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There Goes the Groom
Catching a husband has never been so complicated.
Matthew Harrison has only one task in life, to marry money. After failing miserably in London, his family takes matters into their own hands by arranging his marriage to the wealthy Lucy Bateman. But when he meets Lucy for the first time, his resolve to save his family from ruin crumbles. Lucy looks to be nothing more than a child, and he cannot fathom going through with the union. Without a thought for the consequences of his actions, he runs away.
Lucy Bateman didn’t like the idea of an arranged marriage, but she agreed to save her sister from suffering the same fate. However, when she played a trick on her groom-to-be by sending her younger sister to meet him in her place, he fled without a word. Now, three years later, Lucy stumbles upon her long-lost fiance working as a cart driver. Fate has given her a second chance and this time there will be no tricks… other than pretending to be someone else entirely in order to convince him to come home and marry her.
This book was orignally available in a shortened form as part of a promotion.
Matthew Harrison has only one task in life, to marry money. After failing miserably in London, his family takes matters into their own hands by arranging his marriage to the wealthy Lucy Bateman. But when he meets Lucy for the first time, his resolve to save his family from ruin crumbles. Lucy looks to be nothing more than a child, and he cannot fathom going through with the union. Without a thought for the consequences of his actions, he runs away.
Lucy Bateman didn’t like the idea of an arranged marriage, but she agreed to save her sister from suffering the same fate. However, when she played a trick on her groom-to-be by sending her younger sister to meet him in her place, he fled without a word. Now, three years later, Lucy stumbles upon her long-lost fiance working as a cart driver. Fate has given her a second chance and this time there will be no tricks… other than pretending to be someone else entirely in order to convince him to come home and marry her.
This book was orignally available in a shortened form as part of a promotion.
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First published April 15, 2024
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June 1, 2024
2 stars ✨
Lucy gives Matthew so much stress, I felt for the guy. From beginning to end, poor thing! I mean, I found it very humorous but I still felt bad for him at times.
I really enjoy the humor and the characters that this author writes, but I will admit the kissing/making out is more than I care to admit and typically drops my ratings. That would definitely be the case with this book. I was aiming to give it a 3 but after a pretty heavy makeout session, I think it’s going to have to get it 2 from me, which is unfortunate. 😬
The hidden identity trope is one of my favorites, especially when one of the people know who the other person is and is trying to figure out information about that person. That’s definitely what attracted me to this book. I like those elements and felt like I couldn’t read fast enough to get the big reveal to happen.
But again, those kisses were too much for my tastes (and made me red in the face, in all honesty!), plus the parts about Matthew being tempted by Lucy and his fantasies of kissing her in the wagon was….questionable to me, so I have to drop the rating. Such a bummer on that! :(
Main Content:
At the beginning, Matthew thinks that damnation is the least of his concerns because he’s fixing to marry a woman he’s never met; Matthew calls Lucy a “devil woman”; Lucy wonders how many untruths you could tell a vicar and still be right with God; Church going (but the sermon isn’t payed attention to well); Mentions of pastors/vicars, their sermons being good, church going, & churches; A couple mentions of God; A mention of praying; ‘what the devil’, ‘devil take it’, and ‘by all that was holy’ are all said once.
Different phrases like ‘heavens’, ‘for heaven’s sake’, ‘thank the heavens’, and such varieties are said, but no other language stronger than stupid, idiot, ‘blast/blast you’, ‘dash it all’, and a cut-off ‘what the—‘ is said; Curses are said but not written out (including by Matthew); Lucy’s younger sister says “Bullocks” and Lucy admonishes her for her language.
Lucy & Matthew both try to avoid lying (especially in a church), but do lie because of their secrets; They both later joke about lying being bad habits of theirs; Matthew thinks that his wife-to-be could be clipped and walk with a noisy limp, but later thinks that it wouldn’t matter if that was the case; Mentions of lies & lying; A few mentions of liquor, drinking, & gambling.
A handful of heavy kisses/make out sessions that last multiple paragraphs to full pages, have a lot of build-up tension, and mentions swollen lips, growling, sitting on his lap, & fantasies; A handful of other kisses that are only two or three sentences in details;
Talks about kisses, kissing, & wanting to kiss (others suggest for Lucy to kiss Matthew, up to a handful of sentences in details); Lots of Touches, Embraces, Dancing, Nearness, Warmth, Smelling, & Noticing (including curves, muscles, necks, & collar bones, up to around seven or so sentences); Remembering touches, embraces, & kisses (up to a few sentences); Lots of Imagining & Wanting to touch, embraces, & kiss (up to a handful of sentences); Matthew feels tempted by Lucy (when she’s Miss Shroud) and it’s mentioned a handful of times; Matthew thinks about his fantasies with Miss Shroud (such as kissing her in the delivery wagon); Matthew pulls Lucy onto his lap a couple of times.
Because of the prank Lucy plays on Matthew at the very beginning, Matthew thinks she is her younger sister (who is thirteen) and is horrified at the thought of marrying someone who looks so much like a child and is expected to bring her into his bed; Lucy is considered about having a stranger in her bed; Lucy agreed to an arranged marriage to protect and provide for her sister so she wouldn’t be put out to the highest bidder; Lucy & Matthew have an accident on the wagon that ends up with him having to grab her skirts & it’s awkward for both of them (causing a compromising position).
Many mentions of flirting, women being very interested in Matthew, & jealousy; Mentions of temptation, reputations, chaperones, & unmarried couples not being alone together; A mention of a man looking at Lucy like she was a filly he was considering buying.
Lucy gives Matthew so much stress, I felt for the guy. From beginning to end, poor thing! I mean, I found it very humorous but I still felt bad for him at times.
I really enjoy the humor and the characters that this author writes, but I will admit the kissing/making out is more than I care to admit and typically drops my ratings. That would definitely be the case with this book. I was aiming to give it a 3 but after a pretty heavy makeout session, I think it’s going to have to get it 2 from me, which is unfortunate. 😬
The hidden identity trope is one of my favorites, especially when one of the people know who the other person is and is trying to figure out information about that person. That’s definitely what attracted me to this book. I like those elements and felt like I couldn’t read fast enough to get the big reveal to happen.
But again, those kisses were too much for my tastes (and made me red in the face, in all honesty!), plus the parts about Matthew being tempted by Lucy and his fantasies of kissing her in the wagon was….questionable to me, so I have to drop the rating. Such a bummer on that! :(
Main Content:
At the beginning, Matthew thinks that damnation is the least of his concerns because he’s fixing to marry a woman he’s never met; Matthew calls Lucy a “devil woman”; Lucy wonders how many untruths you could tell a vicar and still be right with God; Church going (but the sermon isn’t payed attention to well); Mentions of pastors/vicars, their sermons being good, church going, & churches; A couple mentions of God; A mention of praying; ‘what the devil’, ‘devil take it’, and ‘by all that was holy’ are all said once.
Different phrases like ‘heavens’, ‘for heaven’s sake’, ‘thank the heavens’, and such varieties are said, but no other language stronger than stupid, idiot, ‘blast/blast you’, ‘dash it all’, and a cut-off ‘what the—‘ is said; Curses are said but not written out (including by Matthew); Lucy’s younger sister says “Bullocks” and Lucy admonishes her for her language.
Lucy & Matthew both try to avoid lying (especially in a church), but do lie because of their secrets; They both later joke about lying being bad habits of theirs; Matthew thinks that his wife-to-be could be clipped and walk with a noisy limp, but later thinks that it wouldn’t matter if that was the case; Mentions of lies & lying; A few mentions of liquor, drinking, & gambling.
A handful of heavy kisses/make out sessions that last multiple paragraphs to full pages, have a lot of build-up tension, and mentions swollen lips, growling, sitting on his lap, & fantasies; A handful of other kisses that are only two or three sentences in details;
Talks about kisses, kissing, & wanting to kiss (others suggest for Lucy to kiss Matthew, up to a handful of sentences in details); Lots of Touches, Embraces, Dancing, Nearness, Warmth, Smelling, & Noticing (including curves, muscles, necks, & collar bones, up to around seven or so sentences); Remembering touches, embraces, & kisses (up to a few sentences); Lots of Imagining & Wanting to touch, embraces, & kiss (up to a handful of sentences); Matthew feels tempted by Lucy (when she’s Miss Shroud) and it’s mentioned a handful of times; Matthew thinks about his fantasies with Miss Shroud (such as kissing her in the delivery wagon); Matthew pulls Lucy onto his lap a couple of times.
Because of the prank Lucy plays on Matthew at the very beginning, Matthew thinks she is her younger sister (who is thirteen) and is horrified at the thought of marrying someone who looks so much like a child and is expected to bring her into his bed; Lucy is considered about having a stranger in her bed; Lucy agreed to an arranged marriage to protect and provide for her sister so she wouldn’t be put out to the highest bidder; Lucy & Matthew have an accident on the wagon that ends up with him having to grab her skirts & it’s awkward for both of them (causing a compromising position).
Many mentions of flirting, women being very interested in Matthew, & jealousy; Mentions of temptation, reputations, chaperones, & unmarried couples not being alone together; A mention of a man looking at Lucy like she was a filly he was considering buying.
April 15, 2024
I so love the lighthearted way Hatch writes these stories! This one was fun:} Her books are so different! Situations you would never think would happen, happen! I love her leading men, they are always fun to read and when they fall in love they fall hard. This is light with some sweet kisses. No religion and no violence.
April 24, 2024
This was a super fun story about a young woman, Lucy Bateman, who plays a trick on her soon to be betrothed, Matthew Harrison. Only it majorly backfires and Matthew runs away before they're officially introduced. Three long years later she accidentally runs into him while accompanying his mother shopping, so she devises a scheme to help him realize it's time for him return to his family's home so they can be married.
I was surprised that Lucy cooked up a second scheme since her first one didn't even go close to how she had planned it. I thought it funny that Matthew's mother had Lucy living at the family estate even though Matthew had been gone three years and no one knew where he was. Paying for all her future mother-in-laws gloves and hats was the least she could do since her prank made Matthew run away.
I liked that Lucy was able to see Matthew's true character while she was pretending to be someone else and I really enjoyed Matthew's interactions with the Garvis family, especially little Mandy.
Esther Hatch is the queen of the "historical rom-com". The situations Lucy found herself in had me laughing out loud several times: the cart incident, the thunderstorm and catching the goose (IYKYK). Then there are the super swoony kisses when these two finally get together. I thought the chemistry between Matthew and Lucy might set Marge's shed ablaze.
This is another winner, but beware: once you start reading this one you're not going to want to put it down.
I received a complimentary copy. All thoughts expressed in this review are my own.
I was surprised that Lucy cooked up a second scheme since her first one didn't even go close to how she had planned it. I thought it funny that Matthew's mother had Lucy living at the family estate even though Matthew had been gone three years and no one knew where he was. Paying for all her future mother-in-laws gloves and hats was the least she could do since her prank made Matthew run away.
I liked that Lucy was able to see Matthew's true character while she was pretending to be someone else and I really enjoyed Matthew's interactions with the Garvis family, especially little Mandy.
Esther Hatch is the queen of the "historical rom-com". The situations Lucy found herself in had me laughing out loud several times: the cart incident, the thunderstorm and catching the goose (IYKYK). Then there are the super swoony kisses when these two finally get together. I thought the chemistry between Matthew and Lucy might set Marge's shed ablaze.
This is another winner, but beware: once you start reading this one you're not going to want to put it down.
I received a complimentary copy. All thoughts expressed in this review are my own.
April 29, 2024
2.5 stars, rounded to 3 because that kiss in the stables was VERY nice
Matthew Harrison—yes, THE Matthew Harrison from book 1 of this series—turns out to be less repulsive than previously advertised. In this third installment, he’s allowed himself to be coerced by his parents into an arranged marriage with an heiress to save the family’s fortunes, bride unseen. When he does see her, he’s appalled that he’s expected to marry and bed a child and bolts.
Good for him. His fiancé had sent her 13-year-old sister to pretend to be her as a test, which was only the beginning of the mountain of lies she perpetrated before this book was over. Lucy and her silly lies really twanged my last nerve and I was sorry to see the self-sufficient Matthew stuck with her. On top of that, the lapses in logic this book embraces are mind-boggling. Lucy, pretending to be Miss Shroud, wanted Matthew to respond to her, which would mean he would be betraying his fiancé Lucy. Matthew did his best to remain silent and detached from Miss Shroud because he was betrothed to Lucy, and Lucy thought that meant he couldn’t love Lucy. Say what? So Lucy is an idiot as well as a liar.
This author has a lovely way with words and every book contains beautiful, heartfelt moments but her male characters are beta prudes, her female characters are frustrating and unlikeable, everyone makes erroneous assumptions instead of having a conversation, and the same thoughts are cycled over and over. I’m out.
Matthew Harrison—yes, THE Matthew Harrison from book 1 of this series—turns out to be less repulsive than previously advertised. In this third installment, he’s allowed himself to be coerced by his parents into an arranged marriage with an heiress to save the family’s fortunes, bride unseen. When he does see her, he’s appalled that he’s expected to marry and bed a child and bolts.
Good for him. His fiancé had sent her 13-year-old sister to pretend to be her as a test, which was only the beginning of the mountain of lies she perpetrated before this book was over. Lucy and her silly lies really twanged my last nerve and I was sorry to see the self-sufficient Matthew stuck with her. On top of that, the lapses in logic this book embraces are mind-boggling. Lucy, pretending to be Miss Shroud, wanted Matthew to respond to her, which would mean he would be betraying his fiancé Lucy. Matthew did his best to remain silent and detached from Miss Shroud because he was betrothed to Lucy, and Lucy thought that meant he couldn’t love Lucy. Say what? So Lucy is an idiot as well as a liar.
This author has a lovely way with words and every book contains beautiful, heartfelt moments but her male characters are beta prudes, her female characters are frustrating and unlikeable, everyone makes erroneous assumptions instead of having a conversation, and the same thoughts are cycled over and over. I’m out.
September 25, 2024
Leaving smiles behind…
Oh, this was so good. The bantering, the low-spice kissing near the end. The humor and drama. Very enjoyable, indeed.
Oh, this was so good. The bantering, the low-spice kissing near the end. The humor and drama. Very enjoyable, indeed.
August 9, 2024
Re-Read: August 2024
I originally read this last year as a novella and completely adored it. I was so happy when I found out it was going to be expanded into a full novel. Lucy and Matthew's relationship was so silly and sweet and definitely deserved more time than a novella.
This book is truly the author being horny on main. Don't get me wrong, this is still an extremely 'clean' romance with absolutely no smut and little more than innuendos and some kissing, but this is the only book by this author where sex is even alluded to, let alone alluded to multiple times. Plus the kissing scenes were longer than in the author's other books. This didn't increase or decrease my enjoyment of the book, but I thought it was funny and had to mention it. The top review on goodreads has even mentioned this (though in a much more negative sense) so clearly I'm not the only one that noticed.
This book is perfect for its genre. It's so silly and cute, the stakes are low, the characters are all likable, and it ends with a happily-ever-after. I really liked Lucy, the protagonist, potentially because she reminded me of the protagonist in another romance book that I love, Patience. They're both very independent and bend the rules of society to a degree, though Lucy is less oblivious and more conniving than Patience. I can see traditionally published romance readers finding this juvenile, but I find this to be the perfect light read that'll make me smile the whole way through. Fans of smutty, realistic, or hard-hitting romances won't enjoy this, but if you're looking for a cotton candy type of book, I'd recommend it.
Original Review
This was SO CUTE AND ADORABLE! I didn't realize when I started that this was novella length so I ended up reading it in one sitting. I think that's definitely the best way to read this since the story and relationship feels much more rushed than those in Esther Hatch's other books. However, that didn't bother me at all because of how cute the story was. Lucy annoyed me a bit at the beginning of the story. I think that's because, since this is a novella, we don't learn much about her for a while and miss a lot of her backstory.
Even though this isn't my favorite book from the author I'm giving it 5 stars because I had such a great time and this was exactly the type of book I wanted to read at the time. The author has announced that she's going to re-write this as a full-length book (!!!) and publish it soon. I think a lot of the issues with this book could be solved by things being longer and the story moving slower. I'm so excited to read it and spend more time with these characters.
I originally read this last year as a novella and completely adored it. I was so happy when I found out it was going to be expanded into a full novel. Lucy and Matthew's relationship was so silly and sweet and definitely deserved more time than a novella.
This book is truly the author being horny on main. Don't get me wrong, this is still an extremely 'clean' romance with absolutely no smut and little more than innuendos and some kissing, but this is the only book by this author where sex is even alluded to, let alone alluded to multiple times. Plus the kissing scenes were longer than in the author's other books. This didn't increase or decrease my enjoyment of the book, but I thought it was funny and had to mention it. The top review on goodreads has even mentioned this (though in a much more negative sense) so clearly I'm not the only one that noticed.
This book is perfect for its genre. It's so silly and cute, the stakes are low, the characters are all likable, and it ends with a happily-ever-after. I really liked Lucy, the protagonist, potentially because she reminded me of the protagonist in another romance book that I love, Patience. They're both very independent and bend the rules of society to a degree, though Lucy is less oblivious and more conniving than Patience. I can see traditionally published romance readers finding this juvenile, but I find this to be the perfect light read that'll make me smile the whole way through. Fans of smutty, realistic, or hard-hitting romances won't enjoy this, but if you're looking for a cotton candy type of book, I'd recommend it.
Original Review
This was SO CUTE AND ADORABLE! I didn't realize when I started that this was novella length so I ended up reading it in one sitting. I think that's definitely the best way to read this since the story and relationship feels much more rushed than those in Esther Hatch's other books. However, that didn't bother me at all because of how cute the story was. Lucy annoyed me a bit at the beginning of the story. I think that's because, since this is a novella, we don't learn much about her for a while and miss a lot of her backstory.
Even though this isn't my favorite book from the author I'm giving it 5 stars because I had such a great time and this was exactly the type of book I wanted to read at the time. The author has announced that she's going to re-write this as a full-length book (!!!) and publish it soon. I think a lot of the issues with this book could be solved by things being longer and the story moving slower. I'm so excited to read it and spend more time with these characters.
April 2, 2022
While the situation is completely impossible, Esther Hatch is such a great writer that I didn't even mind. This one had me smiling and laughing and enjoying all of it
April 5, 2022
Such a cute novella!
Manor, Baron for Sale is one of my very favorite books. This novella was also a fun Victorian RomCom.
Manor, Baron for Sale is one of my very favorite books. This novella was also a fun Victorian RomCom.
April 8, 2022
What a fun novella. I haven't read a mistaken identity trope in a while, and I enjoyed the humor in it. A few parts had me laughing out loud. I always enjoy Esther Hatch's writing.
February 17, 2023
short, cute, interesting.
I don't have much thoughts art this because it is just a hundred pages long but I think this was sweet and very funny
I don't have much thoughts art this because it is just a hundred pages long but I think this was sweet and very funny
April 29, 2024
Originally, There Goes the Groom was a novella that could only be downloaded on Prolific Works. The author just released it as a full length novel to buy. The novella version had 11 chapters and no epilogue. The new full length version has 24 chapters with an epilogue.
It's basically the same story but with added material and some stuff changed. There was stuff that I wanted in the original version like an epilogue that was added to this new full length version. I would recommend reading the authors Afterward at the end of the book bc she talks more about the decision to turn Matthew and Lucy's story into a full length book.
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Rating:4.5
Told in 3rd person dual pov
Clean read: just some kissing
Lucy Bateman (h)- 17 at the start of the story. There is a 3 year time jump. Lucy is 20 in present day.
Matthew Harrison(H)- no age given for Matthew. He is the future baron of Bridgewater.
There Goes the Groom is book 3 in A Romance of Rank series and can be read as a standalone. The novel is a Victorian rom com. I really liked the first book in the series, Manor for Sale, Baron Included, so I was looking forward to reading There Goes the Groom. I thought it was a delightful read. The whole runaway groom thing was funny. I thought Lucy and Matthew were sweet together.
Matthew Harrison (H)made a brief appearance as a side character in Manor for Sale, Baron Included(book 1 in A Romance of Rank series). He was the former fiancé of Sally Duncan (the h in that book). Sally and Matthew had a secret engagement that was very brief, but Sally called it off. That all happened off page before the events of Manor for Sale, Baron Included.
Unfortunately, Matthew’s family is on the brink of financial ruin. After Matthew’s unsuccessful courtship with Sally Duncan, his parents arrange a marriage for him to a young woman named Lucy Bateman (h). They are to marry in a week’s time. The two have never met. Naturally, Matthew is having cold feet about marrying a woman that he has never even seen. However, Matthew’s family is depending on him to save them from financial ruin. The Harrisons’ would gain the money they need and the Batemans' would rise in societies ranks.
Lucy Bateman’s step father gained his fortune by starting up a leather company. Lucy’s parents are determined to have at least one of their daughters marry into peerage. Lucy agreed to the arranged marriage so that her younger sister would be given more freedom when it comes time for her to marry. At this point, Lucy is only 17 years old.
When Lucy sees Matthew in a cemetery, she decides to play a trick on him to assess his character. She has her younger sister Helena (13) pretend to be her. Lucy hides behind an oak tree while Helena talks to Matthew. The scene was really entertaining and funny. Matthew is horrified that his soon to be bride looks like a child.
“He was willing to do almost anything to preserve the Bridgewater name, but he couldn’t marry a child.”
What else is a groom to do but run off? Needless to say, Lucy’s plan backfires.
Flash-forward three years, Matthew is still missing. Lucy is now 20. I was surprised to see Lucy living with Matthew’s family. Also, I was surprised Matthew’s parents were already spending Lucy’s dowry and she wasn’t even married yet! At least, her sister got to visit. I don't know how often she got to see Helena. Poor Lucy is miserable and stuck in this state of limbo not knowing if or when her fiancé will ever return.
I wish the time jump would have been less than 3 years. I would have preferred if it took place within a year. I don’t like long separations over something that could be resolved with a conversation. At the same time, I do think that is was good that Lucy was given a few more years before she married. Lucy was supposed to get married at 17.
One day, Lucy is in a milliners shop with her future mother-in-law. Lucy notices a man that looks familiar. It is Lucy’s missing fiancé! Lucy hatches another plan to get her runaway groom to come home. She wants to get a sense of her fiancé’s true character. Lucy creates an alias name, Miss Shroud. Lucy dresses in her plainest clothes and puts on a fake Scottish accent. Matthew is now a cart driver/delivery man. He goes by the fake name, Mr. Scarper. Lucy claims that her father is looking for a good delivery man, so she wants to shadow Mr. Scarper(Matthew) on the job for 3 weeks. The more time that Lucy and Matthew spend together, the closer they grow.
Lucy hired a lady's companion to stay with her for the 3 weeks that she plans to stay in the village. In the new full length version, the companion is named Mrs.Tucker. Mrs. Tucker ends up playing a role in helping Lucy win back her man. I really liked the addition of Mrs.Tucker. She became like a motherly figure to Lucy in the short time they spend together. Also, she is someone for Lucy to talk too and to ask advice. I would like an update on Mrs. Tucker. Mrs. Tucker said she wanted to start a soap making business bc she was tired of doing other people's laundry. I'd like to know if she did start up that business and if Lucy and Mrs. Tucker kept in touch.
I thought it was funny that Matthew’s boss said he was getting so much more business now that Mr. Scarper(Matthew in disguise) was working for him. Matthew was a young and handsome “eligible bachelor”, so a lot of his deliveries were to young ladies of marriageable age. He has been working in this village for the past 6 months. I thought it was funny when Lucy was jealous and annoyed.
“What was wrong with her? She didn’t even know if she liked Mr. Harrison, and here she was becoming jealous. Still, he was her fiancé.”
Matthew was a true gentleman that took his engagement seriously. He wasn't entertaining other women in those year that he was absent. He had every intended to return home, but he wanted to wait until his fiancé was/looked older. Matthew gets jealous too bc he thinks that Lucy has a picture of some guy in the locket she wears, but it's just a picture of her little sister.
I really loved the parts with the Garvis family. Mr. and Mrs. Garvis were a young couple with a 4 or 5 year old daughter named Mandy. Matthew would bring left over ribbon and scraps of fabric as gifts for little Mandy. Mandy loved making art projects out of the scraps. I thought it was really sweet that Matthew did that for the little girl. It really made her day. I'm glad that more was added with the Garvis family in the full length version of the book. I really liked the bond they formed with the family. I'm glad that Lucy and Matthew to plan to visit the village and keep in touch with the Garvis family.
I liked Lucy and Matthews first kiss better in the novella version. I felt it was sweeter and simpler. The author couldn't fit the kiss she wanted into the original version since it was a novella and she ran out of space. Also, I think I liked the reveal of the truth to Matthew better in the original version. In the new version, the reveal was a little dragged out and more dramatic. Again, the author couldn't fit everything she wanted in the original version.
I think the time away was good for Matthew. Matthew led a privileged life. During Matthew’s time away, he learned to enjoy a simpler way of life. It was a humbling experience for him. I think that he will be an even better baron because of it. The whole experience changed him for the better. Everything worked out in the end. This way the couple was able to spend more time together before they married.
“But I have loved getting to know you these past three weeks, and as long as you return now, I find it hard to regret what has happened. I never thought I would get the chance to marry the man I love, but because you left, I now can.”
I was happy to see some of Matthew and Lucy's wedding added to the full length version of the book. The old novella version ended before they returned home. It made me happy that the Garvis family got to attend the wedding. It didn't say if Mrs.Tucker was there?
There is an epilogue in the new version of the book. The epilogue takes place 6 weeks after Lucy and Matthews wedding. I do wish that there would have been a second epilogue that skipped ahead more bc I wanted to see them with some kids. I was just happy that some stuff I wanted in the original version was added to this new version.
I hope to see or hear a little more about Lucy and Matthew in future books in the series. I would really like for Helena to get a book. I was glad to get a some more scenes with Lucy's younger sister in the newer version. Helena is 16 at the end of the story. I look forward to reading more books in this series. The author said she has 5 books planned for this series. Matthew originally wasn't going to get a book, so I'm glad that he did. She said, she might make it 6 books. Fingers crossed that Helena gets a book.
A Romance of Rank series: Victorian rom coms
Manor for Sale Baron Included
The Earl's Hideaway, No Ladies Allowed
There Goes the Groom
It's basically the same story but with added material and some stuff changed. There was stuff that I wanted in the original version like an epilogue that was added to this new full length version. I would recommend reading the authors Afterward at the end of the book bc she talks more about the decision to turn Matthew and Lucy's story into a full length book.
Prolific Works novella download:(this is the old shorter version. the new version is a full length book available for purchase on Amazon and is in KU).
https://claims.prolificworks.com/free...
Here is a link to a bunch of other free clean romance reads on Prolific Works:
https://claims.prolificworks.com/gg/g...
Rating:4.5
Told in 3rd person dual pov
Clean read: just some kissing
Lucy Bateman (h)- 17 at the start of the story. There is a 3 year time jump. Lucy is 20 in present day.
Matthew Harrison(H)- no age given for Matthew. He is the future baron of Bridgewater.
There Goes the Groom is book 3 in A Romance of Rank series and can be read as a standalone. The novel is a Victorian rom com. I really liked the first book in the series, Manor for Sale, Baron Included, so I was looking forward to reading There Goes the Groom. I thought it was a delightful read. The whole runaway groom thing was funny. I thought Lucy and Matthew were sweet together.
Matthew Harrison (H)made a brief appearance as a side character in Manor for Sale, Baron Included(book 1 in A Romance of Rank series). He was the former fiancé of Sally Duncan (the h in that book). Sally and Matthew had a secret engagement that was very brief, but Sally called it off. That all happened off page before the events of Manor for Sale, Baron Included.
Unfortunately, Matthew’s family is on the brink of financial ruin. After Matthew’s unsuccessful courtship with Sally Duncan, his parents arrange a marriage for him to a young woman named Lucy Bateman (h). They are to marry in a week’s time. The two have never met. Naturally, Matthew is having cold feet about marrying a woman that he has never even seen. However, Matthew’s family is depending on him to save them from financial ruin. The Harrisons’ would gain the money they need and the Batemans' would rise in societies ranks.
Lucy Bateman’s step father gained his fortune by starting up a leather company. Lucy’s parents are determined to have at least one of their daughters marry into peerage. Lucy agreed to the arranged marriage so that her younger sister would be given more freedom when it comes time for her to marry. At this point, Lucy is only 17 years old.
When Lucy sees Matthew in a cemetery, she decides to play a trick on him to assess his character. She has her younger sister Helena (13) pretend to be her. Lucy hides behind an oak tree while Helena talks to Matthew. The scene was really entertaining and funny. Matthew is horrified that his soon to be bride looks like a child.
“He was willing to do almost anything to preserve the Bridgewater name, but he couldn’t marry a child.”
What else is a groom to do but run off? Needless to say, Lucy’s plan backfires.
Flash-forward three years, Matthew is still missing. Lucy is now 20. I was surprised to see Lucy living with Matthew’s family. Also, I was surprised Matthew’s parents were already spending Lucy’s dowry and she wasn’t even married yet! At least, her sister got to visit. I don't know how often she got to see Helena. Poor Lucy is miserable and stuck in this state of limbo not knowing if or when her fiancé will ever return.
I wish the time jump would have been less than 3 years. I would have preferred if it took place within a year. I don’t like long separations over something that could be resolved with a conversation. At the same time, I do think that is was good that Lucy was given a few more years before she married. Lucy was supposed to get married at 17.
One day, Lucy is in a milliners shop with her future mother-in-law. Lucy notices a man that looks familiar. It is Lucy’s missing fiancé! Lucy hatches another plan to get her runaway groom to come home. She wants to get a sense of her fiancé’s true character. Lucy creates an alias name, Miss Shroud. Lucy dresses in her plainest clothes and puts on a fake Scottish accent. Matthew is now a cart driver/delivery man. He goes by the fake name, Mr. Scarper. Lucy claims that her father is looking for a good delivery man, so she wants to shadow Mr. Scarper(Matthew) on the job for 3 weeks. The more time that Lucy and Matthew spend together, the closer they grow.
Lucy hired a lady's companion to stay with her for the 3 weeks that she plans to stay in the village. In the new full length version, the companion is named Mrs.Tucker. Mrs. Tucker ends up playing a role in helping Lucy win back her man. I really liked the addition of Mrs.Tucker. She became like a motherly figure to Lucy in the short time they spend together. Also, she is someone for Lucy to talk too and to ask advice. I would like an update on Mrs. Tucker. Mrs. Tucker said she wanted to start a soap making business bc she was tired of doing other people's laundry. I'd like to know if she did start up that business and if Lucy and Mrs. Tucker kept in touch.
I thought it was funny that Matthew’s boss said he was getting so much more business now that Mr. Scarper(Matthew in disguise) was working for him. Matthew was a young and handsome “eligible bachelor”, so a lot of his deliveries were to young ladies of marriageable age. He has been working in this village for the past 6 months. I thought it was funny when Lucy was jealous and annoyed.
“What was wrong with her? She didn’t even know if she liked Mr. Harrison, and here she was becoming jealous. Still, he was her fiancé.”
Matthew was a true gentleman that took his engagement seriously. He wasn't entertaining other women in those year that he was absent. He had every intended to return home, but he wanted to wait until his fiancé was/looked older. Matthew gets jealous too bc he thinks that Lucy has a picture of some guy in the locket she wears, but it's just a picture of her little sister.
I really loved the parts with the Garvis family. Mr. and Mrs. Garvis were a young couple with a 4 or 5 year old daughter named Mandy. Matthew would bring left over ribbon and scraps of fabric as gifts for little Mandy. Mandy loved making art projects out of the scraps. I thought it was really sweet that Matthew did that for the little girl. It really made her day. I'm glad that more was added with the Garvis family in the full length version of the book. I really liked the bond they formed with the family. I'm glad that Lucy and Matthew to plan to visit the village and keep in touch with the Garvis family.
I liked Lucy and Matthews first kiss better in the novella version. I felt it was sweeter and simpler. The author couldn't fit the kiss she wanted into the original version since it was a novella and she ran out of space. Also, I think I liked the reveal of the truth to Matthew better in the original version. In the new version, the reveal was a little dragged out and more dramatic. Again, the author couldn't fit everything she wanted in the original version.
I think the time away was good for Matthew. Matthew led a privileged life. During Matthew’s time away, he learned to enjoy a simpler way of life. It was a humbling experience for him. I think that he will be an even better baron because of it. The whole experience changed him for the better. Everything worked out in the end. This way the couple was able to spend more time together before they married.
“But I have loved getting to know you these past three weeks, and as long as you return now, I find it hard to regret what has happened. I never thought I would get the chance to marry the man I love, but because you left, I now can.”
I was happy to see some of Matthew and Lucy's wedding added to the full length version of the book. The old novella version ended before they returned home. It made me happy that the Garvis family got to attend the wedding. It didn't say if Mrs.Tucker was there?
There is an epilogue in the new version of the book. The epilogue takes place 6 weeks after Lucy and Matthews wedding. I do wish that there would have been a second epilogue that skipped ahead more bc I wanted to see them with some kids. I was just happy that some stuff I wanted in the original version was added to this new version.
I hope to see or hear a little more about Lucy and Matthew in future books in the series. I would really like for Helena to get a book. I was glad to get a some more scenes with Lucy's younger sister in the newer version. Helena is 16 at the end of the story. I look forward to reading more books in this series. The author said she has 5 books planned for this series. Matthew originally wasn't going to get a book, so I'm glad that he did. She said, she might make it 6 books. Fingers crossed that Helena gets a book.
A Romance of Rank series: Victorian rom coms
Manor for Sale Baron Included
The Earl's Hideaway, No Ladies Allowed
There Goes the Groom
April 13, 2024
10/5 stars!!
Esther Hatch is a completely fantastic author and this book is proof that she is so amazing! She is able to write books that are simply beautiful, memorable, and lovable. She can write the kind of stories that will make you laugh and chuckle, but also carry great themes and help you really think about things.
You are sucked in from the very first page and you’ll probably stay up WAY too late to read “just one more chapter.” This story is addictive, hilarious, heartwarming, and absolutely charming.
This book was so fun to read and the story was an interesting new take on a regency romance. I can’t express enough my love for the fact that this is a plot that I’ve never seen before in a regency romance. Yes it has the arranged marriage and hidden/secret identity, but it’s done in such a great and new way that makes the story interesting. And the best part? There wasn’t a moment of frustration at the characters for lack of communication. This is simply an incredible story that you can’t help but love.
Matthew and Lucy are two great main characters and you can’t help but love them and the journey they go on throughout the book. Matthew is swoony as heck and adorably trying his hardest with what life throws at him. Lucy is headstrong, brilliant, and funny, I loved how she didn’t give up. Put these two together and you’ve got combustible chemistry, delicious tension, and the most romantic horse stall scene you’ll EVER read in a book.
Now can we please have Helena’s story??
There Goes the Groom is the perfect book for the reader looking for a wonderful, lighthearted and different regency romance.
Esther Hatch is a completely fantastic author and this book is proof that she is so amazing! She is able to write books that are simply beautiful, memorable, and lovable. She can write the kind of stories that will make you laugh and chuckle, but also carry great themes and help you really think about things.
You are sucked in from the very first page and you’ll probably stay up WAY too late to read “just one more chapter.” This story is addictive, hilarious, heartwarming, and absolutely charming.
This book was so fun to read and the story was an interesting new take on a regency romance. I can’t express enough my love for the fact that this is a plot that I’ve never seen before in a regency romance. Yes it has the arranged marriage and hidden/secret identity, but it’s done in such a great and new way that makes the story interesting. And the best part? There wasn’t a moment of frustration at the characters for lack of communication. This is simply an incredible story that you can’t help but love.
Matthew and Lucy are two great main characters and you can’t help but love them and the journey they go on throughout the book. Matthew is swoony as heck and adorably trying his hardest with what life throws at him. Lucy is headstrong, brilliant, and funny, I loved how she didn’t give up. Put these two together and you’ve got combustible chemistry, delicious tension, and the most romantic horse stall scene you’ll EVER read in a book.
Now can we please have Helena’s story??
There Goes the Groom is the perfect book for the reader looking for a wonderful, lighthearted and different regency romance.
April 29, 2022
Such a fun and sweet book! I love how Esther started this book and the prank Lucy plays on her fiancé she hadn’t met yet. 🥴😅 The meeting could’ve gone better and Matthew is running for the hills.
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3 years later Lucy is still waiting for her fiancé to return and fake helps her out. She thinks she spots him but she barely saw him 3 years ago. She goes to investigate and uses a fake identity.
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I love Esther’s and therefore Lucy’s humor and internal thoughts like all the single women wanting deliveries. 😂😂
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It was a fun original plot that kept me interested and of course super sweet and swoony! Esther creates real relatable heroines that you love and cheer for and laugh with through some of the more embarrassing moments.
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And it seems like Esther will use animals to add in humor? I’m totally there for it! Now each book I’ll wonder what animal is going to be featured. This can be read as a stand alone but the Romance Of Rank book 1, Manor For Sale, Baron Included, is mentioned a few times and could be spoilery if read out of order but not a deal breaker.
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3 years later Lucy is still waiting for her fiancé to return and fake helps her out. She thinks she spots him but she barely saw him 3 years ago. She goes to investigate and uses a fake identity.
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I love Esther’s and therefore Lucy’s humor and internal thoughts like all the single women wanting deliveries. 😂😂
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It was a fun original plot that kept me interested and of course super sweet and swoony! Esther creates real relatable heroines that you love and cheer for and laugh with through some of the more embarrassing moments.
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And it seems like Esther will use animals to add in humor? I’m totally there for it! Now each book I’ll wonder what animal is going to be featured. This can be read as a stand alone but the Romance Of Rank book 1, Manor For Sale, Baron Included, is mentioned a few times and could be spoilery if read out of order but not a deal breaker.
June 26, 2024
This story was adorable! A small prank leads to a misunderstanding and a runaway groom. Three years later Lucy is still waiting for her fiancé to return to his family. When she recognizes him working as a delivery man she hatches a plot to observe him, get to know him, and decide if she wants to get him to the altar or run away herself.
This story was hilarious! From chasing geese to Lucy’s forward ways, I loved every moment.
This story was hilarious! From chasing geese to Lucy’s forward ways, I loved every moment.
April 16, 2024
If you enjoy swoon romance with plenty of humor, Esther Hatch’s books are for you. There Goes the Groom is a fun, quick read that delightfully pushes the boundaries of Victorian romance. With secret identities, animal “sidekicks,” and plenty of swoon, you don’t want to miss this one. I’ll read anything Esther writes! 4/5 stars
I received a complimentary copy of this book. Opinions expressed in this review are completely my own.
I received a complimentary copy of this book. Opinions expressed in this review are completely my own.
April 10, 2024
Remember the sweet and swoony romance novellas? How awesome they were? Remember one about an heir to a baron and a woman with a big dowry and a pranking spirit?
well, do I have news for you!
The lovely and talented Esther Hatch rereleased it as a full length novel!! If you like hidden identities, villages, quiet men, Scottish accents, geese and so much more, read this book!
well, do I have news for you!
The lovely and talented Esther Hatch rereleased it as a full length novel!! If you like hidden identities, villages, quiet men, Scottish accents, geese and so much more, read this book!
April 27, 2024
What a fun story! I loved the other Romance of Rank books and was so excited for the rerelease of this book! This was originally a novella, but now is a full story.
Lucy was so funny! She was tired of waiting for her long-lost groom. I loved watching her trying to figure out Matthew and her secret identity. She was genuine and relatable. It was hilarious to hear her POV, especially as she watched the interactions of the village with Matthew. Her own interactions with the town was also fun. With her disguise and character, as well as her hidden mission made for quite a few escapades! I loved her care for her family and how she looked after her little sister. As the oldest sister myself, I definitely related to that!
Matthew was a sweetheart! He had made a few rash decisions and was a bit stuck. He had distanced himself from his arranged marriage and was now facing a new problem. He had no idea what to do with Lucy, though he didn't know it was her. I appreciated his earnestness. He tried to do the honorable thing, even if he sometimes made it difficult for himself.
There were so many other fun characters in this! I loved the Garvises and their relationship. Mrs. Tucker was also very funny! The story felt well-paced and I enjoyed the progression of Matthew and Lucy's relationship. They had some hurdles to cross, but nothing felt forced. This was a lovely historical romcom with only kissing. It is part of a series, but can be read as a standalone.
I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book which I received from the author. All views expressed are only my honest opinion, I was not required to write a positive review.
Merged review:
What a fun story! I loved the other Romance of Rank books and was so excited for the rerelease of this book! This was originally a novella, but now is a full story.
Lucy was so funny! She was tired of waiting for her long-lost groom. I loved watching her trying to figure out Matthew and her secret identity. She was genuine and relatable. It was hilarious to hear her POV, especially as she watched the interactions of the village with Matthew. Her own interactions with the town was also fun. With her disguise and character, as well as her hidden mission made for quite a few escapades! I loved her care for her family and how she looked after her little sister. As the oldest sister myself, I definitely related to that!
Matthew was a sweetheart! He had made a few rash decisions and was a bit stuck. He had distanced himself from his arranged marriage and was now facing a new problem. He had no idea what to do with Lucy, though he didn't know it was her. I appreciated his earnestness. He tried to do the honorable thing, even if he sometimes made it difficult for himself.
There were so many other fun characters in this! I loved the Garvises and their relationship. Mrs. Tucker was also very funny! The story felt well-paced and I enjoyed the progression of Matthew and Lucy's relationship. They had some hurdles to cross, but nothing felt forced. This was a lovely historical romcom with only kissing. It is part of a series, but can be read as a standalone.
I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book which I received from the author. All views expressed are only my honest opinion, I was not required to write a positive review.
Lucy was so funny! She was tired of waiting for her long-lost groom. I loved watching her trying to figure out Matthew and her secret identity. She was genuine and relatable. It was hilarious to hear her POV, especially as she watched the interactions of the village with Matthew. Her own interactions with the town was also fun. With her disguise and character, as well as her hidden mission made for quite a few escapades! I loved her care for her family and how she looked after her little sister. As the oldest sister myself, I definitely related to that!
Matthew was a sweetheart! He had made a few rash decisions and was a bit stuck. He had distanced himself from his arranged marriage and was now facing a new problem. He had no idea what to do with Lucy, though he didn't know it was her. I appreciated his earnestness. He tried to do the honorable thing, even if he sometimes made it difficult for himself.
There were so many other fun characters in this! I loved the Garvises and their relationship. Mrs. Tucker was also very funny! The story felt well-paced and I enjoyed the progression of Matthew and Lucy's relationship. They had some hurdles to cross, but nothing felt forced. This was a lovely historical romcom with only kissing. It is part of a series, but can be read as a standalone.
I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book which I received from the author. All views expressed are only my honest opinion, I was not required to write a positive review.
Merged review:
What a fun story! I loved the other Romance of Rank books and was so excited for the rerelease of this book! This was originally a novella, but now is a full story.
Lucy was so funny! She was tired of waiting for her long-lost groom. I loved watching her trying to figure out Matthew and her secret identity. She was genuine and relatable. It was hilarious to hear her POV, especially as she watched the interactions of the village with Matthew. Her own interactions with the town was also fun. With her disguise and character, as well as her hidden mission made for quite a few escapades! I loved her care for her family and how she looked after her little sister. As the oldest sister myself, I definitely related to that!
Matthew was a sweetheart! He had made a few rash decisions and was a bit stuck. He had distanced himself from his arranged marriage and was now facing a new problem. He had no idea what to do with Lucy, though he didn't know it was her. I appreciated his earnestness. He tried to do the honorable thing, even if he sometimes made it difficult for himself.
There were so many other fun characters in this! I loved the Garvises and their relationship. Mrs. Tucker was also very funny! The story felt well-paced and I enjoyed the progression of Matthew and Lucy's relationship. They had some hurdles to cross, but nothing felt forced. This was a lovely historical romcom with only kissing. It is part of a series, but can be read as a standalone.
I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book which I received from the author. All views expressed are only my honest opinion, I was not required to write a positive review.
July 6, 2025
Three years ago, Lucy was abandoned by her fiance. OK, it was an arranged marriage, he had never met her, and he thought he was fleeing a marriage to a thirteen-year-old girl (long story and one that was Lucy's fault); but nonetheless, Lucy has been abandoned with her mother-in-law for three years. This situation cannot stand.
So when Lucy stumbles upon her finance, Mathew, living a secret life as a common delivery man, she determines to a. get him back, b. make certain he's a good man, and c. convince him she's Scottish.
There might be a flaw--or two--in this plan.
One of the things that amazes me about Esther Hatch is how she (and also, in this case, Lucy) can concoct the most unbelievable plots and still make you fall head-over-heels for the characters until they feel so real that you care deeply about them.
Even if said characters are randomly falling out of delivery carts, talking to their horses, or dancing a court-worthy waltz on a village street.
Also that kiss--it was definitely worthy of the three pages.
So when Lucy stumbles upon her finance, Mathew, living a secret life as a common delivery man, she determines to a. get him back, b. make certain he's a good man, and c. convince him she's Scottish.
There might be a flaw--or two--in this plan.
One of the things that amazes me about Esther Hatch is how she (and also, in this case, Lucy) can concoct the most unbelievable plots and still make you fall head-over-heels for the characters until they feel so real that you care deeply about them.
Even if said characters are randomly falling out of delivery carts, talking to their horses, or dancing a court-worthy waltz on a village street.
Also that kiss--it was definitely worthy of the three pages.
April 15, 2024
This story is purely delightful! Esther Hatch manages to write a historical romcom that had me smiling, swooning, and laughing throughout.
Neither Matthew nor Lucy want an arranged marriage, yet that’s where they find themselves. A little trick planned by Lucy and her younger sister goes awry and sends Matthew running…for three years. Now another plan is in place and the antics are so hilarious, yet also mingled in with some very sweet moments, and I just couldn’t get enough.
My favorite things were the humor and the romantic tension. These characters are so vibrant and rich, glowing off the pages, and I was transfixed with the plot and exchanges. I love this author’s writing style. I always wish I could be witty and carry out my plots, but where mine stay in my head, Lucy’s come alive and I lived vicariously through her.
This is such a fun and entertaining story.
Content: mild romance
*I received a complimentary copy. All thoughts and feelings expressed are my own and were voluntarily given.*
Neither Matthew nor Lucy want an arranged marriage, yet that’s where they find themselves. A little trick planned by Lucy and her younger sister goes awry and sends Matthew running…for three years. Now another plan is in place and the antics are so hilarious, yet also mingled in with some very sweet moments, and I just couldn’t get enough.
My favorite things were the humor and the romantic tension. These characters are so vibrant and rich, glowing off the pages, and I was transfixed with the plot and exchanges. I love this author’s writing style. I always wish I could be witty and carry out my plots, but where mine stay in my head, Lucy’s come alive and I lived vicariously through her.
This is such a fun and entertaining story.
Content: mild romance
*I received a complimentary copy. All thoughts and feelings expressed are my own and were voluntarily given.*
April 5, 2025
I read this in its novella form and thought it was a quirky, off the rails good time. I don't know that I would have liked it as much as a full-length novel, though.
I got this novella as a newsletter freebie.
I got this novella as a newsletter freebie.
April 30, 2024
New, updated review: now a 2.75
This book was lengthened and edited into a full version novel. As a result, the original novella is gone (at least as far as I can tell) and supplanted with this newer version; my review (and it looks like hundreds of others) have been given a new review date (coincides with the new published date).
This is a problem for me because these are two different books. And as much as I LOVE this author, the novella was significantly better.
SPOILERS:
There are 2 primary differences between the books. First, the novella has ALL of the best parts of the humor and romance. Really, all the charm is there. The bulk of the space is taken up by the addition of a ladies' companion and a significant extension of the soapmaker's role. In the novella, it was funny. But in this novel, it's weird and awkward. Especially as Lucy's companion entertains him.
And I found Lucy's confiding in and attaching to her companion as mother figure weird too - they were total strangers who honestly did not spend much time together and would only spend 3 weeks total together.
But the biggest difference (and most objectionable) was the ending. In the original, Matthew shows serious integrity in the face of temptation, refusing to give in to Lucy's wiles, even though he is falling in love with her, because he is engaged (he believes to a different woman). I thought they were playing with fire in the original! In the new novel, it is a very long, drawn out scene, with lots of double talk, a giant misunderstanding, and an intense make out session WHILE he thinks he's still engaged to be married to someone else. So disappointing.
I really really loved the original novella, so much that I happily bought this new version too, thinking it wouldn't be substantially different. And it really wasn't except those two characters and the ending. The ending matters. I didn't need it to be dragged out for several pages and kicked up 25 notches in heat. I would rather have characters I can respect.
Here's hoping the publisher makes the original novella available for purchase again. Bigger/more is not always better.
Original review for the Novella on 5-30-2022:
4.5
I thought Lucy toyed with him a bit too long. And I had a lot of anxiety about what was building and what choices would ultimately be made. We are all of us human- best not to marinate in temptation. I was relieved with the ending, however unwise I felt it was.
As always with Ms. Hatch, a unique story, interesting characters with chemistry, plenty of humor. Loved it!
This book was lengthened and edited into a full version novel. As a result, the original novella is gone (at least as far as I can tell) and supplanted with this newer version; my review (and it looks like hundreds of others) have been given a new review date (coincides with the new published date).
This is a problem for me because these are two different books. And as much as I LOVE this author, the novella was significantly better.
SPOILERS:
There are 2 primary differences between the books. First, the novella has ALL of the best parts of the humor and romance. Really, all the charm is there. The bulk of the space is taken up by the addition of a ladies' companion and a significant extension of the soapmaker's role. In the novella, it was funny. But in this novel, it's weird and awkward. Especially as Lucy's companion entertains him.
And I found Lucy's confiding in and attaching to her companion as mother figure weird too - they were total strangers who honestly did not spend much time together and would only spend 3 weeks total together.
But the biggest difference (and most objectionable) was the ending. In the original, Matthew shows serious integrity in the face of temptation, refusing to give in to Lucy's wiles, even though he is falling in love with her, because he is engaged (he believes to a different woman). I thought they were playing with fire in the original! In the new novel, it is a very long, drawn out scene, with lots of double talk, a giant misunderstanding, and an intense make out session WHILE he thinks he's still engaged to be married to someone else. So disappointing.
I really really loved the original novella, so much that I happily bought this new version too, thinking it wouldn't be substantially different. And it really wasn't except those two characters and the ending. The ending matters. I didn't need it to be dragged out for several pages and kicked up 25 notches in heat. I would rather have characters I can respect.
Here's hoping the publisher makes the original novella available for purchase again. Bigger/more is not always better.
Original review for the Novella on 5-30-2022:
4.5
I thought Lucy toyed with him a bit too long. And I had a lot of anxiety about what was building and what choices would ultimately be made. We are all of us human- best not to marinate in temptation. I was relieved with the ending, however unwise I felt it was.
As always with Ms. Hatch, a unique story, interesting characters with chemistry, plenty of humor. Loved it!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 10, 2024
I loved this novella and seeing how Lucy had to go about winning back her promised betrothed after her prank backfired. I have to say that Lucy paid for her mistake by enduring outings with Matthew's mother in hopes that he would return soon.
The fictitious names that Lucy and Matthew created for themselves were genius! Lucy chose the name Ms. Shroud and Matthew, Mr. Scarper, Both names were indicative of how they felt about their situation. Having Lucy "observe" Mr. Scarper on his delivery routes to truly get to know the real Matthew was clever.
Esther Hatch writes some of the funniest physical comedy scenes I have ever read and the cart incident made me laugh as I could picture Lucy nearly falling out. I could just imagine her embarrassment and humiliation after such an episode.
Portraying Matthew's character and integrity as he had to resist the temptation of the enticement to kiss Ms. Shroud made me truly see the man he was. Lucy was able to witness firsthand that he was faithful to her even after all of these years. Being industrious and choosing to make his own living were other wonderful character qualities of Matthew that made me want to tell Lucy to confess all and admit who she was to him.
I enjoyed reading this clean and wholesome story and recommend it for readers of all ages. I hope there will be more stories like this to follow by Ms. Hatch.
04.10.23
I have read the full length novel that is being released this month and loved it! The humor, Lucy and Matthew's romance, and the townsfolk make this a story I enjoyed even more than the first time I read it.
The fictitious names that Lucy and Matthew created for themselves were genius! Lucy chose the name Ms. Shroud and Matthew, Mr. Scarper, Both names were indicative of how they felt about their situation. Having Lucy "observe" Mr. Scarper on his delivery routes to truly get to know the real Matthew was clever.
Esther Hatch writes some of the funniest physical comedy scenes I have ever read and the cart incident made me laugh as I could picture Lucy nearly falling out. I could just imagine her embarrassment and humiliation after such an episode.
Portraying Matthew's character and integrity as he had to resist the temptation of the enticement to kiss Ms. Shroud made me truly see the man he was. Lucy was able to witness firsthand that he was faithful to her even after all of these years. Being industrious and choosing to make his own living were other wonderful character qualities of Matthew that made me want to tell Lucy to confess all and admit who she was to him.
I enjoyed reading this clean and wholesome story and recommend it for readers of all ages. I hope there will be more stories like this to follow by Ms. Hatch.
04.10.23
I have read the full length novel that is being released this month and loved it! The humor, Lucy and Matthew's romance, and the townsfolk make this a story I enjoyed even more than the first time I read it.
April 16, 2024
I read this book last year when it was part of a promotion and absolutely loved it. And I couldn't wait to read it again! Oh my heavens it is soooo good! The humor and the sweet romance are off the charts amazing!
Esther Hatch has a fan for life in me! Seriously, her books are fantastic! This one and A Proper Scoundrel are tied for my absolute favorites of her books. I could easily reread them and not get bored.
Mix-ups, misunderstandings, a harmless prank gone awry, searching and longing, friendship and love, books, books and more books, family fiascos, a cart and donkey that you will love and appreciate, rainstorm, a determined young lady, a reticent gentleman, sparks and chemistry, and sooo much more! Be Still My Beating Heart!
I hope if you pick up a copy of this book, that you'll fall in love with Matthew and Lucy as much as I have. Even with all of the humor and witty dialogue, there are some serious moments that were just as wonderful. I love these two characters. Trust me when I say that you should drop everything and just read it.
Content: Clean. Some sweet kisses and nothing further.
I received a copy from the author. All thoughts and opinions in the review are my own.
Happy Reading!!!
Esther Hatch has a fan for life in me! Seriously, her books are fantastic! This one and A Proper Scoundrel are tied for my absolute favorites of her books. I could easily reread them and not get bored.
Mix-ups, misunderstandings, a harmless prank gone awry, searching and longing, friendship and love, books, books and more books, family fiascos, a cart and donkey that you will love and appreciate, rainstorm, a determined young lady, a reticent gentleman, sparks and chemistry, and sooo much more! Be Still My Beating Heart!
I hope if you pick up a copy of this book, that you'll fall in love with Matthew and Lucy as much as I have. Even with all of the humor and witty dialogue, there are some serious moments that were just as wonderful. I love these two characters. Trust me when I say that you should drop everything and just read it.
Content: Clean. Some sweet kisses and nothing further.
I received a copy from the author. All thoughts and opinions in the review are my own.
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June 7, 2024
“Her smile made him feel welcome, like he belonged. Like a hot pot of tea warming his fingers after being outside in the cold too long. How long had it been since anyone had made him feel that way?”
This book is adorable, funny, sweet and it was so much fun to read. Lucy and Matthew are such lovable characters and their journey to their happily ever after was a joy to read.
Matthew is a sweet and gentle hero and Lucy is hilarious, bubbly and fun. I loved the fun shenanigans, laugh out loud moments, the amazing side characters, the swoony scenes, the falling in love, the heart melting kisses, and that happily ever after that stole my heart.
Read for:
🤍Victorian romcom
🤍the prank
🤍Runaway groom
🤍determined bride to be
🤍the rain scene
🤍the dance
🤍arranged marriage
🤍Esther’s signature swoony kisses
🤍the laugh out loud scenes
🤍sweet and swoony romance
🤍amazing happily ever after
Esther‘s books always make me laugh, swoon, and they just make me so happy. This is an amazing addition to a wonderful series that I love!
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*this book was a novella but is now a full length novel.*
This book is adorable, funny, sweet and it was so much fun to read. Lucy and Matthew are such lovable characters and their journey to their happily ever after was a joy to read.
Matthew is a sweet and gentle hero and Lucy is hilarious, bubbly and fun. I loved the fun shenanigans, laugh out loud moments, the amazing side characters, the swoony scenes, the falling in love, the heart melting kisses, and that happily ever after that stole my heart.
Read for:
🤍Victorian romcom
🤍the prank
🤍Runaway groom
🤍determined bride to be
🤍the rain scene
🤍the dance
🤍arranged marriage
🤍Esther’s signature swoony kisses
🤍the laugh out loud scenes
🤍sweet and swoony romance
🤍amazing happily ever after
Esther‘s books always make me laugh, swoon, and they just make me so happy. This is an amazing addition to a wonderful series that I love!
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*this book was a novella but is now a full length novel.*
April 14, 2024
Update: I just finished this a second time as a full length novel and, oh my goodness, it was even better the second time around!! I loved all the added stuff, especially for kissing scenes 😉 the Epilogue was fantastic, and I found myself smiling as I finished the last bit. Definitely pick up this full length book!!
Esther’s books are always a breath of fresh air. I know I can read them easily, and that I will love them. This book was no exception! It was so fun, and just had me smiling the whole time. Lucy is a jokester at heart but her first prank drives her fiancé, whom she has never met, away and she is forced to keep her future mother in law happy by buying her things. I love that she discovered her fiancé and then found a way to get to know him and fall in love with him secretly. The kissing scene had me definitely swooning and I thoroughly enjoyed their HEA. ❤️
Esther’s books are always a breath of fresh air. I know I can read them easily, and that I will love them. This book was no exception! It was so fun, and just had me smiling the whole time. Lucy is a jokester at heart but her first prank drives her fiancé, whom she has never met, away and she is forced to keep her future mother in law happy by buying her things. I love that she discovered her fiancé and then found a way to get to know him and fall in love with him secretly. The kissing scene had me definitely swooning and I thoroughly enjoyed their HEA. ❤️
April 9, 2022
I usually am a big fan of Esther Hatch but this book didn't convince me. I didn't find it enjoyable : Lucy was often silly or plain annoying, Matthew is basically mute for the whole time, I didn't feel any chemistry between the characters and don't understand how they can be in love. And to top it of, I didn't feel like the story could have happened in the 19th century - I mean, a future baron running off from this estate to become a cart driver for three years!? And a well-bred lady accompanying him on the cart for three weeks? Without ruining her reputation? How is that even remotely possible? I know it's fiction, but it's taking it a tiny bit too far...
I appreciate the effort to mix both historical romance and rom com, but to me, it didn't work. I'm still looking forward to other historical romances from Esther Hatch, but without the rom com elements :)
2.5 stars
I appreciate the effort to mix both historical romance and rom com, but to me, it didn't work. I'm still looking forward to other historical romances from Esther Hatch, but without the rom com elements :)
2.5 stars
April 15, 2024
I cannot express how happy I was when I read this book! It was absolutely exactly what I was looking forward to and delivered in the best way! Esther Hatch is the master of witty banter in the Historical Romance genre and the fact that this story is a Rom Com as well just offered more opportunities for her craft to be highlighted. This book was sweet, well paced, and these characters easily charmed me. This highlights several fun tropes such as hidden identity, groom on the run, and even an arranged marriage! You absolutely know it’s going to capture your attention with the mashup of those tropes! This story was a breath of fresh air and I thoroughly enjoyed it! Can we please get Helena’s story next? Please and thank you!
September 4, 2024
What a fun lighthearted read. Lucy and Matthew are matched in an arranged marriage. At the first posting of the bands, Matthew is duped. Thinking he’s engaged to a very young lady, refusing to do that, he runs. I found this to be a very entertaining and charming short story. Is it a little far-fetched, maybe, is it a little silly, maybe, but it was just for entertainment, and I smiled and laughed and forgot about the worries of the world. This author can do that to me with her books. I love her sense of humor, her style of writing and she can write romance that is so swoony but clean and wholesome.
June 21, 2022
To save his family’s coffers, future baron Matthew agrees to an arranged marriage to someone he’s never met. When he meets Lucy, he’s shocked at how young she looks - so shocked that he decides to run away and come back when she’s older. If only he had stayed a little longer, he would’ve found out Lucy was playing a joke on him, and he actually met her younger sister.
I loved Matthew and Lucy’s story! I thought it was so fun and unique! I love the lengths Lucy went to in order to see if Matthew was a decent man. I can’t wait to read more in this series!
I loved Matthew and Lucy’s story! I thought it was so fun and unique! I love the lengths Lucy went to in order to see if Matthew was a decent man. I can’t wait to read more in this series!
October 17, 2022
Esther Hatch is the queen of a kissing scene. I have never been disappointed. This was a fun read and I giggled through it all watching the antics of Lucy and Matthew.
What would you do if your fiancé went missing? This is a great Runaway Bride remake. But this time it's the groom. All the scenes between the two MC on the cart, especially the mud, are great.
Esther does a great job making a true Rom Com set in the Victorian era.
What would you do if your fiancé went missing? This is a great Runaway Bride remake. But this time it's the groom. All the scenes between the two MC on the cart, especially the mud, are great.
Esther does a great job making a true Rom Com set in the Victorian era.
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