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Thank you to Book Sirens for the ARC
2.5/5 stars 😔 🛑Minor Spoilers🛑
Unfortunately I had a few issues which prevented me from rating it much higher.
ˋ°•*⁀➷The Writing and Language
I genuinely loved the writing style, the descriptions were truly beautiful and you felt as if you were standing in a faerie world. My only criticism would be that there were a lot of them, far more than actual events in the book. I found myself reading, waiting for it to get interesting and it wasn’t, there would be some dialogue and something small and then description, description and more description and I felt like I was dragging myself through it.
Which brings me to my next point. In my humble opinion for a 478 page book, there just wasn’t enough happening, in terms of action and even character development, for the side characters more, not the main one. I’d say it picked up the pace around page 346, so for me, the majority of it was quite slow.
ˋ°•*⁀➷The Plot
The plot had great potential, and an interesting start, especially the prologue but those beginning scenes were not followed up on and so again, it was rather slow and uneventful. For me, it felt like there was more travelling than anything else. I do understand that it is the first book in a series but for a 400+ page book, I feel like it has to be more engaging.
ˋ°•*⁀➷The Characters
Disclaimer, this is going to be the bulk of my review. So, my main issue with this book was our fmc, Sadie Sheldon. I found her so irritating that she quite ruined the book for me. Not like Lucy Pevensie at all :(
My main gripe is the feminist attitude she has. I have nothing against feminism in books lol, and I loveee strong female characters a lot but I felt like the WAY that feminism was portrayed here was irritating and rather toxic.
Feminism when well done, subtle enough to not feel like it’s being shoved in your face and impactful enough to create that feeling in the reader, produces a badass female who we’re all cheering on and sighing in satisfaction over.
So, Sadie rant pt 1: She was constantly complaining about the world they lived in, which was not accepting or welcoming to women having opportunities and ambitions, but when it came to actually DOING something, trying to take a stance, make a change, DO something to achieve her goal, what happened? Nothing, her ‘feminism’ consisted of childish tantrums, rude exchanges with her mother and sighing about the horrible world she lived in, where she would NOT be like other women and she would be ✨different✨
Which brings me nicely onto pt 2, which was the main source of my annoyance. Sadie, in her enlightened feminism, mocks, looks down on and insults her mother and sister for their choices in life. She thinks of them as weak, compliant and submissive. As having no minds of their own and that all gives off this condescending, superior feeling from her. She hates her mother for wanting her to get married and settle down, the mother is portrayed as quite the villain, but the mother is simply trying to give her daughter the best chance in life and comfort in an undeniably misogynistic world. But because her wishes for her daughter to be safe, settled and happy in the REAL world do not align with Sadie’s fantasies, she’s made out to be the oppressor.
As for her older sister, Sadie thinks of her as the ‘perfect’ daughter, and just like their mother, weak-willed. First of all, Sadie has no idea about anything in her sister’s life. Do I think her sister was born to fit the mould? No, rather I think she became the victim of her parents worries and high expectations and so she surrendered her own wishes to please them (as most eldest children do :’) and so part of the reason Sadie HAS this freedom to think and act somewhat how she wants, is because her sister ended up shouldering most of their parents’ scrutiny (Luisa Madrigal anyone?) The other thing is that feminism at its core, is about giving women opportunities and freedoms, about having CHOICE. Feminism is not about putting down other women and their decisions and lifestyles because it does not align with your own values, which Sadie decided to do.
Having said all that, we do see the beginnings of a character arc for Sadie which I was VERY happy about but it started rather late so I’m not sure if this IS the beginning of Sadie developing sense.
(Mini rant, I’m sorry but she’s just so whiny and stubborn and insists on doing things she can’t do so she can prove she’s a strong, independent women or some rubbish like that and she ends up causing more problems and I wanted to tear my hair outttt)
I did like the other characters a lot more, but I don’t feel like they were developed enough for me to have a connection with, which, considering the length of the book, is not an unfair expectation, no?
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That’s ittt, I’m done! Thank you for coming to my Ted Talk everyoneee 💞