Into the Fall is the fourth and final book in the ‘Whisper Ridge’ series. It stars Sheriff Neil Windham, and Connor, a former Navy SEAL. This is told in first person from Neil and Connor’s pov.
First, I’ll start with the cover. It has the same muted, monotone type colors as the other books in the series. I like it. I’m not sure which character the cover model is supposed to be, it could be either one.
Before I get deep into my quite lengthy review, I’m going to mention that I haven’t read any of the previous books in this series. I’m going to rate how well the author clarified the other characters in this one, who they were and what they did. Also, how easy this book was to understand if someone decided to jump in and read this book, also about the scenes, and of course the main characters.
This book is NOT a stand-alone. The plot immediately throws the reader into conflict with the two main characters, Connor, and Neil, and then introduces us to a bunch of other characters who I’m pretty sure appeared in the other books. There seemed to be two gay couples, a brother and sister, also a friend of Connor’s who was also his boss.
Neil and Connor battle each other constantly, and it was extremely disturbing. Since I didn’t read the other books, I’m guessing their antagonistic head butting started a while ago and is carried into this book. Connor was always out of line, provoking Neil under the pretense of liking him. Connor’s behavior was stalkerish and sexually harassing. If Neil was a woman, or even another male, it would be considered abusive. Connor even broke into Neil’s house at one point. If that’s not creepy, I don’t know what is. I don’t find a pushy, aggressive man like that attractive or desirable in the least.
This felt like it was two books in one. The first forty percent was chaotic, with too many characters behaving in TSTL actions dealing with the landslide, which I’ll talk about in a bit, Connor attempting to take over whatever investigation that was going on, and Neil thinking too much with his other head instead of arresting Connor and putting him in jail for a few days. The last sixty percent, after Connor and Neil had sex, was a totally different story. Geared towards their romance, mostly figuring out who the bones belonged to and what to do about Neil’s father. It was far slower paced than the first part. The first part felt like it was trying to tie up all the loose ends from the previous books. There were far too many subplots careening around. For instance:
1) The bones in the well.
2) The missing gun which had to do with the brother and sister and the cult.
3) The townsman that parked in spaces he shouldn’t. (I think he was irrelevant)
4) The deputy that was going to retire.
5) The deputy that might be quitting.
6) The nephew that Neil had to show the sheriff’s duties
7) Neil’s father who was slowly mentally deteriorating.
I’m sure there were a couple more, but that’s all I can recall right now. Too many issues so that some of them only got glossed over, which means they really weren’t needed. The people who were introduced weren’t clarified enough during the first forty percent. They were more defined during the second part which is too late in the story.
Now I want to talk/rant about the TSTL actions of the characters at the beginning of the book. This is what I disliked most about the story. There is a torrential rainstorm which causes a huge landslide, enough for the characters to feel the earth rumble under their feet. The landslide moves huge boulders. What do the four-five of them do? They rush outside in the pouring rain, in muddy soil that is still slipping and sucking at their boots, and decide that they can push the boulders in place by hand to stop the river/stream from moving and heading for the house. Seriously? I read this and I almost stopped reading. There are youtube videos of landslides with water and boulders raging down mountains, it wipes out villages, and these, can’t put it any other way, idiots, think they can move boulders with their bare-hands, which torrential rain and mud have ripped from the earth. It was like I was reading an alternate universe urban fantasy. Superman could have done it, even Spiderman. We’re talking about normal humans here, it isn’t possible. No one in their right mind would do it. If anything, they’d have to bring in bulldozers to move the heavy, saturated mud and boulders. Honestly, it was one of the most impossible, insane scenes I’ve ever read. The characters could just have easily gone out the next day after the storm and looked. When I read contemporary fiction, I expect some semblance of reality. This wasn’t it.
On to Neil and Connor. Connor as I mentioned, is an arrogant creep. I didn’t like him, and nothing he did redeemed himself. I feel like he was like an abuser, taking advantage of Neil when he was vulnerable with all that was weighing Neil down concerning his father and the dead body. It was manipulative the way Connor moved on Neil. As for Neil, he had every right to lock Connor up, but didn’t. Neil could’ve cited Connor on any law and locked him away for a few days. Especially when he meddled with the body and the gun. Youtube shows examples of small-town cops and sheriffs using the law to arrest people. They don’t like anyone meddling with ‘their’ town. Neil wasn’t doing his job. Other than being too hung up on Connor, Neil was okay. Connor and Neil’s voices were close to sounding the same. Connor’s rude and snarky remarks were probably one of the only ways to tell who was talking. Connor’s voice completely changed during the second part once him and Neil were together.
I’ve been questioning the ratings that appear for books on Goodreads for a while now. I often wonder if people give certain authors high ratings because they are members of the author’s groups, or are friends, or if they met them at a convention and so feel loyalty. Then the ratings aren’t really based on the actual writing quality and aren’t helpful when pondering about whether to read or purchase a book. I’ve read many of this author’s books and enjoyed some and not others. I subscribe to her newsletter and her newsletter stories are enjoyable. This story doesn’t match the quality of many of her other stories. It feels like this was a rush job, especially the first half, to get loose ends tied up and finished for the next series that spins off this one, which is about the members of Connor’s ex SEAL team.
There were too many things that annoyed me, mainly the characters and the unrealistic, ‘let’s push boulders in the pouring rain with our bare hands’ scene, also that Connor was a stalking creeper, and the distinct feeling this was two books in one. I do have the first book in this series which I’ll go back and read; it’ll explain some of the characters. Overall, I didn’t enjoy Into the Fall so I’ll give it, 2 Stars, which I realize is a vastly different rating than most of the other readers. But maybe someone will find it useful.
I received an ARC from the author and am giving my honest and unbiased opinion.