In the free sample we learn that Elizabeth has been enjoying a flirtation with Wickham and Jane is somewhat more cynical about their chances of finding true love (it is not entirely clear what happened to make her so but she refers to expectations created by novels and is aware that most of the officers can't afford to marry ). They go on a walk and Darcy and Bingley ride past blindly, not noticing that they threw mud about and dirtied the ladies up. Bingley apologizes, Darcy does not. Jane is smitten with Bingley, Elizabeth thinks Darcy has a magnetic pull but he is rude. Bingley promises to call at Longbourn so they can be properly introduced. But a week later there's been no sign of him, and Jane still moons after him. We are told she has been despondent because of his absence, which I think is a bit insane considering Bingley only said six sentences to her (Jane said four). Jane and Elizabeth go on another walk hoping to see them accidentally on purpose, and how about it, they meet Bingley and Darcy on horseback again. This time the gentlemen know the women's names somehow but refuse to tell them theirs. Jane admits that she's been watching the lane waiting for them (really Jane, have some self respect! they did not need to know that.) Bingley makes some excuses why he didn't call sooner but the reader does not know why he didn't come. It made me think he's not trustworthy but I could be wrong. Darcy thinks that he is not free to pursue a woman at the moment and should act aloof to avoid giving anyone the wrong idea. From the free sample it is not clear why although he says he's not engaged to anyone. From the blurb it seems like the family expectation that he should marry his cousin is behind this. But soon enough he seems to suggest he'd be amenable to a meaningless flirtation and Elizabeth is tempted. Earlier Elizabeth worried about Lydia's impropriety yet in the space of three chapters she's had meaningless flirtations with two gentlemen, one that is too poor to take seriously and another that she hasn't been introduced to and doesn't even like all that much and who may or may not be committed to someone else.
So everyone appears a bit out of character although they may have their reasons. Except Bingley. He's in character all right: reportedly smitten with Jane at first sight yet he goes MIA after raising her expectations. Ugh, and Jane, for all her alleged cynicism about love, has the sads about him even though they've talked for, like sixty seconds at the most. Bingley smiled and spoke forty words altogether, she doesn't even know his name, and he didn't come despite promising to. Girl, that's just pathetic. I get it, you don't meet many gentlemen but what is there to like about this Bingley? If there's a broken promise in the first forty words that you speak can anything else you say be trusted? If he ghosts you for a week and then you only meet because you seek him out, maybe he's not that into you.
I don't think Jane needs true love, I think she needs an intervention.
This is the end of the free sample and where I DNF'ed it. Not to say it was badly written or anything like that, it just didn't grab me at this time, and I didn't feel like I have to know how this story ends. So far I didn't like any one of these four characters we read about.