As the mother of three boys, I was naturally drawn to this book when it was first published. Two of my boys are school-aged, and we have struggled with getting their creative ideas and distinctive voices down on paper since kindergarten. In fact, so convinced was I that Fletcher's book would help unlock the troubles for not only my own sons, but for the boys who inhabit half of my desks, that I requested that this particular title be purchased by our school for our curriculum library (three copies were added in the end). Boy Writers: Reclaiming Their Voices did not disappoint.
Each chapter is full of both research-based theory as well as classroom observations from master teachers such as Franki Sibberson, Aimee Buckner, Linda Rief, and even Fletcher himself. Fletcher, brother to five and father to four, sheds authenticity to the subject matter. But Boy Writers is also infused with practical ideas for teachers to easily implement in the classroom. These helpful tips will surely aid both teachers as well as their male students along the jagged edge of writing workshop in a more clearly defined manner. The student samples beginning and ending each chapter help support Fletcher's affirmations.
I saw not only myself as a mother, but as a teacher throughout Fletcher's easy-to-read book. He is right in asserting that teachers simply don't "get" boy minds. They simply are a different breed. My oldest son is a perfect example. His humor is often crude, peppered with sarcasm and contains a high percentage of bodily function references. He is a typical boy writer who loves to write, has his own journal at home where he squirrels away comics and drawings, and feels disengaged with the writing process when he enters through the school doors. The physical action of writing can at times be tedious for him, since he is a leftie and a perfectionist. The amount of time it takes to get one simple paragraph from him can be alarming. But when he is given free choice and a laptop, his creativity is unlimited.
This is precisely what Fletcher is sharing with teachers. We may not understand the boy psyche, but we must allow them the freedom of expressing themselves in genres, topics and word choice with tools that they are most comfortable using (be it cartoons, doodles or a computer). Because teachers are predominantly female in the elementary and even middle school settings, we tend to reinforce girl writers more so than boys. The girls write with heart, they tend to confer easier (both in conferences as well as in classroom discussions), and they write according to the prompt. But is this appropriate for a boy's mind? Fletcher's book will surely keep me returning to his ideas time and time again, which will necessitate me purchasing yet another book for my professional library.
*book owned by my school professional library
Gems:
-Revision is more than a strategy used in the writing process; it's also a metaphor for personal and professional growth. There comes a time when every reflective practitioner needs to step back, take an honest look at what is and is not working, and revise his or her teaching accordingly. Cultured pearls start when a bit of grit gets inserted into the oyster; I'm happy to be that grit. (6)
-"We need to encourage our students to bring their obsessions into the classroom," Donald Graves has argued. He said that more than allowing topic choice we need to encourage it by showing kids how to "read the world" so they can select workable topics and write well about them. (42)
-"Often boys write about useless violence (many times against women," Isoke says. "This I stop. I call these sotries 'kick-um-in-the-head stories,' and I explain to the students that there is enough violence in the world and we are going to be the kind of people who push away from the violence even in our writing." (55)
-One teacher I know made a distinction between the classroom, the playground, and the street. "When you write you can certainly use the kind of language you'd use in the classroom," she said. "And I don't mind if you use the language you'd use on the playground. But some of the stuff we hear on the street-I think we can live without that." (56)
-When boys incorporate violence in their writing some teachers consider it a form of acting out or misbehaving...But I believe that violent writing is actually important to their development. Those tales allow kids to get in touch with the terror of being a child. In a similar way, violent writing allows boys to understand and express the basic male narrative: they are young men growing toward the age when many men around the world must go to war. Even if they don't become soldiers they will become heads of households. They will walk in their father's shoes. They must take their places in a dangerous world. (57)
-Penmanship problems hamper boys' achievement in writing. But the problem is deeper than taht. Issus of penmanship also hurt the degree to which boys get nurtured as writers. It doesn't merely affect how we formally evaluate and grade but also impacts a host of other intangibles: the emotional tenor of how we respond; the level of warmth in our voices; and the myriad subtle, nonverbal signals kids pick up during teacher-student interactions. (74)
-"All that the children write, your response (as educator) to what they write, their response to each other, all this takes place afloat a sea of talk. Talk is what provides the links between you and them and what they write, between what they have written and each other." I love this notion that reading is supported and buoyed up by the talk that is constantly flowing underneath it (81)
-...many girls showed an ease with connected talk. Boys, on the other hand, were less sensitive to what the previous person had just said and had a tendency to play their conversational card, no matter what had been said just before. (85)
-"glow and grow"
-"Drawing is something all boys like to do," says Aurthur Voigt, a literacy consultant in New York. "There are at least three or four other things they should all draw: a map of their neighborhood, a self-portrait, a drawing of what they see in their dreams, a picture of what they see themselves in ten years, a picture of their favorite hero..." (121)
-Some teachers allow students to "sketch to stretch" as a reading comprehension strategy. After reading a text, students create a sketch depicting their interpretation of the text or events in a book. I'd like to see boys get the clear message that drawing is neither a punishable offense nor merely a way to decorate finished writing but a useful way to think through and flesh out the story, poem, or report they are writing. (122 & 126)
-Share models of books with boys as artists (Max's Logbook by Marissa Moss)
-I noticed that three-fourths of what I considered his best pieces had been written at home. At first I thought that this fact spoke poorly about his schooling. But Robert had wonderful writing teachers in elementary school. I think it's actually a credit to those teachers that he did so much writing at home. In fact, I think one could assess how effective a school literacy program is by how much writing and reading kids do at home." (161)