Losing focus.
Once again, this book is filled with good and bad. We have chapters filled with philosophical discussions about the nature of control and governance. With many philosophical rants about war and the nature of people. Unfortunately, the author seems to start off in One Direction and then forget about it and moving another direction. For example, in previous books, he talks about flying beetles and the research done on it and how they would be so helpful but then they disappear. Then there was the confusing nature about the litRPG mechanics. First it seems titles do nothing. But they’re given out all the time. Second the main character gains levels for doing one thing but when he does the same thing again, he doesn’t gain any. (Like in this book helping to organize the attack on the demon king he gains two levels. The second time he does it. He gains nothing.)
I found myself wanting to skip ahead so many times in this book it just drag on and on. Don’t get me wrong. The story is actually quite good. It’s just the author has stretched it out so much that I find myself wanting to knot off at many parts in the story.
One last note, the author needs to get an editor, there are many incorrectly spelled words. Plus, there are places where the wrong word is used. I see this when he’s using the name for a world and refers to the wrong world. (For example, Mountainworld does not have the three kingdoms in it.)