Nothing has ever felt like home. The thought of settling down with her boyfriend Andrew is terrifying. Making the leap to move across the country to be with him, Asha hopes this will change her mind. Andrew is perfect, after all. Handsome, sweet, hardworking, and head-over-heels in love with her. Only when they settle into the new house, it seems there is someone else who has set eyes on Asha.
Jacob.
After making a promise he is unwilling to break, Jacob is at the end of his rope. If he doesn’t find her this time, he’s not sure he can keep going. After a century long search, will he finally catch a break and find the love of his life?
Nothing can stand in the way of true love. Will Jacob be able to make Asha remember who she is before it’s too late?
Broken Promises is a MF novel. It is book one in A Timeless trilogy.
Broken Promises by Quell T. Fox is a paranormal romance and the first in a trilogy. It is written in first person, which is something that I don’t usually enjoy but after reading the book I realized that this story couldn’t have been told any other way. There are flashback/memory vignettes that are more impactful with the first-person point of view. The writing flows easily and once I’d started the book, I didn’t want to put it down until I’d finished it. It took me a day to read. With that said, I did stumble across several mistakes that could have been caught with another pass by a proofreader or by having Microsoft Word read the book aloud, but the mistakes weren’t jarring or frequent enough to set the book aside.
Broken Promises deals with love and time, favorite themes of mine. Asha’s character is introduced as a serial leaver. She leaves relationships and people as easily as she abandons places. She has always felt like she’s searching for something—but she doesn’t know what, where, or who that may be. This is a classic the heroine doesn’t know who or what she is book. Andrew is Asha’s drool-worthy boyfriend at the beginning of the book. She knows she’ll eventually leave despite moving to Rhode Island with him, the hot sex, and his sweet nature. She just isn’t normal and she knows it.
After arriving at Andrew’s family home, unusual things immediately start to occur. Eventually, the reader is clued in that much of the phenomenon is Jacob trying to find her. This book would have fallen into the love triangle troupe except that both Asha and the reader are already aware that she’s going to leave Andrew regardless of the unusual future Jacob is offering.
Be prepared to dwell over Quell’s explanation of what immortalites are and how they come to be. It can get a bit confusing but if you absorb that bit of information then you’ll probably want to read the rest of the series once book two and three are released. Also keep in mind that this a trilogy. Being a romance, the reader is going to get a happy-ish ending, choices will be made but Asha’s story-arc will not be wrapped-up in a tight bow and that might leave some readers unsatisfied.
Wow. Asha has lived her life always wanting excitement and new things. She's a bit selfish but considering she's an only child born to older parents, I can understand it lol. Seeing how she handles surprises, things that aren't quite normal, was entertaining. I can't wait to see how things progress between her and her old best friend Liza, seeing as how they don't seem to be off to the best start this time around. And of course, I can't wait to see what happens with her relationship with Jacob or what memories she gets back, or with her origins. Thanks for another entertaining read!