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The Ambassador's Daughter: A pageturning psychological thriller with twists you'll never see coming from the author of Red Barn!
Sam Baron writing as SJ Blake
Perfect for fans of Lisa Jewell, Shari Lapena, and My Dark Vanessa
Dani McKay has never been the same since her shocking abduction twelve years ago.
When she spots her kidnapper at her mother’s book signing in Berlin, Dani is determined to get answers.
But by going after him, she opens a Pandora’s Box of shocking revelations about her family and puts herself and her mother’s life in peril!
Soon after, Dani's father Charles McKay, British Ambassador to Germany, is found dead in her hotel room shortly after telling her the truth about the kidnapping. Dani's mother Elle is apprehended as a person of interest and flown back to Washington DC for questioning by the authorities.
Dani and her mother are both targeted by a powerful billionaire and his companion who will do anything to keep their secrets from coming out.
When Dani and Elle try to expose those secrets, the backlash is swift and violent.
With the help of a diverse group of loyal friends, and an idealistic US Senator, Dani takes on a Goliath.
The odds are stacked against her, but she’s determined to fight to the bitter end to expose the truth and ensure that justice is done, not just for her sake, but for other young women like herself.
About the author
SJ Blake is the pseudonym of a bestselling, internationally acclaimed author of over 100 books in the crime, thriller, mystery, romance and literary fiction genres. With The Ambassador's Wife, SJ Blake embarks on a series of standalone psychological thrillers.
Perfect for fans of Lisa Jewell, Shari Lapena, and My Dark Vanessa
Dani McKay has never been the same since her shocking abduction twelve years ago.
When she spots her kidnapper at her mother’s book signing in Berlin, Dani is determined to get answers.
But by going after him, she opens a Pandora’s Box of shocking revelations about her family and puts herself and her mother’s life in peril!
Soon after, Dani's father Charles McKay, British Ambassador to Germany, is found dead in her hotel room shortly after telling her the truth about the kidnapping. Dani's mother Elle is apprehended as a person of interest and flown back to Washington DC for questioning by the authorities.
Dani and her mother are both targeted by a powerful billionaire and his companion who will do anything to keep their secrets from coming out.
When Dani and Elle try to expose those secrets, the backlash is swift and violent.
With the help of a diverse group of loyal friends, and an idealistic US Senator, Dani takes on a Goliath.
The odds are stacked against her, but she’s determined to fight to the bitter end to expose the truth and ensure that justice is done, not just for her sake, but for other young women like herself.
About the author
SJ Blake is the pseudonym of a bestselling, internationally acclaimed author of over 100 books in the crime, thriller, mystery, romance and literary fiction genres. With The Ambassador's Wife, SJ Blake embarks on a series of standalone psychological thrillers.
314 pages, Kindle Edition
Published December 12, 2023
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December 26, 2024
The premise of this book is.. fine. I actually think in another person's hands this may have been a relatively interesting novel. However, for this particular novel I ended up rage reading this from how poorly written it is. About half of the way through I decided to look up some reviews and I could not BELIEVE I was reading the same book. The spelling, grammar and semantical errors are abundant in this story. Multiple times someone was referenced and given the wrong pronoun or even the wrong name!!
This ends up exacerbating a major issue I had with this book. The dialogue is ROUGH. Like distracting in so many cases. Overly simple expressions in thought and interactions with other characters is paired with unnecessarily complex words and archaic/strange phrases. The old adages of writing "as simply as necessary to clearly convey your meaning to your target audience" and "use language most people understand while allowing character voice" was very much not applied here. Technically complex words and phrases that are meant to make the characters sound educated make them sound pompous and ridiculous instead, ESPECIALLY paired with the ridiculous amount of Gen Z and Gen Alpha slang. The excessive amount made some side characters feel like caricatures instead of real people and the main character feel very two dimensional.
And that is so disappointing to learn, because the topics addressed in this story are unbelievably important and so true to real life. The way this story was handled with paragraphs upon paragraphs of an alleged "novelist success" and overly complicated implausible "covert" missions that even the greatest amount of plausible deniability can't begin to suspend the disbelief enough for any reader remotely educated in security procedures or US and British government. Instead of giving the trauma those affected by a horrible political system due recognition and empathy, traumatic backstories are overshadowed by a needless and confusing number of "twists" that not only blow massive narratives holes in everything written prior to the twists but do nothing to really further the plot of the story. Things just kind of happen in this book. The main character goes to residences of workplaces and homes and develops the story through a painful and awkwardly paced 275+ pages and the criminals either face no real justice or have their feelings hurt. All that work and emotion and boy can you not tell at ALL that the main character is 22, reading instead more like a moody 14-year-old than anything. And surely it must be because she is oh so clever and deep and has the luckiest time outsmarting cruel villainous empires… somehow, successful governors on capitol hill… somehow, and even evades homeland security in what was probably the most ridiculous, underbaked and not at all convenient escape plan possible. No matter what, the main character definitely reads as deeply traumatized.
Oh also a 29 year old get ALS. What in the world?? This book at the very most gets one star for being entertaining enough for me to want to pick it apart, but it took me three weeks to have the energy to keep coming back to it and throwing my hands up in confusion or eyerolling the dialogue every other page. I probably should have DNF'ed it at the 25% mark, but I just kept hoping a novel addressing such an important topic would get better as it went on and not satirize the government and its agents (ARC? Really?) or a very real and awful scandal that very obviously was a major influence for this book. That was never delivered and just isn't the reality, this story needs a lot of reworking, and I am having a hard time imagining another 6 or so novels coming in the near future won't be very much the same.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
This ends up exacerbating a major issue I had with this book. The dialogue is ROUGH. Like distracting in so many cases. Overly simple expressions in thought and interactions with other characters is paired with unnecessarily complex words and archaic/strange phrases. The old adages of writing "as simply as necessary to clearly convey your meaning to your target audience" and "use language most people understand while allowing character voice" was very much not applied here. Technically complex words and phrases that are meant to make the characters sound educated make them sound pompous and ridiculous instead, ESPECIALLY paired with the ridiculous amount of Gen Z and Gen Alpha slang. The excessive amount made some side characters feel like caricatures instead of real people and the main character feel very two dimensional.
And that is so disappointing to learn, because the topics addressed in this story are unbelievably important and so true to real life. The way this story was handled with paragraphs upon paragraphs of an alleged "novelist success" and overly complicated implausible "covert" missions that even the greatest amount of plausible deniability can't begin to suspend the disbelief enough for any reader remotely educated in security procedures or US and British government. Instead of giving the trauma those affected by a horrible political system due recognition and empathy, traumatic backstories are overshadowed by a needless and confusing number of "twists" that not only blow massive narratives holes in everything written prior to the twists but do nothing to really further the plot of the story. Things just kind of happen in this book. The main character goes to residences of workplaces and homes and develops the story through a painful and awkwardly paced 275+ pages and the criminals either face no real justice or have their feelings hurt. All that work and emotion and boy can you not tell at ALL that the main character is 22, reading instead more like a moody 14-year-old than anything. And surely it must be because she is oh so clever and deep and has the luckiest time outsmarting cruel villainous empires… somehow, successful governors on capitol hill… somehow, and even evades homeland security in what was probably the most ridiculous, underbaked and not at all convenient escape plan possible. No matter what, the main character definitely reads as deeply traumatized.
Oh also a 29 year old get ALS. What in the world?? This book at the very most gets one star for being entertaining enough for me to want to pick it apart, but it took me three weeks to have the energy to keep coming back to it and throwing my hands up in confusion or eyerolling the dialogue every other page. I probably should have DNF'ed it at the 25% mark, but I just kept hoping a novel addressing such an important topic would get better as it went on and not satirize the government and its agents (ARC? Really?) or a very real and awful scandal that very obviously was a major influence for this book. That was never delivered and just isn't the reality, this story needs a lot of reworking, and I am having a hard time imagining another 6 or so novels coming in the near future won't be very much the same.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
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March 2, 2026
‘The Ambassador’s Daughter’ was riveting. The pulsating plot involved a mother’s book signing, noticing a particular fellow, getting the crew together, receiving a dad’s late-night visit, recalling an unfortunate situation twelve years prior, conferring with the mom, a curve ball here and there, going to visit a prominent statesman, being gunned down, getting kidnapped, telling the tales, moving on, intrigue, espionage, coming up with a plan to catch the evil person(s) regarding the situation twelve years earlier, figuratively burning down the house, and meeting the family while having a sense of belonging. Moreover, Dani, the protagonist, had such a horrific story to tell, and tell she did. Additionally, I liked the author’s writing style: fascinating and engaging characters, a typical city setting, a captivating storyline that deviated to numerous curve balls, and vivid descriptions that created an upbeat tone. Overall, I liked the thrilling narrative.
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