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New Protectorate #3.5
Kohl: The New Protectorate Stories: Holiday Special
The holiday season has arrived — and so has the kohl.
Nelly Ortega has been an outcast most of her life. A witch with a highly in-demand and finicky ability, she’s spent decades forging her own path in an overcrowded world. Her new job feels like the perfect end to a long search for home, but the tiny orcish community she’s been transferred to isn’t exactly open to strangers. Immediately marked as an outsider, she finds herself disdained by nearly everyone, including her outrageously attractive orcish neighbor.
Clark Wilson has never had any trouble making friends. An easy-going, hardworking sort of orc, he spends most days training horses and thinking of new ways to help out the witch he can't seem to get out of his head. That’s why it comes as a bit of a shock when his new neighbor goes out of her way to avoid him. Normally he’d shrug it off, but he can’t let the thought of her being all alone in her little cottage over the holidays go.
In an effort to get a little closer to the witch that makes his instincts zing and hopefully bring her some holiday cheer, Clark is determined to give her a Moon Gift. It’s a great plan until everything goes sideways. Snowed in, Clark and Nelly learn a little bit about the giving season — and each other.
Kohl is a holiday novella in The New Protectorate universe series. It can be read as a complete standalone. A full series list as well as a character directory and content warnings can be found on the author's website.
Nelly Ortega has been an outcast most of her life. A witch with a highly in-demand and finicky ability, she’s spent decades forging her own path in an overcrowded world. Her new job feels like the perfect end to a long search for home, but the tiny orcish community she’s been transferred to isn’t exactly open to strangers. Immediately marked as an outsider, she finds herself disdained by nearly everyone, including her outrageously attractive orcish neighbor.
Clark Wilson has never had any trouble making friends. An easy-going, hardworking sort of orc, he spends most days training horses and thinking of new ways to help out the witch he can't seem to get out of his head. That’s why it comes as a bit of a shock when his new neighbor goes out of her way to avoid him. Normally he’d shrug it off, but he can’t let the thought of her being all alone in her little cottage over the holidays go.
In an effort to get a little closer to the witch that makes his instincts zing and hopefully bring her some holiday cheer, Clark is determined to give her a Moon Gift. It’s a great plan until everything goes sideways. Snowed in, Clark and Nelly learn a little bit about the giving season — and each other.
Kohl is a holiday novella in The New Protectorate universe series. It can be read as a complete standalone. A full series list as well as a character directory and content warnings can be found on the author's website.
184 pages, Kindle Edition
Published December 26, 2023
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About the author
Abigail Kelly
11 books243 followersAbigail Kelly is a writer of alternate histories, love stories, and women with drive. Her work is heavily influenced by both her modest family roots and her passion for history. A former illustrator, she is now a bookseller at an independent bookshop where she gets to badly influence impressionable young minds and put her favorite books in eager hands. She is also the host of the Kingdom of Thirst podcast, a show all about romance novels and why they matter.
Her favorite authors are Shirley Jackson, V. E. Schwab, Ursula K. Le Guin, Kresley Cole, Nalini Singh, and just about anyone who writes about the weird and wonderful. She lives in San Francisco with her dog, Babs, who remains stubbornly illiterate.
Her favorite authors are Shirley Jackson, V. E. Schwab, Ursula K. Le Guin, Kresley Cole, Nalini Singh, and just about anyone who writes about the weird and wonderful. She lives in San Francisco with her dog, Babs, who remains stubbornly illiterate.
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February 9, 2024
I'm so glad that Abigail Kelly is continuing to write in this world. I have a particular fondness for the novellas and love the way that they usually still have a complete feel to them. Kohl is no exception and is the fated mate story of Nelly (h), who's a witch with psychometry powers, and Clark (H), who's an orc. They live in a remote area of the Orclind, where Clark's lived his whole life, while Nelly has recently moved there for work. I was happily surprised that their romance comes with a side of miscommunication that wasn't frustrating. Clark is intrigued by Nelly from first sight and wants to be near her and try to help her. Nelly mistakes some of his actions and offers as criticism and thinks he hates her! The holiday season and an accident brings them into forced proximity and clears the air, while also officially starting their relationship.
Written in third person, dual POV. No ow/om drama and neither are virgins (some minor details about h's past and the H's past is just mentioned as him not being a virgin; both have been celibate since meeting).
Both Nelly and Clark have fully fleshed out backgrounds and personalities. I found them both lovable, even though Nelly did frustrate me with her fears and insecurities. It was understandable as her relationship history and the stress of her power was delved into, but Clark was such a cinnamon roll who would do anything for her and I just needed her to accept him ASAP. Especially since Clark had his own deep insecurities, some of which he wasn't even aware of until he was contemplating when his mate might progress their romance. Some cultural differences were also shared and it was fun to get more info on the orcs. One of the differences involves a physical manifestation of them being mates and another is what their bedroom is set up like. Speaking of the bedroom, this does get very steamy (like her other books) and Clark may be a sweetheart, but he's very possessive of his mate.
Side characters are minimal, this is mostly Nelly and Clark snowed in. Nelly's older sister (whose book releases soon) is a powerful telepath so they communicate despite distance. Nelly's new friend in the area also pops up, but Clark's family does not make an appearance on page.
The ending is HFN/HEA with a time jump ahead that's only a week, but their mate bond is clearly forever. I liked the hints of what Nelly's sister's own mating was like since that's the next book out. I do wish that they had maybe reunited on page with their mates meeting each other (though I don't know enough about that other relationship to know if that would have even been possible). Overall just an adorable, somewhat angsty, a tad emotional, and great read.
Written in third person, dual POV. No ow/om drama and neither are virgins (some minor details about h's past and the H's past is just mentioned as him not being a virgin; both have been celibate since meeting).
Both Nelly and Clark have fully fleshed out backgrounds and personalities. I found them both lovable, even though Nelly did frustrate me with her fears and insecurities. It was understandable as her relationship history and the stress of her power was delved into, but Clark was such a cinnamon roll who would do anything for her and I just needed her to accept him ASAP. Especially since Clark had his own deep insecurities, some of which he wasn't even aware of until he was contemplating when his mate might progress their romance. Some cultural differences were also shared and it was fun to get more info on the orcs. One of the differences involves a physical manifestation of them being mates and another is what their bedroom is set up like. Speaking of the bedroom, this does get very steamy (like her other books) and Clark may be a sweetheart, but he's very possessive of his mate.
Side characters are minimal, this is mostly Nelly and Clark snowed in. Nelly's older sister (whose book releases soon) is a powerful telepath so they communicate despite distance. Nelly's new friend in the area also pops up, but Clark's family does not make an appearance on page.
The ending is HFN/HEA with a time jump ahead that's only a week, but their mate bond is clearly forever. I liked the hints of what Nelly's sister's own mating was like since that's the next book out. I do wish that they had maybe reunited on page with their mates meeting each other (though I don't know enough about that other relationship to know if that would have even been possible). Overall just an adorable, somewhat angsty, a tad emotional, and great read.
December 8, 2025
This was literally so precious. Clark was the golden retriever cowboy orc I didn’t know I needed. Nelly was introverted in a lot of ways, but bold in others. The way their mutual respect and genuine care for each other built was wonderful. He always respected her boundaries and doted on her and she gave him the companionship and unselfish care he was missing. Such a cozy holiday story.
Spice: 4/5
Triggers: childhood isolation, sibling codependency, parental distrust of the government, touch aversion, in-universe religion, miscommunication, car accidents, abandonment, intense loneliness, mentions of unhealthy past relationships, past partner cheating
Spice: 4/5
Triggers: childhood isolation, sibling codependency, parental distrust of the government, touch aversion, in-universe religion, miscommunication, car accidents, abandonment, intense loneliness, mentions of unhealthy past relationships, past partner cheating
March 4, 2024
This book 🥹🥹 was freaking adorable and so PERFECT. I LOVE Nelly and Clark so much. Nelly overcame her fear of abandonment to be with Clark is so 🤌 and loving Clark for the way he is 🥹 and Clark being the bestest and raising my standards for men being his endearing self.
December 24, 2023
This novella was so cozy and sweet and oh so spicy! That first spice scene was one of the hottest things I've ever read! 🥵🥵
Clark is so adorable and such a cinnamon roll. He is definitely in competition with Kaz for my favorite orc in this series. He's so besotted with Nelly, and reading him trying so hard to get her attention was sweet. I love a good "he's smitten" romance. Even better when it's with an orc cowboy.
Another great addition to this amazing series!
Clark is so adorable and such a cinnamon roll. He is definitely in competition with Kaz for my favorite orc in this series. He's so besotted with Nelly, and reading him trying so hard to get her attention was sweet. I love a good "he's smitten" romance. Even better when it's with an orc cowboy.
Another great addition to this amazing series!
April 6, 2024
4.5 stars.
Clark is a consent king and I love him for that. I marked this down a bit because I find the world building sucky for the orc mate bond. Basically, when you meet your mate as an orc, you get an uncontrollable need to have sex with them and sequester them away from others. I don't like when choice is taken away and things are completely forced by biology. Sure, Clark fights his biology to give Nelly as much space as he can give her, but it kinda sucks anyway.
In general, this is cute.
Safety deets
- both of them have slept with others in the past, with his history not described at all. I'm a little annoyed that he has slept around since he knew (as an orc) that he has a mate somewhere, but this is a me thing.
- consent is really really good.
- no epilogue in the future. What's funny is that the book about Nelly's sister shows them happy and together years from when THIS book ends.
Clark is a consent king and I love him for that. I marked this down a bit because I find the world building sucky for the orc mate bond. Basically, when you meet your mate as an orc, you get an uncontrollable need to have sex with them and sequester them away from others. I don't like when choice is taken away and things are completely forced by biology. Sure, Clark fights his biology to give Nelly as much space as he can give her, but it kinda sucks anyway.
In general, this is cute.
Safety deets
- both of them have slept with others in the past, with his history not described at all. I'm a little annoyed that he has slept around since he knew (as an orc) that he has a mate somewhere, but this is a me thing.
- consent is really really good.
- no epilogue in the future. What's funny is that the book about Nelly's sister shows them happy and together years from when THIS book ends.
February 11, 2024
Light and fun. Definitely a cozy snowed in fated mates romance. I thought the bonding experience was cool since they were different but they were still bonded.
Clark was a big sweetie who wanted the best for his mate even if it was painful for him.
I felt bad for nelly's past and how many times shed been hurt because of her ability. Im glad her she got clark who was genuine and kind and would do anything for her.
I also liked that they addressed Clark's people pleasing.
Short and sweet! I wish the epilogue had been farther in the future but it was still cute. Would recommend!
Safety:
◇no ow drama: but clark is worried due to her ability she will relive his sex life but nelly said she can filter those memories so she didnt see him with anyone else.
◇no om drama: h had insecurities due to ex bfs/gfs who couldnt handle her gift or used it to hurt her in some way. This led to her having trust issues
◇no love triangle/cheating/sharing
◇age: clark around 40, nelly ???
◇neither are virgins, H not a manwhore
◇couple hour seperation
◇H mentions having some sort of contraceptive as well as a shot to prevent disease(?)
◇HEA
Clark was a big sweetie who wanted the best for his mate even if it was painful for him.
I felt bad for nelly's past and how many times shed been hurt because of her ability. Im glad her she got clark who was genuine and kind and would do anything for her.
I also liked that they addressed Clark's people pleasing.
Short and sweet! I wish the epilogue had been farther in the future but it was still cute. Would recommend!
Safety:
◇no ow drama: but clark is worried due to her ability she will relive his sex life but nelly said she can filter those memories so she didnt see him with anyone else.
◇no om drama: h had insecurities due to ex bfs/gfs who couldnt handle her gift or used it to hurt her in some way. This led to her having trust issues
◇no love triangle/cheating/sharing
◇age: clark around 40, nelly ???
◇neither are virgins, H not a manwhore
◇couple hour seperation
◇H mentions having some sort of contraceptive as well as a shot to prevent disease(?)
◇HEA
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 27, 2024
4.75⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
1.5🌶🌶
Perfect holiday ,cozy read.👌
So freaking adorable, Clark is so sweet but not in a corny way, in a ...you wanna husband him up kind of way.
Nelly, I absolutely felt for her. Due to her ability she finds it hard to open up and trust others, but the patience that Clark showed to his mate was beautiful, we love a consent king 🙌🙌🙌
Also, the Cowboy aspect ,HAD ME MELTING 🫠
I'm glad that the misunderstanding wasn't left unresolved for long and that there was never any doubt that these two would find their way to each other.
❄️Snowed in
❄️Accidental bonding
❄️Mutual pining
❄️Orc Mmc x Witch fmc
❄️Short holiday Read
❄️Can't touch
Highlights
He gave the countertop beside the sink a pat. “C’mere, sugar. Let me feed you something good.” It was a miracle she didn’t choke on air. Sweet, well-mannered cowboy? Where? The man was a menace.
“Thatta girl,” he praised, giving the counter another pat. “Up you get.”
“I am your mate.” All that boyish lightheartedness bled out of his expression. “I’m not a guest. I’m not a neighbor. I am yours.”
“Yes, ma’am,” he wheezed, stepping aside to give her some room at the sink. “Thank you, ma’am.” Her lips twitched. “You’re welcome, cowboy.
1.5🌶🌶
Perfect holiday ,cozy read.👌
So freaking adorable, Clark is so sweet but not in a corny way, in a ...you wanna husband him up kind of way.
Nelly, I absolutely felt for her. Due to her ability she finds it hard to open up and trust others, but the patience that Clark showed to his mate was beautiful, we love a consent king 🙌🙌🙌
Also, the Cowboy aspect ,HAD ME MELTING 🫠
I'm glad that the misunderstanding wasn't left unresolved for long and that there was never any doubt that these two would find their way to each other.
❄️Snowed in
❄️Accidental bonding
❄️Mutual pining
❄️Orc Mmc x Witch fmc
❄️Short holiday Read
❄️Can't touch
Highlights
He gave the countertop beside the sink a pat. “C’mere, sugar. Let me feed you something good.” It was a miracle she didn’t choke on air. Sweet, well-mannered cowboy? Where? The man was a menace.
“Thatta girl,” he praised, giving the counter another pat. “Up you get.”
“I am your mate.” All that boyish lightheartedness bled out of his expression. “I’m not a guest. I’m not a neighbor. I am yours.”
“Yes, ma’am,” he wheezed, stepping aside to give her some room at the sink. “Thank you, ma’am.” Her lips twitched. “You’re welcome, cowboy.
December 8, 2025
2.5 stars
It's fine, it's super short but here's my thing...
I loved the way this started, the hesitancy was something interesting to explore...and then everything was just fine. I feel like we did a 180 when I was excited to see how compromise and trust was going to be built, but again its a short novella so I get why the choices were made, I just would've preferred we stayed on the initial plot track
It's fine, it's super short but here's my thing...
I loved the way this started, the hesitancy was something interesting to explore...and then everything was just fine. I feel like we did a 180 when I was excited to see how compromise and trust was going to be built, but again its a short novella so I get why the choices were made, I just would've preferred we stayed on the initial plot track
January 8, 2024
This is a super cute and cozy “snowed in with an orc cowboy on a mountain” romance. Abigail never disappoints and this holiday novella was sweet and steamy with a little dash of angst. I really liked the meet cute of peril, and how chaotic their first meeting was.
I loved Nelly! I found her story was so relatable, with her aversion to touch yet also still wanting that intimacy. I feel this experience could be relatable to a lot of people (for me it hit home with my own personal challenges). I’ve been searching for spicy romance stories with FMCs who struggle with intimacy, and Abigail definitely brought that rep with Nelly.
Clark was a dream- so kind, understanding, considerate, and patient. I loved how sweet he was, and how he found ways to ummm…. “work around” touch. 👀🥵 Definitely recommend!
I loved Nelly! I found her story was so relatable, with her aversion to touch yet also still wanting that intimacy. I feel this experience could be relatable to a lot of people (for me it hit home with my own personal challenges). I’ve been searching for spicy romance stories with FMCs who struggle with intimacy, and Abigail definitely brought that rep with Nelly.
Clark was a dream- so kind, understanding, considerate, and patient. I loved how sweet he was, and how he found ways to ummm…. “work around” touch. 👀🥵 Definitely recommend!
December 24, 2023
HOLY CRAP I LOVE THIS BOOK. THE CHARACTERS: OUTSTANDING, COMPLEX, LOVING. THE SPICE: AMAZING AS ALWAYS AND I AM LUCKY ABIGAIL CHOOSE SOME OF MY FAVE KINKS TO INCLUDE IN THE BOOK. I LOVE NELLY. I LOVE CLARK. HOLY FUCKING FUCK.
February 29, 2024
This was a super cute snowed in, mate story between a witch and orc!
I thought they were adorable together and complimented each other well.
Definitely a cozy, quick read and I’m interested in her sister’s story too!
I thought they were adorable together and complimented each other well.
Definitely a cozy, quick read and I’m interested in her sister’s story too!
December 29, 2023
Abigail Kelly has been BLESSING us this year! She released two stories in December alone! I love her work so much, and the New Protectorate has quickly become one of my favorite (urban) fantasy worlds.
This novella followed Clark, a happy-go-luck orc cowboy, and Nelly, an eccentric, standoffish witch. Nelly is under the impression Clark hates her, when in reality he’s absolutely smitten.
I liked this story a lot (AK’s books are always amazing) but this couple in particular probably wasn’t my absolute fav. I wish the way Clark always put other peoples needs above his own was explored a bit more. It felt like the story really focused on Nelly’s relationship hang ups, but it would’ve been nice for them to explore some of Clark’s insecurities together. I felt like Clark was so all-in for Nelly right away (which I love) but perhaps some more reflection on his own needs in a relationship would be nice.
*Orc x Witch
*Cowboy MMC
*Cinnamon roll MMC
*He falls first
*Holiday novella
*Snowed in
*Fated mates
This novella followed Clark, a happy-go-luck orc cowboy, and Nelly, an eccentric, standoffish witch. Nelly is under the impression Clark hates her, when in reality he’s absolutely smitten.
I liked this story a lot (AK’s books are always amazing) but this couple in particular probably wasn’t my absolute fav. I wish the way Clark always put other peoples needs above his own was explored a bit more. It felt like the story really focused on Nelly’s relationship hang ups, but it would’ve been nice for them to explore some of Clark’s insecurities together. I felt like Clark was so all-in for Nelly right away (which I love) but perhaps some more reflection on his own needs in a relationship would be nice.
*Orc x Witch
*Cowboy MMC
*Cinnamon roll MMC
*He falls first
*Holiday novella
*Snowed in
*Fated mates
December 29, 2023
First off, I would like to thank Abigail Kelly for this arc in exchange for my honest review.
Trigger warning or content warning? Yes! Included at the end of the book.
Details?
FMC arrived in their town a year ago, and has been celibate since then. She was with a OM at the placement she had beforehand.
MMC has been celibate since he seen her a few months ago.
Neither are virgins.
FMC is a witch who has the ability to see the past of an object or person she touches with her bare hands. This has caused issues in her past partners.
FMC witch-bonds with the MMC without his consent, nor without her knowledge. One minute she’s fine and the next her magic bowled them both over.
FMC and MMC are mates by orc standard as well, because the MMC gets the Kohl. Which is the darkening of both the hands and the feet that occurs to Orcs when they come into contact with their mate, it is a hormonal shift.
My thoughts?
This was the coziest book to read right by the holidays.
Nelly and Clark were fun and easy to read about. Their bumps on the road are smoothed out by communication and their dedication to each other.
Clark is such a sweet orc. Nelly is such a clever witch, who has worked throughout the challenges her life has given her. Never giving up and trying to push throughout the boundaries her gift has enforced. Clark, oh sweet dear Clark. He respected Nelly’s boundaries and beyond, and when he needed a break he took it. I loved that he knew his own limits.
Also, this novella definitely left me feeling excited for Nelly’s sister’s romance story in Faraway.
Trigger warning or content warning? Yes! Included at the end of the book.
Details?
FMC arrived in their town a year ago, and has been celibate since then. She was with a OM at the placement she had beforehand.
MMC has been celibate since he seen her a few months ago.
Neither are virgins.
FMC is a witch who has the ability to see the past of an object or person she touches with her bare hands. This has caused issues in her past partners.
FMC witch-bonds with the MMC without his consent, nor without her knowledge. One minute she’s fine and the next her magic bowled them both over.
FMC and MMC are mates by orc standard as well, because the MMC gets the Kohl. Which is the darkening of both the hands and the feet that occurs to Orcs when they come into contact with their mate, it is a hormonal shift.
My thoughts?
This was the coziest book to read right by the holidays.
Nelly and Clark were fun and easy to read about. Their bumps on the road are smoothed out by communication and their dedication to each other.
Clark is such a sweet orc. Nelly is such a clever witch, who has worked throughout the challenges her life has given her. Never giving up and trying to push throughout the boundaries her gift has enforced. Clark, oh sweet dear Clark. He respected Nelly’s boundaries and beyond, and when he needed a break he took it. I loved that he knew his own limits.
Also, this novella definitely left me feeling excited for Nelly’s sister’s romance story in Faraway.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
November 23, 2024
Clark you sweet golden retriever cowboy orc 🥹
Again with the inner couple miscommunication BUT we have the wonderful Clark to pull Nelly out of her spiral and make them talk through it. My heart.
Again with the inner couple miscommunication BUT we have the wonderful Clark to pull Nelly out of her spiral and make them talk through it. My heart.
December 19, 2025
Really liked this one! It’s cozy and light but nice. That’s why 4 stars bc it isn’t particularly deep but it’s well done
December 24, 2025
This one was super short but cute.
December 23, 2023
ARC review:
This is the archetype of feel-good winter holiday short romance. No drama, some yearning, some sex, snowy solstice vibes, and a sprinkle of giggles. Plus two adorable protagonists who are super wholesome with just enough inner angst to give them depth and the story punch.
Like all of Abigail Kelly’s New Protectorate books it has a strong scaffolding of lore, but you don’t need to be familiar with the NPU or any of her other her books to appreciate it. If you’re already a fan, it’s got lots of cute little cross references.
Kelly deploys a large numbers of romance tropes with a leer and an insider wink: snowed in together; hot folksy shirtless cowboy; miscommunication, quirky technicolor girl; meaningful presents; hot cocoa. Plus orcs and steamy safe sex. It’s clear Kelly had a blast writing it and it’s fun to read. It gives you a magic fizzy feeling inside.
“They both knew he wasn’t talking about dinner. Worse, they both knew that they both knew he wasn’t talking about dinner.”
This is the archetype of feel-good winter holiday short romance. No drama, some yearning, some sex, snowy solstice vibes, and a sprinkle of giggles. Plus two adorable protagonists who are super wholesome with just enough inner angst to give them depth and the story punch.
Like all of Abigail Kelly’s New Protectorate books it has a strong scaffolding of lore, but you don’t need to be familiar with the NPU or any of her other her books to appreciate it. If you’re already a fan, it’s got lots of cute little cross references.
Kelly deploys a large numbers of romance tropes with a leer and an insider wink: snowed in together; hot folksy shirtless cowboy; miscommunication, quirky technicolor girl; meaningful presents; hot cocoa. Plus orcs and steamy safe sex. It’s clear Kelly had a blast writing it and it’s fun to read. It gives you a magic fizzy feeling inside.
“They both knew he wasn’t talking about dinner. Worse, they both knew that they both knew he wasn’t talking about dinner.”
September 30, 2025
A lot of objectification going on in this one, from both parties. I guess it was supposed to be mutual pining but it read mostly awkward imho because it was really repetitive, going on and on about the other party's fantastic physical appearance and what a catch they are for the hundreth of time.
I found the overarching misunderstanding trope which appeared in this plot to be comprehensible, and wasn't much annoyed by it to my own surprise because it seemed to be in its place in the story.
However, I did not appreciate the hero's incessant determination to make her acquaintance despite her will. She was very reluctant for all he knew, yet he kept pushing her because he didn't take no for an answer. That's harrassment. Not okay. (Also comparing his new mate to a scared horse wasn't the brightest from his part, even in his own head but I digress.)
However, once snowed in with her at her house after his accident, the hero showed some awareness of the heroine's boundaries and acted mostly decent enough.
Still I got this uncomfortable feeling regarding his pushiness and that he put her in the spot, taking away her chance to remain uncontacted by choice by him. He had no idea that the tender feelings were shared by her even after the accidental witch bonding and they were still strangers for all intents and purposes. And he being the one who created all this mess to begin with because he chose to ride out in a snowstorm, overestimating his own capacities.
Yet her completely understandable restraint and cautiousness was treated almost as if some kind of obstacle to get rid of asap, or her being too guarded or sth. Like, they had just literally had their first conversation! Yet she was being pathologised for being too 'skittish' because she wasn't melting fast enough to his advances or sth.
It seems to me that although the novella is coated in a lot of talk about boundaries, equality and consent and the hero does display self-consciousness and capacity to analyse himself critically, then the perhaps unintended, underlying message or subtext still remains to be that of: he-knows-better, she-doesnt-know-what-she-wants, let-the-man-harrass, and ignore-and-smash-boundaries.
Which is truly a pity.
Due to this, the story had lost it's charm on me by the middle of the book and I dnfed in Ch 8th.
I found the overarching misunderstanding trope which appeared in this plot to be comprehensible, and wasn't much annoyed by it to my own surprise because it seemed to be in its place in the story.
However, I did not appreciate the hero's incessant determination to make her acquaintance despite her will. She was very reluctant for all he knew, yet he kept pushing her because he didn't take no for an answer. That's harrassment. Not okay. (Also comparing his new mate to a scared horse wasn't the brightest from his part, even in his own head but I digress.)
However, once snowed in with her at her house after his accident, the hero showed some awareness of the heroine's boundaries and acted mostly decent enough.
Still I got this uncomfortable feeling regarding his pushiness and that he put her in the spot, taking away her chance to remain uncontacted by choice by him. He had no idea that the tender feelings were shared by her even after the accidental witch bonding and they were still strangers for all intents and purposes. And he being the one who created all this mess to begin with because he chose to ride out in a snowstorm, overestimating his own capacities.
Yet her completely understandable restraint and cautiousness was treated almost as if some kind of obstacle to get rid of asap, or her being too guarded or sth. Like, they had just literally had their first conversation! Yet she was being pathologised for being too 'skittish' because she wasn't melting fast enough to his advances or sth.
It seems to me that although the novella is coated in a lot of talk about boundaries, equality and consent and the hero does display self-consciousness and capacity to analyse himself critically, then the perhaps unintended, underlying message or subtext still remains to be that of: he-knows-better, she-doesnt-know-what-she-wants, let-the-man-harrass, and ignore-and-smash-boundaries.
Which is truly a pity.
Due to this, the story had lost it's charm on me by the middle of the book and I dnfed in Ch 8th.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 8, 2024
I’m not a guest. I’m not a neighbor. I am yours.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️/5
Here we go again. Another amazing story written by Abigail.
We had a misunderstanding and miscommunication tropes in previous books, but here we had in on another level. The angst and drama were so good.
We had an orc - Clark - who is a helping hand to anyone in his family and in his orcish community. But surprise surprise there is a witch - Nelly - who seems to avoid him and all his attempts to chat and help with old house she is living in.
Lucky us with the help of Burden (i think) and Mother Nature there is a huge storm coming their way which can lead to interesting situation and forced proximity in a lovely cottage.
Did i loved this book? Without a doubt.
Did Clark become my favorite man from Abigail’s stories? Almost, my heart is still belonging to another male. Artem is a dragon and what a man he is.
What attracts me in Clark? He is blunt and not afraid to speak his mind, he is caring and respectful, he wants to be liked but he is lonely and really wants to find his person.
Story of Nelly is a sad one, and in this small book we are seeing how hard she is trying to overcome her issues and accept kindness and attention from him.
I’m so ready to continue my journey with New Protectorate universe and unique characters. All of the stories which i have already read were so good and i’m slowly returning back to them in order to feel same feelings, find missed details and make discoveries.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️/5
Here we go again. Another amazing story written by Abigail.
We had a misunderstanding and miscommunication tropes in previous books, but here we had in on another level. The angst and drama were so good.
We had an orc - Clark - who is a helping hand to anyone in his family and in his orcish community. But surprise surprise there is a witch - Nelly - who seems to avoid him and all his attempts to chat and help with old house she is living in.
Lucky us with the help of Burden (i think) and Mother Nature there is a huge storm coming their way which can lead to interesting situation and forced proximity in a lovely cottage.
Did i loved this book? Without a doubt.
Did Clark become my favorite man from Abigail’s stories? Almost, my heart is still belonging to another male. Artem is a dragon and what a man he is.
What attracts me in Clark? He is blunt and not afraid to speak his mind, he is caring and respectful, he wants to be liked but he is lonely and really wants to find his person.
Story of Nelly is a sad one, and in this small book we are seeing how hard she is trying to overcome her issues and accept kindness and attention from him.
I’m so ready to continue my journey with New Protectorate universe and unique characters. All of the stories which i have already read were so good and i’m slowly returning back to them in order to feel same feelings, find missed details and make discoveries.
January 11, 2024
Kohl by Abigail Kelly brings us back to the alternate US called the United Territories and Allies (UTA) in the near future where humans coexist with fey, demons, elves, witches, and more. If you’ve read Burden’s Bonds, then you’ll recognize the hero, Clark.
Nelly Ortega is a witch who grew up isolated and now works in an orc community, which is very much outside her comfort zone. For this reason, Nelly keeps to herself and feels like an outsider among the other orcs. Clark Wilson is the kind of orc that can get along with everyone. That’s why he’s confused when he realizes Nelly has been ignoring him even though they are neighbors. The holidays are here and they are both alone, so Clark decides to leave Nelly a gift. The only problem is that there is a huge blizzard and now they are snowed in together.
I loved reading this novella! Nelly is so relatable and Clark is so sweet! I love a good forced proximity trope and this one was written so well. There was a bit of miscommunication, but it was addressed early on and well. This was such a cute read and it only makes me excited to read the next book, Faraway, which is about Nelly’s sister, Clementine.
Ever since I read about Clark in Burden’s Bonds, I couldn’t wait for his story! You don’t need to read Burden’s Bonds before reading Kohl because he had a very small role in it. Even with that small role his cuteness made me want to read his story 🥰
If you love paranormal or fantasy romances, forced proximity, cinnamon roll heroes, wallflower heroines, one sided enemies to lovers, and fated mates, then this book is for you!
Huge thanks to Abigail Kelly for sending me an ARC to review!
Nelly Ortega is a witch who grew up isolated and now works in an orc community, which is very much outside her comfort zone. For this reason, Nelly keeps to herself and feels like an outsider among the other orcs. Clark Wilson is the kind of orc that can get along with everyone. That’s why he’s confused when he realizes Nelly has been ignoring him even though they are neighbors. The holidays are here and they are both alone, so Clark decides to leave Nelly a gift. The only problem is that there is a huge blizzard and now they are snowed in together.
I loved reading this novella! Nelly is so relatable and Clark is so sweet! I love a good forced proximity trope and this one was written so well. There was a bit of miscommunication, but it was addressed early on and well. This was such a cute read and it only makes me excited to read the next book, Faraway, which is about Nelly’s sister, Clementine.
Ever since I read about Clark in Burden’s Bonds, I couldn’t wait for his story! You don’t need to read Burden’s Bonds before reading Kohl because he had a very small role in it. Even with that small role his cuteness made me want to read his story 🥰
If you love paranormal or fantasy romances, forced proximity, cinnamon roll heroes, wallflower heroines, one sided enemies to lovers, and fated mates, then this book is for you!
Huge thanks to Abigail Kelly for sending me an ARC to review!
December 26, 2023
Sugar, spice, and everything nice. When Abigail said this story was my catnip, she wasn't kidding. Clark Wilson is a himbo with a heart of gold and had never met someone he hasn't turned into a friend (whether they like it or not). But the new witch in town is avoiding him like a plague, and that's just something Clark can't abide.
Nelly Ortega is not what anyone in town was expecting as the new Flora and Fauna Conservator. All bright colors and gangly limbs compared to her orcish neighbors, but she seems to be holding her own. If only her pesky neighbor Clark would stop leaning passive aggressive notes for her.
A blizzard, a car accident, an accidental witchbond, and appearance of the khol, Nelly and Clark find themselves snowed in for a helluva few days. Clark is over the moon at what this means, Nelly is beside herself with guilt thinking she's ruined Clark's life. He falls first and he falls HARD. Clark is Orc Clark Kent. 100% NPDA prime BEEFCAKE and a consummate gentleman. Clark Wilson is a King of Consent. He lets Nelly set the pace for their new dynamic and is determined to let her lead as he shows her just how good a mate he can be.
Nelly Ortega is not what anyone in town was expecting as the new Flora and Fauna Conservator. All bright colors and gangly limbs compared to her orcish neighbors, but she seems to be holding her own. If only her pesky neighbor Clark would stop leaning passive aggressive notes for her.
A blizzard, a car accident, an accidental witchbond, and appearance of the khol, Nelly and Clark find themselves snowed in for a helluva few days. Clark is over the moon at what this means, Nelly is beside herself with guilt thinking she's ruined Clark's life. He falls first and he falls HARD. Clark is Orc Clark Kent. 100% NPDA prime BEEFCAKE and a consummate gentleman. Clark Wilson is a King of Consent. He lets Nelly set the pace for their new dynamic and is determined to let her lead as he shows her just how good a mate he can be.
January 7, 2024
UGH THIS WAS SUCH A DELIGHT.
Clark was A+++++++++ Chef's Kiss and lived up to his namesake (Clark Kent, ofc, my fave Clark of all time, with whom all future Clarks will always exist in competition) in farmboy respectability and impeccable manners. Penelope's powers were SO INTERESTING and something I really loved seeing Abigail's exploration of, as far as how it might impact her day to day life.
ALSO, being able to go straight from Burden's Bonds where Clark was introduced directly to Clark's romance was FANTASTIC and I just LOVE how Abigail continues to expand the world of the New Protectorate, bringing all these side characters into fully realized life alongside the main characters of her primary novels. And the way this ties to FARAWAY also is so nice!!! Definitely you can read all of these stories independently but there is something really special in how they piece all together too, and I'm just--in awe of Abigail Kelly, tbh.
Clark was A+++++++++ Chef's Kiss and lived up to his namesake (Clark Kent, ofc, my fave Clark of all time, with whom all future Clarks will always exist in competition) in farmboy respectability and impeccable manners. Penelope's powers were SO INTERESTING and something I really loved seeing Abigail's exploration of, as far as how it might impact her day to day life.
ALSO, being able to go straight from Burden's Bonds where Clark was introduced directly to Clark's romance was FANTASTIC and I just LOVE how Abigail continues to expand the world of the New Protectorate, bringing all these side characters into fully realized life alongside the main characters of her primary novels. And the way this ties to FARAWAY also is so nice!!! Definitely you can read all of these stories independently but there is something really special in how they piece all together too, and I'm just--in awe of Abigail Kelly, tbh.
December 31, 2023
I really enjoyed this book. The hero is an orc. He has been obsessed with the heroine. He hangs out by her fence line for hours (shirtless) just to catch a glimpse of her. He tries to accidentally run into her in town. But every time she sees him, she leaves.
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She is very attracted to him but thinks he doesn't like her. He left notes about helping her take care of her cottage and get it ready for winter. He thought he was flirting. She thought he was complaining about her property and didn't like her. Big misunderstanding.
He goes to leave a Christmas gift on her doorstep. But a blizzard started and he crashes his car. She rescues him and now they are snowed in together. He is thrilled by this. She is concerned.
I loved how they talked things out and he wanted to woo her. It was so much fun to read.
It turns out she is his fated mate "the Kohl" on his hands and feet proves it.
I was confused because the heroine keeps referring to her sister and how she just got mated and lives on an island. I thought I had missed a book. The sister's book does not release until Feb 2024.
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She is very attracted to him but thinks he doesn't like her. He left notes about helping her take care of her cottage and get it ready for winter. He thought he was flirting. She thought he was complaining about her property and didn't like her. Big misunderstanding.
He goes to leave a Christmas gift on her doorstep. But a blizzard started and he crashes his car. She rescues him and now they are snowed in together. He is thrilled by this. She is concerned.
I loved how they talked things out and he wanted to woo her. It was so much fun to read.
It turns out she is his fated mate "the Kohl" on his hands and feet proves it.
I was confused because the heroine keeps referring to her sister and how she just got mated and lives on an island. I thought I had missed a book. The sister's book does not release until Feb 2024.
December 25, 2023
A holiday novella set in the NPU? Yes please!
We get to see Clark the closest thing the Orclind has to a cowboy and Nelly a witch who has moved in next door to his ranch, and their snowed in-just one nest-I like you but why don't you like me-holiday shenanigans. There are fun moments and lots of emotional ones while these two figure out how they can open up and learn to be together. This is just the right length to pack in the heart of their connection as well as see how they grow as people. It's emotional but also sweet and fun.
I received an advanced copy of this book but all opinions are my own.
We get to see Clark the closest thing the Orclind has to a cowboy and Nelly a witch who has moved in next door to his ranch, and their snowed in-just one nest-I like you but why don't you like me-holiday shenanigans. There are fun moments and lots of emotional ones while these two figure out how they can open up and learn to be together. This is just the right length to pack in the heart of their connection as well as see how they grow as people. It's emotional but also sweet and fun.
I received an advanced copy of this book but all opinions are my own.
January 4, 2026
Awn, fofos! Ele respeitando os limites dela custe o que custar, ele sem aguentar ir embora por um segundo com ela achando que ele não quer voltar, ele todo tristinho quando ela não contou pra família sobre ele, ela agarrada na prensa de flores 🤏🥺
Aff. Foi tudo muito gostosinho, cozy. Realmente um livro típico de feriados comemorativos ("Natal").
Só achei de péssimo gosto colocar primeiro a Nelly e não a Em na ordem dos livros. Agora que eu já vi ela feliz no seu HEA, que eu já sei como "tudo acaba" é que tu vai me dar um livro dela? 🙄
Mas é um TRITÃO, né. Então vamos de começar essa leitura agora mesmo. Esse universo é muito farofa, amo.
Aff. Foi tudo muito gostosinho, cozy. Realmente um livro típico de feriados comemorativos ("Natal").
Só achei de péssimo gosto colocar primeiro a Nelly e não a Em na ordem dos livros. Agora que eu já vi ela feliz no seu HEA, que eu já sei como "tudo acaba" é que tu vai me dar um livro dela? 🙄
Mas é um TRITÃO, né. Então vamos de começar essa leitura agora mesmo. Esse universo é muito farofa, amo.
December 21, 2023
*ARC REVIEW*
Another adorably sweet novella in the Protectorate Series. The main takeaway from this story is that tone/intent does not convey in notes. Don't write your neighbors notes!
Nelly and Clark were so cute! Abigail Kelly just writes besotted MMCs so well. We also get a touch of world/lore building which is nice for a novella and lots of sneak peaks for Faraway, Nelly's sister's story.
Overall, a warm and cozy holiday romance between a skittish witch and her cowboy.
Another adorably sweet novella in the Protectorate Series. The main takeaway from this story is that tone/intent does not convey in notes. Don't write your neighbors notes!
Nelly and Clark were so cute! Abigail Kelly just writes besotted MMCs so well. We also get a touch of world/lore building which is nice for a novella and lots of sneak peaks for Faraway, Nelly's sister's story.
Overall, a warm and cozy holiday romance between a skittish witch and her cowboy.
December 26, 2023
Finding a surprise ARC of this in my email right before Christmas was the BEST gift I could ever imagine!
If you read Burden's Bonds and felt a little bereft at not learning more about a certain overly friendly orc, this is the book for you! This was such a sweet, low stakes, warm and cozy read. Perfect for a lazy day at home in front of the fireplace. I loved both of the main characters and I'm SO excited for the next book about Nelly's sister!
If you read Burden's Bonds and felt a little bereft at not learning more about a certain overly friendly orc, this is the book for you! This was such a sweet, low stakes, warm and cozy read. Perfect for a lazy day at home in front of the fireplace. I loved both of the main characters and I'm SO excited for the next book about Nelly's sister!
December 30, 2023
Thinking you’re going to be reading a cute, cozy orc romance with a wintry end of year setting but the author surprises you by coming in hard with emotional intimacy, raw vulnerability, and pining.
Absolutely smitten with Clark, an orc cowboy who longs for his neighbor, a witch. Having the ability to sense memories in objects and people means Nelly lives a mostly solitary life. Even from her neighbor whom she avoids because she believes he doesn’t like her. The way Clark recognizes her fears, respects her boundaries, and waits for her to come to him while wrestling with his mating instincts leveled me in the best way. The book was in my cart before I even finished it.
Absolutely smitten with Clark, an orc cowboy who longs for his neighbor, a witch. Having the ability to sense memories in objects and people means Nelly lives a mostly solitary life. Even from her neighbor whom she avoids because she believes he doesn’t like her. The way Clark recognizes her fears, respects her boundaries, and waits for her to come to him while wrestling with his mating instincts leveled me in the best way. The book was in my cart before I even finished it.
December 26, 2023
This book 🥵 whew, this book.
Perfect and hilarious miscommunication trope, snowed in with the swoon worthy cowboy, only one nest, mutual masturbation, scent marking...all whipped up deliciously into this novella.
It's the perfect treat to pick up today, and there'll be some spicy art coming because we met the pre order goal 🎁
Perfect and hilarious miscommunication trope, snowed in with the swoon worthy cowboy, only one nest, mutual masturbation, scent marking...all whipped up deliciously into this novella.
It's the perfect treat to pick up today, and there'll be some spicy art coming because we met the pre order goal 🎁
January 9, 2024
She thinks he hates her so she keeps avoiding him. He's been pining for her since the first time he saw her.
Classic misunderstanding gets clarified when she saves his life and both are forced to stay together because of a storm.
This was cute and sweet, sure but it was also filled with vulnerability and emotions.
I loved the world building and can't wait to dive into more of this world!
Classic misunderstanding gets clarified when she saves his life and both are forced to stay together because of a storm.
This was cute and sweet, sure but it was also filled with vulnerability and emotions.
I loved the world building and can't wait to dive into more of this world!
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