a point.
Though I like it, the series stagnated for me again with this book. The author’s forceful limitation to constantly never allow the main characters to actually use all their powers is getting really old really quick. The whole point of this genre is for the main characters to progress, get tough as hell, then go unleash ass kicking on the greater worlds. This never really gets to happen properly because they are always given a silly reason written into the plot to hold back.
The series isn’t bad, it just just seems nerfed. I understand that if the main characters weren’t restrained they would be too strong, but there are plenty of other ways to deal with this. I don’t like the way it is being done, it is clunky and detracts from the overall story.
Also the random perspective changes to characters who haven’t ever been in other books is really long and overused for me as well. Of course some of them will be used at some point, but the ones we are riding along with just to see them die seems super pointless. It just takes away from the story I’d actually like to read.
With the ups and downs of these books I’m just hoping that the next book gets on track and is an easier read. I do like the series, I just feel it isn’t living up to everything it should be.
Though I like it, the series stagnated for me again with this book. The author’s forceful limitation to constantly never allow the main characters to actually use all their powers is getting really old really quick. The whole point of this genre is for the main characters to progress, get tough as hell, then go unleash ass kicking on the greater worlds. This never really gets to happen properly because they are always given a silly reason written into the plot to hold back.
The series isn’t bad, it just just seems nerfed. I understand that if the main characters weren’t restrained they would be too strong, but there are plenty of other ways to deal with this. I don’t like the way it is being done, it is clunky and detracts from the overall story.
Also the random perspective changes to characters who haven’t ever been in other books is really long and overused for me as well. Of course some of them will be used at some point, but the ones we are riding along with just to see them die seems super pointless. It just takes away from the story I’d actually like to read.
With the ups and downs of these books I’m just hoping that the next book gets on track and is an easier read. I do like the series, I just feel it isn’t living up to everything it should be.
July 18, 2026
3.5/5. The book picks up some time after the events of the last book and finally the goal of reaching Minkalla is reached. This place has been talked about since at least book 5, maybe even near the end of book 4, but its been many many pages in preparation to build up the hype to this place. At first I thought it would be going to a planet and rift delving but that's not how this place works and its baffling and weird and I mostly gave up trying to mentally map the place out. Its been a long time but Matt, Liz, and Aster and now Suzanne are finally fighting this that aren't considered easy. Sure they're winning but its not as easy for them as seen in books 2-4. Near the end of the book they were beginning to struggle a lot and while I want them to win I don't exactly want it to be easy, after all what would the point in that be? Also by the time this book ends they aren't finished with this planet just yet and are heading towards a new floor. There's also a fair bit of padding in this book with seeing a bunch of other characters pov's that hadn't shown up in the previous books, and I will admit that I was at first annoyed but it does flesh things out and now while I'm not a big fan it does help make this universe feel "real". I'm going to start the next book right away to keep the momentum up and hopefully the Minkalla arc will get wrapped up in the next book and not get stretched to book 8.
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